Comments received on poems by AuburnScribbler
Stop the Chop (A Celebratory Acrostic)
Goldfinch60 said:
Very well done, Nature is so very important in our lives and must be saved for others to appreciated.
Andy
December 7th, 2021 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Very well done, Nature is so very important in our lives and must be saved for others to appreciated.
Andy
December 7th, 2021 01:50
Stop the Chop (A Celebratory Acrostic)
Draven said:
I love an acrostic! I haven\'t read one for so long!
December 6th, 2021 09:31
Draven said:
I love an acrostic! I haven\'t read one for so long!
December 6th, 2021 09:31
Stop the Chop (A Celebratory Acrostic)
Lorna said:
Congratulations! I\'m off to see if I can find the song... also if you put on YouTube you can upload here.
Update: couldn\'t get to the site....
December 6th, 2021 07:49
Lorna said:
Congratulations! I\'m off to see if I can find the song... also if you put on YouTube you can upload here.
Update: couldn\'t get to the site....
December 6th, 2021 07:49
Stage Back
Goldfinch60 said:
Being nervous before going on stage is always there Ben. From your words you had a great first time back for a while, may that always be so.
Our choir has its first performance next Saturday after nearly two years, I hope that will go as well as your concert seems to have done.
Andy
December 6th, 2021 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Being nervous before going on stage is always there Ben. From your words you had a great first time back for a while, may that always be so.
Our choir has its first performance next Saturday after nearly two years, I hope that will go as well as your concert seems to have done.
Andy
December 6th, 2021 01:55
Stage Back
Doggerel Dave said:
Great piece of self talk there man.
And from your side comments, it worked! Go for it - enjoy the rest of your tour.
December 5th, 2021 23:16
Doggerel Dave said:
Great piece of self talk there man.
And from your side comments, it worked! Go for it - enjoy the rest of your tour.
December 5th, 2021 23:16
Stage Back
Fay Slimm. said:
You nail the time when to return on stage brings butterflies galore - I remember that feeling well -- the thrill of a live audience comes right through your words and the graphic too left me with a smile .
December 5th, 2021 16:36
Fay Slimm. said:
You nail the time when to return on stage brings butterflies galore - I remember that feeling well -- the thrill of a live audience comes right through your words and the graphic too left me with a smile .
December 5th, 2021 16:36
Stage Back
Draven said:
I love this, really playful and fun with nervous energy. And welcome back to the stage, there is nothing like it :)
December 5th, 2021 08:40
Draven said:
I love this, really playful and fun with nervous energy. And welcome back to the stage, there is nothing like it :)
December 5th, 2021 08:40
Talking to Myself
Lorna said:
So true.... I talk to myself all the time and it\'s peaceful - I never argue, always agree and generally we have the same sense of humor myself and I. Is this what they call lonely? Ha!
December 5th, 2021 08:39
Lorna said:
So true.... I talk to myself all the time and it\'s peaceful - I never argue, always agree and generally we have the same sense of humor myself and I. Is this what they call lonely? Ha!
December 5th, 2021 08:39
Stage Back
Lorna said:
You made me nervous but happy it all turned out well..... Why not attach some of your music to a poem so we can hear?
December 5th, 2021 08:37
Lorna said:
You made me nervous but happy it all turned out well..... Why not attach some of your music to a poem so we can hear?
December 5th, 2021 08:37
Sleeplessness
Goldfinch60 said:
So glad that you can write words in the night, I do as well when I cannot sleep.
Andy
December 2nd, 2021 02:02
Goldfinch60 said:
So glad that you can write words in the night, I do as well when I cannot sleep.
Andy
December 2nd, 2021 02:02
Sleeplessness
mdrogers said:
Mob-thought, Bukowski? I like that. I don\'t sleep much either. Do it.
December 1st, 2021 13:48
mdrogers said:
Mob-thought, Bukowski? I like that. I don\'t sleep much either. Do it.
December 1st, 2021 13:48
Sleeplessness
orchidee said:
A fine write AS.
You counted them sheep? Or they keep running off?!
December 1st, 2021 12:40
orchidee said:
A fine write AS.
You counted them sheep? Or they keep running off?!
December 1st, 2021 12:40
Frost and Beet
Goldfinch60 said:
That home is so special in our lives Ben.
Andy
November 29th, 2021 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
That home is so special in our lives Ben.
Andy
November 29th, 2021 02:19
Frost and Beet
Nicholas Browning said:
The words kept me enticed till the ending. And yes, that Mariah Carey song they can burn with the sugar.
November 28th, 2021 12:05
Nicholas Browning said:
The words kept me enticed till the ending. And yes, that Mariah Carey song they can burn with the sugar.
November 28th, 2021 12:05
Absence (An Acrostic)
L. B. Mek said:
absence, does help distil
the genuine worth, in our
feeling\'s and relationships
as long
as it\'s a conscious, choice
with purpose
not merely, an escape
from the harsh gravel
in our lives, path...
(I for one, will welcome back
your poetry
at every: Opportunity, dear Poet)
thanks for sharing
and yes, I think your chosen image
is a great visual, interpretation
of your poem, wonderful symmetry
November 25th, 2021 03:54
L. B. Mek said:
absence, does help distil
the genuine worth, in our
feeling\'s and relationships
as long
as it\'s a conscious, choice
with purpose
not merely, an escape
from the harsh gravel
in our lives, path...
