Comments received on poems by John Prophet



Proclamation
Goldfinch60 said:

History (facts?) is written by the winners, what if the losers were correct?

Andy

March 9th, 2021 01:37

NOthing
L. B. Mek said:

\'Firefly blink.
Deep woods
firefly flash.
Most
unnoticed,
nothing
left behind.
Majesty
and grandeur,
mere dust
in the
breeze.\'..
such insightful words, at times reading your work, morphs into a metaphorical commune between our forgotten dreams and those horizons of acceptance, we anchor our future\'s upon..
what a wonderful talent you posses for excavating and highlighting our natures truth\'s..
a great write of consequence, for us to learn from

March 5th, 2021 04:51

NOthing
Goldfinch60 said:

......except memories.

Andy

March 5th, 2021 02:09

Blue Marble
L. B. Mek said:

thought provoking to say the least! what is meaning? If - but, a derivative of Time, when Time is devoid of choice and absorbed without restraint..
might as well, just take a plunge: hoping for the best..
a great read John

March 2nd, 2021 04:55

Blue Marble
Goldfinch60 said:

That minute speck that we are in the Universe makes us wonder what bigger and more wonderful things are out there.

Andy

March 2nd, 2021 01:33

Blue Marble
FredPeyer said:

Yes John, who knows, maybe we are just a giant experiment with eyes we cannot see checking on us once in a while just to see if we are still stupid or if we are finally getting it.

March 1st, 2021 16:12

Owned
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true John, but there are those who are hoping to fight against it, maybe one day?

Andy

February 28th, 2021 02:16

Wonderment
Goldfinch60 said:

Those times of wonder are there for us to enjoy, there have been many in the past and there will be many more in the future.

Andy

February 24th, 2021 01:43

Wonderment
AlitaOpal said:

I can only appreciate my gift of life, despite the monotony.. life is beautiful 🌹

February 23rd, 2021 16:53

Wonderment
Fay Slimm. said:

Yes that feeling of wonder is something to try for my friend. Open doors leading to awe wait for humanity - and that is sure. A compellingly good read.

February 23rd, 2021 10:41

Wonderment
FredPeyer said:

Your poem reminds me that we have to get back to the wonderment we had as kids. It is so sad to lose it as adults.

February 23rd, 2021 10:38

Wonderment
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good read, John.

February 23rd, 2021 09:16

Wonderment
Olivia. said:

Feels passionate! “Micro time called life” I’m trying to make my days count a lot more! This poem definitely speaks to me! X

February 23rd, 2021 09:00

Understanding
L. B. Mek said:

Enlightened minds
answering all of life\'s questions
from one source
a few pages flicked
and then parables repurposed
hastened to ill-fit
as latest answers
to dwindling belief, while
smirking their all-knowing
because their knowledge
is tested on the other side
of existence, how convenient,
so in bleak time\'s
when world is in despair
instead of comfort and solace
they make those same
mistakes
of demonic fear mongering
fantastical tale\'s
trying to scare new members
into their dwindling fold,
elitist mindset\'s displayed proud
scared to question
scared to trust in truth - alone
scared to love anyone
that doesn\'t share
their blinkered views to faith
scared, scared , scared
but it\'s all ok
cause their book
has every answer, its
just them that choose
to translate hate and war
from all those words of love
and peace...
nice and witty write dear poet, how judgementally - inspirational, your words read! me, I play things more direct.. lol

February 23rd, 2021 04:06

Understanding
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true John. It relates to something I say regularly - I have been listening to music of all types throughout my life and I know that the more I get to know about music the more ignorant I realise I am bout it.

Andy

February 23rd, 2021 01:46

Understanding
FredPeyer said:

As John Archibald Wheeler said: We live on an island surrounded by a sea of ignorance. As our island of knowledge grows, so does the shore of our ignorance.

February 22nd, 2021 21:44

Understanding
Jerry Reynolds said:

Ethereal write, John.

February 22nd, 2021 17:21

God No God
L. B. Mek said:

when faith systems resort to sales strategy \'witty slogans\'..
I pity what the future holds for humanity\'s moral compass..
I said the same thing, when I first heard that manipulative \'yes we can\' - cheerleader\'s chant, being heralded by conformity\'s self-deluding: geniuses 12 years ago..
(no I am not commenting on the validity of your chosen faith..
no I am not \'having a go\' at you dear poet..
yes my words are often misinterpreted as aggravatingly infuriating: yes, I take full accountability and willingly apologise, sincerely..)
please feel free to delete,
I too think it was unwise of me to write this comment,
but I also stand by what my message represents for those willing to take a second to contemplate my meaning (but then again why should they)..
and no I\'m not a \'lost soul\', I\'m just expressing an opinion, without vindictive or hurtful intent

February 22nd, 2021 05:44

God No God
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true John.

Andy

February 22nd, 2021 01:27

God No God
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write; good read, John.

February 21st, 2021 15:03

God No God
JonathanB said:

Hope I didn\'t offend with my original comment John? Just asking as it appears to have been deleted and I had a notification of a reply which is now gone too!


February 21st, 2021 12:16

God No God
AwHec8 said:

Love the Poem John Prophet, as it strikes the stirring of thoughts in me. Don
Maybe. Faith is like Love its about how great a leap 1 wants to take in the belief/(love) they want to embrace. Maybe?

February 21st, 2021 11:59

God No God
Olivia. said:

Fantastic x

February 21st, 2021 11:45

Ethereal Nature
L. B. Mek said:

some may even say: \'atoms to Atoms\'..
lol, lets just say - I understand and agree: completely,
I like the \'purposed\' use of repetition to reinforce your message and insure we readers stay focused on what is typically a hard notion to grasp - literally..
a good read

February 18th, 2021 04:42

Ethereal Nature
Goldfinch60 said:

That eternal essence is within us all.

Andy

February 18th, 2021 01:11

Ethereal Nature
Goddess of the Mist said:

How lovely, and the picture to go with is so mystical. Very nice 🙂

February 17th, 2021 23:02

One
Goldfinch60 said:

May that contemplation always bring wonderful thoughts within us to share with others.

Andy

February 16th, 2021 15:48

One
Olivia. said:

Lots to contemplate after reading this. Great words! X

February 16th, 2021 13:48

Magic Fish
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Magic fish in the stream of consciousness, wow word play and fascinating muse you have here, i appreciate its philosophical depths. Kudos.

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

February 15th, 2021 14:19

Magic Fish
L. B. Mek said:

\'Stream of
consciousness,
meandering,
penetrating.
Coming from
and crossing
back again.
Merely conduits
be we.\'
another insightful write dear Poet, a journey within a read - as ever

February 15th, 2021 06:09



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