Comments received on poems by this_girl

Soulless Maybe
ron parrish aka wordman said:

depression,a powerful thing

April 3rd, 2019 18:55

She\'s Purpose
Sunshinefalling said:

I love this. You captured it. Thanks for sharing.

March 28th, 2019 23:23

Goldfinch60 said:

May that innocence never waver.

October 3rd, 2018 00:53

La Agua Desamor
Lorna said:

This worked well using the water as a metaphor for love!

February 28th, 2018 04:57

Christina8 said:

Sounds like you are having one hell of a week!! That was quite a rant! I promise you will find MPS a very supportive community. If you need to talk, my inbox is open!

September 5th, 2017 23:12

My Dad
P.H.Rose said:

Really very beautiful..

February 19th, 2017 18:00

My Dad
Somerica said:

Don\'t we all see this sort of situation but what makes it worth it is that you know and appreciate it. Great work well expressed.

February 19th, 2017 16:12

My Dad
WG7 said:

This is a beautiful poem. It\'s amazing and I love it.

February 19th, 2017 13:34

My Dad

A Beautiful Tribute to your DAD Friend ! Your poem indicates thet ~ to you ~ Your DAD is just as precious as your MUM ~ AMEN ! Thanks for caring and sharing this intimate poem with us on MPS. Did you show it to your DAD ~ I hope so ~ Youirs BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems thanks B

February 19th, 2017 11:04

JohnThomas said:

It does get exhausting, keeping up with the sadness. All things must pass, sadness is no different. Great poem. Really captures that anxiety and yearning.

February 17th, 2017 01:57

Move On.
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

December 13th, 2016 16:27

Move On.

Thanks for sharing TG ~ It is an experience we can all empathise with. BUT in my experience we learn siomething positive from every meaningful relationship we have. I\'m 33 and have had several and I\'m still learning ! What I say is \"Much better to have loved and lost ~ than never to have loved at all ~ AMEN\" Yours Hugs BRIAN

December 13th, 2016 15:11

Move On.
SilentLaugh said:

Great job! I love it! I hope to see more! I think you have bright path in front of to being a profesional poet!

December 13th, 2016 15:09

The Disguise

Nice....Reminds me of my poem "Fine" might find your wishes

September 20th, 2016 19:48

The Disguise
0ddity said:

I lost some one I loved deeply two years ago. This hit me really deep. I like it.

September 19th, 2016 23:07

My First Love
coryjarbeau said:

Very powerful write best one today

September 19th, 2016 10:36

My First Love

WELCOME HONEY ~ This is an elegant first poem straight from your wounded heart. In my experience Ladies of 18 of at their flowering best and have everything to offer a MAN. A boy of 16 is too Young to appreciated the box of precious Jewels that he had in his arms. He saw ~ he came ~ he conquered but left you drained and unsatisfied. I trust writing this was cathartic it made me sad to see innocence sacrificed on the altar of Youth ! Had it been me at 21 things would have been much deeper and intense and sincere. There is a magic time and place for love. I hope your broken heart is mended now. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ more poems please ~ Yours ~ BRIAN (UK)

September 19th, 2016 02:59

My First Love
Micheal.herron said:

That was beautiful

September 18th, 2016 22:40