Comments received on poems by John Prophet
Wheel
Goldfinch60 said:
Those wheels will never stop, if they do so do we.
Andy
September 4th, 2021 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Those wheels will never stop, if they do so do we.
Andy
September 4th, 2021 00:18
Wheel
John Prophet said:
Hi LBM,
thank you for reading.
“futility of cyclical
pseudo theoretic, worthless contemplations! “
Good for the soul, however!
JP
September 3rd, 2021 11:29
John Prophet said:
Hi LBM,
thank you for reading.
“futility of cyclical
pseudo theoretic, worthless contemplations! “
Good for the soul, however!
JP
September 3rd, 2021 11:29
Wheel
L. B. Mek said:
(great read, dear poet
your thought provoking writing, did it again
got me rambling, displaying that crazy, in me
I try to keep hidden)
gyrating wheels, imagery of the \'out of control\'
spatial clusters of lightyear distanced galaxies
as tilting disk spheres, are they - too, out of control?
a mass of happenstance, awaiting
that flick of chaotic chance
to explode, Proud
and unleash a new wave of life, so we don\'t feel
so alone?
either by accident or purposed, I ask honestly?
at this point, who the F\'k cares!
(if by design, obviously humanity is currently
too inept, to glean its meaning;
if by chaotic flux, then so be it!)
just, let\'s get on
with LIVING IT
(tick tock
tick tock
tick tock
that\'s that nock of belated realisation)
we\'re wasting existence
in our yearned escapism - futility of cyclical
pseudo theoretic, worthless contemplations!
September 3rd, 2021 06:31
L. B. Mek said:
(great read, dear poet
your thought provoking writing, did it again
got me rambling, displaying that crazy, in me
I try to keep hidden)
gyrating wheels, imagery of the \'out of control\'
spatial clusters of lightyear distanced galaxies
as tilting disk spheres, are they - too, out of control?
a mass of happenstance, awaiting
that flick of chaotic chance
to explode, Proud
and unleash a new wave of life, so we don\'t feel
so alone?
either by accident or purposed, I ask honestly?
at this point, who the F\'k cares!
(if by design, obviously humanity is currently
too inept, to glean its meaning;
if by chaotic flux, then so be it!)
just, let\'s get on
with LIVING IT
(tick tock
tick tock
tick tock
that\'s that nock of belated realisation)
we\'re wasting existence
in our yearned escapism - futility of cyclical
pseudo theoretic, worthless contemplations!
September 3rd, 2021 06:31
You
Goldfinch60 said:
But that choice is mine, I can think for myself and go along the paths of life that I chose John.
Andy
September 3rd, 2021 03:11
Goldfinch60 said:
But that choice is mine, I can think for myself and go along the paths of life that I chose John.
Andy
September 3rd, 2021 03:11
You
Nicholas Browning said:
This sent shivers down my spine. Very well done.
September 2nd, 2021 09:08
Nicholas Browning said:
This sent shivers down my spine. Very well done.
September 2nd, 2021 09:08
Time2
Coyote said:
Time is indeed an illusion but its inescapable to us mere mortals. Very good write John.
August 31st, 2021 14:08
Coyote said:
Time is indeed an illusion but its inescapable to us mere mortals. Very good write John.
August 31st, 2021 14:08
Bright Sunny Day
Goldfinch60 said:
It may be a tough passage but with all that experience an strength gained throughout life you end up in a wonderful place, as I have.
Andy
August 25th, 2021 02:55
Goldfinch60 said:
It may be a tough passage but with all that experience an strength gained throughout life you end up in a wonderful place, as I have.
Andy
August 25th, 2021 02:55
Power2
Goldfinch60 said:
That power can control all if we go down the path the controllers expect us to go.
Andy
August 24th, 2021 15:02
Goldfinch60 said:
That power can control all if we go down the path the controllers expect us to go.
Andy
August 24th, 2021 15:02
Power2
L. B. Mek said:
\'Power,
control,
subtlety
of approach.
Come in
from below.
Infiltrate
unseen.
Injection,
directly in.\'
Indeed! Insightful as ever, dear poet
thanks for choosing to share your wisdom
August 24th, 2021 06:57
L. B. Mek said:
\'Power,
control,
subtlety
of approach.
Come in
from below.
Infiltrate
unseen.
