Comments received on poems by rrodriguez



When Time Comes to my Living Room
Michael Edwards said:

Touches a chord - a lovely flowing write.

January 7th, 2017 02:15

Aquel hombre
rrodriguez said:

Sí voy a leerlo. Gracias poer leer mi poema.

January 6th, 2017 21:08

Aquel hombre
Augustus said:

Es difícil estar en un país extranjero con pesadumbre. Triste. La rima y el ritmo son buenos. Disfruté leyendo en voz alta. Mi español no está muy bien pero hazme un favor de leer La Espalda de Mi Mamá por Augustus.

January 6th, 2017 20:59

\"I Saw the Sun Bleeding in the Horizon\"
rrodriguez said:

Thank you Dford...

January 6th, 2017 13:47

\"I Saw the Sun Bleeding in the Horizon\"
Dford1 said:

Absolutely beautiful!

January 6th, 2017 13:46

\"I Saw the Sun Bleeding in the Horizon\"
rrodriguez said:

Thank you fris for your kind words. Thank you again!

January 6th, 2017 13:23

\"I Saw the Sun Bleeding in the Horizon\"
Michael Edwards said:

Yet another great write.

January 6th, 2017 13:12

\"I Saw the Sun Bleeding in the Horizon\"
Christina8 said:

Absolutely beautiful piece! Love the last line of your poem! Christina

January 6th, 2017 13:04

\"I Saw the Sun Bleeding in the Horizon\"
rrodriguez said:

Thank you, Phoenix.

January 6th, 2017 12:57

\"I Saw the Sun Bleeding in the Horizon\"
Phoenix8523 said:

Beautiful

January 6th, 2017 12:53

\"I Saw the Sun Bleeding in the Horizon\"
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

January 6th, 2017 12:39

\"I Saw the Sun Bleeding in the Horizon\"
willyweed said:

more good stuff RR

January 6th, 2017 12:21

\"I Saw the Sun Bleeding in the Horizon\"
rrodriguez said:

Thank you... please read Aquel hombre. I wrote it at a time when I was sad.

January 6th, 2017 11:50

\"I Saw the Sun Bleeding in the Horizon\"
Augustus said:

Was not that long ago man thought the sun was a God. The warmth of embrace is a great line.

January 6th, 2017 11:39

\"I Saw the Sun Bleeding in the Horizon\"
rrodriguez said:

Thank you ww. This poem is an adaptation of \"I saw a man Pursuing the Horizon\" by Stephen Crane ..

January 6th, 2017 11:17

\"I Saw the Sun Bleeding in the Horizon\"
willyweed said:

It can take your breath away
as did your piece. ww

January 6th, 2017 11:13

\"I Saw the Sun Bleeding in the Horizon\"
rrodriguez said:

Thank you and welcome to our poetic world.

January 6th, 2017 11:06

\"I Saw the Sun Bleeding in the Horizon\"
Lau9hin9jack said:

That\'s cool

January 6th, 2017 10:53

Two Shadorma Poems
Augustus said:

Thanks for the Shadorma lesson. It give us a challange. Your wife and niece are lucky.

January 5th, 2017 15:20

Two Shadorma Poems
Phoenix8523 said:

very nice! I too very much like the explanation that accompanies these poems. Always looking to learn something new and interesting! -- phoenix

January 5th, 2017 13:44

The Rain
catdeu said:

I really enjoyed this poem! Nice job :)

January 5th, 2017 12:29

Two Shadorma Poems
WriteBeLight said:

Beautifully done. Thanks for the additional explanation. I love to learn new things about poetry!

January 5th, 2017 10:40

Two Shadorma Poems
willyweed said:

tiempos muy bonitos dos. ww

January 5th, 2017 10:01

Two Shadorma Poems
Tony36 said:

Great write love them both

January 5th, 2017 09:30

The Rain
Augustus said:

Amigo, tengo un granero con techo de hojalata. (Lamina metal) Me encanta escuchar las gotas de lluvia en el techo. Que tus cosechas de la vida sea abundante. Lo disfrute mucho.

January 4th, 2017 21:39

The Rain
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Really captivating, especially the last stanza. Thanks for sending.

Kurt

January 4th, 2017 21:07

The Rain
Tony36 said:

Great write, being a farmer I love the rain

January 4th, 2017 15:48

The Rain
Michael Edwards said:

Just like the rain - a beautiful flow; you paint a picture with words

January 4th, 2017 15:10

The Rain
willyweed said:

a symphony of raindrops in your lovely poem.

January 4th, 2017 12:29

The Rain
WriteBeLight said:

Beautiful tribute to a relaxing sound!

January 4th, 2017 12:22



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