Comments received on poems by WriteBeLight



Stuck in the Mud
Augustus said:

I take it you are still dealing with the slacker. I hope this is not a civil service job. There it takes more than an act of congress to get them to leave. Think perhaps this person can be promoted to another department?

October 26th, 2016 15:16

Stuck in the Mud
Tony36 said:

Great write

October 26th, 2016 08:01

Fear of Flying
Augustus said:

Surprising how common that is. Nicely done.

October 25th, 2016 11:00

Fear of Flying
Tony36 said:

Love it

October 25th, 2016 08:31

Fun With A Hypochondriac
Augustus said:

P.S. I finally figured out what was causing the poor quality of my YouTube videos. I failed to notice the HD option for uploading. I was going with standard. Tomorrow I\'ll have another.

October 24th, 2016 11:55

Fun With A Hypochondriac
Augustus said:

I had a mother in law like that at one time. Funny and sad at the same time. Enjoyed.

October 24th, 2016 11:51

Fun With A Hypochondriac
Tony36 said:

Wonderful

October 24th, 2016 09:16

Bowser Needs a Bath
Augustus said:

Cheers!

October 23rd, 2016 11:48

Bowser Needs a Bath
willyweed said:

Oh I love children stories and this one is cool! I have written some its my fav kind of work. You Your good! ww

October 23rd, 2016 11:28

Runny Nose
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Wow a video poem show! This site is more advanced and tech aware and u are creative since I don\'t tink many could do what u did here. Enjoyed yor well rhymed poem here, flows swell and fine tips for runny noses, I tink I\'m almost always having tissues n nasal probs like that so I could relate. Great humor too here so kudos for he effort.

Pls do check out my poem too. I\'m a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and acknowledged for it elsewhere until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.

October 23rd, 2016 08:08

The Piano
Tony36 said:

Wonderful poem

October 22nd, 2016 15:54

The Piano
Augustus said:

I can relate. For years and years I would try to learn both piano and guitar, practicing for a few weeks, then dropping it for months, years. Loved the piano background.

October 22nd, 2016 11:33

The Piano
willyweed said:

very nice and a bit different.
I like it. ww

October 22nd, 2016 09:16

Runny Nose
Tony36 said:

Love it

October 20th, 2016 15:32

Runny Nose
Augustus said:

I like the part about thinking and drinking.

October 20th, 2016 14:03

Snapshots
Tony36 said:

Love it

October 17th, 2016 10:14

Snapshots
Augustus said:

Family is soooo important. We often forget how important when we are absorbed with petty things. Some in those family pictures are no longer with us. I always look forward to your poetry when I see your name as I know I am in for a treat.

October 17th, 2016 08:15

Worker Bees and Drones
Kash13 said:

This is nice. I like it.

October 16th, 2016 09:36

Worker Bees and Drones
Augustus said:

One of my pet peeves. Another is they Procreate----big time. Nicely done.

October 15th, 2016 11:52

Egg On Your Face
Tony36 said:

Great write

October 14th, 2016 08:22

Egg On Your Face
Augustus said:

And my foot in my mouth. Thanks.

October 14th, 2016 08:16

Key to Success
Luis_Armamdo said:

We all know of someone who took the short way to success. But there something to be proud of when you actually earn it.

October 13th, 2016 21:32

Key to Success
WriteBeLight said:

Yes, bling. I agree. I am sure attorneys have no problem with that word 😎

October 13th, 2016 18:46

Key to Success
Augustus said:

Amazing what an attorney can do for you these days. Huh, heh.
Bling is a new word for me. Thanks.


October 13th, 2016 18:18

Habitual Rituals
Tony36 said:

Great write

October 12th, 2016 08:39

If People Were Ring Tones
Tony36 said:

Awesome Love it, great write

October 11th, 2016 14:12

If People Were Ring Tones
Augustus said:

So clever with both story and the sounds that fit the personalities.

October 11th, 2016 08:44

Sympathy Card
Jeff said:

You did a great job on this one...excellent write

October 8th, 2016 06:16

Sympathy Card
Tony36 said:

Awesome and beautiful

October 7th, 2016 13:55

Sympathy Card
Augustus said:

What a beautiful way to portray a dilemma many of us face, and all the thoughts that run through our minds. Am I a "hypocrite"? I was actually glad when you got "fired" because you did a lousy job. Yet we have both lost our dads and that is serious stuff. Love it.

October 7th, 2016 08:46



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