Comments received on poems by WriteBeLight
Be A Link That Thinks
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. We should all help each other.
February 24th, 2017 06:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. We should all help each other.
February 24th, 2017 06:45
I Could But Won\'t
Christina8 said:
Very good poem. Sneaky how you got those words in you didn\'t mean to say LOL. We all do it. So I won\'t tell you what a great job you did!
February 23rd, 2017 10:42
Christina8 said:
Very good poem. Sneaky how you got those words in you didn\'t mean to say LOL. We all do it. So I won\'t tell you what a great job you did!
February 23rd, 2017 10:42
I Could But Won\'t
Fay Slimm. said:
A good flow to this rant against the vagaries of others.
February 23rd, 2017 07:00
Fay Slimm. said:
A good flow to this rant against the vagaries of others.
February 23rd, 2017 07:00
I Could But Won\'t
Michael Edwards said:
None of us are perfect but we should recognise that and look to the good points in people for we all have them. You\'ve penned a few great lines here.
February 23rd, 2017 06:18
Michael Edwards said:
None of us are perfect but we should recognise that and look to the good points in people for we all have them. You\'ve penned a few great lines here.
February 23rd, 2017 06:18
Time Bandage
Augustus said:
Send me a bundle and your number for my speed dial. Neat concept.
February 22nd, 2017 15:57
Augustus said:
Send me a bundle and your number for my speed dial. Neat concept.
February 22nd, 2017 15:57
Time Bandage
MendedFences27 said:
A \"Time Bandage.\" You put it on and the wound underneath enters a time warp and is healed quickly. No problem, I\'ll get to work on it. What happens when the wound is in your heart or head, oh yeah, a \"Time transfusion.\" Sort of like a liquid bandage. Your poem treats the ugly world of hurt and broken hearts with caring and a bit of humor. Nice write. - Phil A.
February 22nd, 2017 15:24
MendedFences27 said:
A \"Time Bandage.\" You put it on and the wound underneath enters a time warp and is healed quickly. No problem, I\'ll get to work on it. What happens when the wound is in your heart or head, oh yeah, a \"Time transfusion.\" Sort of like a liquid bandage. Your poem treats the ugly world of hurt and broken hearts with caring and a bit of humor. Nice write. - Phil A.
February 22nd, 2017 15:24
Time Bandage
Christina8 said:
Great poem, WBL! This is simply wonderful! I wish this was actual stuff that was real! What I wouldn\'t give! Thanks for writing this. I really enjoyed it.
February 22nd, 2017 13:44
Christina8 said:
Great poem, WBL! This is simply wonderful! I wish this was actual stuff that was real! What I wouldn\'t give! Thanks for writing this. I really enjoyed it.
February 22nd, 2017 13:44
Pain In The Glass
P.H.Rose said:
Great poem WBL
Where I am on the
east coast in England
We don\'t get a lot
Of the white stuff
Mind you not a lot
Of the hot stuff either
February 21st, 2017 19:10
P.H.Rose said:
Great poem WBL
Where I am on the
east coast in England
We don\'t get a lot
Of the white stuff
Mind you not a lot
Of the hot stuff either
February 21st, 2017 19:10
Pain In The Glass
Christina8 said:
I love your poem. Can\'t stand driving in the snow if I don\'t have to! The weather coming looks lovely and then some snow which won\'t stick. Looks like spring is coming! :-)
February 21st, 2017 14:01
Christina8 said:
I love your poem. Can\'t stand driving in the snow if I don\'t have to! The weather coming looks lovely and then some snow which won\'t stick. Looks like spring is coming! :-)
February 21st, 2017 14:01
Pain In The Glass
Michael Edwards said:
Even here in the UK I can relate to this although so far this winter there\'s been no snow at all where I live.
February 21st, 2017 11:40
Michael Edwards said:
Even here in the UK I can relate to this although so far this winter there\'s been no snow at all where I live.
February 21st, 2017 11:40
Pain In The Glass
MendedFences27 said:
I\'ve lived in the Northeast for 73 years and I love it here. Where else can you get 4 very profound seasons, and still have access to the sea, mountains, forests, large lakes, streams and rivers. It\'s a virtual Paradise Add in all of the history about, and it can please your brain as well. As for this winter. Eh, kind of mediocre so far. Your poem hits on all cylinders, of the beauty and the danger, and the aggravation. Loved it.- Phil A.
February 21st, 2017 10:40
MendedFences27 said:
I\'ve lived in the Northeast for 73 years and I love it here. Where else can you get 4 very profound seasons, and still have access to the sea, mountains, forests, large lakes, streams and rivers. It\'s a virtual Paradise Add in all of the history about, and it can please your brain as well. As for this winter. Eh, kind of mediocre so far. Your poem hits on all cylinders, of the beauty and the danger, and the aggravation. Loved it.- Phil A.
