Comments received on poems by Christina8



Waking Gently
dusk arising said:

Here in U.K. we are having a heat wave with highest ever recorded temperatures (plse tell Mr Trump about global warming) and sadly people are taking to the waters and drowning.... even in London.

Please be careful in the living waters today.

A nice dawnings picture to contrast my dusk piece today.

July 26th, 2019 01:07

Waking Gently
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write Christina, I do hope it is not your last free verse.

July 26th, 2019 01:06

Untarnished
Suresh said:

You have painted a landscape so serene, so desirable

July 25th, 2019 16:29

Untarnished
Fay Slimm said:

With you in that heavenly field of colour and love the walk through floral aroma - great read and example of free-styl writing Christina .....

July 25th, 2019 06:22

Untarnished
Neville said:

this is very good... it is uncomplicated and has a kind of feel good factor about it that will make every reader smile............. Neville

July 25th, 2019 06:05

Untarnished
dusk arising said:

Lovely picture you create in my minds eye.

Personally i find rhyme rather limiting because it reduces my available vocabulary. Often on MPS i see pieces in which the rhyming has made a mockery of a deep subject. Far better for me to just write what i feel though i will often use rhyme, but not exclusively in a regular pattern. I guess i make up \'rules\' as i go. But each to their own, i\'m not criticising, rather i\'m sharing my personal view with you.

July 25th, 2019 04:36

Untarnished
orchidee said:

A fine Write Christina.
Aww, I tried free verse - why did they reply it\'s a load of hot air from me! heehee.
Yes, I know some places too - bit like jungles this time of year with the greenery. I battled through thorns and thistles, and near-overgrown paths - but tended by people to make them passable for all of us.

July 25th, 2019 02:31

Untarnished
Goldfinch60 said:

This works very well Christina, you took me to that beautiful place.

July 25th, 2019 01:06

Nurses--An Acrostic
Neville said:

Well constructed and essentially very true................. Neville

July 24th, 2019 14:29

My senses
Neville said:

it aint like this often, so thanks for reminding me that it can be.... lucky pair.... nice one.

Neville

July 24th, 2019 04:53

Sweet Rendezvous
orchidee said:

Passion? Swoon! heehee. good write Christina.

July 24th, 2019 01:47

Daddy\'s Gone
Neville said:

some people when they are gone, and for whatever reason gone, leave larger than expected holes in the lives of would be loved ones..... this is a tender, yet anguished poem well writ.... Neville

July 24th, 2019 01:42

Sweet Rendezvous
dusk arising said:

Romantic love really does take over our mind and body when it arrives. Aptly described in your words today. The pain of worry is here too.

July 24th, 2019 01:24

Sweet Rendezvous
Goldfinch60 said:

That love with the true one in your life is so wonderful, as are your words Christina.

July 24th, 2019 01:09

Sweet Rendezvous
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

HOLA CHRISTINA : Angela here 9am Wednesday here ~ First Clinic is 11am (NZ time) so leaving for work soon : its about 15 minutes by car ! A me gusta tu Poema del Amor nuevo ! It rang a big bell in relation to Brian & I : it must be AMOR VERDAD ! When Brian & I first met & kissed & found love it was so so different from anything we had experienced before : we both knew it was for NOW & FOREVER ! This is why being over 11k miles apart For over a Year is so so very hard : it makes me cry. If I didnt have RUTH and if I didnt know we will be together again in a few weeks I WOULD DIE ! B is the whole World to Me : just as *J* is the whole World to YOU (and your lovely kids of course !)

AMOR a tu y Todo tu Famillia
Tus HERMANOS Angela y Brian
๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿงก

July 23rd, 2019 15:28

Sweet Rendezvous
Neville said:

there is a certain appealing charm to this ... kinda free verse rhyme... still sexy tho....

July 23rd, 2019 14:52

Passions
Neville said:

when you said these words are of an erotic nature.. you were not kidding .... N

July 23rd, 2019 13:12

Calla Lily
Neville said:

The Calla Lily is indeed a most beautiful thing to behold.. and when spied from a secret special place , I imagine the beauty would be enhanced ... nicely penned throughout and with a covert slightly erotic flavour to it...... Neville

July 23rd, 2019 13:10

One Last Tear
Neville said:

Bring on tomorrow and start all over...

No more tears but be sure, there will be plenty more shores................ Neville

July 23rd, 2019 12:53

Everlasting Snow
Neville said:

what a wintry way with words you have my dear ... and what a wonderful way to wemember winter too say\'s I..... Neville

July 23rd, 2019 02:07

Manic Monday
Suresh said:

Torrent of ideas seem to flow just at the wrong time, and if we don\'t adhere to them, then like me, afraid to loose them forever.
But when these ideas are laid to rest, so do they lay us to deep slumber as well.

July 22nd, 2019 09:38

Manic Monday
dusk arising said:

I know where you are coming from in this. For me poetry could never be a 9 - 5 job. Rather it is a thing which attacks me and demands to be passed on.

July 22nd, 2019 06:21

Manic Monday
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE 11 pm (Monday Evening !) Always glad when Monday*s over soon be Friday !
Love the Poem : I have a MANTRA

Never refuse the MUSE
Whatever time of the day it CHUSE
Always let it light your FUSE
Never refuse the MUSE !

Blessings & Peace & Love to You & Yours
Love ANGELA & BRIAN ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก

July 22nd, 2019 04:57

Manic Monday
Neville said:

I understand the anxiety you weave throughout this fine poem ....

You must never be ashamed though.. take it from me.... Neville

July 22nd, 2019 04:34

Manic Monday
Goldfinch60 said:

Such true words, I too have this problem sometimes. It is amazing that the way the words come to me at 3 o\' clock in the morning.

July 22nd, 2019 03:24

Manic Monday
orchidee said:

A good write Christina.

July 22nd, 2019 01:28

Manic Monday
Michael Edwards said:

A common problem - and so often the ideas are ost before I put pen to paper. - fine write Christina.

July 22nd, 2019 01:14

One Last Tear
SerenWise said:

Lovely thought provoking write

July 21st, 2019 00:50

Untamed
Suresh said:

I don\'t know which other emotion, has invoked more emotion

July 19th, 2019 17:51

Untamed
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

HOLA CHRIS : Gracias por esta Poema ! There is alot of TRUTH in what you say ! My mind & Brians mind are filled with MEMORIES of PEOPLE some happy some sad ! But always & forever BRIAN will be in the forfront of my MIND and I in HIS. That is one of many proofs of TRUE LOVE : AMEN

Blessings & Love to You & Yours
Yours : Tus HERMANOS Angela & Brian
You are always on our MIND !
๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿงก

July 18th, 2019 11:10



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