Comments received on poems by kevin browne



Watch Butterflies Float.
Poetic Dan said:

Could not agree more with sir Nev, you my friend are the best at being you! I was hooked at the start could see myself in the middle, at the end was a tear with a breath that is still a bit unclear.

Thank you for taking me on a needed journey!

June 10th, 2019 11:02

Watch Butterflies Float.
Neville said:

you have a a very versatile approach to poetry sir and aint half bad at it either... this particular poem grabbed me as soon as I hit on the title... after that, I was hooked.............. Neville

June 10th, 2019 10:33

Just Like An Angel.
Fay Slimm. said:

The flow to these well-rhymed words adds something special to the admirable imagery you use to describe the taste of old pastures.Thanks Kevin for sharing this engaging re-visit to times and people who make life what it is. \"Live and let go\" is a good phrase to remember. Excellent read.

June 6th, 2019 03:15

Just Like An Angel.
Neville said:

an interesting poem filled to the point of overflowing with ideas and information.. It reminded me of someone who has a mind of their very own, someone who stands out from the crowd, someone who is both intrinsically and extrinsically different or distanced.. a risk taker maybe... not necessarily an angel in the conventional sense... Enjoyed regardless.... Neville

June 6th, 2019 03:01

Just Like An Angel.
orchidee said:

A fine write Kevin. All was OK (last stanza) until I invited friends round. Not a four-pack, but wine - though I added water to it. That ruined everything! lol.

June 6th, 2019 02:03

Whether You Win Or You Lose.
dusk arising said:

We have to keep on winning and.... as we get older we do, cos we see it coming and we know \"thats life\".

And yes, to some we are liars, because they cant believe the smile in front of them has passed through such pain.

June 5th, 2019 14:57

Whether You Win Or You Lose.
orchidee said:

A fine write Kev. Pity it\'s always a \'lose-lose\' situation when I sing! For me and for those I torment with it. heehee.

June 5th, 2019 14:07

Corners Around Rainbows.
Goldfinch60 said:

Walking with nature is so divine and you have captured it in your words Kevin - thank you.

June 4th, 2019 00:35

Corners Around Rainbows.
Lorna said:

Nature and love are almost the same thing...... beautiful yearnings in this one Kevin.

June 3rd, 2019 07:27

For Being Jack The Lad.
dusk arising said:

This gave me laughs Kevin. I can see theres a darker side but it\'s the way you tell \'em sometimes... this time anyway.

Centuries ago i was reincarnated as me .... wonderful line.

June 2nd, 2019 01:23

For Being Jack The Lad.
Poetic Dan said:

As I can not sleep and this is my first read, a jack the lad was something I\'ve always been, now just jack of all trades but master at none.

Always a pleasure to read your words my friend

June 1st, 2019 19:28

If It\'s Not Now.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Great flow Kevin


May 31st, 2019 06:43

If It\'s Not Now.
FineB said:

Hello Kevin,

What an awesome poem. That was beautiful! If we don\'t have Love we have nothing.

Keep writing
FineB

May 31st, 2019 03:38

If It\'s Not Now.
orchidee said:

A fine write Kev. Pity it started me off singing (oh no! lol). \'Oooohhh, it\'s now or never....!\'

May 31st, 2019 01:59

A Silenced whisper Of An Old Chinese Doll.
Poetic Dan said:

I\'m in floods of tears, you are a true master at pure raw beauty. To hate but still love, is gift you remind me of. That was just in my mind but you sir are a wonderful treasure to find.

Thank you

May 28th, 2019 13:23

A Silenced whisper Of An Old Chinese Doll.
dusk arising said:

How cruel our existence here can be. Thank goodness for Buddha and reincarnation, that glorious existence may be attained.
To see my inner feelings about this and your writings i have to ask you to look at my recent piece \"when out of my thoughts\".
It stopped my belief in the god as defined by christianity.

May 28th, 2019 10:55

A Silenced whisper Of An Old Chinese Doll.
Neville said:

an emotionally charged poem without any doubt... Neville

May 28th, 2019 04:23

Old Cottage Dwellers.
Fay Slimm. said:

Memories well captured in this piece of work show how enhanced is childhood when looking at times of simple pleasures with old cottage dwellers back in the past. Your write Kevin describes clearly the outside and in of the place where peace reigned with a loved Grandad and that can never be taken away.

May 27th, 2019 16:01

Old Cottage Dwellers.
orchidee said:

A fine write Kevin. I saw some more thatched cottages on a country walk recently.

May 27th, 2019 02:00

Old Cottage Dwellers.
Goldfinch60 said:

Those days and times were so special.

May 27th, 2019 00:45

Your Unread Lies.
dusk arising said:

Love doesnt last. Partnerships can but often dont.
Sounds like someone pinched your wealth (or part of it) and buggered off to live the high life.
Did i get anywhere near ?

May 25th, 2019 09:59

Of Old Chartered Walks.
dusk arising said:

THis is a fun and joyful read with some darkness which i havent fathomed out. But there\'s reminiscing in there too. It feels like a song you\'re singing to yourself as you go off away for a break with a twinkle in your eye for theres a chance of love in the air.

May 25th, 2019 09:51

Of Old Chartered Walks.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Could feel the yearn for the quieter life in this Kevin
Great piece
Great flow

May 24th, 2019 12:06

Through Ugly Rows And Telegraph.
Neville said:

well crafted four line stanzas throughout.. an intriguing read.. thank you.... Neville

May 22nd, 2019 13:28

Through Ugly Rows And Telegraph.
dusk arising said:

I\'m thinking theres a woman in here who was false. Attractive but out to attract who?
And life and learning, to learn from your own wisdom or borrow others.

Today your write is like giving me a pile of jigsaw pieces and no picture .. i begin to make an image.

May 22nd, 2019 11:51

The Killer Of All Time.
dusk arising said:

You busy mind finds time stretched and echoing as time itself is taking its toll.
But your spirit and positivity shine through. Together with your wonderful creativity.

May 21st, 2019 14:14

My Hearts Worth.
FineB said:

Hello Kevin,

What a spellbinding write. Awesome and wonderful!

Keep writing
FineB

May 17th, 2019 03:59

My Hearts Worth.
Poetic Dan said:

Towards the middle of this my friend, I thought of a chat I had late one night with a lady saying, she saw in me the faith she has lost in finding someone.
The path you walk and share will at some point bring you somewhere, I hope it\'s not to long.
For you have my admiration

Much peace and respect

May 14th, 2019 10:55

My Hearts Worth.
Lorna said:

There is so much yearning in this Kevin....... it\'s beautiful and haunting.

May 14th, 2019 05:15

All The Love He Kept.
Fay Slimm. said:

Such an absorbing and wonderfully expressed write - - such a moving finalé too - thank you Kevin for this admirable posting on how love could be preserved.

May 13th, 2019 05:23



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