Comments received on poems by Aals
innocence
willyweed said:
stick to the truth in heart sow good seeds it will set youfree you\'re getting to be a poet elite
January 16th, 2017 21:24
willyweed said:
stick to the truth in heart sow good seeds it will set youfree you\'re getting to be a poet elite
January 16th, 2017 21:24
innocence
Est1598 said:
A deep and emotion poem, very well written, love it!
January 16th, 2017 17:36
Est1598 said:
A deep and emotion poem, very well written, love it!
January 16th, 2017 17:36
fade away
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
This is a waterfall of pain and beautifully explicit.
I hope your writing is a release it is very good
January 16th, 2017 17:03
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
This is a waterfall of pain and beautifully explicit.
I hope your writing is a release it is very good
January 16th, 2017 17:03
a white war for souls
willyweed said:
turned around
I\'m liking your style and grace
in writing. well done and thank you
for your friendship. I\'ll be reading you in the funny paper kiddo....write on. ww
January 7th, 2017 13:14
willyweed said:
turned around
I\'m liking your style and grace
in writing. well done and thank you
for your friendship. I\'ll be reading you in the funny paper kiddo....write on. ww
January 7th, 2017 13:14
Cœur brisé
Kebiin said:
The fact that you wrote this tells me not only the obvious pain you\'ve endured but also the strength that you have built from it. Keep that strength close to you I can tell it will take you far.
January 3rd, 2017 14:27
Kebiin said:
The fact that you wrote this tells me not only the obvious pain you\'ve endured but also the strength that you have built from it. Keep that strength close to you I can tell it will take you far.
January 3rd, 2017 14:27
She Keeps Falling
mari16 said:
This is an amazing write. I can relate to this piece. I felt the connection flowing when I read this. It is clear how your mother has hurt you and how she keeps making mistakes but doesn\'t care if she does. Stay with this and her.
December 26th, 2016 13:30
mari16 said:
This is an amazing write. I can relate to this piece. I felt the connection flowing when I read this. It is clear how your mother has hurt you and how she keeps making mistakes but doesn\'t care if she does. Stay with this and her.
December 26th, 2016 13:30
Cœur brisé
SabreLi said:
It\'s amazing how much pain jumps out in these words, but how, despite that, you manage to make it a flowing, haunting melody. I\'m sorry for the obvious sadness you have endured, but know that you are strong enough to go on; if nothing more, just look at the beauty you are creating with your very hands, and the thoughts in your head. Well done xx
December 22nd, 2016 15:44
SabreLi said:
It\'s amazing how much pain jumps out in these words, but how, despite that, you manage to make it a flowing, haunting melody. I\'m sorry for the obvious sadness you have endured, but know that you are strong enough to go on; if nothing more, just look at the beauty you are creating with your very hands, and the thoughts in your head. Well done xx
December 22nd, 2016 15:44
a white war for souls
Kebiin said:
I relate so closely to the way you express your pain, though it is nothing like what you\'ve experienced I\'m sure just from your writing, but we all have losses from the battles we\'ve fought no one experience is like the other, but your words are a remind to me at least that there are others that hear and understand the pain.
December 14th, 2016 14:35
Kebiin said:
I relate so closely to the way you express your pain, though it is nothing like what you\'ve experienced I\'m sure just from your writing, but we all have losses from the battles we\'ve fought no one experience is like the other, but your words are a remind to me at least that there are others that hear and understand the pain.
December 14th, 2016 14:35
She Keeps Falling
Kebiin said:
Very deep meaning, one I know well which you\'ve expressed so vivid in this poem, very well done. Keep up the good work, you are very inspirational.
December 14th, 2016 14:21
Kebiin said:
Very deep meaning, one I know well which you\'ve expressed so vivid in this poem, very well done. Keep up the good work, you are very inspirational.
December 14th, 2016 14:21
electricity
Augustus said:
I\'m not sure I prefer eyes over stars but electricity has changed the world. Nice.
December 6th, 2016 16:22
Augustus said:
I\'m not sure I prefer eyes over stars but electricity has changed the world. Nice.
December 6th, 2016 16:22
a white war for souls
Augustus said:
I have been guilty of that always looking for results and forgetting to enjoy the process. From your comment it appears the poem led you to that conclusion. Nicely done.
December 6th, 2016 00:04
Augustus said:
I have been guilty of that always looking for results and forgetting to enjoy the process. From your comment it appears the poem led you to that conclusion. Nicely done.
December 6th, 2016 00:04
metanoia
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
wow this is a rather unique positive poem, creatively done and quitters should learn from it. u write in an attractive way here. kudos.
u r warmly welcome to comment on my latest poem too/.
December 2nd, 2016 13:17
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
wow this is a rather unique positive poem, creatively done and quitters should learn from it. u write in an attractive way here. kudos.
u r warmly welcome to comment on my latest poem too/.
December 2nd, 2016 13:17
metanoia
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR THE CHALLENGE AALS ! METANOIA ~ A complete change of heart ! Love the serene optimism in this poem and your comment on your current state of mind ! A nice State to be in ! Your current state of EUPHORIA (better than TEXAS !) enables you to override the basically important things in life ~ the starry look of your Lover ~ the care of your MOM ~ cessation of Inspiration ~ destruction of the World\'s Love and the ANGST of the whole World etc etc I WILL STILL FIND PEACE IN MY MUSIC & RAIN THAT POURED ON A SPRINGS MORNING CHIME ! AWESOME ! I feel pretty CHIPPER today AALS but nowhere near as CHIPPER as YOU ! Thanks for sharing ~ much food for thought ~ Hugs ~ BRIAN
December 2nd, 2016 11:34
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR THE CHALLENGE AALS ! METANOIA ~ A complete change of heart ! Love the serene optimism in this poem and your comment on your current state of mind ! A nice State to be in ! Your current state of EUPHORIA (better than TEXAS !) enables you to override the basically important things in life ~ the starry look of your Lover ~ the care of your MOM ~ cessation of Inspiration ~ destruction of the World\'s Love and the ANGST of the whole World etc etc I WILL STILL FIND PEACE IN MY MUSIC & RAIN THAT POURED ON A SPRINGS MORNING CHIME ! AWESOME ! I feel pretty CHIPPER today AALS but nowhere near as CHIPPER as YOU ! Thanks for sharing ~ much food for thought ~ Hugs ~ BRIAN
December 2nd, 2016 11:34
hating souls
Simple-Man87 said:
That\'s beautiful. I\'d love to collaborate on an epic, dark, false love poem. You\'ve got talent.
November 25th, 2016 23:52
Simple-Man87 said:
That\'s beautiful. I\'d love to collaborate on an epic, dark, false love poem. You\'ve got talent.
November 25th, 2016 23:52
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