Comments received on poems by kevin browne
Underneath The Stars At Night...
orchidee said:
Good write Kev. Yep, let\'s sit under those stars. I\'ll have me long johns on though this season. lol.
December 12th, 2019 02:48
orchidee said:
Good write Kev. Yep, let\'s sit under those stars. I\'ll have me long johns on though this season. lol.
December 12th, 2019 02:48
Underneath The Stars At Night...
Goldfinch60 said:
Those stars are holes in heaven\'s floor.
December 12th, 2019 02:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Those stars are holes in heaven\'s floor.
December 12th, 2019 02:01
Upon The Walls Of Written Times.
Goldfinch60 said:
The history of entertainment gives us such memories of such wonderful people who still give us great pleasure.
December 10th, 2019 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
The history of entertainment gives us such memories of such wonderful people who still give us great pleasure.
December 10th, 2019 01:31
Quite Natrurally...
orchidee said:
A fine write Kev. Sounds like my imaginary watchdog Fido wrote the title - Natrurally? He would say \'Natu-rurrr- rrruff-ally!\' lol.
December 8th, 2019 02:34
orchidee said:
A fine write Kev. Sounds like my imaginary watchdog Fido wrote the title - Natrurally? He would say \'Natu-rurrr- rrruff-ally!\' lol.
December 8th, 2019 02:34
The Moon Is All Over You...
Jane Frye said:
Enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing.
December 6th, 2019 08:03
Jane Frye said:
Enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing.
December 6th, 2019 08:03
If You Don\'t Know What To Do...
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow I like this dig this great muse that mentions the Mona Lisa. Only recently someone told me it is the Virgin Mary. Your poem is interesting and the diamond stanza was so awesome. Kudos.
Pls pleez do review /comment my newest poem too.
December 4th, 2019 09:38
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow I like this dig this great muse that mentions the Mona Lisa. Only recently someone told me it is the Virgin Mary. Your poem is interesting and the diamond stanza was so awesome. Kudos.
Pls pleez do review /comment my newest poem too.
December 4th, 2019 09:38
If You Don\'t Know What To Do...
orchidee said:
A fine write Kevin. Mona Lisa\'s in me bedroom, ooh! A print of her, that is, not the original!
December 3rd, 2019 02:45
orchidee said:
A fine write Kevin. Mona Lisa\'s in me bedroom, ooh! A print of her, that is, not the original!
December 3rd, 2019 02:45
If You Don\'t Know What To Do...
Goldfinch60 said:
And always will be yours Kevin.
December 3rd, 2019 02:40
Goldfinch60 said:
And always will be yours Kevin.
December 3rd, 2019 02:40
From A Broken Windowpane...
Goldfinch60 said:
May that bright place found be forever with us and the light can be seen to radiate over all.
December 1st, 2019 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
May that bright place found be forever with us and the light can be seen to radiate over all.
December 1st, 2019 01:06
Under My Pillow.
SabreLi said:
What an epic piece this is, brilliant flow and use of language! I love the humble ending after the entire journey, a great balance between the darkness and light. :)
November 29th, 2019 15:13
SabreLi said:
What an epic piece this is, brilliant flow and use of language! I love the humble ending after the entire journey, a great balance between the darkness and light. :)
November 29th, 2019 15:13
I Don\'t Really Mind.
orchidee said:
A fine write Kev. I told \'em - all they need \'mind\' is whether I start singing or not! heehee.
November 28th, 2019 16:09
orchidee said:
A fine write Kev. I told \'em - all they need \'mind\' is whether I start singing or not! heehee.
November 28th, 2019 16:09
Under My Pillow.
FineB said:
Hello Kevin,
Now that was a beautiful write.
Powerful, poignant and brilliant.
Keep writing FineB
November 27th, 2019 17:50
FineB said:
Hello Kevin,
Now that was a beautiful write.
Powerful, poignant and brilliant.
Keep writing FineB
November 27th, 2019 17:50
Heavens\'s Door.
Goldfinch60 said:
Heavens door now closed behind you and you are together forever.
November 25th, 2019 16:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Heavens door now closed behind you and you are together forever.
