Comments received on poems by WriteBeLight
B.O. Bomb
MendedFences27 said:
Saw it on the news last night. Maybe they\'ll rebuild with better ventilation. Nice take on the cause, very creative. - Phil A.
March 2nd, 2017 13:29
MendedFences27 said:
Saw it on the news last night. Maybe they\'ll rebuild with better ventilation. Nice take on the cause, very creative. - Phil A.
March 2nd, 2017 13:29
B.O. Bomb
Augustus said:
Spontaneous combustion. That\'s what my mind does when I sit next to some folks who seldom bathe. Like on a plane. But you were writing about gyms. Yes a stack of old sweaty towels may do it, especially from the male side. Enjoyed.
March 2nd, 2017 12:38
Augustus said:
Spontaneous combustion. That\'s what my mind does when I sit next to some folks who seldom bathe. Like on a plane. But you were writing about gyms. Yes a stack of old sweaty towels may do it, especially from the male side. Enjoyed.
March 2nd, 2017 12:38
B.O. Bomb
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW Honey ~ It just goes to show ~ in the GYMS where I go ~ they could easily blow ~ from build up of BO. One of the problems is today ~ people use so much deodorant etc ~ that the normal /natural scent of another human being (especially after a workout) is considered disgusting ! The scent of LOVE ~ well that is another big subject .....! Thanks for sharing the story and the joke LM track suit O Hygienic Hugs ~ BRIAN
March 2nd, 2017 10:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW Honey ~ It just goes to show ~ in the GYMS where I go ~ they could easily blow ~ from build up of BO. One of the problems is today ~ people use so much deodorant etc ~ that the normal /natural scent of another human being (especially after a workout) is considered disgusting ! The scent of LOVE ~ well that is another big subject .....! Thanks for sharing the story and the joke LM track suit O Hygienic Hugs ~ BRIAN
March 2nd, 2017 10:47
B.O. Bomb
Goldfinch60 said:
I knew there must be a good reason why I shouldn\'t go to the gym!! Good write.
March 2nd, 2017 08:54
Goldfinch60 said:
I knew there must be a good reason why I shouldn\'t go to the gym!! Good write.
March 2nd, 2017 08:54
B.O. Bomb
willyweed said:
This poem stinks but I do love it just shows to go ya any and all is a possibility ! I say PU to this smelly gem! Woolywoo he said holding his face and mouth?
March 2nd, 2017 07:25
willyweed said:
This poem stinks but I do love it just shows to go ya any and all is a possibility ! I say PU to this smelly gem! Woolywoo he said holding his face and mouth?
March 2nd, 2017 07:25
B.O. Bomb
Michael Edwards said:
They should have exercised more vigorous cleaning routines - love it WBL.
March 2nd, 2017 06:34
Michael Edwards said:
They should have exercised more vigorous cleaning routines - love it WBL.
March 2nd, 2017 06:34
Get Off It!
MendedFences27 said:
Very humorous. I hate driving, and heavy traffic only makes it worse. People should not be allowed on the road. There are the pushy ones, the opposite of that the timid ones, the ones who are lost and don\'t know where they are going, and of course the tailgaters.. . and many more. Why can\'t they just drive? Enjoyed your take on all this. - Phil A.
March 1st, 2017 21:25
MendedFences27 said:
Very humorous. I hate driving, and heavy traffic only makes it worse. People should not be allowed on the road. There are the pushy ones, the opposite of that the timid ones, the ones who are lost and don\'t know where they are going, and of course the tailgaters.. . and many more. Why can\'t they just drive? Enjoyed your take on all this. - Phil A.
March 1st, 2017 21:25
Get Off It!
Augustus said:
Great rant. Love the photo. And what a great metaphor for the indecisive. I love \"what are you waiting for....\"
March 1st, 2017 19:15
Augustus said:
Great rant. Love the photo. And what a great metaphor for the indecisive. I love \"what are you waiting for....\"
March 1st, 2017 19:15
Get Off It!
Jooles said:
Everyone can relate to this 100% either thd selves or someone they know and I adore your picture
March 1st, 2017 16:59
Jooles said:
Everyone can relate to this 100% either thd selves or someone they know and I adore your picture
March 1st, 2017 16:59
Get Off It!
orchidee said:
Oohh I can\'t say long words ya know! I have to say procrastin-wotsit and prevari-wotsit. lol.
March 1st, 2017 14:34
orchidee said:
Oohh I can\'t say long words ya know! I have to say procrastin-wotsit and prevari-wotsit. lol.
March 1st, 2017 14:34
Get Off It!
Michael Edwards said:
My son put off handing in his notice when he was offered a new job - the new company went bust - in his words : Procrastination is a virtue\'. but I know what you mean - I have a hate for drivers who are turning right (it would be left in the States) but don\'t keep their off-side in line with the centre of the road. The result: I can\'t by on the inside and sit behind them waiting for them to go while they are taking up all the room. Yup love this poem WBL
March 1st, 2017 11:44
Michael Edwards said:
My son put off handing in his notice when he was offered a new job - the new company went bust - in his words : Procrastination is a virtue\'. but I know what you mean - I have a hate for drivers who are turning right (it would be left in the States) but don\'t keep their off-side in line with the centre of the road. The result: I can\'t by on the inside and sit behind them waiting for them to go while they are taking up all the room. Yup love this poem WBL
March 1st, 2017 11:44
Get Off It!
