Comments received on poems by rrodriguez
The Gentle Whisper
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
AMEN RODRIGUEZ ~ GRACIAS POR UNA POEMA ESPIRITUAL ! GOD speaks to us in many ways and often through Nature ~ for me especially through sunrises and sunsets. Also in my exprience He never shout at me but speaks with a still small voice ! Thanks for sharing. Please check my two latest poems thanks ~ BRIAN
December 18th, 2016 15:09
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
AMEN RODRIGUEZ ~ GRACIAS POR UNA POEMA ESPIRITUAL ! GOD speaks to us in many ways and often through Nature ~ for me especially through sunrises and sunsets. Also in my exprience He never shout at me but speaks with a still small voice ! Thanks for sharing. Please check my two latest poems thanks ~ BRIAN
December 18th, 2016 15:09
Aquel hombre
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HOLA ROBERTO ~ Por favor lea y comentar a mi ultima poema d'amor ~ PENELOPE ~ Muchas gracias ~ Tu amigo BRIAN
September 5th, 2016 15:24
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HOLA ROBERTO ~ Por favor lea y comentar a mi ultima poema d'amor ~ PENELOPE ~ Muchas gracias ~ Tu amigo BRIAN
September 5th, 2016 15:24
Aquel hombre
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Gracias ROBERTO por una muy elegante pero muy melancolica poema ! THAT MAN. ! Stanza 1. He weeps because of his broken heart. S 2. His fine human spirit is in a deep pit and a cruel swamp S 3. Absent from his native land ~ he wants to give his life and soul S 4. These lyrics are (soothing) ointments ~ just a handful of verses printed on paper ~ just for now !. Thanks for sharing ~ Hasta Luego ~ Tu amigo BRIAN
September 5th, 2016 15:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Gracias ROBERTO por una muy elegante pero muy melancolica poema ! THAT MAN. ! Stanza 1. He weeps because of his broken heart. S 2. His fine human spirit is in a deep pit and a cruel swamp S 3. Absent from his native land ~ he wants to give his life and soul S 4. These lyrics are (soothing) ointments ~ just a handful of verses printed on paper ~ just for now !. Thanks for sharing ~ Hasta Luego ~ Tu amigo BRIAN
September 5th, 2016 15:18
God\'s Rainbow
Kurt Philip Behm said:
A vividly beautiful poem with great reach and depth. I would drop the word 'cute' if it were
mine and just say "A prism of nuances ..."
September 4th, 2016 19:48
Kurt Philip Behm said:
A vividly beautiful poem with great reach and depth. I would drop the word 'cute' if it were
mine and just say "A prism of nuances ..."
September 4th, 2016 19:48
God\'s Rainbow
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL POEM ~ God is very generous and uses the whole palette to paint a Rainbow R O Y G B I V ! I love the appellations you give the colors ~ excellent. Pleased to have you back ~ Hasta manana ~ Tu Amigo BRIAN. Please check my latest poem PLANET EARTH ~ Thanks B
September 4th, 2016 13:09
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL POEM ~ God is very generous and uses the whole palette to paint a Rainbow R O Y G B I V ! I love the appellations you give the colors ~ excellent. Pleased to have you back ~ Hasta manana ~ Tu Amigo BRIAN. Please check my latest poem PLANET EARTH ~ Thanks B
September 4th, 2016 13:09
God\'s Rainbow
notapoet said:
A beautifully descriptive piece, The flow and overall feeling you get just reading the words puts you at ease. Great write fellow poet.
September 4th, 2016 11:04
notapoet said:
A beautifully descriptive piece, The flow and overall feeling you get just reading the words puts you at ease. Great write fellow poet.
September 4th, 2016 11:04
Haunted Forest
willyweed said:
the trees are alive
great write rr enjoyed it much! ww
August 22nd, 2016 19:18
willyweed said:
the trees are alive
great write rr enjoyed it much! ww
August 22nd, 2016 19:18
Haunted Forest
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GRACIAS ROBERTO ~ For a great TONE POEM. Poems based on visuals are always challenging and rewarding. There is always a symbiosis between the Pen and the Paintbrush or the Camera MAS POR FAVOR ! Please check my latest FUSION ~ MY FAVORITE TIPPLE ~ Hasta luego BRIAN
August 22nd, 2016 07:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GRACIAS ROBERTO ~ For a great TONE POEM. Poems based on visuals are always challenging and rewarding. There is always a symbiosis between the Pen and the Paintbrush or the Camera MAS POR FAVOR ! Please check my latest FUSION ~ MY FAVORITE TIPPLE ~ Hasta luego BRIAN
August 22nd, 2016 07:27
My Blu
Geraldb said:
I had a blue a while ago. He was a remarkable little fellow. I had an open door policy for his home inside of my home and he reveled in his freedom.
