Comments received on poems by AuburnScribbler
Ring it Out! (A Christmas Song)
Goldfinch60 said:
\"For there’s still so much to do, and still so much to give.\" so true Ben, the New Year will be full of love and joy.
Andy
December 12th, 2020 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
\"For there’s still so much to do, and still so much to give.\" so true Ben, the New Year will be full of love and joy.
Andy
December 12th, 2020 01:51
Ring it Out! (A Christmas Song)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Good Evening BEN - Christmas sure is in the Air today ! Our POEM today is a Sonnet *The Incarnation* Thanks for the Poem we need some new Christmas Songs ! Loe the Structure & the Subject !
V 1. COVID 19 cant spoil CHRISTMAS
V 2. CHRISTMAS presents ~ eternal
V 3. Lets celebrate the VACCINE & 2021
Love the CHORUS ~ COVID will never silence the BELLS !
Blessings & Joy & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey Cat ! ! !
December 11th, 2020 14:24
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Good Evening BEN - Christmas sure is in the Air today ! Our POEM today is a Sonnet *The Incarnation* Thanks for the Poem we need some new Christmas Songs ! Loe the Structure & the Subject !
V 1. COVID 19 cant spoil CHRISTMAS
V 2. CHRISTMAS presents ~ eternal
V 3. Lets celebrate the VACCINE & 2021
Love the CHORUS ~ COVID will never silence the BELLS !
Blessings & Joy & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey Cat ! ! !
December 11th, 2020 14:24
Taking the Air
Goldfinch60 said:
Walking is so important, especially walking with Nature or even better when I walk with My River, life always calms down and peace and love live within me.
Andy
December 9th, 2020 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Walking is so important, especially walking with Nature or even better when I walk with My River, life always calms down and peace and love live within me.
Andy
December 9th, 2020 01:29
Taking the Air
orchidee said:
Good write A.
This raises several vitally important questions for me to ask ya:
\'Where ya going?\'
\'How long will it take ya to get there?\'
\'Could ya take the No.7 bus there if the weather turns bad?!\' heehee.
December 8th, 2020 09:01
orchidee said:
Good write A.
This raises several vitally important questions for me to ask ya:
\'Where ya going?\'
\'How long will it take ya to get there?\'
\'Could ya take the No.7 bus there if the weather turns bad?!\' heehee.
December 8th, 2020 09:01
Get into Cheer (A Festive Trio)
Goldfinch60 said:
In these Strange Times we can still be happy and enjoy our lives in this Special Time.
Andy
December 8th, 2020 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
In these Strange Times we can still be happy and enjoy our lives in this Special Time.
Andy
December 8th, 2020 01:37
Get into Cheer (A Festive Trio)
orchidee said:
*Gets sleigh out*. Good write A.
December 7th, 2020 05:52
orchidee said:
*Gets sleigh out*. Good write A.
December 7th, 2020 05:52
Mac (A Very Modern Poem)
Goldfinch60 said:
Hi Ben, My Non-sentient friend sends kind regards to you. I have had many in my life as I used to work in Computing.
Two things about computer gained from experience:
1. There are only two types of computers, the prototype and the obsolete.
2. The way to distinguish hardware from software is that it you throw them against a wall you can only hear hardware when it hits the wall. (I have seen this done by one of my colleagues when things were not going right and he threw his PC against the wall.)
Andy
December 5th, 2020 03:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Hi Ben, My Non-sentient friend sends kind regards to you. I have had many in my life as I used to work in Computing.
Two things about computer gained from experience:
1. There are only two types of computers, the prototype and the obsolete.
2. The way to distinguish hardware from software is that it you throw them against a wall you can only hear hardware when it hits the wall. (I have seen this done by one of my colleagues when things were not going right and he threw his PC against the wall.)
Andy
December 5th, 2020 03:02
Mac (A Very Modern Poem)
orchidee said:
Good write Auburn.
I was un-technically minded! I said: \'I\'m getting a Notebook. Eh, no, a Notepad\'. A friend replied: \'Noooo, a NETBOOK you clot!\' lol.
December 4th, 2020 14:08
orchidee said:
Good write Auburn.
I was un-technically minded! I said: \'I\'m getting a Notebook. Eh, no, a Notepad\'. A friend replied: \'Noooo, a NETBOOK you clot!\' lol.
