Comments received on poems by Aals
Fate
willyweed said:
nice I like this one Aals a lot said with little bit of words! WW
March 10th, 2017 11:13
willyweed said:
nice I like this one Aals a lot said with little bit of words! WW
March 10th, 2017 11:13
My Little Rusty Playground
Augustus said:
Playgrounds used to be where men were forged, no offense to the ladies. I believe you did a fine job with this one as it is.
February 28th, 2017 18:19
Augustus said:
Playgrounds used to be where men were forged, no offense to the ladies. I believe you did a fine job with this one as it is.
February 28th, 2017 18:19
A sister given by God.
izzo said:
You are as aspiring as Star Wars. \"You don\'t love someone for their looks, or their clothes, or for their fancy car, but because they sing a song only you can hear.\"
February 27th, 2017 22:08
izzo said:
You are as aspiring as Star Wars. \"You don\'t love someone for their looks, or their clothes, or for their fancy car, but because they sing a song only you can hear.\"
February 27th, 2017 22:08
Yuanfen.
willyweed said:
nice one Aals , if the walls could talk they would say love was in the air or maybe just listen to rock and roll. ww
February 25th, 2017 21:12
willyweed said:
nice one Aals , if the walls could talk they would say love was in the air or maybe just listen to rock and roll. ww
February 25th, 2017 21:12
A sister given by God.
Kebiin said:
That\'s deep, I wish my relationship with my sibling was the same. Having ones like those are a true blessing.
February 25th, 2017 01:48
Kebiin said:
That\'s deep, I wish my relationship with my sibling was the same. Having ones like those are a true blessing.
February 25th, 2017 01:48
Humanity
willyweed said:
you should be alright his has a good lost and found department> WW
February 23rd, 2017 21:45
willyweed said:
you should be alright his has a good lost and found department> WW
February 23rd, 2017 21:45
Humanity
Tris Eaton said:
I can relate to this. I\'m always drawn to people who need help and I know people who do the same thing. Rarely does it drain me, but the people I know that do it are so obviously drained by it and I feel really bad for them sometimes
February 23rd, 2017 13:59
Tris Eaton said:
I can relate to this. I\'m always drawn to people who need help and I know people who do the same thing. Rarely does it drain me, but the people I know that do it are so obviously drained by it and I feel really bad for them sometimes
February 23rd, 2017 13:59
egotism
Augustus said:
Treatise on poor esteem. Poetry is good. If that is the way you truly feel then you need to work on that. Hugs.
February 20th, 2017 17:00
Augustus said:
Treatise on poor esteem. Poetry is good. If that is the way you truly feel then you need to work on that. Hugs.
February 20th, 2017 17:00
egotism
willyweed said:
me thinks 2 als is a beautiful women iin a just waiting in girls body just she be 18 a young women for next birth me also thinks she makes believe she big ego but she reall talking the ego of another that we all know so you look and will whistle? I thought I was wrong once so I checked the facts and after I learned I was right that only time I wrong only if me thinks not right or could be wrong is only so I right most of times me smart to ssoo that\'s me story and I will stick too it!ww
February 20th, 2017 16:10
willyweed said:
me thinks 2 als is a beautiful women iin a just waiting in girls body just she be 18 a young women for next birth me also thinks she makes believe she big ego but she reall talking the ego of another that we all know so you look and will whistle? I thought I was wrong once so I checked the facts and after I learned I was right that only time I wrong only if me thinks not right or could be wrong is only so I right most of times me smart to ssoo that\'s me story and I will stick too it!ww
February 20th, 2017 16:10
born of nothing
Tony36 said:
True it was worth reading, loved it great write
February 9th, 2017 20:57
Tony36 said:
True it was worth reading, loved it great write
February 9th, 2017 20:57
Collapsed-Avenue Cornerstore
willyweed said:
You: may be I am amazed, you are not the situation / carzy as it seems
my father was a drunk But dispite I ; still proud oh my self. two als or al\'s what I don\'t care! when you write I am weeping or rolling around on the floor laughing you stop write you will have real trouuble you don\'t ww gunning for ya. you have a beautiful mind alls now ...get busy! ww
February 6th, 2017 21:11
willyweed said:
You: may be I am amazed, you are not the situation / carzy as it seems
my father was a drunk But dispite I ; still proud oh my self. two als or al\'s what I don\'t care! when you write I am weeping or rolling around on the floor laughing you stop write you will have real trouuble you don\'t ww gunning for ya. you have a beautiful mind alls now ...get busy! ww
February 6th, 2017 21:11
heart breaker
Aals said:
HAHA thankyou for reading my poetry. Yeah, no flowers, no teepees. none of that right now. I try to be the very best i can be when i write. I love that you love my poetry ahah, one day i want to publish everything. Willy Weed, you are the best.
