Comments received on poems by John Prophet
Wisdom
Goldfinch60 said:
Wisdom is learnt from experience in our lives John.
Andy
September 16th, 2021 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Wisdom is learnt from experience in our lives John.
Andy
September 16th, 2021 00:33
Perception2
Goldfinch60 said:
That \'limitless void\' has always been there but we exist as that pebble of reality in our lives.
Andy
September 14th, 2021 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
That \'limitless void\' has always been there but we exist as that pebble of reality in our lives.
Andy
September 14th, 2021 00:57
Tweeners
L. B. Mek said:
\'Tweeners.
Dealing with
the animal
moving
toward the
thoughtful.
Tough passage.
Pushing,
pulling.
Moving
toward with
fits and starts.
Tough passage.\'
(I think its impossible to distil any better, what we\'ll be bequeathing our future generations)
insightful and masterfully succinct! as ever, dear poet
September 10th, 2021 04:04
L. B. Mek said:
\'Tweeners.
Dealing with
the animal
moving
toward the
thoughtful.
Tough passage.
Pushing,
pulling.
Moving
toward with
fits and starts.
Tough passage.\'
(I think its impossible to distil any better, what we\'ll be bequeathing our future generations)
insightful and masterfully succinct! as ever, dear poet
September 10th, 2021 04:04
Inevitable2
Goldfinch60 said:
We were obviously the lucky ones then John.
Andy
September 9th, 2021 00:09
Goldfinch60 said:
We were obviously the lucky ones then John.
Andy
September 9th, 2021 00:09
Programmers Brew
L. B. Mek said:
an infinite loop, procedural then?
good old pascal days, lol
yes, it does seem like we\'re in a Metrix that\'s a little, too much:
\'Complexity
begets
complexity!
All
programmed,
coded.
In the
beginning.
Set in
motion.
Evolution.\'
Only, that evolution part gone a bit off script, I think
September 7th, 2021 04:29
L. B. Mek said:
an infinite loop, procedural then?
good old pascal days, lol
yes, it does seem like we\'re in a Metrix that\'s a little, too much:
\'Complexity
begets
complexity!
All
programmed,
coded.
In the
beginning.
Set in
motion.
Evolution.\'
Only, that evolution part gone a bit off script, I think
September 7th, 2021 04:29
Programmers Brew
Goldfinch60 said:
I used to be one of the cooks that created that brew when working in computing.
Andy
September 7th, 2021 00:30
Goldfinch60 said:
I used to be one of the cooks that created that brew when working in computing.
Andy
September 7th, 2021 00:30
Frequency
L. B. Mek said:
...\'moments, of finite clusters
escapism in all-things cyclical
devoted, to a warped reality
that\'s busily curating, who we be;
creator\'s supreme, of mass devastation
in each step of hopeful, progression
mindset cultivation
to choose better, at every crossroad
and yet
we forget, to keep our eyes open
run roughshod
over every opportunity, while
looking back at antiquity
with judgemental eyes
asking
why: couldn\'t \'They\' be better
do, Better
fulfil the potential, awaiting
in each fingertip
of that poetry, they spew
in every - new, New beginning
they cling onto
so, very: despairingly...!\'
(great write
inspired me to drill and excavate
my own pitiful, attempt
at a continuation, of sorts)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
September 6th, 2021 05:06
L. B. Mek said:
...\'moments, of finite clusters
escapism in all-things cyclical
devoted, to a warped reality
that\'s busily curating, who we be;
creator\'s supreme, of mass devastation
in each step of hopeful, progression
mindset cultivation
to choose better, at every crossroad
and yet
we forget, to keep our eyes open
run roughshod
over every opportunity, while
looking back at antiquity
with judgemental eyes
asking
why: couldn\'t \'They\' be better
do, Better
fulfil the potential, awaiting
in each fingertip
of that poetry, they spew
in every - new, New beginning
they cling onto
so, very: despairingly...!\'
(great write
inspired me to drill and excavate
my own pitiful, attempt
at a continuation, of sorts)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
September 6th, 2021 05:06
Frequency
Goldfinch60 said:
There is so much to create in our lives on this earth - and beyond.
Andy
September 6th, 2021 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
There is so much to create in our lives on this earth - and beyond.
Andy
September 6th, 2021 00:27
Wheel
Goldfinch60 said:
Those wheels will never stop, if they do so do we.
Andy
September 4th, 2021 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Those wheels will never stop, if they do so do we.
Andy
September 4th, 2021 00:18
Wheel
John Prophet said:
Hi LBM,
thank you for reading.
“futility of cyclical
pseudo theoretic, worthless contemplations! “
Good for the soul, however!
JP
September 3rd, 2021 11:29
John Prophet said:
Hi LBM,
thank you for reading.
“futility of cyclical
pseudo theoretic, worthless contemplations! “
Good for the soul, however!