August 21st, 2016 10:28
Geraldb said:
I had a blue a while ago. He was a remarkable little fellow. I had an open door policy for his home inside of my home and he reveled in his freedom.
August 21st, 2016 10:28
The Storm
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GRACIAS for sharing ROBERTO ~ A beautiful "free verse" Nature poem in six neat quatrains ~ very adequate and a very neat visual. As I read the poem today I could feel the wind and the rain and hear the ocean and the birds and the trees. The Moon wants the storm to last but it gradually eases. Your use of descriptive language is masterly.. The UK ~ like Puerto Rico ~ is an Island and this very day four people have been drowned in coastal storms. Never under estimate Mother Nature ! Hasta Manana ~ BRIAN
August 20th, 2016 17:10
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GRACIAS for sharing ROBERTO ~ A beautiful "free verse" Nature poem in six neat quatrains ~ very adequate and a very neat visual. As I read the poem today I could feel the wind and the rain and hear the ocean and the birds and the trees. The Moon wants the storm to last but it gradually eases. Your use of descriptive language is masterly.. The UK ~ like Puerto Rico ~ is an Island and this very day four people have been drowned in coastal storms. Never under estimate Mother Nature ! Hasta Manana ~ BRIAN
August 20th, 2016 17:10
Thoughts & Words (a sonnet)
rrodriguez said:
Wow! I certainly like this... one thought ignites another; words inspire others and so on. Great job. Out of a comment, two poems. Great job my friend.
August 19th, 2016 13:56
rrodriguez said:
Wow! I certainly like this... one thought ignites another; words inspire others and so on. Great job. Out of a comment, two poems. Great job my friend.
August 19th, 2016 13:56
Thoughts & Words (a sonnet)
Kurt Philip Behm said:
I love it. It inspired this ... (Hope you don't mind)
Thoughts ignite and feelings stir
Words simmering still to warm
Unspoken sparks left in the night
Kindling a pyre still to burn
Delphian in its natural form
The smoke a treacherous friend
The ink to inflame, as lies cremate
The mind, a forest on fire
Their heat can destroy the human soul
But of this one thing be sure
One thought set free from a frozen dawn,
—burns intrepid in the poets hand
The verse now stacked and dried of doubt
Its ignition up to you
As unlit it waits for your next breath
To burn the spoken air
Read more at: Thoughts & Words (a sonnet) Poem, by rrodriguez, at My poetic side http://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-60189#ixzz4HnideUXf
August 19th, 2016 13:39
Kurt Philip Behm said:
I love it. It inspired this ... (Hope you don't mind)
Thoughts ignite and feelings stir
Words simmering still to warm
Unspoken sparks left in the night
Kindling a pyre still to burn
Delphian in its natural form
The smoke a treacherous friend
The ink to inflame, as lies cremate
The mind, a forest on fire
Their heat can destroy the human soul
But of this one thing be sure
One thought set free from a frozen dawn,
—burns intrepid in the poets hand
The verse now stacked and dried of doubt
Its ignition up to you
As unlit it waits for your next breath
To burn the spoken air
Read more at: Thoughts & Words (a sonnet) Poem, by rrodriguez, at My poetic side http://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-60189#ixzz4HnideUXf
August 19th, 2016 13:39
Thoughts & Words (a sonnet)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GRACIAS ROBERTO POR UNA POEMA EXCELLENTE ! Thoughs and words lead to deeds and in the END it is the deeds that kill ~ BUT ~ you cant hav the one without the other. Love sonnets ~ thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
August 19th, 2016 09:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GRACIAS ROBERTO POR UNA POEMA EXCELLENTE ! Thoughs and words lead to deeds and in the END it is the deeds that kill ~ BUT ~ you cant hav the one without the other. Love sonnets ~ thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
August 19th, 2016 09:48
Diamante poem Urayoán Mountain
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
EXCELLENTE ROBERTO - I love poems with physical shape. You have also used a "word pattern" 1-2-3-4-3-2-1 to create the diamond ! The content of the poem also has diamond quality ~ perfection. Thanks for sharing ~ TU AMIGO ~ BRIAN
August 17th, 2016 14:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
EXCELLENTE ROBERTO - I love poems with physical shape. You have also used a "word pattern" 1-2-3-4-3-2-1 to create the diamond ! The content of the poem also has diamond quality ~ perfection. Thanks for sharing ~ TU AMIGO ~ BRIAN
August 17th, 2016 14:37
A Sad and Fog Filled Night
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Just great composition and feeling. My favorite line is 'hidden in the dark night with tears in their leaves."
Great imagery!
