Comments received on poems by Tony36
The Portal
Cassie58 said:
A very creative and imaginative write. I wonder if there will be a sequel?
August 22nd, 2024 07:43
Cassie58 said:
A very creative and imaginative write. I wonder if there will be a sequel?
August 22nd, 2024 07:43
The Portal
Thoughtless said:
A portal would probably be safer than teleportation if held stable. Portals would do away with a lot of the need for current supply chains.
Nice write.
August 22nd, 2024 07:36
Thoughtless said:
A portal would probably be safer than teleportation if held stable. Portals would do away with a lot of the need for current supply chains.
Nice write.
August 22nd, 2024 07:36
The way it is
Dan Williams said:
Pondering an all too possible apocalypse, I can seriously appreciate this. Nice work.
August 22nd, 2024 00:02
Dan Williams said:
Pondering an all too possible apocalypse, I can seriously appreciate this. Nice work.
August 22nd, 2024 00:02
The way it is
Mutley Ravishes said:
The iron is starting to melt! Is the wheat being sorted from the chaff?
August 21st, 2024 18:41
Mutley Ravishes said:
The iron is starting to melt! Is the wheat being sorted from the chaff?
August 21st, 2024 18:41
The way it is
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning poet,
stunning imagery, thoughts
and message so
eloquently penned my friend! 👍
Thanks for sharing!!! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 21st, 2024 18:27
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning poet,
stunning imagery, thoughts
and message so
eloquently penned my friend! 👍
Thanks for sharing!!! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 21st, 2024 18:27
The way it is
sorenbarrett said:
Literal a post apocalyptic disaster and in metaphor we all live it as yesterday falls into the past and we try to make the best of what remains
August 21st, 2024 08:11
sorenbarrett said:
Literal a post apocalyptic disaster and in metaphor we all live it as yesterday falls into the past and we try to make the best of what remains
August 21st, 2024 08:11
I write
arial said:
It\'s a strange moment ..where all the anger and anguish just fades away with the rhyming exhilarating our breaths ...nicely done ..can relate a lot
August 20th, 2024 22:35
arial said:
It\'s a strange moment ..where all the anger and anguish just fades away with the rhyming exhilarating our breaths ...nicely done ..can relate a lot
August 20th, 2024 22:35
Fairs
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful poem
magical and refreshing! 😄
Thanks for the
trip down mem\'ry lane!!👌👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 20th, 2024 21:09
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful poem
magical and refreshing! 😄
Thanks for the
trip down mem\'ry lane!!👌👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 20th, 2024 21:09
Fairs
Cassie58 said:
When I was a child the August Bank Holiday brought the fun fair to town. You have just reminded me of what a lively, happy occasion that used to be for our family. Thank you.
August 20th, 2024 12:27
Cassie58 said:
When I was a child the August Bank Holiday brought the fun fair to town. You have just reminded me of what a lively, happy occasion that used to be for our family. Thank you.
August 20th, 2024 12:27
Fairs
Bella Shepard said:
I remember those fairs, just as you have described. Such a lovely way to enjoy this day, with sweet memories. Thank you dear poet!
August 20th, 2024 11:48
Bella Shepard said:
I remember those fairs, just as you have described. Such a lovely way to enjoy this day, with sweet memories. Thank you dear poet!
August 20th, 2024 11:48
Fairs
sorenbarrett said:
We all have that child like part to us that craves excitement, color, movement, noise all that is in a fair
August 20th, 2024 08:21
sorenbarrett said:
We all have that child like part to us that craves excitement, color, movement, noise all that is in a fair
August 20th, 2024 08:21
Fairs
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes - though I doubt sideshow alley is anything like it was....
Bought back a memory or two.
August 20th, 2024 07:30
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes - though I doubt sideshow alley is anything like it was....
Bought back a memory or two.
August 20th, 2024 07:30
Lost
AuburnScribbler said:
A wonderfully written little tale of liberation here Tony36, full of gothic like imagery and sadly, ever so relatable.
Sometimes a fight is futile, for a dire situation cannot change, if a person who is the cause of such misery cannot change themself, so for your own sanity, to flee, is the only option left.
I imagine upon the very second of such an escape, Bruce Springsteen\'s \"Born to Run\" would play loud and proud as the soundtrack.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
August 20th, 2024 04:35
AuburnScribbler said:
A wonderfully written little tale of liberation here Tony36, full of gothic like imagery and sadly, ever so relatable.
Sometimes a fight is futile, for a dire situation cannot change, if a person who is the cause of such misery cannot change themself, so for your own sanity, to flee, is the only option left.