(I for one, will welcome back
your poetry
at every: Opportunity, dear Poet)
thanks for sharing
and yes, I think your chosen image
is a great visual, interpretation
of your poem, wonderful symmetry
November 25th, 2021 03:54
Absence (An Acrostic)
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that taste will be even sweeter Ben.
Andy
November 25th, 2021 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that taste will be even sweeter Ben.
Andy
November 25th, 2021 02:19
Absence (An Acrostic)
Doggerel Dave said:
I can\'t quite suss this one out, AS.....so just get back here and post some more.... 😊
November 24th, 2021 20:26
Doggerel Dave said:
I can\'t quite suss this one out, AS.....so just get back here and post some more.... 😊
November 24th, 2021 20:26
Absence (An Acrostic)
orchidee said:
A fine write AS.
If ya hadn\'t have gone for so long, I never would have known! Well, I would know, cos I\'ve missed your poems. lol.
November 24th, 2021 11:03
orchidee said:
A fine write AS.
If ya hadn\'t have gone for so long, I never would have known! Well, I would know, cos I\'ve missed your poems. lol.
November 24th, 2021 11:03
Host
Goldfinch60 said:
I can totally relate to this Ben, I had a friend staying with me over this passed weekend and we had a great time.
Andy
September 29th, 2021 01:02
Goldfinch60 said:
I can totally relate to this Ben, I had a friend staying with me over this passed weekend and we had a great time.
Andy
September 29th, 2021 01:02
Host
Thekkinkkattil said:
A very warm and endearing poem. I liked the style
September 29th, 2021 00:55
Thekkinkkattil said:
A very warm and endearing poem. I liked the style
September 29th, 2021 00:55
Host
Caring dove said:
Really like this writing 🙂 and I think the hobbit is great !
September 28th, 2021 08:23
Caring dove said:
Really like this writing 🙂 and I think the hobbit is great !
September 28th, 2021 08:23
Talking to Myself
L. B. Mek said:
situationally? - it depends, my friend
(everything temperate, even in your facility to be temperate)..
be yourself, because life is too draining,
to be traversed in the guise of someone else...
(such a wonderfully unique topic, thanks for sharing dear poet)
September 9th, 2021 04:27
L. B. Mek said:
situationally? - it depends, my friend
(everything temperate, even in your facility to be temperate)..
be yourself, because life is too draining,
to be traversed in the guise of someone else...
(such a wonderfully unique topic, thanks for sharing dear poet)
September 9th, 2021 04:27
Talking to Myself
orchidee said:
A fine write AP.
Since when was Frankie Boyle funny? Did he ever star being funny?! I\'m usually in bed by the time any stand-up comedians come on TV. Phew! There\'s loads of rubbish I miss on TV.
September 9th, 2021 01:54
orchidee said:
A fine write AP.
Since when was Frankie Boyle funny? Did he ever star being funny?! I\'m usually in bed by the time any stand-up comedians come on TV. Phew! There\'s loads of rubbish I miss on TV.
September 9th, 2021 01:54
Talking to Myself
Saxon Crow said:
Oh i love talking to myself. But even more I love listening to the constant rambling nonsense that comes out my mouth. Great relatable poem
September 9th, 2021 00:15
Saxon Crow said:
Oh i love talking to myself. But even more I love listening to the constant rambling nonsense that comes out my mouth. Great relatable poem
September 9th, 2021 00:15
Talking to Myself
Goldfinch60 said:
Talking to yourself at least you know that somebody is listening.
Andy
September 9th, 2021 00:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Talking to yourself at least you know that somebody is listening.
Andy
September 9th, 2021 00:11
Talking to Myself
Caring dove said:
We could talk nice words to ourselves ... yes , it can be helpful . I certainly can talk to myself ,
September 8th, 2021 14:39
Caring dove said:
We could talk nice words to ourselves ... yes , it can be helpful . I certainly can talk to myself ,
September 8th, 2021 14:39
Talking to Myself
Caring dove said:
I don’t think it is . Maybe it’s soothing to talk to ourselves .. being friends with ourselves .
Good poem ) “ reassert my mental wealth “ ... maybe it’s good for our mental state to talk to ourselves ..
September 8th, 2021 14:37
Caring dove said:
I don’t think it is . Maybe it’s soothing to talk to ourselves .. being friends with ourselves .
Good poem ) “ reassert my mental wealth “ ... maybe it’s good for our mental state to talk to ourselves ..
September 8th, 2021 14:37
Bus Folk
matthew jay said:
Before I was old enough to drive. I road the bus occasionally. I still remember many of them years later they were good people.
August 27th, 2021 21:12
matthew jay said:
Before I was old enough to drive. I road the bus occasionally. I still remember many of them years later they were good people.
August 27th, 2021 21:12
Bus Folk
Doggerel Dave said:
You know Ben, it really wasn\'t necessary to visit your home page to know you weren\'t located in London, nor Sydney for that matter.....
However away from metropolitan transportation, as I\'ve experienced on occasional holidays, the mobile club lounge can exist - although I\'ve only ever qualified for temporary membership and had to be on my best behavior...
Many thanks - for me a memory of a great little interlude.
August 27th, 2021 19:27
Doggerel Dave said:
You know Ben, it really wasn\'t necessary to visit your home page to know you weren\'t located in London, nor Sydney for that matter.....
However away from metropolitan transportation, as I\'ve experienced on occasional holidays, the mobile club lounge can exist - although I\'ve only ever qualified for temporary membership and had to be on my best behavior...
Many thanks - for me a memory of a great little interlude.
August 27th, 2021 19:27
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