Comments received on poems by AuburnScribbler
Sleeplessness
orchidee said:
A fine write AS.
You counted them sheep? Or they keep running off?!
December 1st, 2021 12:40
orchidee said:
A fine write AS.
You counted them sheep? Or they keep running off?!
December 1st, 2021 12:40
Frost and Beet
Goldfinch60 said:
That home is so special in our lives Ben.
Andy
November 29th, 2021 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
That home is so special in our lives Ben.
Andy
November 29th, 2021 02:19
Frost and Beet
Nicholas Browning said:
The words kept me enticed till the ending. And yes, that Mariah Carey song they can burn with the sugar.
November 28th, 2021 12:05
Nicholas Browning said:
The words kept me enticed till the ending. And yes, that Mariah Carey song they can burn with the sugar.
November 28th, 2021 12:05
Absence (An Acrostic)
L. B. Mek said:
absence, does help distil
the genuine worth, in our
feeling\'s and relationships
as long
as it\'s a conscious, choice
with purpose
not merely, an escape
from the harsh gravel
in our lives, path...
(I for one, will welcome back
your poetry
at every: Opportunity, dear Poet)
thanks for sharing
and yes, I think your chosen image
is a great visual, interpretation
of your poem, wonderful symmetry
November 25th, 2021 03:54
L. B. Mek said:
absence, does help distil
the genuine worth, in our
feeling\'s and relationships
as long
as it\'s a conscious, choice
with purpose
not merely, an escape
from the harsh gravel
in our lives, path...
(I for one, will welcome back
your poetry
at every: Opportunity, dear Poet)
thanks for sharing
and yes, I think your chosen image
is a great visual, interpretation
of your poem, wonderful symmetry
November 25th, 2021 03:54
Absence (An Acrostic)
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that taste will be even sweeter Ben.
Andy
November 25th, 2021 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that taste will be even sweeter Ben.
Andy
November 25th, 2021 02:19
Absence (An Acrostic)
Doggerel Dave said:
I can\'t quite suss this one out, AS.....so just get back here and post some more.... š
November 24th, 2021 20:26
Doggerel Dave said:
I can\'t quite suss this one out, AS.....so just get back here and post some more.... š
November 24th, 2021 20:26
Absence (An Acrostic)
orchidee said:
A fine write AS.
If ya hadn\'t have gone for so long, I never would have known! Well, I would know, cos I\'ve missed your poems. lol.
November 24th, 2021 11:03
orchidee said:
A fine write AS.
If ya hadn\'t have gone for so long, I never would have known! Well, I would know, cos I\'ve missed your poems. lol.
November 24th, 2021 11:03
Host
Goldfinch60 said:
I can totally relate to this Ben, I had a friend staying with me over this passed weekend and we had a great time.
Andy
September 29th, 2021 01:02
Goldfinch60 said:
I can totally relate to this Ben, I had a friend staying with me over this passed weekend and we had a great time.
Andy
September 29th, 2021 01:02
Host
Thekkinkkattil said:
A very warm and endearing poem. I liked the style
September 29th, 2021 00:55
Thekkinkkattil said:
A very warm and endearing poem. I liked the style
September 29th, 2021 00:55
Host
Caring dove said:
Really like this writing š and I think the hobbit is great !
September 28th, 2021 08:23
Caring dove said:
Really like this writing š and I think the hobbit is great !
September 28th, 2021 08:23
Talking to Myself
L. B. Mek said:
situationally? - it depends, my friend
(everything temperate, even in your facility to be temperate)..
be yourself, because life is too draining,
to be traversed in the guise of someone else...
(such a wonderfully unique topic, thanks for sharing dear poet)
September 9th, 2021 04:27
L. B. Mek said:
situationally? - it depends, my friend
(everything temperate, even in your facility to be temperate)..
be yourself, because life is too draining,
to be traversed in the guise of someone else...
(such a wonderfully unique topic, thanks for sharing dear poet)
September 9th, 2021 04:27
Talking to Myself
orchidee said:
A fine write AP.
Since when was Frankie Boyle funny? Did he ever star being funny?! I\'m usually in bed by the time any stand-up comedians come on TV. Phew! There\'s loads of rubbish I miss on TV.
September 9th, 2021 01:54
orchidee said:
A fine write AP.
Since when was Frankie Boyle funny? Did he ever star being funny?! I\'m usually in bed by the time any stand-up comedians come on TV. Phew! There\'s loads of rubbish I miss on TV.
