Comments received on poems by John Prophet
Cyber Sea
Clara said:
You almost certainly feel the chaos and intensity of the sea reading this one. The structure compliments your title and subject matter, for sure. The flow and speed - spot on.
December 22nd, 2020 02:01
Clara said:
You almost certainly feel the chaos and intensity of the sea reading this one. The structure compliments your title and subject matter, for sure. The flow and speed - spot on.
December 22nd, 2020 02:01
Cyber Sea
Goldfinch60 said:
One day that Cyber sea will cease to be and humanity will return.
Andy
December 22nd, 2020 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
One day that Cyber sea will cease to be and humanity will return.
Andy
December 22nd, 2020 01:41
Cyber Sea
Goddess of the Mist said:
This is amazing! I feel like I\'ve taken a trip through time just reading this, riding the waves from the beginnings of \"cyberspace\" to a frightening but hopeful conclusion...
December 21st, 2020 21:53
Goddess of the Mist said:
This is amazing! I feel like I\'ve taken a trip through time just reading this, riding the waves from the beginnings of \"cyberspace\" to a frightening but hopeful conclusion...
December 21st, 2020 21:53
Web
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write John, we are getting more controlled each day.
Andy
December 19th, 2020 02:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write John, we are getting more controlled each day.
Andy
December 19th, 2020 02:32
Web
FredPeyer said:
What a great description of the world-wide web. You nailed it John!
December 18th, 2020 21:41
FredPeyer said:
What a great description of the world-wide web. You nailed it John!
December 18th, 2020 21:41
Experiences
FredPeyer said:
Creating starts in the head where experience is located as well. You expressed it so well! We are never done.
December 16th, 2020 11:48
FredPeyer said:
Creating starts in the head where experience is located as well. You expressed it so well! We are never done.
December 16th, 2020 11:48
Hypnotic
Goldfinch60 said:
The eyes of others take us into their world.
Andy
December 16th, 2020 02:01
Goldfinch60 said:
The eyes of others take us into their world.
Andy
December 16th, 2020 02:01
Hypnotic
FredPeyer said:
Great write John. Your poem is not only titled \'Hypnotic\', it IS hypnotic!
December 15th, 2020 12:32
FredPeyer said:
Great write John. Your poem is not only titled \'Hypnotic\', it IS hypnotic!
December 15th, 2020 12:32
Transition
Goldfinch60 said:
That pathway to eternity is within us all John.
Andy
December 15th, 2020 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
That pathway to eternity is within us all John.
Andy
December 15th, 2020 01:48
Transition
L. B. Mek said:
and on it goes
Replete
with it\'s own
Monotonous beat,
on and on
its cyclical wheel
seeps
from existence
into sand -
blown,
out to that
Insignificance
we lucky few
on existence
never: fail
to
take
for
granted...
good read full of insightful commentary,
thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply
December 14th, 2020 06:44
L. B. Mek said:
and on it goes
Replete
with it\'s own
Monotonous beat,
on and on
its cyclical wheel
seeps
from existence
into sand -
blown,
out to that
Insignificance
we lucky few
on existence
never: fail
to
take
for
granted...
good read full of insightful commentary,
thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply
December 14th, 2020 06:44
Inevitable
Goldfinch60 said:
Those infinite parallel Universes are there and every thought we had would have taken us into one to them.
Andy
December 14th, 2020 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Those infinite parallel Universes are there and every thought we had would have taken us into one to them.
Andy
December 14th, 2020 02:43
Inevitable
FredPeyer said:
Life is a crap shot, but what counts is that we are here!
December 13th, 2020 13:04
FredPeyer said:
Life is a crap shot, but what counts is that we are here!
December 13th, 2020 13:04
Self
FredPeyer said:
Well said, John. Without \'self\' WE don\'t exist. And there wouldn\'t be any poems either.
December 13th, 2020 13:02
FredPeyer said:
Well said, John. Without \'self\' WE don\'t exist. And there wouldn\'t be any poems either.
December 13th, 2020 13:02
Self
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, self is us and is that within us that nobody can necessarily see.
Andy
December 13th, 2020 03:01
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, self is us and is that within us that nobody can necessarily see.
Andy
December 13th, 2020 03:01
Narratives
Goldfinch60 said:
Beware indeed John, those in control only care about themselves.
Andy
December 11th, 2020 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Beware indeed John, those in control only care about themselves.
Andy
December 11th, 2020 01:37
Hubris
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes the world will be unchanged except I will be there looking from the Universe.
Andy
December 8th, 2020 02:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes the world will be unchanged except I will be there looking from the Universe.
Andy
December 8th, 2020 02:27
Look Away
Goldfinch60 said:
You are right that control can be eluded by looking away.
Andy
December 7th, 2020 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
You are right that control can be eluded by looking away.
Andy
December 7th, 2020 01:17
Time Span
Goldfinch60 said:
Time is there for us all and will always be there, enjoy every moment.
Andy
December 4th, 2020 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Time is there for us all and will always be there, enjoy every moment.
Andy
December 4th, 2020 02:10
Alignment
Goldfinch60 said:
So true John, that is why I enjoy the wonder of the Natural World.
Andy
December 2nd, 2020 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
So true John, that is why I enjoy the wonder of the Natural World.
Andy
December 2nd, 2020 01:33
Alignment
RDS said:
A really good lament for anologue technogy and freedom. I get the same feelings sometimes. Nicely written.
J
December 1st, 2020 15:15
RDS said:
A really good lament for anologue technogy and freedom. I get the same feelings sometimes. Nicely written.
J
December 1st, 2020 15:15
Gossamer Web
Goldfinch60 said:
That creation is there for us all to understand if we just accept it.
Andy
November 30th, 2020 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
That creation is there for us all to understand if we just accept it.
Andy
November 30th, 2020 01:35
Death
RDS said:
Thanks John P. That was almost urgent and emergent as an electron popping in and out of existence. Grounded spiritually with possibility. I really liked that!
J
November 25th, 2020 15:54
RDS said:
Thanks John P. That was almost urgent and emergent as an electron popping in and out of existence. Grounded spiritually with possibility. I really liked that!
J
November 25th, 2020 15:54
Death
Goldfinch60 said:
That potential is there amongst all of us if only we realised it was there.
Andy
November 25th, 2020 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
That potential is there amongst all of us if only we realised it was there.
Andy
November 25th, 2020 01:16
Dystopia
Goldfinch60 said:
One day we will ne able to go the right way in our lives without being forced along the wrong path by those who think they know best.
Andy
November 23rd, 2020 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
One day we will ne able to go the right way in our lives without being forced along the wrong path by those who think they know best.
Andy
November 23rd, 2020 01:24
Gladiators
Clara said:
The structure of this mirrors what I can only imagine to be the fast paced, chaotic nature of Gladiators. Great write.
November 18th, 2020 19:44
Clara said:
The structure of this mirrors what I can only imagine to be the fast paced, chaotic nature of Gladiators. Great write.
November 18th, 2020 19:44
Gladiators
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good allegory John, we seem to have these battles many times in our lives.
Andy
November 18th, 2020 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good allegory John, we seem to have these battles many times in our lives.
Andy
November 18th, 2020 01:45
Unknowing Truth
Goldfinch60 said:
Infinity can bring us so many quandaries in our lives.
Andy
November 17th, 2020 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Infinity can bring us so many quandaries in our lives.
Andy
November 17th, 2020 01:23
Portal
Goldfinch60 said:
I have been through many portals and I know there are many more out there for me to pass through.
Andy
November 15th, 2020 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
I have been through many portals and I know there are many more out there for me to pass through.
Andy
November 15th, 2020 01:35
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