Comments received on poems by AuburnScribbler



The January Blues
orchidee said:

I dunno why all the fuss - we have minute or two lighter each day now. Let\'s not use it all at once! lol.

January 6th, 2018 09:52

The January Blues
orchidee said:

But we has only just started the month! As you say, let\'s not sing the Blues! heehee.

January 6th, 2018 09:51

The Ballad of Janus (The Two Faces) – A Poem at New Year’s
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, may that beacon of hope guide us to its light.

January 2nd, 2018 01:33

The Ballad of Janus (The Two Faces) – A Poem at New Year’s
Laura🌻 said:

I enjoyed reading this
poem very much! Liked
the words...
“One has cried, but one will smile”...
Very relatable! Great write!
HAPPY NEW YEAR!🎆

January 1st, 2018 17:48

The Ballad of Janus (The Two Faces) – A Poem at New Year’s
Louis Gibbs said:

A fine poem depicting the balancing act that is life experienced. Well done, A.S.

January 1st, 2018 10:09

The Ballad of Janus (The Two Faces) – A Poem at New Year’s
Michael Edwards said:

Great work and a happy new year to you too.

January 1st, 2018 06:15

The Switch Off to Switch On – A Poem at Christmas
Michael Edwards said:

Enjoy I did and all the very best to you too

December 29th, 2017 10:07

Scrolling
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 4th, 2017 10:21

Monotony
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write and very true.

June 14th, 2017 00:06

Monotony
swingline said:

Beats waiting around to die , burp! Oh I ate too much gruel .

June 13th, 2017 20:03

Monotony
Jeff said:

Great write...well done

June 13th, 2017 09:21

In this Moment
Goldfinch60 said:

Every moment is unique, enjoy them all as they will not come back. Good write.

June 12th, 2017 08:06

Somewhat Burn (No Worries)
Augustus said:

A poem to which we all can relate. Kudos.

May 29th, 2017 19:49

Making Amends
orchidee said:

I know what you mean! To be \'one\'s self\' enough, but not like some horrible selfish monster. A fine write AS.

May 15th, 2017 09:55

Relit
Goldfinch60 said:

I can remember the first house that we bought it had a coal stove in the kitchen and an open fire in the lounge.
The trick was to try and keep the kitchen stove alight overnight so that we at least had a warm kitchen to come down to in the morning. They were the days when the windows had ice on the inside of them in the winter.
Keep looking after that boiler.

May 3rd, 2017 00:43

A Thought on Monday
Tony36 said:

Great write

April 24th, 2017 16:44

Fleshling Doorstop
willyweed said:

good flow and meter nice work Auburn! ww

April 18th, 2017 14:49

Fleshling Doorstop
Tony36 said:

Well written and exptessed great write

April 18th, 2017 11:06

Fleshling Doorstop
JamieDayDream said:

Nicely written, good choice of words got me thinking.

April 18th, 2017 10:13

A Splinter (written on a broken wooden bench)
Christina8 said:

This is a very good well written poem.

April 4th, 2017 13:15

A Splinter (written on a broken wooden bench)
willyweed said:

good write with clever rhyme. ww

April 4th, 2017 10:07

A Splinter (written on a broken wooden bench)
Tony36 said:

Great write

April 4th, 2017 07:20

The Breakable Oath (A Satire on the Drinker)
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed Great write

April 3rd, 2017 08:39

The Breakable Oath (A Satire on the Drinker)
willyweed said:

I quit drinking long ago and I do not miss the hang-overs at all! well done write

April 3rd, 2017 08:32

In Sweet Stench of Fakery
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write and very true.

March 31st, 2017 00:56

New Year\'s Eve (An Acrostic)
Tony36 said:

Great write

March 27th, 2017 08:15

He says “A Small Glass” (An Acrostic)
Tony36 said:

Great write

March 25th, 2017 07:52

Unwanted
Goldfinch60 said:

The thoughts of 99.9% of people will agree with these words, unfortunately the 0.01% in our word will not listen and they are the troublemakers.

March 24th, 2017 01:23

Unwanted
thinker said:

I enjoyed this poem and found it thought provoking.

March 23rd, 2017 12:34

A Promenade by the Trent
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write. I often write about My River and mine is The Avon in Evesham. I compare My River to My Spirit as being the same or at the least interchangeable.

March 22nd, 2017 11:51



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