Comments received on poems by Aals
could we just fall in love.
izzo said:
Amazing. Love the way you said \"sanctioned love
or secret lust\". I felt that. You\'re such an amazing writer
May 10th, 2019 12:15
izzo said:
Amazing. Love the way you said \"sanctioned love
or secret lust\". I felt that. You\'re such an amazing writer
May 10th, 2019 12:15
12/17/18
psychofemale said:
I loved the last part, it was fav :) theres just something special about it :)
January 14th, 2019 21:58
psychofemale said:
I loved the last part, it was fav :) theres just something special about it :)
January 14th, 2019 21:58
hearts beats
Caring dove said:
i really love this , especially the lines referring to the hummingbird! :-) quite clever, quite beautiful .. an overwhelming feeling of love , nice but overwhelming
January 19th, 2018 17:27
Caring dove said:
i really love this , especially the lines referring to the hummingbird! :-) quite clever, quite beautiful .. an overwhelming feeling of love , nice but overwhelming
January 19th, 2018 17:27
My Secret.
Tony36 said:
Great write, sometimes writing it down is all you need
January 9th, 2018 13:53
Tony36 said:
Great write, sometimes writing it down is all you need
January 9th, 2018 13:53
devil in me.
Tom.H said:
It’s funny, I interpretate this poem a lot differently than how I think you wrote it. Great poem.
January 6th, 2018 21:06
Tom.H said:
It’s funny, I interpretate this poem a lot differently than how I think you wrote it. Great poem.
January 6th, 2018 21:06
Close but not there.
jonnyc1 said:
There is a gritty edge to this that I like a lot, love and the hope of it is very agonizing journey, thanks for capturing that. \"I know your heart is gray, but mine might fade away\".... Good stuff...keep sharing
November 16th, 2017 15:20
jonnyc1 said:
There is a gritty edge to this that I like a lot, love and the hope of it is very agonizing journey, thanks for capturing that. \"I know your heart is gray, but mine might fade away\".... Good stuff...keep sharing
November 16th, 2017 15:20
Written in the stars
Christina8 said:
A good and refreshingly honest write! I did one on PTSD and its so hard to have that. Your poem was great! But your heart will be fine, I just know it!
October 19th, 2017 12:42
Christina8 said:
A good and refreshingly honest write! I did one on PTSD and its so hard to have that. Your poem was great! But your heart will be fine, I just know it!
October 19th, 2017 12:42
Spin
Alex Arnot said:
Interesting to see a poem about dancing and performing. Reminds me of the couple plays I did when I was a kid. And the structure definitely captures the feeling of the preparation and execution. Specifically when you break the lines with the single words. Great job!
September 18th, 2017 20:10
Alex Arnot said:
Interesting to see a poem about dancing and performing. Reminds me of the couple plays I did when I was a kid. And the structure definitely captures the feeling of the preparation and execution. Specifically when you break the lines with the single words. Great job!
September 18th, 2017 20:10
Won\'t relent.
Kebiin said:
This is a very open ended poem, that is something to be appreciated because of the multiple way it could be interpreted. This is very lovely.
June 5th, 2017 02:57
Kebiin said:
This is a very open ended poem, that is something to be appreciated because of the multiple way it could be interpreted. This is very lovely.
June 5th, 2017 02:57
i listened
Kebiin said:
We all seem to have that voice that drags us down to a demise by our own hand, but listening is what defines us.
May 14th, 2017 05:45
Kebiin said:
We all seem to have that voice that drags us down to a demise by our own hand, but listening is what defines us.
May 14th, 2017 05:45
black and white.
Jessie said:
Like ^^ DeAN, I can really relate to your poem. Really good!
May 11th, 2017 14:53
Jessie said:
Like ^^ DeAN, I can really relate to your poem. Really good!
May 11th, 2017 14:53
Little light inside
willyweed said:
your not speeding Aals? are you?
very nice poem young Lady!
March 13th, 2017 06:35
willyweed said:
your not speeding Aals? are you?
very nice poem young Lady!
March 13th, 2017 06:35
Little light inside
Augustus said:
Such reaching out to the universe for an inspiring poem. Kudos.
March 12th, 2017 22:22
Augustus said:
Such reaching out to the universe for an inspiring poem. Kudos.
March 12th, 2017 22:22
Fate
Augustus said:
Oh, could all my mistakes suddenly disappear. So few words for a grand message. Neat!
March 10th, 2017 14:29
Augustus said:
Oh, could all my mistakes suddenly disappear. So few words for a grand message. Neat!
March 10th, 2017 14:29
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