Comments received on poems by rrodriguez



\"I Saw the Sun Bleeding in the Horizon\"
rrodriguez said:

Thank you ww. This poem is an adaptation of \"I saw a man Pursuing the Horizon\" by Stephen Crane ..

January 6th, 2017 11:17

\"I Saw the Sun Bleeding in the Horizon\"
willyweed said:

It can take your breath away
as did your piece. ww

January 6th, 2017 11:13

\"I Saw the Sun Bleeding in the Horizon\"
rrodriguez said:

Thank you and welcome to our poetic world.

January 6th, 2017 11:06

\"I Saw the Sun Bleeding in the Horizon\"
Lau9hin9jack said:

That\'s cool

January 6th, 2017 10:53

Two Shadorma Poems
Augustus said:

Thanks for the Shadorma lesson. It give us a challange. Your wife and niece are lucky.

January 5th, 2017 15:20

Two Shadorma Poems
Phoenix8523 said:

very nice! I too very much like the explanation that accompanies these poems. Always looking to learn something new and interesting! -- phoenix

January 5th, 2017 13:44

The Rain
catdeu said:

I really enjoyed this poem! Nice job :)

January 5th, 2017 12:29

Two Shadorma Poems
WriteBeLight said:

Beautifully done. Thanks for the additional explanation. I love to learn new things about poetry!

January 5th, 2017 10:40

Two Shadorma Poems
willyweed said:

tiempos muy bonitos dos. ww

January 5th, 2017 10:01

Two Shadorma Poems
Tony36 said:

Great write love them both

January 5th, 2017 09:30

The Rain
Augustus said:

Amigo, tengo un granero con techo de hojalata. (Lamina metal) Me encanta escuchar las gotas de lluvia en el techo. Que tus cosechas de la vida sea abundante. Lo disfrute mucho.

January 4th, 2017 21:39

The Rain
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Really captivating, especially the last stanza. Thanks for sending.

Kurt

January 4th, 2017 21:07

The Rain
Tony36 said:

Great write, being a farmer I love the rain

January 4th, 2017 15:48

The Rain
Michael Edwards said:

Just like the rain - a beautiful flow; you paint a picture with words

January 4th, 2017 15:10

The Rain
willyweed said:

a symphony of raindrops in your lovely poem.

January 4th, 2017 12:29

The Rain
WriteBeLight said:

Beautiful tribute to a relaxing sound!

January 4th, 2017 12:22

Beach Walk
rrodriguez said:

Thank you Notapoet.

January 3rd, 2017 18:18

Beach Walk
notapoet said:

What can I say that has not already been said, a beautiful and brilliant piece of poetry my friend.

January 3rd, 2017 18:15

Beach Walk
WriteBeLight said:

Excellent point of view of the peace and beauty of the ocean, waves and sand! Very nice photo, as well.

January 3rd, 2017 14:19

Beach Walk
Tony36 said:

Wonderfully written and expressed

January 3rd, 2017 13:54

Beach Walk
willyweed said:

Brilliant my friend, wonderful words! ww

January 3rd, 2017 13:16

Beach Walk
rrodriguez said:

The tiny star twinkling in the Milky Way with countless stars, suggest the context of our life in this overcrowded world. But, though it feels like I\'m alone, I have my God, my family, my friends, and my children to keep me company. Yes, I\'m a tiny star in the immense universe, but in reality my light shines in ions of time.

January 3rd, 2017 13:11

Beach Walk
Augustus said:

Could relate to every part of this poem. Was crying as I read it. Nicely done. Hugs.

January 3rd, 2017 13:00

Beach Walk
SunSearcher said:

Beautiful

January 3rd, 2017 12:22

Forest Walk
rrodriguez said:

Thank you all for your kind words and the encouragement.

January 2nd, 2017 18:16

Forest Walk
Michael Edwards said:

Really invokes the atmosphere, it flows and I\'m there - a sign of a great poem

January 2nd, 2017 01:24

Forest Walk
Augustus said:

What this reminds me of is whenever I was stressed, a walk in nature was refreshing. Nicely done. Very readable and paints pictures.

January 2nd, 2017 01:08

Forest Walk
willyweed said:

This is very good rr nicely expressed> write on ww

January 1st, 2017 17:18

The Gentle Whisper
rrodriguez said:

Thank you very much for reading my poem and for your kind words.

December 25th, 2016 00:31

The Gentle Whisper
notapoet said:

Beautiful piece, the flow and content of this write put me in a warm and calm place as i read your words, thank you for sharing....

December 19th, 2016 09:39



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