JP
September 3rd, 2021 11:29
Wheel
L. B. Mek said:
(great read, dear poet
your thought provoking writing, did it again
got me rambling, displaying that crazy, in me
I try to keep hidden)
gyrating wheels, imagery of the \'out of control\'
spatial clusters of lightyear distanced galaxies
as tilting disk spheres, are they - too, out of control?
a mass of happenstance, awaiting
that flick of chaotic chance
to explode, Proud
and unleash a new wave of life, so we don\'t feel
so alone?
either by accident or purposed, I ask honestly?
at this point, who the F\'k cares!
(if by design, obviously humanity is currently
too inept, to glean its meaning;
if by chaotic flux, then so be it!)
just, let\'s get on
with LIVING IT
(tick tock
tick tock
tick tock
that\'s that nock of belated realisation)
we\'re wasting existence
in our yearned escapism - futility of cyclical
pseudo theoretic, worthless contemplations!
September 3rd, 2021 06:31
L. B. Mek said:
(great read, dear poet
your thought provoking writing, did it again
got me rambling, displaying that crazy, in me
I try to keep hidden)
gyrating wheels, imagery of the \'out of control\'
spatial clusters of lightyear distanced galaxies
as tilting disk spheres, are they - too, out of control?
a mass of happenstance, awaiting
that flick of chaotic chance
to explode, Proud
and unleash a new wave of life, so we don\'t feel
so alone?
either by accident or purposed, I ask honestly?
at this point, who the F\'k cares!
(if by design, obviously humanity is currently
too inept, to glean its meaning;
if by chaotic flux, then so be it!)
just, let\'s get on
with LIVING IT
(tick tock
tick tock
tick tock
that\'s that nock of belated realisation)
we\'re wasting existence
in our yearned escapism - futility of cyclical
pseudo theoretic, worthless contemplations!
September 3rd, 2021 06:31
You
Goldfinch60 said:
But that choice is mine, I can think for myself and go along the paths of life that I chose John.
Andy
September 3rd, 2021 03:11
Goldfinch60 said:
But that choice is mine, I can think for myself and go along the paths of life that I chose John.
Andy
September 3rd, 2021 03:11
You
Nicholas Browning said:
This sent shivers down my spine. Very well done.
September 2nd, 2021 09:08
Nicholas Browning said:
This sent shivers down my spine. Very well done.
September 2nd, 2021 09:08
Time2
Coyote said:
Time is indeed an illusion but its inescapable to us mere mortals. Very good write John.
August 31st, 2021 14:08
Coyote said:
Time is indeed an illusion but its inescapable to us mere mortals. Very good write John.
August 31st, 2021 14:08
Bright Sunny Day
Goldfinch60 said:
It may be a tough passage but with all that experience an strength gained throughout life you end up in a wonderful place, as I have.
Andy
August 25th, 2021 02:55
Goldfinch60 said:
It may be a tough passage but with all that experience an strength gained throughout life you end up in a wonderful place, as I have.
Andy
August 25th, 2021 02:55
Power2
Goldfinch60 said:
That power can control all if we go down the path the controllers expect us to go.
Andy
August 24th, 2021 15:02
Goldfinch60 said:
That power can control all if we go down the path the controllers expect us to go.
Andy
August 24th, 2021 15:02
Power2
L. B. Mek said:
\'Power,
control,
subtlety
of approach.
Come in
from below.
Infiltrate
unseen.
Injection,
directly in.\'
Indeed! Insightful as ever, dear poet
thanks for choosing to share your wisdom
August 24th, 2021 06:57
L. B. Mek said:
\'Power,
control,
subtlety
of approach.
Come in
from below.
Infiltrate
unseen.
Injection,
directly in.\'
Indeed! Insightful as ever, dear poet
thanks for choosing to share your wisdom
August 24th, 2021 06:57
Knitting
Goldfinch60 said:
That reality of few is being forced into the lives of the many.
Andy
August 22nd, 2021 00:30
Goldfinch60 said:
That reality of few is being forced into the lives of the many.
Andy
August 22nd, 2021 00:30
Enlightenment
Goldfinch60 said:
That enlightenment is there for us all if only people used it and moved to a better life.
Andy
August 21st, 2021 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
That enlightenment is there for us all if only people used it and moved to a better life.
Andy
August 21st, 2021 00:38
Paradox
L. B. Mek said:
why is it, we never assume
they, like us
were fallible, and so
wiped each other out
and created
what we assume as being
\'the big bang\'...
how\'s that for a twist, lol
August 19th, 2021 05:13
L. B. Mek said:
why is it, we never assume
they, like us
were fallible, and so
wiped each other out
and created
what we assume as being
\'the big bang\'...
how\'s that for a twist, lol
August 19th, 2021 05:13
Archaic2
Goldfinch60 said:
Those new ideas within us bring us to a new reality in life.
Andy
August 19th, 2021 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Those new ideas within us bring us to a new reality in life.
Andy
August 19th, 2021 00:40
Consciousness2
Goldfinch60 said:
That global mind often thinks in the wrong way.
Andy
August 18th, 2021 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
That global mind often thinks in the wrong way.
Andy
August 18th, 2021 01:48
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