Comments received on poems by WriteBeLight
There\'s Nothing In My Poem
Augustus said:
That\'s a lot about nothing. Love it. One I remember from Porky and Bess-- the song, \"I got plenty of nothing--- and nothings plenty for me.\" P.S. Still working on something positive for a poem.
December 1st, 2016 21:59
Augustus said:
That\'s a lot about nothing. Love it. One I remember from Porky and Bess-- the song, \"I got plenty of nothing--- and nothings plenty for me.\" P.S. Still working on something positive for a poem.
December 1st, 2016 21:59
There\'s Nothing In My Poem
Christina8 said:
Very clever! Great job writing about nothing. lol --Christina
December 1st, 2016 14:51
Christina8 said:
Very clever! Great job writing about nothing. lol --Christina
December 1st, 2016 14:51
There\'s Nothing In My Poem
Daniel said:
Brilliant and clever, it was a lot of fun to read!
December 1st, 2016 12:58
Daniel said:
Brilliant and clever, it was a lot of fun to read!
December 1st, 2016 12:58
There\'s Nothing In My Poem
willyweed said:
Nothing to see here! I like it. ww
December 1st, 2016 10:46
willyweed said:
Nothing to see here! I like it. ww
December 1st, 2016 10:46
No Cell Zone
ron parrish aka wordman said:
i can relate to this,people with their faces in a phone,texting,taking selfies lol
November 30th, 2016 22:41
ron parrish aka wordman said:
i can relate to this,people with their faces in a phone,texting,taking selfies lol
November 30th, 2016 22:41
No Cell Zone
Tony36 said:
This is a huge problem today. Sometimes I think these people lead very sad lives, if they are on the phone so much. problem is it seams to be getting worse with every new generation
November 30th, 2016 14:06
Tony36 said:
This is a huge problem today. Sometimes I think these people lead very sad lives, if they are on the phone so much. problem is it seams to be getting worse with every new generation
November 30th, 2016 14:06
No Cell Zone
Christina8 said:
This is wonderful and filled with insight. So many accidents could be avoided if people would just put down their phones. Thanks for writing this!
November 30th, 2016 08:03
Christina8 said:
This is wonderful and filled with insight. So many accidents could be avoided if people would just put down their phones. Thanks for writing this!
November 30th, 2016 08:03
No Cell Zone
willyweed said:
if smart phones were free I still would not own one. smart phones make people stupid. nice work on this gem of a poem.
November 30th, 2016 07:13
willyweed said:
if smart phones were free I still would not own one. smart phones make people stupid. nice work on this gem of a poem.
November 30th, 2016 07:13
No Cell Zone
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
This is awesome...I HATE people who have their faces in their phones...and I write about my disgust for technology all the time ...so I really enjoyed reading this piece..great work..
November 30th, 2016 06:33
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
This is awesome...I HATE people who have their faces in their phones...and I write about my disgust for technology all the time ...so I really enjoyed reading this piece..great work..
November 30th, 2016 06:33
Arm Wrestle
Liam Lawless said:
Amazing poem. I love how you commented on the duality of human nature
November 29th, 2016 16:38
Liam Lawless said:
Amazing poem. I love how you commented on the duality of human nature
November 29th, 2016 16:38
Arm Wrestle
Augustus said:
Sometimes a kick in the seat works better.i love your poetry about the workplace, although this could be a family member.
November 29th, 2016 13:32
Augustus said:
Sometimes a kick in the seat works better.i love your poetry about the workplace, although this could be a family member.
November 29th, 2016 13:32
Arm Wrestle
Christina8 said:
Very cool poem. I like the last stanza where it sums it up and you call upon Will Power. \"dudes got plenty\". Love it!-Christina
November 29th, 2016 11:51
Christina8 said:
Very cool poem. I like the last stanza where it sums it up and you call upon Will Power. \"dudes got plenty\". Love it!-Christina
November 29th, 2016 11:51
Savvy Wanted
Augustus said:
I had the naive notion that when I finished school that the learning process stoped. There was no further need for more knowledge. We continue to learn and teach throughout our lives. Often we change careers. Brightly done.
November 28th, 2016 15:06
Augustus said:
I had the naive notion that when I finished school that the learning process stoped. There was no further need for more knowledge. We continue to learn and teach throughout our lives. Often we change careers. Brightly done.
November 28th, 2016 15:06
Savvy Wanted
Christina8 said:
I was just going to call you astute and then there it was in the last line! ha ha. Very nice poem. Enjoyed reading!
November 28th, 2016 14:10
Christina8 said:
I was just going to call you astute and then there it was in the last line! ha ha. Very nice poem. Enjoyed reading!
November 28th, 2016 14:10
Snap, Crackle and Pop
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
EH BY GUM ~ WBL ~ THAT WERE A DROLL ONE ! Yours in a Gummy Bubble or should that be a Bummy Gubble ~ BRIAN lmso !
November 27th, 2016 11:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
EH BY GUM ~ WBL ~ THAT WERE A DROLL ONE ! Yours in a Gummy Bubble or should that be a Bummy Gubble ~ BRIAN lmso !
November 27th, 2016 11:53
Snap, Crackle and Pop
Christina8 said:
Well of all the gum I\'ve swallowed, THAT never happened. LOL, Love your funny videos.
November 27th, 2016 11:21
Christina8 said:
Well of all the gum I\'ve swallowed, THAT never happened. LOL, Love your funny videos.
November 27th, 2016 11:21
Snap, Crackle and Pop
gelyn said:
I like this...this is so funny...
great write
Gel
November 27th, 2016 09:17
gelyn said:
I like this...this is so funny...
great write
Gel
November 27th, 2016 09:17
The Shopping Carts and the Zodiac
Christina8 said:
This is a really great poem! i think everytime we go to eat at the chinese restaurant we are all reading the placemats. What a fun poem!
November 26th, 2016 12:19
Christina8 said:
This is a really great poem! i think everytime we go to eat at the chinese restaurant we are all reading the placemats. What a fun poem!
November 26th, 2016 12:19
The Shopping Carts and the Zodiac
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
I am a dragon..with fire as my element....I definitely am complex...I like this a lot...it was something different..
November 26th, 2016 11:02
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
I am a dragon..with fire as my element....I definitely am complex...I like this a lot...it was something different..
November 26th, 2016 11:02
The Shopping Carts and the Zodiac
WriteBeLight said:
Thanks again. I think those zodiac placemats are a riot and great conversation while you\'re waiting for your food. Thanks for reading :-)
November 26th, 2016 08:54
WriteBeLight said:
Thanks again. I think those zodiac placemats are a riot and great conversation while you\'re waiting for your food. Thanks for reading :-)
November 26th, 2016 08:54
The Shopping Carts and the Zodiac
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS WBL ~ Great analogies ~ its not only in the Hypermarket ! We meet them all at Home in College in the Office ~ BUT ~ especially in the CHURCH ~ of necessity \"All Human Life is there\" Thanks for sharing BRIAN
November 26th, 2016 08:33
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS WBL ~ Great analogies ~ its not only in the Hypermarket ! We meet them all at Home in College in the Office ~ BUT ~ especially in the CHURCH ~ of necessity \"All Human Life is there\" Thanks for sharing BRIAN
November 26th, 2016 08:33
Terms and Conditions
Christina8 said:
Terms and conditions was a great presentation. I suppose they are just necessary for our society. Even our pets like you said who love us unconditionally.
November 25th, 2016 10:57
Christina8 said:
Terms and conditions was a great presentation. I suppose they are just necessary for our society. Even our pets like you said who love us unconditionally.
November 25th, 2016 10:57
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