December 4th, 2020 14:08
14 x 14
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have that special place where we feel so safe, mine used to have two of us in it but now it is just me but the memories of my wife are still with me - as is she, in my special place.
Andy
November 14th, 2020 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have that special place where we feel so safe, mine used to have two of us in it but now it is just me but the memories of my wife are still with me - as is she, in my special place.
Andy
November 14th, 2020 01:53
14 x 14
Mil57Man said:
My 14x14 a lovely scene, jotting down pieces of dreams, full of caffeine, It\'s all in the Hands of The Unseen. Simply wonderful Auburn Scribbler.
November 13th, 2020 08:44
Mil57Man said:
My 14x14 a lovely scene, jotting down pieces of dreams, full of caffeine, It\'s all in the Hands of The Unseen. Simply wonderful Auburn Scribbler.
November 13th, 2020 08:44
14 x 14
Doggerel Dave said:
Got it. I\'m in the accommodation I\'ve always favoured. In the UK it\'s a \'bedsit\' In Australia a \'studio\'. Whatever. One room, kitchen and toilet / shower. Small.It\'s mine. Ample bed, large armchair, book case radio TV and PC.What more do I need? My den, sanctuary.
Take it easy Dave
November 13th, 2020 06:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Got it. I\'m in the accommodation I\'ve always favoured. In the UK it\'s a \'bedsit\' In Australia a \'studio\'. Whatever. One room, kitchen and toilet / shower. Small.It\'s mine. Ample bed, large armchair, book case radio TV and PC.What more do I need? My den, sanctuary.
Take it easy Dave
November 13th, 2020 06:32
White Noise is the Right Noise (A Homage to ASMR)
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderfully informative dedication
November 13th, 2020 05:19
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderfully informative dedication
November 13th, 2020 05:19
White Noise is the Right Noise (A Homage to ASMR)
Goldfinch60 said:
It certainly seems to work for you Ben, I had never heard of it but in one way I have been using it all my life with music. One piece I go to if I want to totally relax is the album Sleep by Max Richter, have a listen to this:
https://youtu.be/AwpWZVG5SsQ
Andy
November 13th, 2020 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
It certainly seems to work for you Ben, I had never heard of it but in one way I have been using it all my life with music. One piece I go to if I want to totally relax is the album Sleep by Max Richter, have a listen to this:
https://youtu.be/AwpWZVG5SsQ
Andy
November 13th, 2020 01:42
White Noise is the Right Noise (A Homage to ASMR)
Doggerel Dave said:
Some seriously weird shit going down there, but seems harmless enough. so if it does it for you, go for it.( the view of a recent, somewhat mature member of this merry band at MPS)
Regards Dave
PS:your poetry is something I can understand and like. Take care.
November 13th, 2020 00:41
Doggerel Dave said:
Some seriously weird shit going down there, but seems harmless enough. so if it does it for you, go for it.( the view of a recent, somewhat mature member of this merry band at MPS)
Regards Dave
PS:your poetry is something I can understand and like. Take care.
November 13th, 2020 00:41
White Noise is the Right Noise (A Homage to ASMR)
Goddess of the Mist said:
This is a wonderful poem! As far as ASMRtists, one of my faves is Bertram Craft a Wilderness (silent bushcrafting videos) with the sounds of nature, crackling fires, sawing or chopping of wood, etc...
SO very relaxing!
November 12th, 2020 23:41
Goddess of the Mist said:
This is a wonderful poem! As far as ASMRtists, one of my faves is Bertram Craft a Wilderness (silent bushcrafting videos) with the sounds of nature, crackling fires, sawing or chopping of wood, etc...
SO very relaxing!
November 12th, 2020 23:41
Poppy (An Acrostic for Remembrance Sunday)
L. B. Mek said:
good read, a worthy tribute
November 9th, 2020 07:24
L. B. Mek said:
good read, a worthy tribute
November 9th, 2020 07:24
Poppy (An Acrostic for Remembrance Sunday)
Goldfinch60 said:
WE WILL REMEMBER THEM.
November 9th, 2020 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
WE WILL REMEMBER THEM.