November 25th, 2019 16:17
Butterflies Flutter.
orchidee said:
A fine write Kevin. And now my offering, starting: \'Oh butterfly, how you flutter by......\'
Erm, that\'s as far as I\'ve got at the moment. lol.
November 24th, 2019 12:45
orchidee said:
A fine write Kevin. And now my offering, starting: \'Oh butterfly, how you flutter by......\'
Erm, that\'s as far as I\'ve got at the moment. lol.
November 24th, 2019 12:45
Butterflies Flutter.
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Amazing ! Such a way with words . I am glad I have started to read poetry again on this site ...
I loved reading this
November 24th, 2019 03:10
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Amazing ! Such a way with words . I am glad I have started to read poetry again on this site ...
I loved reading this
November 24th, 2019 03:10
For Someone Who Loves My Way.
Goldfinch60 said:
May tour ride on the stars keep you in the light of your world Kevin.
November 23rd, 2019 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
May tour ride on the stars keep you in the light of your world Kevin.
November 23rd, 2019 01:08
For Someone Who Loves My Way.
FredPeyer said:
Well Kevin, here is someone who loves your way....the way you write, that is. This time you did not get it wrong!
November 22nd, 2019 21:42
FredPeyer said:
Well Kevin, here is someone who loves your way....the way you write, that is. This time you did not get it wrong!
November 22nd, 2019 21:42
By Using More Words Than I Should.
orchidee said:
A fine write Kevin. Yep, I know it. I might use more words than I should. Always use 20 words when 5 will do I say! heehee.
November 19th, 2019 12:34
orchidee said:
A fine write Kevin. Yep, I know it. I might use more words than I should. Always use 20 words when 5 will do I say! heehee.
November 19th, 2019 12:34
By Using More Words Than I Should.
Poetic Dan said:
That end brought a few deep breaths but I\'ve ran dry off tears for today.
Thanks for the feeling of running on empty, only way is up now. Or just stay low for a bit.
Thank for the mind trip as always good sir!
November 19th, 2019 12:09
Poetic Dan said:
That end brought a few deep breaths but I\'ve ran dry off tears for today.
Thanks for the feeling of running on empty, only way is up now. Or just stay low for a bit.
Thank for the mind trip as always good sir!
November 19th, 2019 12:09
Too Much To Notice.
Goldfinch60 said:
May those stars shine on for both of you.
November 17th, 2019 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
May those stars shine on for both of you.
November 17th, 2019 02:05
Too Much To Notice.
orchidee said:
A fine write Kevin. Doh! Why some folk say to me: \'It don\'t take much to notice your singing\'? heehee.
November 16th, 2019 13:00
orchidee said:
A fine write Kevin. Doh! Why some folk say to me: \'It don\'t take much to notice your singing\'? heehee.
November 16th, 2019 13:00
Too Much To Notice.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Good Afternoon KEVIN ~ Love your Love Poem ! It sure sounds like BRIAN & I ! Im so so thrilled we found each other and I will never never ever let him GO ~ AMEN ! Please check our POEM ~ THE PLANETS ~ Thanks
Blessings & Peace ~ Yours A & B
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
November 16th, 2019 09:07
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Good Afternoon KEVIN ~ Love your Love Poem ! It sure sounds like BRIAN & I ! Im so so thrilled we found each other and I will never never ever let him GO ~ AMEN ! Please check our POEM ~ THE PLANETS ~ Thanks
Blessings & Peace ~ Yours A & B
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
November 16th, 2019 09:07
As Gentle A Poet.
Poetic Dan said:
As much as a write a friend laugh with me the other day about how much I dislike English and was happy to be illiterate.
Many of your or any like it take me so long to read, it take my full concentration and stopping my mind wondering off.
This felt like I was lost in time on your words, I lost count of how place you took me back with your spell, even putting into a readable format what I can only feel!
You truly feed my soul with the flow from your heart, helping train and slow down my mind.
I don\'t know everything but I definitely know this, we are all where we need to be.
Thank you for the years of sharing our poetry!
Among my legends, that I will one day meet.
Until then my friend, let our pens be free rambling endless possibilities
November 14th, 2019 12:58
Poetic Dan said:
As much as a write a friend laugh with me the other day about how much I dislike English and was happy to be illiterate.
