Comments received on poems by Christina8



An Extraordinary Afternoon
Goldfinch60 said:

Our special places in nature are so wonderful.

July 27th, 2019 00:36

An Extraordinary Afternoon
Neville said:

well worth the wait .. it seems you did have a delightful afternoon..
I can almost feel the gentle warmth of the sun, a light breeze and the tickle of those minnows....... that\'s nature & poetry for ya folks.... Nice one Christina..... N

July 27th, 2019 00:19

Thoughts on love
Neville said:

a very impressive and original analysis/poem.. much liked by me.... N

July 26th, 2019 23:47

Waking Gently
Silkseduction said:

Beautiful poetry- looking forward to reading more of your work.



July 26th, 2019 15:37

Waking Gently
Suresh said:

Yawning dawn nudges us day creatures to wake-
- and take in a deep breath, as have your words

July 26th, 2019 11:44

Waking Gently
Neville said:

I\'m with Goldfinch60 on this & all the way.....

July 26th, 2019 06:13

Waking Gently
Poetic Dan said:

Vibrant and beautiful bask in your glorious glow like the words you wrote.
Thank you

July 26th, 2019 02:56

Waking Gently
orchidee said:

A fine write Christina. Cooeeee - you awake? My singing wake ya up?! lol.

July 26th, 2019 01:39

Waking Gently
dusk arising said:

Here in U.K. we are having a heat wave with highest ever recorded temperatures (plse tell Mr Trump about global warming) and sadly people are taking to the waters and drowning.... even in London.

Please be careful in the living waters today.

A nice dawnings picture to contrast my dusk piece today.

July 26th, 2019 01:07

Waking Gently
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write Christina, I do hope it is not your last free verse.

July 26th, 2019 01:06

Untarnished
Suresh said:

You have painted a landscape so serene, so desirable

July 25th, 2019 16:29

Untarnished
tepo said:

You can turn your hand to anything
Well done Christina

July 25th, 2019 13:41

Untarnished
Fay Slimm said:

With you in that heavenly field of colour and love the walk through floral aroma - great read and example of free-styl writing Christina .....

July 25th, 2019 06:22

Untarnished
Neville said:

this is very good... it is uncomplicated and has a kind of feel good factor about it that will make every reader smile............. Neville

July 25th, 2019 06:05

Untarnished
dusk arising said:

Lovely picture you create in my minds eye.

Personally i find rhyme rather limiting because it reduces my available vocabulary. Often on MPS i see pieces in which the rhyming has made a mockery of a deep subject. Far better for me to just write what i feel though i will often use rhyme, but not exclusively in a regular pattern. I guess i make up \'rules\' as i go. But each to their own, i\'m not criticising, rather i\'m sharing my personal view with you.

July 25th, 2019 04:36

Untarnished
orchidee said:

A fine Write Christina.
Aww, I tried free verse - why did they reply it\'s a load of hot air from me! heehee.
Yes, I know some places too - bit like jungles this time of year with the greenery. I battled through thorns and thistles, and near-overgrown paths - but tended by people to make them passable for all of us.

July 25th, 2019 02:31

Untarnished
Goldfinch60 said:

This works very well Christina, you took me to that beautiful place.

July 25th, 2019 01:06

Nurses--An Acrostic
Neville said:

Well constructed and essentially very true................. Neville

July 24th, 2019 14:29

Sweet Rendezvous
tepo said:

Sweet indeed

July 24th, 2019 09:32

My senses
Neville said:

it aint like this often, so thanks for reminding me that it can be.... lucky pair.... nice one.

Neville

July 24th, 2019 04:53

Sweet Rendezvous
orchidee said:

Passion? Swoon! heehee. good write Christina.

July 24th, 2019 01:47

Daddy\'s Gone
Neville said:

some people when they are gone, and for whatever reason gone, leave larger than expected holes in the lives of would be loved ones..... this is a tender, yet anguished poem well writ.... Neville

July 24th, 2019 01:42

Sweet Rendezvous
dusk arising said:

Romantic love really does take over our mind and body when it arrives. Aptly described in your words today. The pain of worry is here too.

July 24th, 2019 01:24

Sweet Rendezvous
Goldfinch60 said:

That love with the true one in your life is so wonderful, as are your words Christina.

July 24th, 2019 01:09

Sweet Rendezvous
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

HOLA CHRISTINA : Angela here 9am Wednesday here ~ First Clinic is 11am (NZ time) so leaving for work soon : its about 15 minutes by car ! A me gusta tu Poema del Amor nuevo ! It rang a big bell in relation to Brian & I : it must be AMOR VERDAD ! When Brian & I first met & kissed & found love it was so so different from anything we had experienced before : we both knew it was for NOW & FOREVER ! This is why being over 11k miles apart For over a Year is so so very hard : it makes me cry. If I didnt have RUTH and if I didnt know we will be together again in a few weeks I WOULD DIE ! B is the whole World to Me : just as *J* is the whole World to YOU (and your lovely kids of course !)

AMOR a tu y Todo tu Famillia
Tus HERMANOS Angela y Brian
๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿงก

July 23rd, 2019 15:28

Sweet Rendezvous
Neville said:

there is a certain appealing charm to this ... kinda free verse rhyme... still sexy tho....

July 23rd, 2019 14:52

Passions
Neville said:

when you said these words are of an erotic nature.. you were not kidding .... N

July 23rd, 2019 13:12

Calla Lily
Neville said:

The Calla Lily is indeed a most beautiful thing to behold.. and when spied from a secret special place , I imagine the beauty would be enhanced ... nicely penned throughout and with a covert slightly erotic flavour to it...... Neville

July 23rd, 2019 13:10

One Last Tear
Neville said:

Bring on tomorrow and start all over...

No more tears but be sure, there will be plenty more shores................ Neville

July 23rd, 2019 12:53

Everlasting Snow
Neville said:

what a wintry way with words you have my dear ... and what a wonderful way to wemember winter too say\'s I..... Neville

July 23rd, 2019 02:07



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