Comments received on poems by John Prophet



Grid
Goldfinch60 said:

Some of us in that Brave New World think outside the box and are beyond the future planned for us.

Andy

April 2nd, 2021 01:11

Baton
L. B. Mek said:

indeed, sad when humanity\'s past is deemed obsolete to validate progressive ignorance, as modernity\'s go-to state..
good write of measured lament

March 29th, 2021 04:30

Baton
Goldfinch60 said:

Maybe we will still exist in \'that someplace else\' John.

Andy

March 28th, 2021 00:31

Uncertainty
L. B. Mek said:

\'cyclical\' existence as nature intended, supposedly
at least at our distance to meaning..
maybe one day, we\'ll be granted access and introduce humanity: to the actual metaphysics of Reality...

March 26th, 2021 05:13

Uncertainty
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true John, live is always changing and there is no end.

Andy

March 26th, 2021 02:04

Uncertainty
jarcher54 said:

Ouch... no end game? I like how you can\'t see the end of this word-play till it appears at the bottom of the page as you scroll down, coming at you like... well, like the end!

March 25th, 2021 22:46

Emerging
L. B. Mek said:

\'stumbles that never relent
teaching us all the joy in a spirited lament
and lessons earned
by those scraped knees
we bravely, hobble forward with\'..
is the message your words conveyed, at least to me dear poet

March 25th, 2021 04:55

Emerging
Goldfinch60 said:

Towards infinity indeed John.

Andy

March 24th, 2021 01:39

Always Was
Goldfinch60 said:

So true John.

Andy

March 21st, 2021 02:11

Always Was
FredPeyer said:

Great poem, John! Enjoyed it infinitely!

March 20th, 2021 22:58

Power Lust
Goldfinch60 said:

That battle can be assuaged through wisdom.

Andy

March 19th, 2021 01:44

All
L. B. Mek said:

\'Perspective
and humility
in short
supply.
Brought
down to
size.
All brought
down to
Earth.
All,
just a
speck
in the
Martian
sky.
Humbling.\'..
indeed, so blatantly articulated even some of us most blinkered can\'t ignore:
\'its surgical precision of poignancy\'..
a great write dear poet!

March 18th, 2021 05:44

All
Goldfinch60 said:

This speck upon which we live is just that, a speck in the Universe.

Andy

March 18th, 2021 01:43

All
Goddess of the Mist said:

Nice job on this one! Definitely puts things in perspective. As always, very much enjoy reading your work.

March 17th, 2021 19:22

Realms
L. B. Mek said:

\'Beyond
capacity.
Capacity to
understand.
As constructed.
Parameciums
spinning
in circles.\'
an intriguing read, in your own unique style

March 16th, 2021 05:10

Realms
Goldfinch60 said:

Many realities can be beyond comprehension but the ones we do understand have brought us to the paces where we now are.

Andy

March 16th, 2021 01:45

Vortices
Goldfinch60 said:

That transformation if created in the right way can bring such glory spinning around us John.

Andy

March 13th, 2021 01:28

Fading
L. B. Mek said:

\'Brainwashed.
Tech brainwash.
Tech changing.
The few
controlling
the many.
Has always
been.
The few
controlling
the many,
on a
global scale.
Tech zombies!
Beware the
fading.\'..
that harrowing image and your words, combine to make such an impactful read - beyond commentary, more an x-ray of society\'s most glaring threat, distilled for us all to read..
a timely and pertinent write, well executed! in my humble opinion..
thanks for sharing dear poet

March 11th, 2021 06:27

Fading
Goldfinch60 said:

That individualism is not lost yet but we do need to fight technology to keep it.

Andy

March 11th, 2021 01:54

Fading
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, John.

March 10th, 2021 20:58

Proclamation
Goldfinch60 said:

History (facts?) is written by the winners, what if the losers were correct?

Andy

March 9th, 2021 01:37

NOthing
L. B. Mek said:

\'Firefly blink.
Deep woods
firefly flash.
Most
unnoticed,
nothing
left behind.
Majesty
and grandeur,
mere dust
in the
breeze.\'..
such insightful words, at times reading your work, morphs into a metaphorical commune between our forgotten dreams and those horizons of acceptance, we anchor our future\'s upon..
what a wonderful talent you posses for excavating and highlighting our natures truth\'s..
a great write of consequence, for us to learn from

March 5th, 2021 04:51

NOthing
Goldfinch60 said:

......except memories.

Andy

March 5th, 2021 02:09

Blue Marble
L. B. Mek said:

thought provoking to say the least! what is meaning? If - but, a derivative of Time, when Time is devoid of choice and absorbed without restraint..
might as well, just take a plunge: hoping for the best..
a great read John

March 2nd, 2021 04:55

Blue Marble
Goldfinch60 said:

That minute speck that we are in the Universe makes us wonder what bigger and more wonderful things are out there.

Andy

March 2nd, 2021 01:33

Blue Marble
FredPeyer said:

Yes John, who knows, maybe we are just a giant experiment with eyes we cannot see checking on us once in a while just to see if we are still stupid or if we are finally getting it.

March 1st, 2021 16:12

Owned
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true John, but there are those who are hoping to fight against it, maybe one day?

Andy

February 28th, 2021 02:16

Wonderment
Goldfinch60 said:

Those times of wonder are there for us to enjoy, there have been many in the past and there will be many more in the future.

Andy

February 24th, 2021 01:43

Wonderment
AlitaOpal said:

I can only appreciate my gift of life, despite the monotony.. life is beautiful 🌹

February 23rd, 2021 16:53

Wonderment
Fay Slimm. said:

Yes that feeling of wonder is something to try for my friend. Open doors leading to awe wait for humanity - and that is sure. A compellingly good read.

February 23rd, 2021 10:41



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