Comments received on poems by WriteBeLight
Part of the Heart of a Family
Augustus said:
Our two dogs just got their Christmas Collars, a tradition my wife started. Neat poem.
December 16th, 2016 14:59
Augustus said:
Our two dogs just got their Christmas Collars, a tradition my wife started. Neat poem.
December 16th, 2016 14:59
Part of the Heart of a Family
Daniel said:
I still think about my dog Bonnie from when I was a kid, and I still miss her! Great write!
December 16th, 2016 10:25
Daniel said:
I still think about my dog Bonnie from when I was a kid, and I still miss her! Great write!
December 16th, 2016 10:25
Part of the Heart of a Family
Christina8 said:
Very nice poem. I remember the reaction I had once to a hamster dying when I was about 18. It was horrible. Had it forever. Can you imagine? Now I just keep to fish. lol Very good topic.
December 16th, 2016 08:50
Christina8 said:
Very nice poem. I remember the reaction I had once to a hamster dying when I was about 18. It was horrible. Had it forever. Can you imagine? Now I just keep to fish. lol Very good topic.
December 16th, 2016 08:50
Part of the Heart of a Family
Tony36 said:
Wonderful tribute to our furry friends
December 16th, 2016 08:29
Tony36 said:
Wonderful tribute to our furry friends
December 16th, 2016 08:29
Part of the Heart of a Family
SabreLi said:
Our pets are our family, too! It\'s great to see poetry dedicated to them; my cat JuJu is my baby! She is always there for me; always has been silent and strong since the day I adopted her and will be, I know, until death parts us. Lovely work; very uplifting; happy Christmas to all the pets out there keeping us strong and making us happy! xx
December 16th, 2016 06:32
SabreLi said:
Our pets are our family, too! It\'s great to see poetry dedicated to them; my cat JuJu is my baby! She is always there for me; always has been silent and strong since the day I adopted her and will be, I know, until death parts us. Lovely work; very uplifting; happy Christmas to all the pets out there keeping us strong and making us happy! xx
December 16th, 2016 06:32
Invasion Of The Boring Guy
Daniel said:
I think we all can relate to this poem, great write!
December 15th, 2016 10:16
Daniel said:
I think we all can relate to this poem, great write!
December 15th, 2016 10:16
The 12 Laws Plus 1 Rule
SabreLi said:
Love the nods to Ralph Waldo Emerson; and a great uplifting piece this is. Many can learn lessons from reading this marvellous work (and some of the comments, too!). Great contribution, a pleasure to read! xx
December 15th, 2016 09:19
SabreLi said:
Love the nods to Ralph Waldo Emerson; and a great uplifting piece this is. Many can learn lessons from reading this marvellous work (and some of the comments, too!). Great contribution, a pleasure to read! xx
December 15th, 2016 09:19
Prescription For The Symptoms
SabreLi said:
These days both patients and doctors are far too quick to buy or prescribe medication for the slightest thing, calling them \'ailments\', when in actual fact they are natural conditions most of us face just through the sheer pleasure of living life! People are far too quick to blame things on physical or psychological conditions instead of taking responsibility for them. Great theme! xx
December 15th, 2016 09:11
SabreLi said:
These days both patients and doctors are far too quick to buy or prescribe medication for the slightest thing, calling them \'ailments\', when in actual fact they are natural conditions most of us face just through the sheer pleasure of living life! People are far too quick to blame things on physical or psychological conditions instead of taking responsibility for them. Great theme! xx
December 15th, 2016 09:11
Spies in Red Felt: Effen Elves
SabreLi said:
I totally agree with this! Not a fan of elf on the shelf myself; such a horrific waste of resources when there are those with nothing over the festive period. I also agree that it doesn\'t teach them the best; I\'ve seen young recipients acting up and blaming said elf; not to mention conditioning the young to accept surveillance. A great one! xx
December 15th, 2016 08:38
SabreLi said:
I totally agree with this! Not a fan of elf on the shelf myself; such a horrific waste of resources when there are those with nothing over the festive period. I also agree that it doesn\'t teach them the best; I\'ve seen young recipients acting up and blaming said elf; not to mention conditioning the young to accept surveillance. A great one! xx
December 15th, 2016 08:38
Invasion Of The Boring Guy
Christina8 said:
Very good poem!!. Too bad that happened! And too bad he didn\'t get the hint sooner. Very well written story.
