Comments received on poems by John Prophet
Concrete Jungle
Goldfinch60 said:
That civilised jungle is much more dangerous than the wild places in the world.
Andy
January 4th, 2021 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
That civilised jungle is much more dangerous than the wild places in the world.
Andy
January 4th, 2021 01:59
Dynamic
Goldfinch60 said:
Enlightenment for me John, battles can never prove anything.
Andy
January 3rd, 2021 02:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Enlightenment for me John, battles can never prove anything.
Andy
January 3rd, 2021 02:17
Choreographed
Goldfinch60 said:
Our lives seem to be choreographed but there are many who can think outside the box we are dancing within.
Andy
December 31st, 2020 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Our lives seem to be choreographed but there are many who can think outside the box we are dancing within.
Andy
December 31st, 2020 01:25
Symptoms
Goldfinch60 said:
I agree that every day, every moment we have is so important to us and must be lived to the full John.
Andy
December 27th, 2020 02:53
Goldfinch60 said:
I agree that every day, every moment we have is so important to us and must be lived to the full John.
Andy
December 27th, 2020 02:53
Doors
Goldfinch60 said:
Without us having the courage to go through those doors in our lives we would not be in the place we are at the moment.
Andy
December 25th, 2020 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Without us having the courage to go through those doors in our lives we would not be in the place we are at the moment.
Andy
December 25th, 2020 01:47
Cyber Sea
Clara said:
You almost certainly feel the chaos and intensity of the sea reading this one. The structure compliments your title and subject matter, for sure. The flow and speed - spot on.
December 22nd, 2020 02:01
Clara said:
You almost certainly feel the chaos and intensity of the sea reading this one. The structure compliments your title and subject matter, for sure. The flow and speed - spot on.
December 22nd, 2020 02:01
Cyber Sea
Goldfinch60 said:
One day that Cyber sea will cease to be and humanity will return.
Andy
December 22nd, 2020 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
One day that Cyber sea will cease to be and humanity will return.
Andy
December 22nd, 2020 01:41
Cyber Sea
Goddess of the Mist said:
This is amazing! I feel like I\'ve taken a trip through time just reading this, riding the waves from the beginnings of \"cyberspace\" to a frightening but hopeful conclusion...
December 21st, 2020 21:53
Goddess of the Mist said:
This is amazing! I feel like I\'ve taken a trip through time just reading this, riding the waves from the beginnings of \"cyberspace\" to a frightening but hopeful conclusion...
December 21st, 2020 21:53
Web
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write John, we are getting more controlled each day.
Andy
December 19th, 2020 02:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write John, we are getting more controlled each day.
Andy
December 19th, 2020 02:32
Web
FredPeyer said:
What a great description of the world-wide web. You nailed it John!
December 18th, 2020 21:41
FredPeyer said:
What a great description of the world-wide web. You nailed it John!
December 18th, 2020 21:41
Experiences
FredPeyer said:
Creating starts in the head where experience is located as well. You expressed it so well! We are never done.
December 16th, 2020 11:48
FredPeyer said:
Creating starts in the head where experience is located as well. You expressed it so well! We are never done.
December 16th, 2020 11:48
Hypnotic
Goldfinch60 said:
The eyes of others take us into their world.
Andy
December 16th, 2020 02:01
Goldfinch60 said:
The eyes of others take us into their world.
Andy
December 16th, 2020 02:01
Hypnotic
FredPeyer said:
Great write John. Your poem is not only titled \'Hypnotic\', it IS hypnotic!
December 15th, 2020 12:32
FredPeyer said:
Great write John. Your poem is not only titled \'Hypnotic\', it IS hypnotic!
December 15th, 2020 12:32
Transition
Goldfinch60 said:
That pathway to eternity is within us all John.
Andy
December 15th, 2020 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
That pathway to eternity is within us all John.
Andy
December 15th, 2020 01:48
Transition
L. B. Mek said:
and on it goes
Replete
with it\'s own
Monotonous beat,
on and on
its cyclical wheel
seeps
from existence
into sand -
blown,
out to that
Insignificance
we lucky few
on existence
never: fail
to
take
for
granted...
good read full of insightful commentary,
thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply
December 14th, 2020 06:44
L. B. Mek said:
and on it goes
Replete
with it\'s own
Monotonous beat,
on and on
its cyclical wheel
seeps
from existence
into sand -
blown,
out to that
Insignificance
we lucky few
on existence
never: fail
to
take
for
granted...
good read full of insightful commentary,
thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply
December 14th, 2020 06:44
Inevitable
Goldfinch60 said:
Those infinite parallel Universes are there and every thought we had would have taken us into one to them.
Andy
December 14th, 2020 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Those infinite parallel Universes are there and every thought we had would have taken us into one to them.
Andy
December 14th, 2020 02:43
Inevitable
FredPeyer said:
Life is a crap shot, but what counts is that we are here!
December 13th, 2020 13:04
FredPeyer said:
Life is a crap shot, but what counts is that we are here!
December 13th, 2020 13:04
Self
FredPeyer said:
Well said, John. Without \'self\' WE don\'t exist. And there wouldn\'t be any poems either.
December 13th, 2020 13:02
FredPeyer said:
Well said, John. Without \'self\' WE don\'t exist. And there wouldn\'t be any poems either.
December 13th, 2020 13:02
Self
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, self is us and is that within us that nobody can necessarily see.
Andy
December 13th, 2020 03:01
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, self is us and is that within us that nobody can necessarily see.
Andy
December 13th, 2020 03:01
Narratives
Goldfinch60 said:
Beware indeed John, those in control only care about themselves.
Andy
December 11th, 2020 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Beware indeed John, those in control only care about themselves.
Andy
December 11th, 2020 01:37
Hubris
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes the world will be unchanged except I will be there looking from the Universe.
Andy
December 8th, 2020 02:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes the world will be unchanged except I will be there looking from the Universe.
Andy
December 8th, 2020 02:27
Look Away
Goldfinch60 said:
You are right that control can be eluded by looking away.
Andy
December 7th, 2020 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
You are right that control can be eluded by looking away.
Andy
December 7th, 2020 01:17
Time Span
Goldfinch60 said:
Time is there for us all and will always be there, enjoy every moment.
Andy
December 4th, 2020 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Time is there for us all and will always be there, enjoy every moment.
Andy
December 4th, 2020 02:10
Alignment
Goldfinch60 said:
So true John, that is why I enjoy the wonder of the Natural World.
Andy
December 2nd, 2020 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
So true John, that is why I enjoy the wonder of the Natural World.
Andy
December 2nd, 2020 01:33
Alignment
RDS said:
A really good lament for anologue technogy and freedom. I get the same feelings sometimes. Nicely written.
J
December 1st, 2020 15:15
RDS said:
A really good lament for anologue technogy and freedom. I get the same feelings sometimes. Nicely written.
J
December 1st, 2020 15:15
Gossamer Web
Goldfinch60 said:
That creation is there for us all to understand if we just accept it.
Andy
November 30th, 2020 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
That creation is there for us all to understand if we just accept it.
Andy
November 30th, 2020 01:35
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