Injection,
directly in.\'
Indeed! Insightful as ever, dear poet
thanks for choosing to share your wisdom
August 24th, 2021 06:57
Knitting
Goldfinch60 said:
That reality of few is being forced into the lives of the many.
Andy
August 22nd, 2021 00:30
Goldfinch60 said:
That reality of few is being forced into the lives of the many.
Andy
August 22nd, 2021 00:30
Enlightenment
Goldfinch60 said:
That enlightenment is there for us all if only people used it and moved to a better life.
Andy
August 21st, 2021 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
That enlightenment is there for us all if only people used it and moved to a better life.
Andy
August 21st, 2021 00:38
Paradox
L. B. Mek said:
why is it, we never assume
they, like us
were fallible, and so
wiped each other out
and created
what we assume as being
\'the big bang\'...
how\'s that for a twist, lol
August 19th, 2021 05:13
L. B. Mek said:
why is it, we never assume
they, like us
were fallible, and so
wiped each other out
and created
what we assume as being
\'the big bang\'...
how\'s that for a twist, lol
August 19th, 2021 05:13
Archaic2
Goldfinch60 said:
Those new ideas within us bring us to a new reality in life.
Andy
August 19th, 2021 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Those new ideas within us bring us to a new reality in life.
Andy
August 19th, 2021 00:40
Consciousness2
Goldfinch60 said:
That global mind often thinks in the wrong way.
Andy
August 18th, 2021 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
That global mind often thinks in the wrong way.
Andy
August 18th, 2021 01:48
Hypnotics
Goldfinch60 said:
So true John, we need to walk \'the path less trodden\' to get away from it.
Andy
August 15th, 2021 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
So true John, we need to walk \'the path less trodden\' to get away from it.
Andy
August 15th, 2021 00:27
Hypnotics
Coyote said:
A poignant piece on the present state of affairs. Well done John🙂
August 14th, 2021 11:47
Coyote said:
A poignant piece on the present state of affairs. Well done John🙂
August 14th, 2021 11:47
Crushed
Coyote said:
Remindes me of Yeats \'Second Coming\'. A very poignant write for these turbulent times. Spot on.
August 12th, 2021 12:26
Coyote said:
Remindes me of Yeats \'Second Coming\'. A very poignant write for these turbulent times. Spot on.
August 12th, 2021 12:26
Evaporation
L. B. Mek said:
\'Infinite
futures.
Future
you’s
ghost like.
Depending
on choices\'..
insightful commentary with arrowed aim
drilling to excavate and unfurl
a gleaning of consequence\'s: sequences
outing those truth\'s, we wish
someone had told us, way before
we: learnt our Math, of life...
(poetry, any of that great metaphysical generation
would have been proud, to claim as their own, I think
a thought provoking read, thanks for sharing dear poet)
August 12th, 2021 03:48
L. B. Mek said:
\'Infinite
futures.
Future
you’s
ghost like.
Depending
on choices\'..
insightful commentary with arrowed aim
drilling to excavate and unfurl
a gleaning of consequence\'s: sequences
outing those truth\'s, we wish
someone had told us, way before
we: learnt our Math, of life...
(poetry, any of that great metaphysical generation
would have been proud, to claim as their own, I think
a thought provoking read, thanks for sharing dear poet)
August 12th, 2021 03:48
Menticide
Goldfinch60 said:
Have things changed since 1984, I don\'t think so, they have only become worse.
Andy
August 11th, 2021 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Have things changed since 1984, I don\'t think so, they have only become worse.
Andy
August 11th, 2021 00:43
Menticide
Coyote said:
Wow John, you really hit paydirt here. This concise verse taps into the present chaos perfectly. Nicely done sir.
August 10th, 2021 10:38
Coyote said:
Wow John, you really hit paydirt here. This concise verse taps into the present chaos perfectly. Nicely done sir.
August 10th, 2021 10:38
War
Goldfinch60 said:
They may be controlling us in many ways but some realise this and are looking for better individualistic ways to move on.
Andy
August 7th, 2021 00:12
Goldfinch60 said:
They may be controlling us in many ways but some realise this and are looking for better individualistic ways to move on.
Andy
August 7th, 2021 00:12
War
Coyote said:
The war few see coming. It boils down to whether we serve technology or technology serves us. Welcome to the machine. Excellent poem.
August 6th, 2021 13:00
Coyote said:
The war few see coming. It boils down to whether we serve technology or technology serves us. Welcome to the machine. Excellent poem.
August 6th, 2021 13:00
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