November 9th, 2020 01:45
Birthday Gift
Goldfinch60 said:
Our wants certainly change with time Ben, I have reached that stage in my life where I NEED nothing so when the children or grandchildren ask what I want for birthday of Christmas I reply, \"All I want is your time\".
Andy
November 5th, 2020 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Our wants certainly change with time Ben, I have reached that stage in my life where I NEED nothing so when the children or grandchildren ask what I want for birthday of Christmas I reply, \"All I want is your time\".
Andy
November 5th, 2020 01:42
A Smile in the Dark
Goldfinch60 said:
Apology accepted Ben.
There will be better days for us in these strange times, we still have our words and our music both of which has been a lifeline to me .
Andy
November 4th, 2020 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Apology accepted Ben.
There will be better days for us in these strange times, we still have our words and our music both of which has been a lifeline to me .
Andy
November 4th, 2020 01:40
A Smile in the Dark
Aryal Allen said:
I had to read the joke over to understand it. And though I did not smile or laugh at the joke, your apology made me smile. So, thank you. :-)
November 3rd, 2020 08:41
Aryal Allen said:
I had to read the joke over to understand it. And though I did not smile or laugh at the joke, your apology made me smile. So, thank you. :-)
November 3rd, 2020 08:41
Cleaning (A \"Twentet\" of a Thought)
Goldfinch60 said:
Thought provoking write Ben.
We all ask these questions of our selves but in my case I found the place within me many years ago and apart from the occasional \'tweak\' I am happy in my own mind.
Andy
November 3rd, 2020 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Thought provoking write Ben.
We all ask these questions of our selves but in my case I found the place within me many years ago and apart from the occasional \'tweak\' I am happy in my own mind.
Andy
November 3rd, 2020 02:05
Silent as the Grave (A Poem on the Dourest of Halloweens (2020))
Goldfinch60 said:
The sweets and fruit were ready for the witches and wizards when they knocked on the door but nobody knocked this year.
Good to see you back
Andy
November 2nd, 2020 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
The sweets and fruit were ready for the witches and wizards when they knocked on the door but nobody knocked this year.
Good to see you back
Andy
November 2nd, 2020 01:52
Silent as the Grave (A Poem on the Dourest of Halloweens (2020))
jarcher54 said:
tart it up--we don\'t say it that way in the USA but I laughed. I wonder how many horror movies they\'ll make based on the pandemic theme?
November 1st, 2020 08:40
jarcher54 said:
tart it up--we don\'t say it that way in the USA but I laughed. I wonder how many horror movies they\'ll make based on the pandemic theme?
November 1st, 2020 08:40
Garden (An Acrostic)
Goldfinch60 said:
Walking with flowers is so uplifting in our lives Ben.
Andy
June 26th, 2020 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Walking with flowers is so uplifting in our lives Ben.
Andy
June 26th, 2020 01:05
Garden (An Acrostic)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Hi BEN - ANGELA here !
*You are nearer GODS HEART in a Garden
Than anywhereelse on Earth - AMEN !*
In my esperience that is very very true ! I can pray & medidtate much better in a GARDEN (especially in Spring / Summer) than in an old musty Church. Brian & I have been married 3 Months and have just bought our First House. It had a overgrown & neglected Garden. Brian is on *Lockdown* so he has spent a lot of time restoring the Garden and installing a Waterfall on the Patio Pond ! Im at work (Physiotherapist) so Im working with ORTHOPEADIC Patients not COVID 19. Thanks for sharing your lovely elegant Poem - very uplifting ! Please check Brians Poem *COFFEE MORNING OPEN* Thanks !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian !
June 25th, 2020 15:04
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Hi BEN - ANGELA here !
*You are nearer GODS HEART in a Garden
Than anywhereelse on Earth - AMEN !*
In my esperience that is very very true ! I can pray & medidtate much better in a GARDEN (especially in Spring / Summer) than in an old musty Church. Brian & I have been married 3 Months and have just bought our First House. It had a overgrown & neglected Garden. Brian is on *Lockdown* so he has spent a lot of time restoring the Garden and installing a Waterfall on the Patio Pond ! Im at work (Physiotherapist) so Im working with ORTHOPEADIC Patients not COVID 19. Thanks for sharing your lovely elegant Poem - very uplifting ! Please check Brians Poem *COFFEE MORNING OPEN* Thanks !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian !
June 25th, 2020 15:04
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