Comments received on poems by Christina8
Our Twins
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a good write Christina, when I was first married my wife lost twins so I know about that.
Andy
April 6th, 2022 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a good write Christina, when I was first married my wife lost twins so I know about that.
Andy
April 6th, 2022 01:12
Our Twins
Crowns4Christ said:
This is so beautiful,I\'m crying, I had a miscarriage eleven years ago, thank you Christina,I have healed a little more with your beautiful words
April 5th, 2022 13:40
Crowns4Christ said:
This is so beautiful,I\'m crying, I had a miscarriage eleven years ago, thank you Christina,I have healed a little more with your beautiful words
April 5th, 2022 13:40
Our Twins
sorenbarrett said:
What a marvelous poem. Such a trying time yet to face with such a comforting thought and positive outlook, I admire that. The poem itself was wonderful in rhyme and meter and the message was inspiring.
April 5th, 2022 10:52
sorenbarrett said:
What a marvelous poem. Such a trying time yet to face with such a comforting thought and positive outlook, I admire that. The poem itself was wonderful in rhyme and meter and the message was inspiring.
April 5th, 2022 10:52
Our Twins
orchidee said:
A poignant write Christina. The mystery of those \'unborn\' yet still having life.
April 5th, 2022 10:11
orchidee said:
A poignant write Christina. The mystery of those \'unborn\' yet still having life.
April 5th, 2022 10:11
Our Twins
Rocky Lagou said:
Dear Christina, this is actually beyond words. I literally adore the way you presented this as a conversation between you and God. I wasn’t too sure what I was expecting when going into this, but I’m so so delighted to see you presented the poem this way. It’s a warm reminder that embraces you saying, “they’re okay.” Having to deal with the loss of your own children must be an agonizing pain that can’t be put into words, but to see your message of optimism in this piece is so reassuring. You’ve learned and accepted that everything in life happens for a reason, and that even though your twins may not physically be with you, they’re peacefully residing in Heavenly bliss - waiting for your tender embrace to reunite them back to you again. You’re such a strong woman Christina and this really goes to show your resilience and hope. Much love
April 5th, 2022 08:29
Rocky Lagou said:
Dear Christina, this is actually beyond words. I literally adore the way you presented this as a conversation between you and God. I wasn’t too sure what I was expecting when going into this, but I’m so so delighted to see you presented the poem this way. It’s a warm reminder that embraces you saying, “they’re okay.” Having to deal with the loss of your own children must be an agonizing pain that can’t be put into words, but to see your message of optimism in this piece is so reassuring. You’ve learned and accepted that everything in life happens for a reason, and that even though your twins may not physically be with you, they’re peacefully residing in Heavenly bliss - waiting for your tender embrace to reunite them back to you again. You’re such a strong woman Christina and this really goes to show your resilience and hope. Much love
April 5th, 2022 08:29
Our Twins
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m so sorry, dear Poet
what a horrendous experience
that must be..
but this is the utility, of having a belief system
or an anchoring faith, in your life
that I genuinely champion...
devoid of any theological alignment
I still laud, the bravery your faith
affords you
that one on one, relationship
with a deity you identify with
for those messages of love and peace
you sift, free
from corporate religion\'s, barbaric inhumanity..
your words, remind me
of that beautiful innocence, encapsulated
in the poem by A. A. Milne, titled
\'Vespers\'
( https://www.oatridge.co.uk/poems/a/aa-milne-vespers.php )
That\'s the \'Ideal\'
having faith, can reward people with
it\'s just that, some
of those little boys and girls, tend
to grow up and warp
that innocence and theme of inclusiveness
into, border lines
where salvation is only for some
and empathetic consideration
is awarded, only for those who subscribe
to a dogma, that vilifies the majority
of our diverse humanity..
But still, as long
as poetry like yours
can blossom, from faith
entrenched
in those \'open\' and \'understanding\'
corners of peoples
humanitarian, heart\'s
then we can hope
a day will come
when, having faith
can be something
that unites and heals, the world
than the root cause
for most of its, insidious hate..
thank you!
for choosing to share
these comforting words
for those
who may be going through
a similar turmoil in their lives, this very moment...
