Comments received on poems by John Prophet



Inevitable
FredPeyer said:

Life is a crap shot, but what counts is that we are here!

December 13th, 2020 13:04

Self
FredPeyer said:

Well said, John. Without \'self\' WE don\'t exist. And there wouldn\'t be any poems either.

December 13th, 2020 13:02

Self
Goldfinch60 said:

So true, self is us and is that within us that nobody can necessarily see.

Andy

December 13th, 2020 03:01

Narratives
Goldfinch60 said:

Beware indeed John, those in control only care about themselves.

Andy

December 11th, 2020 01:37

Hubris
Goldfinch60 said:

Yes the world will be unchanged except I will be there looking from the Universe.

Andy

December 8th, 2020 02:27

Look Away
Goldfinch60 said:

You are right that control can be eluded by looking away.

Andy

December 7th, 2020 01:17

Time Span
Goldfinch60 said:

Time is there for us all and will always be there, enjoy every moment.

Andy

December 4th, 2020 02:10

Alignment
Goldfinch60 said:

So true John, that is why I enjoy the wonder of the Natural World.

Andy

December 2nd, 2020 01:33

Alignment
Poetic Dan said:

Bam absolutely! Sadly brilliantly done!

December 2nd, 2020 01:27

Alignment
RDS said:

A really good lament for anologue technogy and freedom. I get the same feelings sometimes. Nicely written.
J

December 1st, 2020 15:15

Gossamer Web
Goldfinch60 said:

That creation is there for us all to understand if we just accept it.

Andy

November 30th, 2020 01:35

Death
RDS said:

Thanks John P. That was almost urgent and emergent as an electron popping in and out of existence. Grounded spiritually with possibility. I really liked that!
J

November 25th, 2020 15:54

Death
Goldfinch60 said:

That potential is there amongst all of us if only we realised it was there.

Andy

November 25th, 2020 01:16

Dystopia
Goldfinch60 said:

One day we will ne able to go the right way in our lives without being forced along the wrong path by those who think they know best.

Andy

November 23rd, 2020 01:24

Gladiators
Clara said:

The structure of this mirrors what I can only imagine to be the fast paced, chaotic nature of Gladiators. Great write.

November 18th, 2020 19:44

Gladiators
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good allegory John, we seem to have these battles many times in our lives.

Andy

November 18th, 2020 01:45

Unknowing Truth
Goldfinch60 said:

Infinity can bring us so many quandaries in our lives.

Andy

November 17th, 2020 01:23

Portal
Goldfinch60 said:

I have been through many portals and I know there are many more out there for me to pass through.

Andy

November 15th, 2020 01:35

Synapse
Goldfinch60 said:

That free will is within us all we need to do is release it and the machine that rules our life will come to a halt as we go our own way.

Andy

November 13th, 2020 01:29

Personal Formation
Goldfinch60 said:

In our lives we create the person we are and In my long life I am happy with my creation.

Andy

November 12th, 2020 01:16

Personal Formation
Goddess of the Mist said:

Awesome, and you couldn\'t have chosen a better picture to go with ✨💕

November 11th, 2020 18:24

Breeze
Goldfinch60 said:

As we create our words they can change until we feel that they are right.

Andy

November 10th, 2020 01:29

Breeze
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Woah very techy and mod apt for this digital age where everything is going digital . It\'s a super cool poem indeed. Kudos.

Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem here. Thanks.

November 9th, 2020 11:47

Empty
Goldfinch60 said:

Those parallel worlds can all be so much fuller than the one we are in.

Andy

November 9th, 2020 01:40

Contour
Goldfinch60 said:

All the varying roads we have travelled in our lives have lead us to where we are today, we manged to travel them and I am sure we will travel each new road with success.

Andy

November 8th, 2020 01:43

Seeds Of Creation
Goldfinch60 said:

Words are so strong in all our ways of life.

Andy

November 7th, 2020 01:42

Generations
Goldfinch60 said:

That change will be forever with us in every generation, hopefully for the better in the future.

Andy

November 6th, 2020 01:11

Predetermined
Goddess of the Mist said:

As in everything that\'s going to happen has already happened and then...like circular time? Either way, this is a very interesting piece and makes me think.

October 28th, 2020 20:12

Shimmering
Goldfinch60 said:

That distant shimmer is always there for us all, we just need to be aware of it.

Andy

October 27th, 2020 05:33

Delusional
dusk arising said:

Strange words to be accompanied by your chosen picture of busy ants. Ants are highly organised and purposeful creations.

October 26th, 2020 16:18



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