Comments received on poems by John Prophet
Odds
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, one need only look up the odds of probability on the forces counter acting - to create that gravity we take for granted,
then tell me there is no such thing as great design...
August 31st, 2020 03:48
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, one need only look up the odds of probability on the forces counter acting - to create that gravity we take for granted,
then tell me there is no such thing as great design...
August 31st, 2020 03:48
Deity
Goddess of the Mist said:
Interesting style, we are all clinging to something it seems.
August 27th, 2020 21:54
Goddess of the Mist said:
Interesting style, we are all clinging to something it seems.
August 27th, 2020 21:54
Firefly
Goldfinch60 said:
Our lives on this are only like a blink of a fireflies light.
Andy
August 11th, 2020 00:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Our lives on this are only like a blink of a fireflies light.
Andy
August 11th, 2020 00:03
Field
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true John, enlightenment is there for us all.
Andy
June 9th, 2020 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true John, enlightenment is there for us all.
Andy
June 9th, 2020 00:27
Blend
Goldfinch60 said:
That whole is within us all once all the connections are there.
Andy
June 8th, 2020 00:10
Goldfinch60 said:
That whole is within us all once all the connections are there.
Andy
June 8th, 2020 00:10
Authority
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true John, organise religion is a load of untruths spouted to the ignorant.
Andy
June 6th, 2020 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true John, organise religion is a load of untruths spouted to the ignorant.
Andy
June 6th, 2020 01:28
Tech
Goldfinch60 said:
Eyes wide open certainly but there are so many out there now with their eyes wide shut.
Andy
June 4th, 2020 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Eyes wide open certainly but there are so many out there now with their eyes wide shut.
Andy
June 4th, 2020 00:27
Tally
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful write John and those last two lines are so true.
May 22nd, 2020 00:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful write John and those last two lines are so true.
May 22nd, 2020 00:15
Primitive
A said:
Let me be the first to comment, you really set the \'organic thoughts\' quick pace, passionate kind of script here. You\'ve got a mindset, a fire in you
I like the way you\'re getting ut out,
Putting it in your words.
It\'s almost like a rose in a sense. Round after round, endless petals. Thought after thought, but it\'s not like just thought, it feeling. Feelings arent always sentences, and most times the best words to use to describe a feeling are in no way actually relative to that feeling at all.
But it\'s just, like
Purely feeling satisfaction.
From your poem,
Personally, I\'ve gotten the perspective that you have every intention to write in a delicate and powerful, conscious perspective. To write with a cause.
However your lost in your mindset on that.
You dont know where to begin to describe the cause you have so much fire for, because also you arent fully sure what \'all\' of your \'cause\' is.
Your lost.
Idk atleast that\'s my interp. Could just be about burgers or some sht.;)
May 10th, 2020 10:57
A said:
Let me be the first to comment, you really set the \'organic thoughts\' quick pace, passionate kind of script here. You\'ve got a mindset, a fire in you
I like the way you\'re getting ut out,
Putting it in your words.
It\'s almost like a rose in a sense. Round after round, endless petals. Thought after thought, but it\'s not like just thought, it feeling. Feelings arent always sentences, and most times the best words to use to describe a feeling are in no way actually relative to that feeling at all.
But it\'s just, like
Purely feeling satisfaction.
From your poem,
Personally, I\'ve gotten the perspective that you have every intention to write in a delicate and powerful, conscious perspective. To write with a cause.
However your lost in your mindset on that.
You dont know where to begin to describe the cause you have so much fire for, because also you arent fully sure what \'all\' of your \'cause\' is.
Your lost.
Idk atleast that\'s my interp. Could just be about burgers or some sht.;)
May 10th, 2020 10:57
Sail
FredPeyer said:
Even though it would be great, it is impossible to find the \'perfect tack\' in life. Read it three times, am still pondering....
April 26th, 2020 12:30
FredPeyer said:
Even though it would be great, it is impossible to find the \'perfect tack\' in life. Read it three times, am still pondering....
April 26th, 2020 12:30
Uncertain
FredPeyer said:
Am uncertain if your poem is real but love it anyway!
April 26th, 2020 03:30
FredPeyer said:
Am uncertain if your poem is real but love it anyway!
April 26th, 2020 03:30
Mechanical
FredPeyer said:
You got it, John, the Universe doesn\'t care about our little problems. Life just is. Well done!
April 16th, 2020 12:39
FredPeyer said:
You got it, John, the Universe doesn\'t care about our little problems. Life just is. Well done!
April 16th, 2020 12:39
Beliefs
John Prophet said:
Hi DA,
Our beliefs come from all that we know, which is precious little.
Thank you for your thoughtful comment.
JP
April 12th, 2020 06:03
John Prophet said:
Hi DA,
Our beliefs come from all that we know, which is precious little.
Thank you for your thoughtful comment.
JP
April 12th, 2020 06:03
Beliefs
dusk arising said:
Whilst they were believing the world was flat some guys got together and decided to create a thing called religion. Along came a guy over a thousand years later who proved the world revolved around the sun.... the religious guys branded hima a heretic and imprisoned him..... that guy was Galileo... 300 years later the religious guys agreed he was right....
It\'s incredible some of the beliefs people hang onto..
I really enjoyed your writing today.
April 11th, 2020 19:25
dusk arising said:
Whilst they were believing the world was flat some guys got together and decided to create a thing called religion. Along came a guy over a thousand years later who proved the world revolved around the sun.... the religious guys branded hima a heretic and imprisoned him..... that guy was Galileo... 300 years later the religious guys agreed he was right....
It\'s incredible some of the beliefs people hang onto..
I really enjoyed your writing today.
April 11th, 2020 19:25
Yoke
dusk arising said:
So very true. This why religion captures the mind of the young naive inflicting a lifetimes brainwashing of control.
April 9th, 2020 13:47
dusk arising said:
So very true. This why religion captures the mind of the young naive inflicting a lifetimes brainwashing of control.
April 9th, 2020 13:47
Oblivion
thisismyidentity said:
I love this. It resonated with my own reality and is creatively written. Well done.
April 8th, 2020 11:40
thisismyidentity said:
I love this. It resonated with my own reality and is creatively written. Well done.
April 8th, 2020 11:40
Within
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true John, that silence within us is so meaningful.
March 10th, 2020 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true John, that silence within us is so meaningful.
March 10th, 2020 01:29
Scars
Goldfinch60 said:
The \"What if..? question is probably the most asked question in the world that can never been answered.
\"What if I had not commented on your poem?\"
March 4th, 2020 02:01
Goldfinch60 said:
The \"What if..? question is probably the most asked question in the world that can never been answered.
\"What if I had not commented on your poem?\"
March 4th, 2020 02:01
Scars
Clara said:
Oh don\'t we all... If only we had a test run or perhaps infinite chances and choices. Great poem.
March 3rd, 2020 16:03
Clara said:
Oh don\'t we all... If only we had a test run or perhaps infinite chances and choices. Great poem.
March 3rd, 2020 16:03
Scars
dusk arising said:
Scarface maybe LOL.
Your words today echo thoughts i have had many times but hey-ho, my decisions seemed worthy at the time. The passage of time and the benefit of hindsight however do throw quite a different hue upon things.
I think you will have many reflecting back with your piece to day.
March 3rd, 2020 11:09
dusk arising said:
Scarface maybe LOL.
Your words today echo thoughts i have had many times but hey-ho, my decisions seemed worthy at the time. The passage of time and the benefit of hindsight however do throw quite a different hue upon things.
I think you will have many reflecting back with your piece to day.
March 3rd, 2020 11:09
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