Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



FORGOTTEN
dusk arising said:

Ah, the thinker who spoke his mind to the wrong persons. People who heard but did not listen.
I\'m left wondering about \"No empathetic thoughts are stretched
in sympathy with his domain\". Does that refer to his own thoughts or the thoughts of others?


November 13th, 2018 04:02

FORGOTTEN
Debsspot said:

Your words draw a picture as clear and beautiful as the sketch above despite the stark subject. Great work.

November 13th, 2018 03:28

FORGOTTEN
onepauly said:

by far,
your best yet!

November 13th, 2018 03:01

FORGOTTEN
sylviasearcher said:

I love the imagery you create with this piece.

My empathetic thoughts were stretched to this figure \'with nails that pierced his white clenched palms\'

November 13th, 2018 03:01

FORGOTTEN
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good though provoking write Michael.

November 13th, 2018 02:57

FORGOTTEN
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. The next book I shall read is: \'All You Need To Know About Syllables And Metres\', by Miss C. Berles.

November 13th, 2018 02:50

AND SO TO BED
dusk arising said:

Honey bunny swears shes funny and giggles in her burrow.
Here and now swears he\'s a plough and buried in his furrow.

Thanks for brightening up my day.

November 12th, 2018 12:47

AND SO TO BED
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

Very amusing!
I hope Hairy Clare doesn’t catch a cold!

Love your drawing! It reminds me of my great grandparents’ estate where beyond that gate were many cows grazing! Beautiful memories!

~Laura~




November 12th, 2018 12:43

RIOJA
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

Love the shape poem and its subject matter! When I saw it, the adjective artful came to mind! Artful with your writing, artful with your artwork...intertwining your talents! Exceptional!

Cin 🍷cin🍷

~Laura~


November 12th, 2018 11:01

AND SO TO BED
Christina8 said:

wonderful picture and humorous poem!

November 12th, 2018 08:55

AND SO TO BED
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS UNCLE MIKE : For another Dotty Ditty ! UK poetic humour is often misunderstood once you\'re outside the Fishing Zone which is one of the 1001 reasons for BREXIT : We\'re Happiest when we\'re INSULAR (although I do value \"Mi sangre Espanola !) Thanks for Pome \'n Pic: lovely :
LOVE ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
We are in VANITY FAIR with Pilgrims Progress today : please check Thanks !

November 12th, 2018 04:31

AND SO TO BED
Fay Slimm. said:

Still giggling at these lines Michael - - I pity poor Beaty - - h aha - love the charcoal drawing.

November 12th, 2018 03:23

AND SO TO BED
orchidee said:

Should I meet Clare? Will Fido bark to deter me?!
Cooeee - I\'m not in bed, but my poem will be later today, after one \'blew up\' yesterday! I got to wait 24 hours.

November 12th, 2018 02:44

AND SO TO BED
Goldfinch60 said:

Different Michael.

I still want to know what is through that gate.

November 12th, 2018 01:26

RIOJA
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Gracias Tio Michael : You\'re in my Territory here and La Territoria Rioja de mi Padre ! I was weaned on Rioja Tinta and have visited the Vineyards with lots of Tastings & Tapas. Rioja y Cava (Spanish Champagne) are two of Spain\'s finest Wines. Thanks for your excellent endorsement. Being a Christian I do try never to be Drunk (3 large glasses of Rioja Tinta ?) but the Good Book does encourage us to \"Take a little wine for your tummy\'s sake\" and most Catholic Church Halls do have a licence and a Bar. For me an evening meal without Una Botella del Vino is NOT a meal ! Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡 Love the glass shaped ode and the charcoal pencil drawing simple but effective : ANGELA

November 11th, 2018 17:53

RIOJA
orchidee said:

How\'s that evening going M? I will settle down with a pork pie and water!

November 11th, 2018 13:01

RIOJA
dusk arising said:

What are you, an artist or somethimg?? LOL
Such a lovely idea and carried off to perfection.
Excellent!

November 11th, 2018 11:17

RIOJA
orchidee said:

Me poem \'blew up\' for today, while trying to upload a clip. Will try again...
C\'mon Orchi, you\'re having us on. You was blotto, and forgot poems, cos you had sherry without water!

November 11th, 2018 08:29

RIOJA
Lorna said:

Very clever Michael! I didn\'t see the glass I scrolled for the end of the poem! Thank you for the tour of Rioja!

November 11th, 2018 04:55

A FEW BITS AND PIECES
Leisa Niamh said:

Your poem stuck a chord with me as it made me think about how I always turn to nature and a walk in the hills and mountains of North wales I am feeling low . I always come back with a little hope and feeling better.

November 11th, 2018 03:58

RIOJA
orchidee said:

A fine write Michael. Just don\'t invite me. They\'ll hate you for it. I will only add water to it! heehee.

November 11th, 2018 02:41

RIOJA
onepauly said:

sounds tempting. lol

November 11th, 2018 02:40

RIOJA
Goldfinch60 said:

Now you are talking Michael, Roja is my favourite wine and there are some great ones out there, I have tried many but have many still to seek out.

November 11th, 2018 02:21

AN EDILLETTE
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

This just came to mind...

Open ended questions answered
Answered open ended questions
Questions answered open ended
Open ended questions answered

What do you think?🤔

~Laura~

November 10th, 2018 19:04

AN EDILLETTE
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

A great EDILLETTE!
Really enjoyed reading it!

Excellent artwork!
It’s making me think of a snow covered desolate area!

Hope you’re feeling okay!

~Laura~

November 10th, 2018 16:43

AN EDILLETTE
orchidee said:

Erm, this may be similar to \'Peter Piper picked......\'. And what is a peck of pickled pepper? Me brain is pickled, I know that much! lol. And how\'s that evening?!

November 10th, 2018 11:02

AN EDILLETTE
Lorna said:

Phew that was hard..... and forget reading it out loud! But what a pretty name for a girl! Edillette!

November 10th, 2018 08:19

AN EDILLETTE
Goldfinch60 said:

Death closed shut lives
Lives death closed shut
Shut lives death closed
Closed shut lives death


Just a quick feeble effort, good idea Michael I may have to try writing Edilettes.

Good artwork.

November 10th, 2018 02:19

AN EDILLETTE
orchidee said:

A good fine write
Write a good fine
Fine a write good
Good write a fine
A fine good write!
Erm, this went wrong a bit. Who\'s writing out fines? How much is the fine?!


November 10th, 2018 02:04

A FEW BITS AND PIECES
orchidee said:

How\'s the evening going M?!
Is it going with a whéééééééééééé?
I\'m overdoing the accent now, and being silly! lol. Woof! Fido said put that new toy down Orchi. Stop pressing AltGr button.

November 9th, 2018 10:53



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