December 15th, 2016 07:11
Christina8 said:
Very good poem!!. Too bad that happened! And too bad he didn\'t get the hint sooner. Very well written story.
December 15th, 2016 07:11
Spies in Red Felt: Effen Elves
Augustus said:
we as a people cannot be trusted and as we gradually turn our freedoms over to the government spying will become necessary to protect the rights of others. Especially the less fortunate. I suggest comrade WBL that the early acceptance of spying on others by youth is necessary. Should you continue to criticize spying you may be selected for a 2 year stay in a re-learning center.
December 14th, 2016 18:00
Augustus said:
we as a people cannot be trusted and as we gradually turn our freedoms over to the government spying will become necessary to protect the rights of others. Especially the less fortunate. I suggest comrade WBL that the early acceptance of spying on others by youth is necessary. Should you continue to criticize spying you may be selected for a 2 year stay in a re-learning center.
December 14th, 2016 18:00
Spies in Red Felt: Effen Elves
Quemis said:
Anyone who argues for the gentler touch is ok in my books, - even if they are just muscle for santa. Haha.
: P
December 14th, 2016 11:35
Quemis said:
Anyone who argues for the gentler touch is ok in my books, - even if they are just muscle for santa. Haha.
: P
December 14th, 2016 11:35
Prescription For The Symptoms
Christina8 said:
Oh, I love this one. Have you ever had a prescription that said \"may cause death?\"(I\'ve seen them on TV) The list of side effects I find preposterous I can\'t even list here. You really hit the nail on the head.My depression med says it may cause depression. HA I hope you don\'t have an earache. Those are miserable. Great job!!!
December 13th, 2016 11:42
Christina8 said:
Oh, I love this one. Have you ever had a prescription that said \"may cause death?\"(I\'ve seen them on TV) The list of side effects I find preposterous I can\'t even list here. You really hit the nail on the head.My depression med says it may cause depression. HA I hope you don\'t have an earache. Those are miserable. Great job!!!
December 13th, 2016 11:42
The 12 Laws Plus 1 Rule
illia said:
Fantastic read. The laws are very strange bedfellows with a lot of head ache inbetween the law of attraction wonderfully complex yet stupidly easy. Wouldn\'t you say. Brilliant read thankyou pipa x
December 12th, 2016 16:51
illia said:
Fantastic read. The laws are very strange bedfellows with a lot of head ache inbetween the law of attraction wonderfully complex yet stupidly easy. Wouldn\'t you say. Brilliant read thankyou pipa x
December 12th, 2016 16:51
The 12 Laws Plus 1 Rule
illia said:
Fantastic read. The laws are very strange bedfellows with a lot of head ache inbetween the law of attraction wonderfully complex yet stupidly easy. Wouldn\'t you say. Brilliant read thankyou pipa x
December 12th, 2016 16:50
illia said:
Fantastic read. The laws are very strange bedfellows with a lot of head ache inbetween the law of attraction wonderfully complex yet stupidly easy. Wouldn\'t you say. Brilliant read thankyou pipa x
December 12th, 2016 16:50
The 12 Laws Plus 1 Rule
P.H.Rose said:
Very good WBL
Very good indeed...
My personal favourite
Is the law of relativity
Everything you do has
An equal and opposite
Effect.... or something
Like that....
December 12th, 2016 15:41
P.H.Rose said:
Very good WBL
Very good indeed...
My personal favourite
Is the law of relativity
Everything you do has
An equal and opposite
Effect.... or something
Like that....
December 12th, 2016 15:41
The 12 Laws Plus 1 Rule
Christina8 said:
I have a few of my own fav laws that I like most. You did a really good job with this. I also like Ralph Waldo Emerson quotes. Great job!
December 12th, 2016 10:18
Christina8 said:
I have a few of my own fav laws that I like most. You did a really good job with this. I also like Ralph Waldo Emerson quotes. Great job!