February 3rd, 2017 07:00
Aals said:
HAHA thankyou for reading my poetry. Yeah, no flowers, no teepees. none of that right now. I try to be the very best i can be when i write. I love that you love my poetry ahah, one day i want to publish everything. Willy Weed, you are the best.
February 3rd, 2017 07:00
heart breaker
willyweed said:
willy love you And he love you love you like that aha he find out in readin
you are an a bove arveage poet you in training here to a poet elite and great poet an egar allen poet of this very day & age a we have of a lot tales to tell al so get busy I for happen to love the way you I big fanof you willy well now
February 2nd, 2017 21:51
willyweed said:
willy love you And he love you love you like that aha he find out in readin
you are an a bove arveage poet you in training here to a poet elite and great poet an egar allen poet of this very day & age a we have of a lot tales to tell al so get busy I for happen to love the way you I big fanof you willy well now
February 2nd, 2017 21:51
Beautiful things
Augustus said:
Your poem is consistently pleasing throughout. I sensed a heightening of the cadence toward the end, although I kept thinking all along yes, yes, yes. Wonderful tribute.
January 27th, 2017 19:31
Augustus said:
Your poem is consistently pleasing throughout. I sensed a heightening of the cadence toward the end, although I kept thinking all along yes, yes, yes. Wonderful tribute.
January 27th, 2017 19:31
Beautiful things
Fay Slimm. said:
A lovely feel to this read which explains beauty in so many ways. Thank you Aals for sharing these thoughts on beauty\'s perfection.
January 27th, 2017 17:12
Fay Slimm. said:
A lovely feel to this read which explains beauty in so many ways. Thank you Aals for sharing these thoughts on beauty\'s perfection.
January 27th, 2017 17:12
I found myself with a little help...
Augustus said:
Sounds like a great feeling. Kudos.
January 18th, 2017 21:17
Augustus said:
Sounds like a great feeling. Kudos.
January 18th, 2017 21:17
I found myself with a little help...
My_Brain said:
Great poem! I love the flow! ~Bella
January 18th, 2017 21:07
My_Brain said:
Great poem! I love the flow! ~Bella
January 18th, 2017 21:07
electricity
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I could hear the noise outside after the raising of the nerves inside...
beautifully written...
January 18th, 2017 17:53
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I could hear the noise outside after the raising of the nerves inside...
beautifully written...
January 18th, 2017 17:53
Perspective
Augustus said:
Often we focus on the negative. Like the rain analogy.
January 17th, 2017 20:49
Augustus said:
Often we focus on the negative. Like the rain analogy.
January 17th, 2017 20:49
Perspective
My_Brain said:
Wow such a beautiful poem! Love the rhythm! ~Bella
January 17th, 2017 18:51
My_Brain said:
Wow such a beautiful poem! Love the rhythm! ~Bella
January 17th, 2017 18:51
Perspective
notapoet said:
I loved the structure and melodic flow of this beautiful piece, a real pleasure to read, great write Aals.....
January 17th, 2017 18:09
notapoet said:
I loved the structure and melodic flow of this beautiful piece, a real pleasure to read, great write Aals.....
January 17th, 2017 18:09
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