Comments received on poems by John Prophet
Shadow
Goldfinch60 said:
True words John, we must be at one with our shadow.
Andy
January 18th, 2022 02:45
Goldfinch60 said:
True words John, we must be at one with our shadow.
Andy
January 18th, 2022 02:45
Shadow
Zepella said:
This is very inspiring! The only suggestion I would say is to possibly change \"unrecognized\" to \"unrecognizable\". Otherwise, I loved it, thank you!
January 17th, 2022 09:34
Zepella said:
This is very inspiring! The only suggestion I would say is to possibly change \"unrecognized\" to \"unrecognizable\". Otherwise, I loved it, thank you!
January 17th, 2022 09:34
Shadow
L. B. Mek said:
take out everything
and just leave us these words, dear Poet
and you\'ll have penned a classic
to keep Relevant: \'The, Classic\'s\':
\'Know
thyself
less be
defined
by others.
Look
through
the veil.
See past
interference.
Societies
clutter.
Personal
shadow
unrecognized
controllable.
Easily
manipulated.
Easily
lead astray.
Know the
shadow
know
thyself.\'
January 17th, 2022 09:06
L. B. Mek said:
take out everything
and just leave us these words, dear Poet
and you\'ll have penned a classic
to keep Relevant: \'The, Classic\'s\':
\'Know
thyself
less be
defined
by others.
Look
through
the veil.
See past
interference.
Societies
clutter.
Personal
shadow
unrecognized
controllable.
Easily
manipulated.
Easily
lead astray.
Know the
shadow
know
thyself.\'
January 17th, 2022 09:06
Stardust
Goldfinch60 said:
We are all stardust of some description John.
Andy
January 13th, 2022 02:39
Goldfinch60 said:
We are all stardust of some description John.
Andy
January 13th, 2022 02:39
Fly
L. B. Mek said:
\'you write the Poetry
I\'ll bark, the drums
maybe we can stumble
that revolution, mindset
of Purposed, awareness
into the Reality, horizon\'s
of future Generations...\'
(the sheer
frustration fuelled, passion
you imbued into these words
dear poet
is just jumping-off, our screens
a great write!
drilling deep, to unearth the core
sickness, enveloping while poisoning
our globalised - yet segregated, Society
in modernity\'s: cyclical
\'Age of anxiety\'...)
January 11th, 2022 05:25
L. B. Mek said:
\'you write the Poetry
I\'ll bark, the drums
maybe we can stumble
that revolution, mindset
of Purposed, awareness
into the Reality, horizon\'s
of future Generations...\'
(the sheer
frustration fuelled, passion
you imbued into these words
dear poet
is just jumping-off, our screens
a great write!
drilling deep, to unearth the core
sickness, enveloping while poisoning
our globalised - yet segregated, Society
in modernity\'s: cyclical
\'Age of anxiety\'...)
January 11th, 2022 05:25
Fly
allen_vs_existence said:
Beautiful Poem Brother! I love the message as well as the balance of depth and simplicity... You have cut out the fluff and left nothing but your truth! Brilliant!
January 10th, 2022 22:11
allen_vs_existence said:
Beautiful Poem Brother! I love the message as well as the balance of depth and simplicity... You have cut out the fluff and left nothing but your truth! Brilliant!
January 10th, 2022 22:11
Fly
Steel of old Valyria said:
Important message in nowadays rhetoric and political situation.
January 10th, 2022 21:49
Steel of old Valyria said:
Important message in nowadays rhetoric and political situation.
January 10th, 2022 21:49
Experience
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true John. Experience cannot be taught.
Andy
January 7th, 2022 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true John. Experience cannot be taught.
Andy
January 7th, 2022 01:30
Never Ending
John Prophet said:
Hi Andy,
Thank you for your thoughtful comments.
JP
January 4th, 2022 07:41
John Prophet said:
Hi Andy,
Thank you for your thoughtful comments.
JP
January 4th, 2022 07:41
Never Ending
Goldfinch60 said:
But we can escape that imprisonment by looking outside the box in which we appear to be trapped.
Andy
January 3rd, 2022 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
But we can escape that imprisonment by looking outside the box in which we appear to be trapped.
Andy
January 3rd, 2022 01:32
Imprints
Goldfinch60 said:
\" Existence never dies\" - so very true John.
Andy
January 2nd, 2022 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
\" Existence never dies\" - so very true John.
Andy
January 2nd, 2022 01:42
Nextworld
Goldfinch60 said:
May that new world be filled with people who understand the glory of life.