Many of your or any like it take me so long to read, it take my full concentration and stopping my mind wondering off.
This felt like I was lost in time on your words, I lost count of how place you took me back with your spell, even putting into a readable format what I can only feel!
You truly feed my soul with the flow from your heart, helping train and slow down my mind.
I don\'t know everything but I definitely know this, we are all where we need to be.
Thank you for the years of sharing our poetry!
Among my legends, that I will one day meet.
Until then my friend, let our pens be free rambling endless possibilities
November 14th, 2019 12:58
As Gentle A Poet.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI KEVIN ~ You have really pushed the BOAT ot with this one ! Great structure with 15 balanced QUATRAIN good Rhythm and Rhyme Pattern (mainly xaxa xbxb etc). In you excellent POEM you highlight many characteristics of True Poets many of which ANGELA & I can empathise with and all of which are exemplified on MPS ! These are:
Poetic - imaginative - honest (telling it like it is) - repetitive - stressed (light heartedly) - in love with ones words - composing a mosaic ! - angry with the World - sometimes ambitious - persistent - hopeful - true (to his own convictions) - reclusive - magician - emotional - (sometimes) sees his Poems Published ! His POEMS (like yours) are elegantly penned - he has an urge to write a POEM every day ! Shares his confusions & fruatrations but gentle as a baby\'s touch and sees his PEN as his MOUTHPIECE ! Its a pity POLITICIANS aren*t more like POETS !
MPS is an awesome site - it encompasses a plethora of (mainly) amateur poets some of whome are outstanding like FAY ! Angela & I are performance POETS and (like PAM AYRES) Sitz in Leben Poets - about LIFE AS WE SEE IT ! Most of the comments we get are encouraging ! We try to ENCOURAGE all MPS MEMBERS - Positive - Negative & Neutral. Most of our POEMS are collborative because ANGELA did not want her own site ~ OK ! Thanks for sharing ~ much to PONDER !
Blessings & Peace & Joy to you & yours
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💜🧡💙🧡
November 13th, 2019 10:31
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI KEVIN ~ You have really pushed the BOAT ot with this one ! Great structure with 15 balanced QUATRAIN good Rhythm and Rhyme Pattern (mainly xaxa xbxb etc). In you excellent POEM you highlight many characteristics of True Poets many of which ANGELA & I can empathise with and all of which are exemplified on MPS ! These are:
Poetic - imaginative - honest (telling it like it is) - repetitive - stressed (light heartedly) - in love with ones words - composing a mosaic ! - angry with the World - sometimes ambitious - persistent - hopeful - true (to his own convictions) - reclusive - magician - emotional - (sometimes) sees his Poems Published ! His POEMS (like yours) are elegantly penned - he has an urge to write a POEM every day ! Shares his confusions & fruatrations but gentle as a baby\'s touch and sees his PEN as his MOUTHPIECE ! Its a pity POLITICIANS aren*t more like POETS !
MPS is an awesome site - it encompasses a plethora of (mainly) amateur poets some of whome are outstanding like FAY ! Angela & I are performance POETS and (like PAM AYRES) Sitz in Leben Poets - about LIFE AS WE SEE IT ! Most of the comments we get are encouraging ! We try to ENCOURAGE all MPS MEMBERS - Positive - Negative & Neutral. Most of our POEMS are collborative because ANGELA did not want her own site ~ OK ! Thanks for sharing ~ much to PONDER !
Blessings & Peace & Joy to you & yours
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💜🧡💙🧡
November 13th, 2019 10:31
As Gentle A Poet.
Goldfinch60 said:
May that pen never cease from writing these wonderful words Kevin.
November 13th, 2019 05:36
Goldfinch60 said:
May that pen never cease from writing these wonderful words Kevin.
November 13th, 2019 05:36
Rum By The Bottle Full...
orchidee said:
Oh dear, I never got past the first line of verse 3 here (or did I?). I was all of a swoon! heehee. A fine write Kev.
November 8th, 2019 02:46
orchidee said:
Oh dear, I never got past the first line of verse 3 here (or did I?). I was all of a swoon! heehee. A fine write Kev.
November 8th, 2019 02:46
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