Comments received on poems by this_girl
She\'s Purpose
Sunshinefalling said:
I love this. You captured it. Thanks for sharing.
March 28th, 2019 23:23
Sunshinefalling said:
I love this. You captured it. Thanks for sharing.
March 28th, 2019 23:23
La Agua Desamor
Lorna said:
This worked well using the water as a metaphor for love!
February 28th, 2018 04:57
Lorna said:
This worked well using the water as a metaphor for love!
February 28th, 2018 04:57
Rant
Christina8 said:
Sounds like you are having one hell of a week!! That was quite a rant! I promise you will find MPS a very supportive community. If you need to talk, my inbox is open!
September 5th, 2017 23:12
Christina8 said:
Sounds like you are having one hell of a week!! That was quite a rant! I promise you will find MPS a very supportive community. If you need to talk, my inbox is open!
September 5th, 2017 23:12
My Dad
Mello said:
Don\'t we all see this sort of situation but what makes it worth it is that you know and appreciate it. Great work well expressed.
February 19th, 2017 16:12
Mello said:
Don\'t we all see this sort of situation but what makes it worth it is that you know and appreciate it. Great work well expressed.
February 19th, 2017 16:12
My Dad
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
A Beautiful Tribute to your DAD Friend ! Your poem indicates thet ~ to you ~ Your DAD is just as precious as your MUM ~ AMEN ! Thanks for caring and sharing this intimate poem with us on MPS. Did you show it to your DAD ~ I hope so ~ Youirs BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems thanks B
February 19th, 2017 11:04
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
A Beautiful Tribute to your DAD Friend ! Your poem indicates thet ~ to you ~ Your DAD is just as precious as your MUM ~ AMEN ! Thanks for caring and sharing this intimate poem with us on MPS. Did you show it to your DAD ~ I hope so ~ Youirs BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems thanks B
February 19th, 2017 11:04
Exhausted
JohnThomas said:
It does get exhausting, keeping up with the sadness. All things must pass, sadness is no different. Great poem. Really captures that anxiety and yearning.
February 17th, 2017 01:57
JohnThomas said:
It does get exhausting, keeping up with the sadness. All things must pass, sadness is no different. Great poem. Really captures that anxiety and yearning.
February 17th, 2017 01:57
Move On.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing TG ~ It is an experience we can all empathise with. BUT in my experience we learn siomething positive from every meaningful relationship we have. I\'m 33 and have had several and I\'m still learning ! What I say is \"Much better to have loved and lost ~ than never to have loved at all ~ AMEN\" Yours Hugs BRIAN
December 13th, 2016 15:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing TG ~ It is an experience we can all empathise with. BUT in my experience we learn siomething positive from every meaningful relationship we have. I\'m 33 and have had several and I\'m still learning ! What I say is \"Much better to have loved and lost ~ than never to have loved at all ~ AMEN\" Yours Hugs BRIAN
December 13th, 2016 15:11
Move On.
SilentLaugh said:
Great job! I love it! I hope to see more! I think you have bright path in front of to being a profesional poet!
December 13th, 2016 15:09
SilentLaugh said:
Great job! I love it! I hope to see more! I think you have bright path in front of to being a profesional poet!
December 13th, 2016 15:09
The Disguise
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Nice....Reminds me of my poem "Fine"....it might find your interest..best wishes
September 20th, 2016 19:48
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Nice....Reminds me of my poem "Fine"....it might find your interest..best wishes
September 20th, 2016 19:48
The Disguise
0ddity said:
I lost some one I loved deeply two years ago. This hit me really deep. I like it.
September 19th, 2016 23:07
0ddity said:
I lost some one I loved deeply two years ago. This hit me really deep. I like it.
September 19th, 2016 23:07
My First Love
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME HONEY ~ This is an elegant first poem straight from your wounded heart. In my experience Ladies of 18 of at their flowering best and have everything to offer a MAN. A boy of 16 is too Young to appreciated the box of precious Jewels that he had in his arms. He saw ~ he came ~ he conquered but left you drained and unsatisfied. I trust writing this was cathartic it made me sad to see innocence sacrificed on the altar of Youth ! Had it been me at 21 things would have been much deeper and intense and sincere. There is a magic time and place for love. I hope your broken heart is mended now. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ more poems please ~ Yours ~ BRIAN (UK)
September 19th, 2016 02:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME HONEY ~ This is an elegant first poem straight from your wounded heart. In my experience Ladies of 18 of at their flowering best and have everything to offer a MAN. A boy of 16 is too Young to appreciated the box of precious Jewels that he had in his arms. He saw ~ he came ~ he conquered but left you drained and unsatisfied. I trust writing this was cathartic it made me sad to see innocence sacrificed on the altar of Youth ! Had it been me at 21 things would have been much deeper and intense and sincere. There is a magic time and place for love. I hope your broken heart is mended now. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ more poems please ~ Yours ~ BRIAN (UK)
September 19th, 2016 02:59