September 9th, 2021 01:54
Talking to Myself
Saxon Crow said:
Oh i love talking to myself. But even more I love listening to the constant rambling nonsense that comes out my mouth. Great relatable poem
September 9th, 2021 00:15
Saxon Crow said:
Oh i love talking to myself. But even more I love listening to the constant rambling nonsense that comes out my mouth. Great relatable poem
September 9th, 2021 00:15
Talking to Myself
Goldfinch60 said:
Talking to yourself at least you know that somebody is listening.
Andy
September 9th, 2021 00:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Talking to yourself at least you know that somebody is listening.
Andy
September 9th, 2021 00:11
Talking to Myself
Caring dove said:
We could talk nice words to ourselves ... yes , it can be helpful . I certainly can talk to myself ,
September 8th, 2021 14:39
Caring dove said:
We could talk nice words to ourselves ... yes , it can be helpful . I certainly can talk to myself ,
September 8th, 2021 14:39
Talking to Myself
Caring dove said:
I donāt think it is . Maybe itās soothing to talk to ourselves .. being friends with ourselves .
Good poem ) ā reassert my mental wealth ā ... maybe itās good for our mental state to talk to ourselves ..
September 8th, 2021 14:37
Caring dove said:
I donāt think it is . Maybe itās soothing to talk to ourselves .. being friends with ourselves .
Good poem ) ā reassert my mental wealth ā ... maybe itās good for our mental state to talk to ourselves ..
September 8th, 2021 14:37
Bus Folk
matthew jay said:
Before I was old enough to drive. I road the bus occasionally. I still remember many of them years later they were good people.
August 27th, 2021 21:12
matthew jay said:
Before I was old enough to drive. I road the bus occasionally. I still remember many of them years later they were good people.
August 27th, 2021 21:12
Bus Folk
Doggerel Dave said:
You know Ben, it really wasn\'t necessary to visit your home page to know you weren\'t located in London, nor Sydney for that matter.....
However away from metropolitan transportation, as I\'ve experienced on occasional holidays, the mobile club lounge can exist - although I\'ve only ever qualified for temporary membership and had to be on my best behavior...
Many thanks - for me a memory of a great little interlude.
August 27th, 2021 19:27
Doggerel Dave said:
You know Ben, it really wasn\'t necessary to visit your home page to know you weren\'t located in London, nor Sydney for that matter.....
However away from metropolitan transportation, as I\'ve experienced on occasional holidays, the mobile club lounge can exist - although I\'ve only ever qualified for temporary membership and had to be on my best behavior...
Many thanks - for me a memory of a great little interlude.
August 27th, 2021 19:27
Bus Folk
dusk arising said:
As a child and young man I used various bus services a lot and found them enjoyable mostly. The wet and cold or snowy days on crowded buses could be a trial though.
Your post today brought back some happy memories of my travels.
With age came my bus pass and I was keen to climb aboard the sleek looking Mercedes single decker bus. But oh such a disappointment was the ride quality. The whole bus shook with harsh vibration constantly and the hard seat beneath me was unforgiving. Such a change for the worse, but thank you for the memories.
August 27th, 2021 10:55
dusk arising said:
As a child and young man I used various bus services a lot and found them enjoyable mostly. The wet and cold or snowy days on crowded buses could be a trial though.
Your post today brought back some happy memories of my travels.
With age came my bus pass and I was keen to climb aboard the sleek looking Mercedes single decker bus. But oh such a disappointment was the ride quality. The whole bus shook with harsh vibration constantly and the hard seat beneath me was unforgiving. Such a change for the worse, but thank you for the memories.
August 27th, 2021 10:55
Soli - (A Trio of Limericks)
orchidee said:
A fine write AS. You know his brother (or sister) Tudi - Soli-tude?!
August 14th, 2021 01:35
orchidee said:
A fine write AS. You know his brother (or sister) Tudi - Soli-tude?!
August 14th, 2021 01:35
Soli - (A Trio of Limericks)
dusk arising said:
I replied to dear old soli
digging his poetic quarry
upon my bended knees
dig no deeper please
he\'s clearly off his trolley
I couldn\'t resist joining in. Enjoyed your limerics.
August 13th, 2021 15:15
dusk arising said:
I replied to dear old soli
digging his poetic quarry
upon my bended knees
dig no deeper please
he\'s clearly off his trolley
I couldn\'t resist joining in. Enjoyed your limerics.
August 13th, 2021 15:15
Streaming (An Acrostic)
Goldfinch60 said:
May that ending be close as we go into a new norm Ben.
Andy
July 27th, 2021 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
May that ending be close as we go into a new norm Ben.