Kurt
August 17th, 2016 12:23
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Just great composition and feeling. My favorite line is 'hidden in the dark night with tears in their leaves."
Great imagery!
Kurt
August 17th, 2016 12:23
To the moon
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
MOTHER EARTH ~ And Sister Moon work in perfect harmony. The Moon id so so near the Earth (only 0.25M miles) and I believe this gibes them a perfect symbiosis. Mother Earth of course is the only Living Planet and her job as GHIA is maintaining her equilibroum to provide a home for US and all the Flora & Fauna. It is in essence a role reversal of Mother & Daughter because the Moon is so so important in her role to maintain the tides and provide light at night and her influence on all our life cycles. So perhaps one reason the Moon is lonely is because she is looking after he Mum (who is 4.54 billion years old) and no one is looking after the Moon. Buzz Aldrin is a great Moonophile ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
August 16th, 2016 16:28
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
MOTHER EARTH ~ And Sister Moon work in perfect harmony. The Moon id so so near the Earth (only 0.25M miles) and I believe this gibes them a perfect symbiosis. Mother Earth of course is the only Living Planet and her job as GHIA is maintaining her equilibroum to provide a home for US and all the Flora & Fauna. It is in essence a role reversal of Mother & Daughter because the Moon is so so important in her role to maintain the tides and provide light at night and her influence on all our life cycles. So perhaps one reason the Moon is lonely is because she is looking after he Mum (who is 4.54 billion years old) and no one is looking after the Moon. Buzz Aldrin is a great Moonophile ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
August 16th, 2016 16:28
Be With Me Always and Weeping Willow Tree
Rosethebrokenhearted said:
Both of these works speak so strongly, in such short words. Great write. Thank you for your time :)
~RTBH
August 16th, 2016 09:21
Rosethebrokenhearted said:
Both of these works speak so strongly, in such short words. Great write. Thank you for your time :)
~RTBH
August 16th, 2016 09:21
Be With Me Always and Weeping Willow Tree
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GRACIAS ROBERTO ~ Por dos mas LUNES (That' American haiku not Spanish MOONS !) Expressing your eternal love for your Spouse in 13 syllables is masterly. The W Willow is my fave. and again you condense its majestic beauty into a single LUNE. I have a new FUSION this week ~ MY FAVORITE FRUIT ~ Thanks for your RR Stanza ! BRIAN
August 15th, 2016 14:00
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GRACIAS ROBERTO ~ Por dos mas LUNES (That' American haiku not Spanish MOONS !) Expressing your eternal love for your Spouse in 13 syllables is masterly. The W Willow is my fave. and again you condense its majestic beauty into a single LUNE. I have a new FUSION this week ~ MY FAVORITE FRUIT ~ Thanks for your RR Stanza ! BRIAN
August 15th, 2016 14:00
Bundles of Roses (a Lune)
rrodriguez said:
Thank you Brian. I will also come up with some Lunes for future poems for My Poetic Side. Thanks again. By the way, I lived in the Bronx and Spanish Harlem.
August 13th, 2016 07:07
rrodriguez said:
Thank you Brian. I will also come up with some Lunes for future poems for My Poetic Side. Thanks again. By the way, I lived in the Bronx and Spanish Harlem.
August 13th, 2016 07:07
Bundles of Roses (a Lune)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HOLA ROBERTO ! You are getting romantic in your old age ! I like the IDEA of US Haiku being called LUNES we would always read that a MOON or "hear it" as LOON = MAD as in LUNATIC ! I will write some HAIKU about the USA and call them LUNES just to get some Street Cred in the BRONX & HARLEM ~ Hasta Luego # BRIAN
August 13th, 2016 02:54
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HOLA ROBERTO ! You are getting romantic in your old age ! I like the IDEA of US Haiku being called LUNES we would always read that a MOON or "hear it" as LOON = MAD as in LUNATIC ! I will write some HAIKU about the USA and call them LUNES just to get some Street Cred in the BRONX & HARLEM ~ Hasta Luego # BRIAN
August 13th, 2016 02:54
How can I forget?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GRACIAS ROBERTO ~ How can I forget the things we've done # How can I forget the battles we 've won # How can I forget the hours of fun ? We may forget Yes we may forget the detail ~ but the experience will live in both our hearts forever ! Great ODE structurally and with a greate message ~ Memories of true love are eternal ~ BRIAN
August 10th, 2016 09:44
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GRACIAS ROBERTO ~ How can I forget the things we've done # How can I forget the battles we 've won # How can I forget the hours of fun ? We may forget Yes we may forget the detail ~ but the experience will live in both our hearts forever ! Great ODE structurally and with a greate message ~ Memories of true love are eternal ~ BRIAN
August 10th, 2016 09:44
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