December 12th, 2016 10:18
The 12 Laws Plus 1 Rule
gelyn said:
I love this poem. .. actually and seriously I have 3 laws I like most
Trivia
*law of attraction- from king Solomon and rewrite by Mr. Charles Hannel. .1866-1949.and this book is priceless. .The book name is\" Master Key System \"..only 100 copies produced and only rich people have the copy..and they never reprint it they just passed it to their family member...
1912 the royal families got the copy ..after 40 years Bill gates have his own copy...
*law of forgiveness- the more you give triple you receive. ..why rich people have their own orphanage or foundation? because giving is receiving. ...
*Law of tighting- giving you\'re 10% income to the the organization you are in or church. ..The window of heaven will be open for you. .. For the blessings coming from God...
Yout poem is really great. ..love every stanza and refreshing
well done
Gel
December 12th, 2016 07:53
gelyn said:
I love this poem. .. actually and seriously I have 3 laws I like most
Trivia
*law of attraction- from king Solomon and rewrite by Mr. Charles Hannel. .1866-1949.and this book is priceless. .The book name is\" Master Key System \"..only 100 copies produced and only rich people have the copy..and they never reprint it they just passed it to their family member...
1912 the royal families got the copy ..after 40 years Bill gates have his own copy...
*law of forgiveness- the more you give triple you receive. ..why rich people have their own orphanage or foundation? because giving is receiving. ...
*Law of tighting- giving you\'re 10% income to the the organization you are in or church. ..The window of heaven will be open for you. .. For the blessings coming from God...
Yout poem is really great. ..love every stanza and refreshing
well done
Gel
December 12th, 2016 07:53
Grave Cite
P.H.Rose said:
All I\'ll say is simply this.
I\'m making it one of my
favourites. This my friend
Is such a good poem on
Every level...
And a \"Bloody well done\", to you..
December 11th, 2016 12:34
P.H.Rose said:
All I\'ll say is simply this.
I\'m making it one of my
favourites. This my friend
Is such a good poem on
Every level...
And a \"Bloody well done\", to you..
December 11th, 2016 12:34
Grave Cite
Daniel said:
What an amazing positive piece about a subject that can be so morbid! I love it\'s message.
December 11th, 2016 11:16
Daniel said:
What an amazing positive piece about a subject that can be so morbid! I love it\'s message.
December 11th, 2016 11:16
Grave Cite
SabreLi said:
Wow, I love this piece! I am constantly writing about death in some form or another, but it is not a subject to be feared as you can make something beautiful out of it - just as you have done here! Amazing, this isn\'t your usual style but is certainly my favourite of yours, I love the rhyme and the scenery you depict. I love how you refer to the grave as a \'parking space\' - nothing need be seen as permanent. Great stuff! :D xx
December 11th, 2016 08:27
SabreLi said:
Wow, I love this piece! I am constantly writing about death in some form or another, but it is not a subject to be feared as you can make something beautiful out of it - just as you have done here! Amazing, this isn\'t your usual style but is certainly my favourite of yours, I love the rhyme and the scenery you depict. I love how you refer to the grave as a \'parking space\' - nothing need be seen as permanent. Great stuff! :D xx
December 11th, 2016 08:27
Cough and Cold
Augustus said:
P.S. That would make a great TV public service ad.
December 10th, 2016 23:26
Augustus said:
P.S. That would make a great TV public service ad.
December 10th, 2016 23:26
Cough and Cold
Augustus said:
One of my pet peeves is snot nose rug rats in the grocery touching all of the fruit and veggies. Nicely done.
December 10th, 2016 23:25
Augustus said:
One of my pet peeves is snot nose rug rats in the grocery touching all of the fruit and veggies. Nicely done.
December 10th, 2016 23:25
Cough and Cold
Christina8 said:
Very good presentation WBL! Not too much to ask people to cover their mouths when they cough and sneeze!
December 10th, 2016 10:45
Christina8 said:
Very good presentation WBL! Not too much to ask people to cover their mouths when they cough and sneeze!
December 10th, 2016 10:45
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