Comments received on poems by WriteBeLight



An Active Ass
Christina8 said:

Very cute poem! Love it! :-)--Christina

December 9th, 2016 10:29

An Active Ass
Quemis said:

haha. XD

December 9th, 2016 10:27

An Active Ass
Tony36 said:

We have a donkey on our farm. Great write

December 9th, 2016 09:42

An Active Ass
P.H.Rose said:

I absolutely love this poem.
Very funny, right up my street
Well done as per WBL...

December 9th, 2016 09:01

Thanks For Not Sharing
gelyn said:

A well penned piece.... I smell irritation here with that person. ......I chuckle a little and my eyebrows took an inch high. ...


Fabulous write

Gel

December 8th, 2016 20:41

Thanks For Not Sharing
Augustus said:

Unfortunately, she may be able to prove with absences, etc. that she is being discrimated against under the Americans with disabilities act which includes alcoholism. You\'ll settle out of court to save trial costs and legal fees. Merry Christmas. But I agree, she a royal pain in the tush.

December 8th, 2016 12:27

Thanks For Not Sharing
Christina8 said:

Very nice poem! I don\'t think I\'ve ever worked with someone who complained that much! But you did write an excellent poem.

December 8th, 2016 12:02

Thanks For Not Sharing
P.H.Rose said:

Ha ha I really like this poem WBL
She reminds me of an awful lot of people, my nephew being one of them.. how can a 20 year old have stones..... well done !!

December 8th, 2016 10:54

Thanks For Not Sharing
WriteBeLight said:

She is really a lost cause I\'m afraid. Thanks so much for the comment😄Between you and me we all would like to see her find another job.😁

December 8th, 2016 07:05

The Label Sticks, Wear It
Tony36 said:

Awesome Awesome Awesome write

December 7th, 2016 13:53

The Label Sticks, Wear It
Christina8 said:

You are so talented! This is a really great poem. I think all of us have had to work with a name caller before and this was really well put.--Christina

December 7th, 2016 12:31

When The Snow Blows
Daniel said:

A very humorous poem, well written with great flow. I could almost see myself behind that wheel haha!

December 6th, 2016 12:47

When The Snow Blows
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

December 6th, 2016 12:32

When The Snow Blows
Christina8 said:

Very good, WBL! This snow does BLOW! But I was fortunate enough not to see it today. Loved your poem!!

December 6th, 2016 10:48

Spine Crime
Augustus said:

I had a locker at school. In some areas outlawed today due to the drug culture.
There are scientific studies supporting less or no homework. Nice imagery.

December 5th, 2016 23:17

Spine Crime
WriteBeLight said:

Thanks so much! I was just watching an American\'s Funniest Home Videos yesterday and there was a clip about a small little girl falling down from the weight of her knapsack AND a bag she had to carry. It got a lot of laughs, but I did not think it was funny at all. Sorry about your bad back...:( Thanks for the comment. Hope in some way it can get better.

December 5th, 2016 20:00

Spine Crime
P.H.Rose said:

WBL I love this poem,
Brilliant, very well written.
Flows really well.
A topic that not many
People would notice.
I have a very bad back
But I\'m 55 and not 15.
Well done !!!!!

December 5th, 2016 17:20

Spine Crime
Tony36 said:

It seems that those backpacks kids carry in school now, just get heavier and heavier. Great write

December 5th, 2016 14:34

Spine Crime
Christina8 said:

Our school district is lucky enough to hand out ipads to do homework on. I believe the only book the kids take home is math and their paper supplies, etc. Much better now. Very nice poem, I was trodden down with books when I went to school.

December 5th, 2016 10:13

Spine Crime
gelyn said:

very well said...

But, the appearance of just fine,

Was not fine at all to me.

I was wondering by day’s end,

How much pain his back feels?

^^^^
my fav. stanza I can feel feel how his back ached...

Gel

December 5th, 2016 07:35

Sick Day
Augustus said:

This was so realistic and expertly said.

December 4th, 2016 19:39

Vanity Plate
Augustus said:

Hello Living Large! This is so neat. Years ago I was in Rome and SPQR is all over. Senātus Populus que Rōmānus refering to the ancient government. That always fascinated me as an idea for a plate. (Mom is Italian ) p.s. Have rough draft of happy poem. Hugs.

December 4th, 2016 18:44

Vanity Plate
Christina8 said:

Those were funny plates! XXXL on a mini cooper and the driver you say? LOL Thanks for another great show.

December 4th, 2016 10:55

Sick Day
P.H.Rose said:

Ha ha, bloody good poem WBL..
Brilliant....

December 3rd, 2016 16:14

Sick Day
notapoet said:

As I read your wonderful piece I\'ts 45deg and raining here so it put me in the perfect mood to enjoy it even more :) Glad you\'re doing well and thanks for sharing. NAP

December 3rd, 2016 11:12

Sick Day
Christina8 said:

I really do hope that nasty bug is gone and you are back to doing what you love! I always love reading your poetry. Great poem.--Christina

December 3rd, 2016 10:07

I\'m Trapped
P.H.Rose said:

Bloody good poem WBL, very well done.... I had a bad bug a few months ago, it\'s been the first time I\'ve been in the 15stone bracket, unfortunately I put it back on and some when I got better....

December 2nd, 2016 17:36

I\'m Trapped
Tony36 said:

Great write, get better soon

December 2nd, 2016 12:55

I\'m Trapped
Christina8 said:

Oh there\'s nothing worse than a stomach bug! I hope you feel well soon WBL!! Great poem!

December 2nd, 2016 11:30

I\'m Trapped
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Oopsy revenge of the bugs eh? What a tongue in cheek poem n though. Creative super poem, get well soon since we need your fantastic poems here. Esp liked the stanza where u rhymed recoup with soup\'. Kudos poet.
Nice o read from u again, quick recovery wishes.

December 2nd, 2016 07:43



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