Comments received on poems by Christina8



The Fall
dusk arising said:

More drama here, more punch.... in the delivery here for you today. I\'m pleased you are adventurous and exploring ways to express your poetry. This works. I hope you\'re pleased with the reception. No rules, just do what comes to you on the occasion.

July 29th, 2019 15:37

The Fall
PoeticBiscuit said:

I think you did a fabulous job, it was a really enjoyable read. Sometimes it can be fun to try things a little bit different. Especially when they turn out so good.

July 29th, 2019 12:44

The Fall
Neville said:

the strictest of rules should apply only to Catholic priests & the like... maybe surgeons too oh\' and psychotherapists..... never to poetry.... you have done good here.. very good... and because I now feel kinda good.. I shall lighten up on the surgeons... Nice one Christina.... N

July 29th, 2019 03:26

The Fall
Goldfinch60 said:

Your new experimentations with words all seem to working Christina.

July 29th, 2019 02:05

The Fall
orchidee said:

A good write Christina.

July 29th, 2019 01:47

The Fall
Michael Edwards said:

It sure works - I\'ve been away for a while and a super first read for my return.

July 29th, 2019 00:18

Break Your Heart
PoeticBiscuit said:

Simple yet powerful, and very well written.

July 28th, 2019 14:10

Break Your Heart
dusk arising said:

Tis a fact of life that more relationships fail than last. Experience enables us to accept this and realise it takes two to tango. Ending always will be a trying time no matter which side of it you find yourself upon.

Your piece clearly demonstrates how awkward it is to end a relationship with the intent of causing no pain and of course there is the lasting guilt of feeling you have hurt someone who was so nearly the right one once.

July 28th, 2019 08:32

Break Your Heart
Neville said:

But ya never forget, do ya....

this is a little peach of a poem well penned.

Neville

July 28th, 2019 04:25

Break Your Heart
Fay Slimm. said:

A heart that breaks can to an extent also heal and the humble contrition in this verse would surely help that process along - - a good reminder for us readers dear Christina.

July 28th, 2019 03:16

Break Your Heart
orchidee said:

A nice write Christina.

July 28th, 2019 01:37

Break Your Heart
Goldfinch60 said:

In our lives there are breakages within us but they can be insignificant once the true person in your life arrives.
Good write Christina.

July 28th, 2019 01:11

An Extraordinary Afternoon
GON said:

i love your style

July 27th, 2019 23:47

An Extraordinary Afternoon
Laura said:

Christina,

That extraordinary afternoon sounds divine! Experiencing nature in the manner you’ve described is dreamy!

~Laura~

July 27th, 2019 23:43

An Extraordinary Afternoon
dusk arising said:

I am envious, such happy memories you have brought to my mind with your writing today. Wonderful times, remember to re-read your work in thirty years time.... i hope it brings the days joy back for you.

July 27th, 2019 06:07

An Extraordinary Afternoon
Poetic Dan said:

Oooo I saw a dragonfly a few weeks ago, it confirmed alot to me. Glad to see we are both breaking free, loving life and to breathe.

Thank you for reminding me!

July 27th, 2019 03:55

An Extraordinary Afternoon
orchidee said:

A fine write Christina. You getting out more, as they say?!

July 27th, 2019 01:46

An Extraordinary Afternoon
Fay Slimm. said:

Your pen paints the picture of paddling with minnows so clearly I could feel my toes being tickled Christina. A perfectly lovely read.

July 27th, 2019 01:36

An Extraordinary Afternoon
Goldfinch60 said:

Our special places in nature are so wonderful.

July 27th, 2019 00:36

An Extraordinary Afternoon
Neville said:

well worth the wait .. it seems you did have a delightful afternoon..
I can almost feel the gentle warmth of the sun, a light breeze and the tickle of those minnows....... that\'s nature & poetry for ya folks.... Nice one Christina..... N

July 27th, 2019 00:19

Thoughts on love
Neville said:

a very impressive and original analysis/poem.. much liked by me.... N

July 26th, 2019 23:47

Waking Gently
Silkseduction said:

Beautiful poetry- looking forward to reading more of your work.



July 26th, 2019 15:37

Waking Gently
Suresh said:

Yawning dawn nudges us day creatures to wake-
- and take in a deep breath, as have your words

July 26th, 2019 11:44

Waking Gently
Neville said:

I\'m with Goldfinch60 on this & all the way.....

July 26th, 2019 06:13

Waking Gently
Poetic Dan said:

Vibrant and beautiful bask in your glorious glow like the words you wrote.
Thank you

July 26th, 2019 02:56

Waking Gently
orchidee said:

A fine write Christina. Cooeeee - you awake? My singing wake ya up?! lol.

July 26th, 2019 01:39

Waking Gently
dusk arising said:

Here in U.K. we are having a heat wave with highest ever recorded temperatures (plse tell Mr Trump about global warming) and sadly people are taking to the waters and drowning.... even in London.

Please be careful in the living waters today.

A nice dawnings picture to contrast my dusk piece today.

July 26th, 2019 01:07

Waking Gently
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write Christina, I do hope it is not your last free verse.

July 26th, 2019 01:06

Untarnished
Suresh said:

You have painted a landscape so serene, so desirable

July 25th, 2019 16:29

Untarnished
Fay Slimm. said:

With you in that heavenly field of colour and love the walk through floral aroma - great read and example of free-styl writing Christina .....

July 25th, 2019 06:22



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