Christina8 said:
Very good poem! I would be having fits if people weren\'t using their blinkers! But as for the poem, I love the last stanza, \"get off the pot\" is one I\'ve used. People act like they are making a career decision over tiny things. Great write!
March 1st, 2017 10:27
Christina8 said:
Very good poem! I would be having fits if people weren\'t using their blinkers! But as for the poem, I love the last stanza, \"get off the pot\" is one I\'ve used. People act like they are making a career decision over tiny things. Great write!
March 1st, 2017 10:27
Get Off It!
Goldfinch60 said:
So many people just need to prevaricate (that\'s a good word for this time of day) and just cause others to get irritable. Good write.
March 1st, 2017 08:56
Goldfinch60 said:
So many people just need to prevaricate (that\'s a good word for this time of day) and just cause others to get irritable. Good write.
March 1st, 2017 08:56
Get Off It!
willyweed said:
procrastination is a waste of time
shit or get off the pot your stinkin up the joint....I like to say... well I don\'t like it but that is what I say ..plus I have no time to waste? WW
March 1st, 2017 08:18
willyweed said:
procrastination is a waste of time
shit or get off the pot your stinkin up the joint....I like to say... well I don\'t like it but that is what I say ..plus I have no time to waste? WW
March 1st, 2017 08:18
Party\'s Over
Augustus said:
Pain in the heart? I was thinking of other places. Heh, heh. Nicely done.
February 28th, 2017 17:31
Augustus said:
Pain in the heart? I was thinking of other places. Heh, heh. Nicely done.
February 28th, 2017 17:31
Party\'s Over
MendedFences27 said:
Tough choices in life are not always easily made, but sometimes we just have to put a foot down and rein things in. Your words are truth and wisely spoken. - Phil A.
February 28th, 2017 12:40
MendedFences27 said:
Tough choices in life are not always easily made, but sometimes we just have to put a foot down and rein things in. Your words are truth and wisely spoken. - Phil A.
February 28th, 2017 12:40
Party\'s Over
janetaylor said:
great rant! you hit it on the nose! your pictures always make me smile as well :0)
February 28th, 2017 12:08
janetaylor said:
great rant! you hit it on the nose! your pictures always make me smile as well :0)
February 28th, 2017 12:08
Party\'s Over
Michael Edwards said:
If only !!! Great bit of poetic entertainment.
February 28th, 2017 11:36
Michael Edwards said:
If only !!! Great bit of poetic entertainment.
February 28th, 2017 11:36
Party\'s Over
willyweed said:
I can see Kevin is no fun at all, nice poem and good rules though. ww
February 28th, 2017 05:42
willyweed said:
I can see Kevin is no fun at all, nice poem and good rules though. ww
February 28th, 2017 05:42
Party\'s Over
Goldfinch60 said:
very good write, all will be well in the end.
February 28th, 2017 05:10
Goldfinch60 said:
very good write, all will be well in the end.
February 28th, 2017 05:10
Party\'s Over
kevin browne said:
and no smoking weed..!! brilliant write my friend.
February 28th, 2017 04:52
kevin browne said:
and no smoking weed..!! brilliant write my friend.
February 28th, 2017 04:52
Odd One In
MendedFences27 said:
Loneliness is a blight on the spirit, although not so much at work if you are in a managerial position, but for life in general, we all need friends. Maybe look outside of work for companionship, or join an activity. Anyways, lovely poem, one that gives the sense of the lonely feeling of being left out. - Phil A.
February 27th, 2017 15:16
MendedFences27 said:
Loneliness is a blight on the spirit, although not so much at work if you are in a managerial position, but for life in general, we all need friends. Maybe look outside of work for companionship, or join an activity. Anyways, lovely poem, one that gives the sense of the lonely feeling of being left out. - Phil A.
February 27th, 2017 15:16
Odd One In
Hopey_xx said:
Love it! Sadly some people aren\'t who we expect them to be, we just have to find true friends who will be there no matter what :)
February 27th, 2017 12:03
Hopey_xx said:
Love it! Sadly some people aren\'t who we expect them to be, we just have to find true friends who will be there no matter what :)
February 27th, 2017 12:03
Odd One In
kevin browne said:
wow..! that was a passion full. nearly never kept up with it and no stopping you at this speed..!
February 27th, 2017 11:06
kevin browne said:
wow..! that was a passion full. nearly never kept up with it and no stopping you at this speed..!
February 27th, 2017 11:06
Odd One In
Michael Edwards said:
Plus a bit of Tempus Fugit eh what? Great write.
February 27th, 2017 10:40
Michael Edwards said:
Plus a bit of Tempus Fugit eh what? Great write.
February 27th, 2017 10:40
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