February 21st, 2017 10:40
Freedom Phrases
Seeker said:
In the end what I write is really all there is to me. You stated this same thing very well indeed. Bravo!!
February 21st, 2017 10:20
Seeker said:
In the end what I write is really all there is to me. You stated this same thing very well indeed. Bravo!!
February 21st, 2017 10:20
Pain In The Glass
Tizermax said:
Oh, the joys of winter. It is beautifle though. Great read.
February 21st, 2017 08:23
Tizermax said:
Oh, the joys of winter. It is beautifle though. Great read.
February 21st, 2017 08:23
Pain In The Glass
willyweed said:
I love your sense of humor!
this poem is Great\"
Are you from Yuma AR?
are you available for date?
And the title LOL
Oh now I just can not wait! ogreat one this is sooo funny!
February 21st, 2017 06:34
willyweed said:
I love your sense of humor!
this poem is Great\"
Are you from Yuma AR?
are you available for date?
And the title LOL
Oh now I just can not wait! ogreat one this is sooo funny!
February 21st, 2017 06:34
The Kernel\'s Lost. Try Floss.
Jeff said:
Lol...those damn kernels...great write
February 21st, 2017 06:19
Jeff said:
Lol...those damn kernels...great write
February 21st, 2017 06:19
The Kernel\'s Lost. Try Floss.
Augustus said:
I was embarrassed at the dentist a few years back when she found a piece of popcorn kernel stuck in my gum. Your poetry is always so relateable.
February 20th, 2017 19:06
Augustus said:
I was embarrassed at the dentist a few years back when she found a piece of popcorn kernel stuck in my gum. Your poetry is always so relateable.
February 20th, 2017 19:06
The Kernel\'s Lost. Try Floss.
P.H.Rose said:
Ha ha.. very good poem
I love it.... unfortunately I
Have not looked after mine
Had a few knocked out
Through various sports,
My front two when I was
About 12 playing cricket
Believe it or not my relative
Smashed me in the face with
A cricket bat, he was batting
And I was THE wicket keeper
Rugby, football and boxing
Got the others, so I don\'t
Suffer to much with stuff
Getting stuck in my teeth..
Love it when a poem is
Written about something
Other than love, death
Or breaking up...
Good job.. well done...
February 20th, 2017 18:58
P.H.Rose said:
Ha ha.. very good poem
I love it.... unfortunately I
Have not looked after mine
Had a few knocked out
Through various sports,
My front two when I was
About 12 playing cricket
Believe it or not my relative
Smashed me in the face with
A cricket bat, he was batting
And I was THE wicket keeper
Rugby, football and boxing
Got the others, so I don\'t
Suffer to much with stuff
Getting stuck in my teeth..
Love it when a poem is
Written about something
Other than love, death
Or breaking up...
Good job.. well done...
February 20th, 2017 18:58
The Kernel\'s Lost. Try Floss.
MendedFences27 said:
Ah yes, the dangers of popcorn. Will nature please stop the assault on the dentures of the free world. It makes one on edge entering the movie theater, it terrifies the freelance popper, almost too shaken to push the Popcorn button on the microwave, and what is it doing to our children? Oh the horror. I prefer mine with butter and lots of salt. Also it\'s one of those aromas, when popping that makes everyone want some, like bacon. - Phil A.
February 20th, 2017 11:13
MendedFences27 said:
Ah yes, the dangers of popcorn. Will nature please stop the assault on the dentures of the free world. It makes one on edge entering the movie theater, it terrifies the freelance popper, almost too shaken to push the Popcorn button on the microwave, and what is it doing to our children? Oh the horror. I prefer mine with butter and lots of salt. Also it\'s one of those aromas, when popping that makes everyone want some, like bacon. - Phil A.
February 20th, 2017 11:13
The Kernel\'s Lost. Try Floss.
Michael Edwards said:
Nice one WBL and we\'ve all been there - just spent a fortune on dental treatment but at least I can smile again.
February 20th, 2017 07:12
Michael Edwards said:
Nice one WBL and we\'ve all been there - just spent a fortune on dental treatment but at least I can smile again.
February 20th, 2017 07:12
Wind
Augustus said:
Wow! This is terrific. It reads so well and has images all of us have experienced. Plus it was elegant. Very special
February 19th, 2017 15:26
Augustus said:
Wow! This is terrific. It reads so well and has images all of us have experienced. Plus it was elegant. Very special
February 19th, 2017 15:26
Wind
ron parrish aka wordman said:
the wind beneath my feet,raises me up in my spirit great presentation
February 19th, 2017 15:14
ron parrish aka wordman said:
the wind beneath my feet,raises me up in my spirit great presentation
February 19th, 2017 15:14
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