(so sorry for my overtly opinionated
and lengthy reply, please
know - I genuinely, meant no disrespect
to your art or faith)
April 5th, 2022 06:15
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m so sorry, dear Poet
what a horrendous experience
that must be..
but this is the utility, of having a belief system
or an anchoring faith, in your life
that I genuinely champion...
devoid of any theological alignment
I still laud, the bravery your faith
affords you
that one on one, relationship
with a deity you identify with
for those messages of love and peace
you sift, free
from corporate religion\'s, barbaric inhumanity..
your words, remind me
of that beautiful innocence, encapsulated
in the poem by A. A. Milne, titled
\'Vespers\'
( https://www.oatridge.co.uk/poems/a/aa-milne-vespers.php )
That\'s the \'Ideal\'
having faith, can reward people with
it\'s just that, some
of those little boys and girls, tend
to grow up and warp
that innocence and theme of inclusiveness
into, border lines
where salvation is only for some
and empathetic consideration
is awarded, only for those who subscribe
to a dogma, that vilifies the majority
of our diverse humanity..
But still, as long
as poetry like yours
can blossom, from faith
entrenched
in those \'open\' and \'understanding\'
corners of peoples
humanitarian, heart\'s
then we can hope
a day will come
when, having faith
can be something
that unites and heals, the world
than the root cause
for most of its, insidious hate..
thank you!
for choosing to share
these comforting words
for those
who may be going through
a similar turmoil in their lives, this very moment...
(so sorry for my overtly opinionated
and lengthy reply, please
know - I genuinely, meant no disrespect
to your art or faith)
April 5th, 2022 06:15
Our Twins
Neville said:
I have not seen this before but it must surely rank as one of your best .. I truly feel for you C and all others who have experienced such a dreadful loss .. and amongst them, I must include my own sister who lost her son full term ... x
April 5th, 2022 05:40
Neville said:
I have not seen this before but it must surely rank as one of your best .. I truly feel for you C and all others who have experienced such a dreadful loss .. and amongst them, I must include my own sister who lost her son full term ... x
April 5th, 2022 05:40
Vacation
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Christina, sounds like a great time.
Andy
April 5th, 2022 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Christina, sounds like a great time.
Andy
April 5th, 2022 01:03
Vacation
Crowns4Christ said:
Hahaha, sounds fun, enjoy your vacation, and don\'t wear out your man to much
April 4th, 2022 13:06
Crowns4Christ said:
Hahaha, sounds fun, enjoy your vacation, and don\'t wear out your man to much
April 4th, 2022 13:06
Vacation
Rocky Lagou said:
So is nobody going to mention the final stanza? U DESCRIBING THE LOVE-MAKING?!?! \"HE\'S on the menu,\" \"keep it between the sheets,\" \"CARNIVORE AT HEART.\"
😅 Omg that line had me crying. So you talking about that type of meat.
April 4th, 2022 12:58
Rocky Lagou said:
So is nobody going to mention the final stanza? U DESCRIBING THE LOVE-MAKING?!?! \"HE\'S on the menu,\" \"keep it between the sheets,\" \"CARNIVORE AT HEART.\"
😅 Omg that line had me crying. So you talking about that type of meat.
April 4th, 2022 12:58
Vacation
Bella Shepard said:
I think that you have just described the quintessential, ethereal vacation. How could you ever come back? What a wonderful poem, hope you have a wonderful time!
April 4th, 2022 11:07
Bella Shepard said:
I think that you have just described the quintessential, ethereal vacation. How could you ever come back? What a wonderful poem, hope you have a wonderful time!
April 4th, 2022 11:07
Vacation
Neville said:
Have a FAB holiday C .. and say hi to the lucky fella from me now would ya :)
April 4th, 2022 10:37
Neville said:
Have a FAB holiday C .. and say hi to the lucky fella from me now would ya :)
April 4th, 2022 10:37
Vacation
dusk arising said:
My word, dont hold back that ravenous appetite. Try to get outdoors now and again too. LOL
April 4th, 2022 10:07
dusk arising said:
My word, dont hold back that ravenous appetite. Try to get outdoors now and again too. LOL
April 4th, 2022 10:07
Vacation
L. B. Mek said:
love this
what a poetic, Fusion - Cuisine
of differing, cultural ideal\'s
and as a fellow, foody
I hope your dream, resembles
our afterlife\'s, reality..
such a wonderful poetic treat, to read
thank you, dear poet
April 4th, 2022 06:33
L. B. Mek said:
love this
what a poetic, Fusion - Cuisine
of differing, cultural ideal\'s
and as a fellow, foody
I hope your dream, resembles
our afterlife\'s, reality..
such a wonderful poetic treat, to read
thank you, dear poet
April 4th, 2022 06:33
Romantic
sorenbarrett said:
Very romantic well worded with great images and metaphors. It flowed well and was enjoyable to read.
