Comments received on poems by rrodriguez
Kaleidoscope
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring RR ~ a dreadful carnage. PULSE an LGBT Nightclub in Orlando. Normal Young People ~ mainly Hispanic ~ gunned down without mercy by OMAR MATTEEN. We must pray for the Families of the dead and for the injured. Thanks for a beautiful poem as homage to a very very sad occurrence. Your BRIAN
July 25th, 2016 15:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring RR ~ a dreadful carnage. PULSE an LGBT Nightclub in Orlando. Normal Young People ~ mainly Hispanic ~ gunned down without mercy by OMAR MATTEEN. We must pray for the Families of the dead and for the injured. Thanks for a beautiful poem as homage to a very very sad occurrence. Your BRIAN
July 25th, 2016 15:53
My Daisy
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Gracias RR ~ Lovely poem and lovely tribute to your wife. It is interesting how we associate specific Ladies with specific flowers. My current GF has a passion for pink ROSES she is very feminine and a developing pink rosebud always reminds me of her. She is only 27 so she is not yet full blown ! Thanks for sharing BRIAN
July 24th, 2016 16:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Gracias RR ~ Lovely poem and lovely tribute to your wife. It is interesting how we associate specific Ladies with specific flowers. My current GF has a passion for pink ROSES she is very feminine and a developing pink rosebud always reminds me of her. She is only 27 so she is not yet full blown ! Thanks for sharing BRIAN
July 24th, 2016 16:30
Life
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you RR ~ I love the Greek Alphabet it is so evocative. I had a classical education so was able to transliterate ! It is a walk on the wild side ~ love turtles ~ love the slow flow of the poem ! S1. Close encounter of the turtle kind. S2. Noted the gorgeousness of its brown & yellow shell suit. S3. You worried about it crossing the road ~ turtles are slow ! S4. It walked anyway ~ turtle free spirit ! S5. You scared it with your size but (like you) it was determined to experience life. The moral is: In order to experience the other side you must first be prepared to cross the bridge ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
July 23rd, 2016 10:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you RR ~ I love the Greek Alphabet it is so evocative. I had a classical education so was able to transliterate ! It is a walk on the wild side ~ love turtles ~ love the slow flow of the poem ! S1. Close encounter of the turtle kind. S2. Noted the gorgeousness of its brown & yellow shell suit. S3. You worried about it crossing the road ~ turtles are slow ! S4. It walked anyway ~ turtle free spirit ! S5. You scared it with your size but (like you) it was determined to experience life. The moral is: In order to experience the other side you must first be prepared to cross the bridge ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
July 23rd, 2016 10:22
Life
rrodriguez said:
Yes, of course. I read, reread, and read again, but it takes other eyes to see the minute mishaps in grammar. Thanks. I will make that corection.
July 23rd, 2016 09:52
rrodriguez said:
Yes, of course. I read, reread, and read again, but it takes other eyes to see the minute mishaps in grammar. Thanks. I will make that corection.
July 23rd, 2016 09:52
Life
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Very nice. You 'might' want to change 'seeing' to 'seen' in the next to last line. You made me feel like I was on the walk with you. Great words!
July 23rd, 2016 09:39
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Very nice. You 'might' want to change 'seeing' to 'seen' in the next to last line. You made me feel like I was on the walk with you. Great words!
July 23rd, 2016 09:39
Sunset
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Gracias RR ~ A beautiful tone poem ~ In my minds eye I saw every shimmering shade as the Sun sank slowly in the west. There are thousands of sunsets (and sunrises) every day and every one is very different. Yours BRIAN
July 22nd, 2016 07:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Gracias RR ~ A beautiful tone poem ~ In my minds eye I saw every shimmering shade as the Sun sank slowly in the west. There are thousands of sunsets (and sunrises) every day and every one is very different. Yours BRIAN
July 22nd, 2016 07:39
You are the Pearl
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL RR ~ God is good and sometimes He rewards us with "A Pearl of great value". It is our joy and responsibility to cherish that pearl ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
July 21st, 2016 07:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL RR ~ God is good and sometimes He rewards us with "A Pearl of great value". It is our joy and responsibility to cherish that pearl ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
July 21st, 2016 07:22
Unrequited Love
Rosethebrokenhearted said:
I can relate, all too well. There is a binder, in existence, full of pieces I wrote, for the one I love, and I question if it has ever meant a thing to him.
Beautifully portrayed, fellow poet.