I imagine upon the very second of such an escape, Bruce Springsteen\'s \"Born to Run\" would play loud and proud as the soundtrack.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
August 20th, 2024 04:35
Lost
Thad Wilk said:
A really deep, emotional
and touching write!😢
Awesome presentation,
eloquently penned!! 💫
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 19th, 2024 19:39
Thad Wilk said:
A really deep, emotional
and touching write!😢
Awesome presentation,
eloquently penned!! 💫
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 19th, 2024 19:39
Lost
sorenbarrett said:
We all got to do what we have to do. There are feelings of abuse and bullying in this poem and out of fight of flight flight is chosen.
August 19th, 2024 07:55
sorenbarrett said:
We all got to do what we have to do. There are feelings of abuse and bullying in this poem and out of fight of flight flight is chosen.
August 19th, 2024 07:55
Musical Chase
Goldfinch60 said:
That silence between two musical notes is so important in music soren. Good write about the birth of music.
Andy
https://youtu.be/yoAbXwr3qkg?si=MnCblwUmXcTEm80Z
August 19th, 2024 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
That silence between two musical notes is so important in music soren. Good write about the birth of music.
Andy
https://youtu.be/yoAbXwr3qkg?si=MnCblwUmXcTEm80Z
August 19th, 2024 01:26
Musical Chase
AuburnScribbler said:
This is a wonderfully written journey, about how a good team can be built up, to compose such harmony.
Also, your poem reminds us, that everyone is different, and therefore live by different rhythms, but when such polyrhythms can merge, as you have mentioned, it can be quite special to behold.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
August 18th, 2024 07:11
AuburnScribbler said:
This is a wonderfully written journey, about how a good team can be built up, to compose such harmony.
Also, your poem reminds us, that everyone is different, and therefore live by different rhythms, but when such polyrhythms can merge, as you have mentioned, it can be quite special to behold.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
August 18th, 2024 07:11
Musical Chase
sorenbarrett said:
Deeper notes than music fill this sheet and it may apply to life itself. Nicely written
August 18th, 2024 07:08
sorenbarrett said:
Deeper notes than music fill this sheet and it may apply to life itself. Nicely written
August 18th, 2024 07:08
Alone
rhmn_7 said:
Building a life \"for us\" and not \"with us\", that seems subtle but is very significant!
August 18th, 2024 06:06
rhmn_7 said:
Building a life \"for us\" and not \"with us\", that seems subtle but is very significant!
August 18th, 2024 06:06
Alone
sorenbarrett said:
Sad but can be looked at as a new start. Looking back leads one to trip. Nicely done
August 17th, 2024 09:08
sorenbarrett said:
Sad but can be looked at as a new start. Looking back leads one to trip. Nicely done
August 17th, 2024 09:08
Alone
Teddy.15 said:
I find this incredibly sad because you were trying to build a life for you both, sometimes miscommunication can change the path of life, such a shame, I know how hard it is to struggle to keep together through thick and thin, I\'ve done it with my husband, now we are in our late 40\'s and everything is so much easier, if two people can stay the course it\'s a special special bond, so many cannot, this is true for so many. You pulled at my heart strings with this, may you find someone special one day soon. 🌹
August 17th, 2024 08:54
Teddy.15 said:
I find this incredibly sad because you were trying to build a life for you both, sometimes miscommunication can change the path of life, such a shame, I know how hard it is to struggle to keep together through thick and thin, I\'ve done it with my husband, now we are in our late 40\'s and everything is so much easier, if two people can stay the course it\'s a special special bond, so many cannot, this is true for so many. You pulled at my heart strings with this, may you find someone special one day soon. 🌹
August 17th, 2024 08:54
Alone
Thoughtless said:
A tale told out of time. People subtly change without adjusting. Excellent!
August 17th, 2024 08:15
Thoughtless said:
A tale told out of time. People subtly change without adjusting. Excellent!
August 17th, 2024 08:15
Sitting in the dock
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful vision of places I\'ve been nostalgia and feelings of joy. Bright and warm Wonderful!
August 16th, 2024 07:41
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful vision of places I\'ve been nostalgia and feelings of joy. Bright and warm Wonderful!
August 16th, 2024 07:41
At the Beach
AuburnScribbler said:
I miss the coast Tony36, and this scene that you have penned makes me miss it more.
Nicely written, bravo, and I hope that all is well.
August 16th, 2024 06:16
AuburnScribbler said:
I miss the coast Tony36, and this scene that you have penned makes me miss it more.
Nicely written, bravo, and I hope that all is well.
August 16th, 2024 06:16
Nature walk
Cassie58 said:
A walk in the woods. Time spent with nature is never wasted. Lovely imagery here and great description. Enjoyed the read.
August 15th, 2024 16:03
Cassie58 said:
A walk in the woods. Time spent with nature is never wasted. Lovely imagery here and great description. Enjoyed the read.
August 15th, 2024 16:03
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