Comments received on poems by Tony36
Street Rat
Poetic Licence said:
An hour important write, it is so sad and so wrong that across the world in today\'s world there are thousand\'s of children having to survive like this, emotional write but needed
April 16th, 2025 10:51
Poetic Licence said:
An hour important write, it is so sad and so wrong that across the world in today\'s world there are thousand\'s of children having to survive like this, emotional write but needed
April 16th, 2025 10:51
Street Rat
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and a pathetic comment on a society that can not take care of its own. A heart rending poem. Very nice
April 16th, 2025 09:49
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and a pathetic comment on a society that can not take care of its own. A heart rending poem. Very nice
April 16th, 2025 09:49
Go to sleep
Cheeky Missy said:
Charming. You\'re making me sleepy. All we seem to require now is a tender tune and beddy-bye will be set. Just don\'t let\'s us entertain thoughts of good old Rip Van Winkle. Sweetly rendered with a poignancy which softly lulls, thank you for sharing.
April 15th, 2025 12:00
Cheeky Missy said:
Charming. You\'re making me sleepy. All we seem to require now is a tender tune and beddy-bye will be set. Just don\'t let\'s us entertain thoughts of good old Rip Van Winkle. Sweetly rendered with a poignancy which softly lulls, thank you for sharing.
April 15th, 2025 12:00
Go to sleep
Poetic Licence said:
Any child would love to hear that, nicely done
April 15th, 2025 09:48
Poetic Licence said:
Any child would love to hear that, nicely done
April 15th, 2025 09:48
Go to sleep
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic lullaby that sends one off to dream. Lovely Tony
April 15th, 2025 09:04
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic lullaby that sends one off to dream. Lovely Tony
April 15th, 2025 09:04
Go to sleep
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful lullaby, Tony. I could see myself reading this to my children back when they\'d appreciate that sort of thing. As adults now, they might find me hovering over their bed reading lullabies creepy. π€£ All jokes, aside, this was wonderful and flows nicely! Well done! πΉ
April 15th, 2025 08:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful lullaby, Tony. I could see myself reading this to my children back when they\'d appreciate that sort of thing. As adults now, they might find me hovering over their bed reading lullabies creepy. π€£ All jokes, aside, this was wonderful and flows nicely! Well done! πΉ
April 15th, 2025 08:08
Go to sleep
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m drifting off all the time during my reccovery - a welcome and an appropriate read.
April 15th, 2025 08:08
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m drifting off all the time during my reccovery - a welcome and an appropriate read.
April 15th, 2025 08:08
I\'m Sorry
NafisaSB said:
the remorse spills out from each and everry line - extremely touching verse
April 14th, 2025 23:50
NafisaSB said:
the remorse spills out from each and everry line - extremely touching verse
April 14th, 2025 23:50
Abuse
Mutley Ravishes said:
A powerful write, Tony. However, would you agree that scars are not immortal?
April 14th, 2025 19:55
Mutley Ravishes said:
A powerful write, Tony. However, would you agree that scars are not immortal?
April 14th, 2025 19:55
Abuse
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A true and urgent write, Tony. Indeed, abuse happens most by those who are known well and trusted. A sad reality that your poem highlights. Well done! πΉπ
April 14th, 2025 15:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A true and urgent write, Tony. Indeed, abuse happens most by those who are known well and trusted. A sad reality that your poem highlights. Well done! πΉπ
April 14th, 2025 15:12
Abuse
NinjaGirl said:
I would favorite it because it\'s a true message, but it feels wrong to even have to say it.
April 14th, 2025 11:03
NinjaGirl said:
I would favorite it because it\'s a true message, but it feels wrong to even have to say it.
April 14th, 2025 11:03
Abuse
sorenbarrett said:
It is those we trust that have the key to abuse the most. A powerful write
April 14th, 2025 08:53
sorenbarrett said:
It is those we trust that have the key to abuse the most. A powerful write
April 14th, 2025 08:53
Stole my tent
Mourgana of the Fey said:
That was quite amazing stars that stole your tent, at least you didnt have to take a magical carpet up there! A lovely write!
April 14th, 2025 01:05
Mourgana of the Fey said:
That was quite amazing stars that stole your tent, at least you didnt have to take a magical carpet up there! A lovely write!
April 14th, 2025 01:05
Gallows
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang, Tony! Remind me of that macabre and ghastly short story in lit class too many years ago, will you? That story has haunted me for decades. Excellently rendered with lovely imagery and a haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing. [See: An Occurrance At Owl Creek Bridge by Ambrose Bierce]
April 13th, 2025 13:18
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang, Tony! Remind me of that macabre and ghastly short story in lit class too many years ago, will you? That story has haunted me for decades. Excellently rendered with lovely imagery and a haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing. [See: An Occurrance At Owl Creek Bridge by Ambrose Bierce]
April 13th, 2025 13:18
Gallows
arqios said:
It kind of felt like the speaker in the poem went to the gallows themselves after the previous execution πππ»
April 13th, 2025 07:43
arqios said:
It kind of felt like the speaker in the poem went to the gallows themselves after the previous execution πππ»
April 13th, 2025 07:43
Dear Heart
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Personally I like the idea of writing one self a letter or a short message. This can be a strengthening short practice. Where there is hope there is home and home is where there heart is. A fine motivational piece!
April 13th, 2025 02:18
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Personally I like the idea of writing one self a letter or a short message. This can be a strengthening short practice. Where there is hope there is home and home is where there heart is. A fine motivational piece!
April 13th, 2025 02:18
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