July 20th, 2016 04:06
Rosethebrokenhearted said:
I can relate, all too well. There is a binder, in existence, full of pieces I wrote, for the one I love, and I question if it has ever meant a thing to him.
Beautifully portrayed, fellow poet.
July 20th, 2016 04:06
Unrequited Love
rrodriguez said:
Thank you! I respect your comments and observations.
July 19th, 2016 21:53
rrodriguez said:
Thank you! I respect your comments and observations.
July 19th, 2016 21:53
Unrequited Love
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Just a beautiful Poem! My favorite stanza ...
"I played the music to remember
When our love was in bloom
I played the music to remind you
How much I love you "
Thanks for the invitation,
Kurt
July 19th, 2016 21:49
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Just a beautiful Poem! My favorite stanza ...
"I played the music to remember
When our love was in bloom
I played the music to remind you
How much I love you "
Thanks for the invitation,
Kurt
July 19th, 2016 21:49
Her Beauty
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GRACIAS RR ~ "Whosoever findeth a Wife ~ findeth a very good thing !" An excellent and love filled tribute to your lovely wife ! I wrote a poem about The Scent of a Woman so my favourite stanza is: The beauty of her entrapping body essence ~ Awakens my senses to her marvelous presence ~ Hence her body fragrance is so splendid ~ I'm delirious can't explain it ! Thanks for sharing ~ RR she sure stirred your muse ! Yours BRIAN
July 19th, 2016 08:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GRACIAS RR ~ "Whosoever findeth a Wife ~ findeth a very good thing !" An excellent and love filled tribute to your lovely wife ! I wrote a poem about The Scent of a Woman so my favourite stanza is: The beauty of her entrapping body essence ~ Awakens my senses to her marvelous presence ~ Hence her body fragrance is so splendid ~ I'm delirious can't explain it ! Thanks for sharing ~ RR she sure stirred your muse ! Yours BRIAN
July 19th, 2016 08:58
Her Beauty
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Love these 2 lines ...
"I’ll search the profundities of her soul,
I know there lies the source of her beauty,"
July 19th, 2016 00:30
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Love these 2 lines ...
"I’ll search the profundities of her soul,
I know there lies the source of her beauty,"
July 19th, 2016 00:30
Loneliness
Kurt Philip Behm said:
I like the entire Poem but this is my favorite stanza...
"Loneliness is like the London still fog,
Loneliness is like stagnant putrid water.
A bitter bottle of wine in the gutter,
Drunkenness of spirit because the grog."
Just terrific!
Kurt
July 17th, 2016 17:11
Kurt Philip Behm said:
I like the entire Poem but this is my favorite stanza...
"Loneliness is like the London still fog,
Loneliness is like stagnant putrid water.
A bitter bottle of wine in the gutter,
Drunkenness of spirit because the grog."
Just terrific!
Kurt
July 17th, 2016 17:11
Loneliness
rrodriguez said:
Thank you Brian. Your comments are incisive. I enjoy them!
July 17th, 2016 11:40
rrodriguez said:
Thank you Brian. Your comments are incisive. I enjoy them!
July 17th, 2016 11:40
Loneliness
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GRACIAS RR ~ Loneliness is a "black dog" and hard to bear. We all need friends and companionship. It is amazing hat one can be lonely (I've been lonely too) on a Planet with 7.5 billion humans or worse still in a City like London with 12 million people. People have died in big cities and lain rotting for a month in their room until someone discovered them ~ appalling. Thanks for sharing ~ nice structure ~ sad topic ! BRIAN
July 17th, 2016 11:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GRACIAS RR ~ Loneliness is a "black dog" and hard to bear. We all need friends and companionship. It is amazing hat one can be lonely (I've been lonely too) on a Planet with 7.5 billion humans or worse still in a City like London with 12 million people. People have died in big cities and lain rotting for a month in their room until someone discovered them ~ appalling. Thanks for sharing ~ nice structure ~ sad topic ! BRIAN
July 17th, 2016 11:32
Loneliness
rrodriguez said:
I tried to upload a pic, but I wasn't successful with the requirements. Can someone with experience uploading pics give me a hint.
July 17th, 2016 08:37
rrodriguez said:
I tried to upload a pic, but I wasn't successful with the requirements. Can someone with experience uploading pics give me a hint.
July 17th, 2016 08:37
When Ever I Think of You
serendipity said:
Very moving. Also relatable. Nice choice in words that give lots of detail.
July 16th, 2016 14:47
serendipity said:
Very moving. Also relatable. Nice choice in words that give lots of detail.
July 16th, 2016 14:47
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