Andy
July 27th, 2021 00:46
Empty Chair
L. B. Mek said:
(Brilliant!
the best I\'ve read from your ever-so talented pen
so far,)
firstly, I love the painting you chose
its colourful features, overwhelm
such a depiction\'s capacity to convey
loneliness as all-thigs bleak, allowing us
the opportunity to envision
that chair not just
as an ostracised or neglected corner
but as a vacuum of expectancy
in our hopeful endeavour
to find that significant other;
Secondly, more importantly
your poetry just sings from start to finish
weaving a universal, yet deeply personal
and wonderfully nuanced narrative:
\'maybe I could see Grandpa again,
to both reminisce, and to talk of pain,
by playing an achy game; of unfair comparison,
for the dead are free, the living still build a prison,
or simply, I could think of her, him or them,
to dream up our relationshipās stem,\'..
what a sublime reading experience
thank you!
for choosing to share dear poet
July 20th, 2021 03:47
L. B. Mek said:
(Brilliant!
the best I\'ve read from your ever-so talented pen
so far,)
firstly, I love the painting you chose
its colourful features, overwhelm
such a depiction\'s capacity to convey
loneliness as all-thigs bleak, allowing us
the opportunity to envision
that chair not just
as an ostracised or neglected corner
but as a vacuum of expectancy
in our hopeful endeavour
to find that significant other;
Secondly, more importantly
your poetry just sings from start to finish
weaving a universal, yet deeply personal
and wonderfully nuanced narrative:
\'maybe I could see Grandpa again,
to both reminisce, and to talk of pain,
by playing an achy game; of unfair comparison,
for the dead are free, the living still build a prison,
or simply, I could think of her, him or them,
to dream up our relationshipās stem,\'..
what a sublime reading experience
thank you!
for choosing to share dear poet
July 20th, 2021 03:47
Empty Chair
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Ben, anybody can be in that empty chair but the one opposite me at home should be filled with my wife and often is in my heart and mind.
Love the artwork.
Andy
July 20th, 2021 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Ben, anybody can be in that empty chair but the one opposite me at home should be filled with my wife and often is in my heart and mind.
Love the artwork.
Andy
July 20th, 2021 01:10
Empty Chair
Doggerel Dave said:
Neat piece, AS ā enjoyed
Without Covid, lockdowns and on/off, the advice would be easy: āNo use sitting alone in your room, come to the Cabaretā, plus: Do the āadventureā and the partner may turn upā¦
Easy before, harder now, but nothing like involvement in a cause to find alliesā¦
Take care of yourself.
July 19th, 2021 20:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Neat piece, AS ā enjoyed
Without Covid, lockdowns and on/off, the advice would be easy: āNo use sitting alone in your room, come to the Cabaretā, plus: Do the āadventureā and the partner may turn upā¦
Easy before, harder now, but nothing like involvement in a cause to find alliesā¦
Take care of yourself.
July 19th, 2021 20:13
The Relaxing Pitter-Patter on the Conservatory Roof
Doggerel Dave said:
All these bleeders wiv conservatories.... Wait \'til I get their addresses...
Point well made AS - too many things to get riled up about in life; so chill (After I\'ve sorted them conservatories....)
July 3rd, 2021 21:36
Doggerel Dave said:
All these bleeders wiv conservatories.... Wait \'til I get their addresses...
Point well made AS - too many things to get riled up about in life; so chill (After I\'ve sorted them conservatories....)
July 3rd, 2021 21:36
The Relaxing Pitter-Patter on the Conservatory Roof
orchidee said:
Good write AP.
July 3rd, 2021 14:28
orchidee said:
Good write AP.
July 3rd, 2021 14:28
The Relaxing Pitter-Patter on the Conservatory Roof
Goldfinch60 said:
I can understand where you come from Ben,I too have a conservatory roof and am often found in there but my choice of relaxation is music, I listen to it all the time, especially in the evenings before I go to bed.
Andy
July 3rd, 2021 11:59
Goldfinch60 said:
I can understand where you come from Ben,I too have a conservatory roof and am often found in there but my choice of relaxation is music, I listen to it all the time, especially in the evenings before I go to bed.
Andy
July 3rd, 2021 11:59
Thursday 24th June 2021
Goldfinch60 said:
It is so wonderful to get back together with friends that you have not seen for so many months, I met with one of mine yesterday and we shared our history of the passed months over cups of coffee, it was so good to see him face to face again.
Andy
June 26th, 2021 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
It is so wonderful to get back together with friends that you have not seen for so many months, I met with one of mine yesterday and we shared our history of the passed months over cups of coffee, it was so good to see him face to face again.
Andy
June 26th, 2021 00:34
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