Comments received on poems by WriteBeLight



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Shakerite said:

Today\'s work is so innovative . Such a shame that on my phone the slide scale misses out half your words .
I did catch the majority though .
I like your work
You have a fan x

January 22nd, 2017 08:35

Dog Needs A Walk
ron parrish aka wordman said:

lol,i can`t imagine,,love the name

January 21st, 2017 16:25

Dog Needs A Walk
Christina8 said:

Wonderful poem! But I have never had a dog--still can appreciate the labor of love in dogwalking. Such a cute name \"5 miles\"!!

January 21st, 2017 10:44

Dog Needs A Walk
Augustus said:

You handle so delicately a task many of us are grossed out at, and make it fun and a normal part of life which it is. I have 2 outside dogs and live in the country with the nearest neighbor a half mile away. They take care of themselves except when we let them in on cold nights.

January 21st, 2017 10:26

Dog Needs A Walk
Michael Edwards said:

Don\'t have a dog - I do love them, but they are such a bind especially as we travel a lot overseas but I can appreciate this poem nevertheless. And it sure is a good one

January 21st, 2017 09:39

Dog Needs A Walk
Tony36 said:

Wonderfully written and expressed Great write

January 21st, 2017 08:55

Dog Needs A Walk
Shakerite said:

Loved your use of words . Dogs are a labour of love you are right but worth the hassle☺

January 21st, 2017 08:36

Dog Needs A Walk
P.H.Rose said:

Brilliant WBL.
I love this...
And the name
5 miles is inspired !!

January 21st, 2017 06:48

The Science Of Bad Habits
Christina8 said:

Oh I loved this piece! well written too! We all have our little quirks. Personally, I seem to love blowing off the gym as of late. Great job on this wonderful write!!

January 20th, 2017 17:58

The Science Of Bad Habits
kevin browne said:

seems very chaotic yet brilliantly constructed. love it WriteBeLight.

January 20th, 2017 15:06

The Science Of Bad Habits
Fay Slimm. said:

Reading this raised a big smile as thinking I too prefer to go barefoot in the most outrageous places. Great fun-poem.

January 20th, 2017 14:38

The Science Of Bad Habits
ron parrish aka wordman said:

great poem,great image

January 20th, 2017 09:42

The Science Of Bad Habits
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed Great write

January 20th, 2017 09:17

The Science Of Bad Habits
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

EINSTEIN HE SAY ~ All bad habits are relative ! Yours BRIAN Please check my latest set of Haiku ~ Thanks B

January 20th, 2017 08:23

The Science Of Bad Habits
Michael Edwards said:

Great humour - and a great original piece.

January 20th, 2017 07:57

The Science Of Bad Habits
P.H.Rose said:

I love this WBL.
Very very good,
Well done !!!!!
I\'m no genius
But you could
Write a trilogy of
Books of my bad
Habits and weird
Things I do...
One is I have to
Put the knives
In the draw last
When drying the
Cutlery ... Go figure..

January 20th, 2017 07:09

Meet The Elephant
P.H.Rose said:

Ha ha...love this..
Bloody good job..
Well done..

January 19th, 2017 17:35

The Sum Of Three
Sefrin said:

This is an astonishing read. Splendid work! You shine a great light in a dreary time with your words.

January 19th, 2017 14:59

Meet The Elephant
Christina8 said:

Very nice poem with a cute story. As embarassing as it is I think I would pull him aside and tell him. He\'s probably like my teen and dresses in the dark! LOL. Another great write!

January 19th, 2017 14:23

Meet The Elephant
Tony36 said:

LOL! great write

January 19th, 2017 14:22

Meet The Elephant
Augustus said:

I went to get x-rays a few weeks ago and wore a new undershirt to match the shirt I wore. After a test shot the tech came out and asked me to check my pockets and shirt. The tags on the undershirt were still there. How I did not feel or see them I did not know. Nice office humor story. I think it\'s best to tell the person. Ladies sometimes walk out the restroom with toilet paper hanging out the back of their dress. It is embarrassing for me as well as them but i figure it is best to mention it discretely.

January 19th, 2017 11:50

Meet The Elephant
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks HONEY great story ~ great poem ~ Pachyderm in the Parlour ! I worked with a guy who wore his shirt \"back to front\" with the tie hanging down the back ! MOOR EHT NI TNAHPELE ! Thanks for sharing ~ great poem ~ replete with rhyme & rhythm ~ BRIAN

January 19th, 2017 10:11

Meet The Elephant
Angel~Wings said:

Haha

January 19th, 2017 08:15

Meet The Elephant
WriteBeLight said:

Thanks Kat. It was funny when this happened. I guess he has done this in the past. I am thinking he gets dressed in the dark :) Thanks for the comment.

January 19th, 2017 06:43

The Sum Of Three
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

AMEN SISTER ~ Thanks for reminding us of the importance of the TRINITY (Father ~ Son ~ Holy Spirit) when we pray ! We pray in the SPIRIT (who indwells us) through the Mediator the SON (the Lord Jesus Christ) to God the Father who hears and answers all our Prayers. It is the same with Scripture ~ It\'s is the Word of God the Father ~ inspired by the Holy Spirit and its great subject is the SON (Jesus Christ) concealed in the OLD Testament and revealed in the NEW ~ AMEN. Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN

January 18th, 2017 18:38

The Sum Of Three
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

Beautifully done!

January 18th, 2017 15:22

The Sum Of Three
Fay Slimm. said:

The victims of world disorder are listed so carefully in your verse and reading the lines shows much compassion for the many who need our prayers. A lovely read.

January 18th, 2017 13:57

The Sum Of Three
Augustus said:

Kat said it. Brilliant and I would add beautiful.

January 18th, 2017 13:33

The Sum Of Three
Tony36 said:

Beautifully crafted and expressed. A joy to read

January 18th, 2017 11:41

The Sum Of Three
Michael Edwards said:

Beautifully crafted and even though I am not a Christian I really enjoyed the sentiments so well expressed.

January 18th, 2017 11:02



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