April 3rd, 2022 15:17
sorenbarrett said:
Very romantic well worded with great images and metaphors. It flowed well and was enjoyable to read.
April 3rd, 2022 15:17
True Love
Kevin Michael Bloor said:
Lovely heart ❤ felt poem. Fave line: \"your love convinces me God is real.\" (God is love.) Nice rhymes. 😊
April 2nd, 2022 10:05
Kevin Michael Bloor said:
Lovely heart ❤ felt poem. Fave line: \"your love convinces me God is real.\" (God is love.) Nice rhymes. 😊
April 2nd, 2022 10:05
Romantic
orchidee said:
Ahh, you remembered when we met! lol (Do shut up sometimes Orchi).
April 1st, 2022 10:11
orchidee said:
Ahh, you remembered when we met! lol (Do shut up sometimes Orchi).
April 1st, 2022 10:11
Romantic
Rocky Lagou said:
Okay I think this may be my favorite poem of yours. \"When I caress your MOCHA skin.\" \'MOCHA SKIN!\" You see this right here is a level of poetry that just can\'t be attained. That analogy of how you and your lover\'s grooves and curves fit like a \"puzzle,\" a freaking JIGSAW PUZZLE! I\'m \"going away on a trip for a while,\" a trip to your mind!
April 1st, 2022 09:17
Rocky Lagou said:
Okay I think this may be my favorite poem of yours. \"When I caress your MOCHA skin.\" \'MOCHA SKIN!\" You see this right here is a level of poetry that just can\'t be attained. That analogy of how you and your lover\'s grooves and curves fit like a \"puzzle,\" a freaking JIGSAW PUZZLE! I\'m \"going away on a trip for a while,\" a trip to your mind!
April 1st, 2022 09:17
It\'s Not Difficult
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Christina, my wife and I had a wonderful life together for almost forty years, she is still with me although she passed over two years ago...
Andy
April 1st, 2022 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Christina, my wife and I had a wonderful life together for almost forty years, she is still with me although she passed over two years ago...
Andy
April 1st, 2022 00:40
It\'s Not Difficult
Bella Shepard said:
After 52 years of marriage to a wonderful man, I have to say that marriage is made up of so many different things, there\'s no recipe, it\'s different for every couple. You have however, in my estimation, hit on the very essence of love in marriage; \"You will always have my back and I will always have yours for as long as we both shall live.\" It does keep getting better and better. Beautifully written from the heart.
March 31st, 2022 12:56
Bella Shepard said:
After 52 years of marriage to a wonderful man, I have to say that marriage is made up of so many different things, there\'s no recipe, it\'s different for every couple. You have however, in my estimation, hit on the very essence of love in marriage; \"You will always have my back and I will always have yours for as long as we both shall live.\" It does keep getting better and better. Beautifully written from the heart.
March 31st, 2022 12:56
It\'s Not Difficult
orchidee said:
Good write Christina.
Now my poem on marriage, entitled \'Endless Woe\'. Well, I married KP! hehehe.
March 31st, 2022 12:45
orchidee said:
Good write Christina.
Now my poem on marriage, entitled \'Endless Woe\'. Well, I married KP! hehehe.
March 31st, 2022 12:45
It\'s Not Difficult
Rocky Lagou said:
This is actually art. Idk why but that line of being held as glass is just such an immaculate metaphor for that vulnerability and ALSO transparency that is present in marriage. I mean wow you\'re a genius, I adore double entendres. You truly explained this message well!
March 31st, 2022 09:46
Rocky Lagou said:
This is actually art. Idk why but that line of being held as glass is just such an immaculate metaphor for that vulnerability and ALSO transparency that is present in marriage. I mean wow you\'re a genius, I adore double entendres. You truly explained this message well!
March 31st, 2022 09:46
It\'s Not Difficult
dean langmuir said:
I enjoy the holding and kissing lines,poem on,take care
March 31st, 2022 09:00
dean langmuir said:
I enjoy the holding and kissing lines,poem on,take care
March 31st, 2022 09:00
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