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lysistrata said:
I just read all 5? Your first needs editing,the rest are much better and deal with similar themes.This is my favourite so far. Keep 😯
September 23rd, 2016 09:09
lysistrata said:
I just read all 5? Your first needs editing,the rest are much better and deal with similar themes.This is my favourite so far. Keep 😯
September 23rd, 2016 09:09
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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks one must always ROOF PREAD or one can end up saying quite the opposite of what one meant. My cat fell for the roof but she just POPPED on her DRAWS and ran away unharmed ! SHANKS for THARING ~ Brours YIAN !
September 23rd, 2016 08:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks one must always ROOF PREAD or one can end up saying quite the opposite of what one meant. My cat fell for the roof but she just POPPED on her DRAWS and ran away unharmed ! SHANKS for THARING ~ Brours YIAN !
September 23rd, 2016 08:47
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Augustus said:
Oh yes. Mine alternates between Spanish and English, so I have to be real careful before hitting send. Thanks for the laugh.
September 23rd, 2016 08:27
Augustus said:
Oh yes. Mine alternates between Spanish and English, so I have to be real careful before hitting send. Thanks for the laugh.
September 23rd, 2016 08:27
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ShadedSorrow said:
That happens to me all the time. It can be very funny.
September 23rd, 2016 08:12
ShadedSorrow said:
That happens to me all the time. It can be very funny.
September 23rd, 2016 08:12
Even Keeled
Augustus said:
What a message and presentation. Serves as how to parent effectively and with love. Would lent itself to those who realize they are enabling addicts.
September 22nd, 2016 09:59
Augustus said:
What a message and presentation. Serves as how to parent effectively and with love. Would lent itself to those who realize they are enabling addicts.
September 22nd, 2016 09:59
Even Keeled
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS WBL ~ Great Poem ~ full of promise and resolve ! Love the last couplet "But though my touch ~ you cannot now feel ~ We'll work things out ~ we're even keeled !" Great title ~ Please check my Poems ~ Thanks BRIAN
September 22nd, 2016 09:33
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS WBL ~ Great Poem ~ full of promise and resolve ! Love the last couplet "But though my touch ~ you cannot now feel ~ We'll work things out ~ we're even keeled !" Great title ~ Please check my Poems ~ Thanks BRIAN
September 22nd, 2016 09:33
Bite My Lip
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Althogh it is a great poem, I disagfree with biting the lip..I say to let your thoughts flow freely and you should not worry about the effects of your words upon other people. They need to learn how to deal with themselves, not shoulder their own blame upon you because of something you have spoken that they were weak enough to let themselves become negatively effected by...Cry me a fucking river, people, please!
September 20th, 2016 11:12
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Althogh it is a great poem, I disagfree with biting the lip..I say to let your thoughts flow freely and you should not worry about the effects of your words upon other people. They need to learn how to deal with themselves, not shoulder their own blame upon you because of something you have spoken that they were weak enough to let themselves become negatively effected by...Cry me a fucking river, people, please!
September 20th, 2016 11:12
Bite My Lip
Augustus said:
Very wise person. Oh, but it is so tempting, especially when you would love to knock some sense into people. My lip bleeds. Thanks.
September 20th, 2016 09:52
Augustus said:
Very wise person. Oh, but it is so tempting, especially when you would love to knock some sense into people. My lip bleeds. Thanks.
September 20th, 2016 09:52
Benefit of the Doubt
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME WBL ~ Thanks for your first poem ! It does have rhythm but would been better written in EIGHT LINES It's tough to see it their way # When you know for the real explanation etc etc. It also has rhyme which makes it easier to recite. The humour is in the description of those refuse to face the truth. Thanks BRIAN ~ please check my Poems ~ Thanks B
September 19th, 2016 18:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME WBL ~ Thanks for your first poem ! It does have rhythm but would been better written in EIGHT LINES It's tough to see it their way # When you know for the real explanation etc etc. It also has rhyme which makes it easier to recite. The humour is in the description of those refuse to face the truth. Thanks BRIAN ~ please check my Poems ~ Thanks B
September 19th, 2016 18:27
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