Andy
December 28th, 2021 02:09
Goldfinch60 said:
May that new world be filled with people who understand the glory of life.
Andy
December 28th, 2021 02:09
Nextworld
Caring dove said:
I believe the world will be a more peaceful place in the future .. that’s what I truly believe . I think things will change for the better
December 27th, 2021 08:51
Caring dove said:
I believe the world will be a more peaceful place in the future .. that’s what I truly believe . I think things will change for the better
December 27th, 2021 08:51
Meant To Be
Goldfinch60 said:
The perfect you and the perfect me will be found in one of those infinitesimal parallel universes John.
Andy
December 24th, 2021 15:46
Goldfinch60 said:
The perfect you and the perfect me will be found in one of those infinitesimal parallel universes John.
Andy
December 24th, 2021 15:46
Eclectic
Draven said:
Interesting and nice poem. Love the layout too, to read it is very jarring and direct. Well done :)
December 21st, 2021 11:00
Draven said:
Interesting and nice poem. Love the layout too, to read it is very jarring and direct. Well done :)
December 21st, 2021 11:00
War Games
L. B. Mek said:
...and phew, must remember to breath:
\'Grant me the serenity, to accept
the things I cannot change
the courage, to change
the things I can
and the wisdom
to know: the difference...\'
(an all-consuming read
great execution, dear poet
thanks for sharing)
December 20th, 2021 06:35
L. B. Mek said:
...and phew, must remember to breath:
\'Grant me the serenity, to accept
the things I cannot change
the courage, to change
the things I can
and the wisdom
to know: the difference...\'
(an all-consuming read
great execution, dear poet
thanks for sharing)
December 20th, 2021 06:35
Rinse And Repeat
Goldfinch60 said:
So much in life is repeated but does it necessarily get us into a better place.
Andy
December 15th, 2021 02:42
Goldfinch60 said:
So much in life is repeated but does it necessarily get us into a better place.
Andy
December 15th, 2021 02:42
Rinse And Repeat
woundedheart said:
Very interesting piece , each generation paying for the lasts mistakes hoping not to repeat them.
December 14th, 2021 08:52
woundedheart said:
Very interesting piece , each generation paying for the lasts mistakes hoping not to repeat them.
December 14th, 2021 08:52
Rinse And Repeat
karvelD said:
Thought this was a cool read; liked the structure linking details to theme. ty_/\\_:)
December 14th, 2021 08:35
karvelD said:
Thought this was a cool read; liked the structure linking details to theme. ty_/\\_:)
December 14th, 2021 08:35
The Watchers
L. B. Mek said:
bad juju, lol
if only
the vindictive, despicable and abhorrent
actions of the maliciously greedy
can be excused away, so easily...
(always good to let out, the frustrations
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
December 13th, 2021 04:16
L. B. Mek said:
bad juju, lol
if only
the vindictive, despicable and abhorrent
actions of the maliciously greedy
can be excused away, so easily...
(always good to let out, the frustrations
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
December 13th, 2021 04:16
Illusion2
Goldfinch60 said:
Those illusions are often there before us John but so many just look and do not see.
Andy
December 8th, 2021 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Those illusions are often there before us John but so many just look and do not see.
Andy
December 8th, 2021 02:24
Rage
Goldfinch60 said:
True words John but is that rage can be dispelled life would be so much better.
Andy
December 4th, 2021 02:37
Goldfinch60 said:
True words John but is that rage can be dispelled life would be so much better.
Andy
December 4th, 2021 02:37
Ghosts
L. B. Mek said:
I\'ve not come close to one
thus far in life
and I thank the universe, for that..
but I think, the concept
of our spirits
lingering on earth, after death
endlessly
is mindlessly sadistic;
and so, very much - against
the seemingly orderly, chaos
of nature, we inhabit
(a quirky write, thanks for sharing)
December 2nd, 2021 04:13
L. B. Mek said:
I\'ve not come close to one
thus far in life
and I thank the universe, for that..
but I think, the concept
of our spirits
lingering on earth, after death
endlessly
is mindlessly sadistic;
and so, very much - against
the seemingly orderly, chaos
of nature, we inhabit
(a quirky write, thanks for sharing)
December 2nd, 2021 04:13
Life
Caring dove said:
I don’t understand life . Life is for living , as they say .., so why do so many have to hurt go through problems and suffer … something I cannot understand ,
November 29th, 2021 10:33
Caring dove said:
I don’t understand life . Life is for living , as they say .., so why do so many have to hurt go through problems and suffer … something I cannot understand ,
November 29th, 2021 10:33
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