Comments received on poems by rrodriguez
Her Beauty
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Love these 2 lines ...
"I’ll search the profundities of her soul,
I know there lies the source of her beauty,"
July 19th, 2016 00:30
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Love these 2 lines ...
"I’ll search the profundities of her soul,
I know there lies the source of her beauty,"
July 19th, 2016 00:30
Loneliness
Kurt Philip Behm said:
I like the entire Poem but this is my favorite stanza...
"Loneliness is like the London still fog,
Loneliness is like stagnant putrid water.
A bitter bottle of wine in the gutter,
Drunkenness of spirit because the grog."
Just terrific!
Kurt
July 17th, 2016 17:11
Kurt Philip Behm said:
I like the entire Poem but this is my favorite stanza...
"Loneliness is like the London still fog,
Loneliness is like stagnant putrid water.
A bitter bottle of wine in the gutter,
Drunkenness of spirit because the grog."
Just terrific!
Kurt
July 17th, 2016 17:11
Loneliness
rrodriguez said:
Thank you Brian. Your comments are incisive. I enjoy them!
July 17th, 2016 11:40
rrodriguez said:
Thank you Brian. Your comments are incisive. I enjoy them!
July 17th, 2016 11:40
Loneliness
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GRACIAS RR ~ Loneliness is a "black dog" and hard to bear. We all need friends and companionship. It is amazing hat one can be lonely (I've been lonely too) on a Planet with 7.5 billion humans or worse still in a City like London with 12 million people. People have died in big cities and lain rotting for a month in their room until someone discovered them ~ appalling. Thanks for sharing ~ nice structure ~ sad topic ! BRIAN
July 17th, 2016 11:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GRACIAS RR ~ Loneliness is a "black dog" and hard to bear. We all need friends and companionship. It is amazing hat one can be lonely (I've been lonely too) on a Planet with 7.5 billion humans or worse still in a City like London with 12 million people. People have died in big cities and lain rotting for a month in their room until someone discovered them ~ appalling. Thanks for sharing ~ nice structure ~ sad topic ! BRIAN
July 17th, 2016 11:32
Loneliness
rrodriguez said:
I tried to upload a pic, but I wasn't successful with the requirements. Can someone with experience uploading pics give me a hint.
July 17th, 2016 08:37
rrodriguez said:
I tried to upload a pic, but I wasn't successful with the requirements. Can someone with experience uploading pics give me a hint.
July 17th, 2016 08:37
When Ever I Think of You
serendipity said:
Very moving. Also relatable. Nice choice in words that give lots of detail.
July 16th, 2016 14:47
serendipity said:
Very moving. Also relatable. Nice choice in words that give lots of detail.
July 16th, 2016 14:47
When Ever I Think of You
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME RR ~ Thanks for a very elegantly written love poem. And what of the subject? ~ recollection. Every sense is invoked ~ Sight - pink hibiscus ~ Sound - rustle of leaves ~ Scent - field lilac ~ Sensuality - puffs of cotton ~ Savour - coffee. All these senses aroused by a single thought ! Perfect poem ~ thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
July 16th, 2016 14:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME RR ~ Thanks for a very elegantly written love poem. And what of the subject? ~ recollection. Every sense is invoked ~ Sight - pink hibiscus ~ Sound - rustle of leaves ~ Scent - field lilac ~ Sensuality - puffs of cotton ~ Savour - coffee. All these senses aroused by a single thought ! Perfect poem ~ thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
July 16th, 2016 14:35
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