Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
WINTER CLOSES (1)
orchidee said:
Yes, finished that thorn poem. How\'s the evening?! I\'m doing half a poem - a Po.
January 7th, 2019 11:51
orchidee said:
Yes, finished that thorn poem. How\'s the evening?! I\'m doing half a poem - a Po.
January 7th, 2019 11:51
WINTER CLOSES (1)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE MICHAEL ~ I have said elsewhwere that a 7 line Poem is perfection ! The only proviso is the skill to encompass ones subject in a SON (Half a SONNET !). You have done that ! It is complemented (in a subtle way) by the painting.
Thanks for sharing ~ Love & Blessings ~
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check Angelas POEM ~ HERBS & SPICES ~ Thanks !
January 7th, 2019 10:42
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE MICHAEL ~ I have said elsewhwere that a 7 line Poem is perfection ! The only proviso is the skill to encompass ones subject in a SON (Half a SONNET !). You have done that ! It is complemented (in a subtle way) by the painting.
Thanks for sharing ~ Love & Blessings ~
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check Angelas POEM ~ HERBS & SPICES ~ Thanks !
January 7th, 2019 10:42
WINTER CLOSES (1)
Fay Slimm. said:
An engaging short anthem to winter\'s closure - - another gem of a picture too Michael - thanks for sharing both word and graphic.
January 7th, 2019 05:00
Fay Slimm. said:
An engaging short anthem to winter\'s closure - - another gem of a picture too Michael - thanks for sharing both word and graphic.
January 7th, 2019 05:00
WINTER CLOSES (1)
Goldfinch60 said:
This is fine Michael, sometimes fewer words can be more powerful.
January 7th, 2019 03:37
Goldfinch60 said:
This is fine Michael, sometimes fewer words can be more powerful.
January 7th, 2019 03:37
WINTER CLOSES (1)
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. I could be shorter (am I 7 foot tall?). In me poems I mean, but I tend to go on a bit at times.
Some old hymns went on for 30 verses. The longest hymn has 158 or so verses. There\'s a thought. *Gets out pencil to write.....*
January 7th, 2019 02:53
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. I could be shorter (am I 7 foot tall?). In me poems I mean, but I tend to go on a bit at times.
Some old hymns went on for 30 verses. The longest hymn has 158 or so verses. There\'s a thought. *Gets out pencil to write.....*
January 7th, 2019 02:53
TODAY\'S ANNOUNCEMENTS
Christina8 said:
Wow, I can\'t believe you remembered all that! Sounds hilarious to me!!!
January 6th, 2019 19:17
Christina8 said:
Wow, I can\'t believe you remembered all that! Sounds hilarious to me!!!
January 6th, 2019 19:17
TODAY\'S ANNOUNCEMENTS
orchidee said:
How\'s that evening going? You gone to Lidl or Aldi shopping this evening? Well, maybe not Sunday evening.
January 6th, 2019 11:50
orchidee said:
How\'s that evening going? You gone to Lidl or Aldi shopping this evening? Well, maybe not Sunday evening.
January 6th, 2019 11:50
TODAY\'S ANNOUNCEMENTS
dusk arising said:
Customer announcement - to avoid a parking penalty charge dont forget to enter your vehicle reg no on leaving the store otherwise you will be hunted down and forced into a local courthouse (Aldi worcester city branch)... have a nice day.
Lidl Blackpole branch- for your convenience all self service tills have been closed.
We are delighted to announced an extra ten minutes shopping every third Tuesday in the month now that we have completely abandoned staff training.
January 6th, 2019 06:36
dusk arising said:
Customer announcement - to avoid a parking penalty charge dont forget to enter your vehicle reg no on leaving the store otherwise you will be hunted down and forced into a local courthouse (Aldi worcester city branch)... have a nice day.
Lidl Blackpole branch- for your convenience all self service tills have been closed.
We are delighted to announced an extra ten minutes shopping every third Tuesday in the month now that we have completely abandoned staff training.
January 6th, 2019 06:36
TODAY\'S ANNOUNCEMENTS
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
IN AMERICA THEY HAVE \"THE OLDE COUNTRY STORE\" With a row of Rockers (Chairs !) outside for ones use ! Inside potatoes etc are served from sack (with a cat sitting on top a la GILES !) and \"loose\" sugar is weighed into paper bags and butter & cheese from big slabs was wrapped in \"grease-proof\" paper. There is NO HELP=YOURSELF SERVICE ~ It all takes longer but is much more satisfying and not a PLASTIC (naughty word !) BAG for miles. My Parents & of course My Grandparents well remember such shops in the UK as I am sure you do. Sweets in big jars ~ loose tea in a chest and ham & bacon sliced to order ! The Brave New World of SUPA & HYPERMARKETS is the DEATH of a CIVIL & CIVILISED WORLD ! Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN
January 6th, 2019 04:22
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
IN AMERICA THEY HAVE \"THE OLDE COUNTRY STORE\" With a row of Rockers (Chairs !) outside for ones use ! Inside potatoes etc are served from sack (with a cat sitting on top a la GILES !) and \"loose\" sugar is weighed into paper bags and butter & cheese from big slabs was wrapped in \"grease-proof\" paper. There is NO HELP=YOURSELF SERVICE ~ It all takes longer but is much more satisfying and not a PLASTIC (naughty word !) BAG for miles. My Parents & of course My Grandparents well remember such shops in the UK as I am sure you do. Sweets in big jars ~ loose tea in a chest and ham & bacon sliced to order ! The Brave New World of SUPA & HYPERMARKETS is the DEATH of a CIVIL & CIVILISED WORLD ! Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN
January 6th, 2019 04:22
TODAY\'S ANNOUNCEMENTS
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. lol. We gotta negotiate shopping trolleys too. they can\'t all be blamed on wonky wheels. Some people can\'t drive them, let alone a drive a car.
Maybe I was in a good mood shopping, when that happened one day - trolley jams. I thought to myself \'You love it really, don\'t ya?!\'
January 6th, 2019 03:03
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. lol. We gotta negotiate shopping trolleys too. they can\'t all be blamed on wonky wheels. Some people can\'t drive them, let alone a drive a car.
Maybe I was in a good mood shopping, when that happened one day - trolley jams. I thought to myself \'You love it really, don\'t ya?!\'
January 6th, 2019 03:03
TODAY\'S ANNOUNCEMENTS
Goldfinch60 said:
Cracking write Michael.
Was that you sliding on the ice with a Waitrose bag?
January 6th, 2019 02:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Cracking write Michael.
Was that you sliding on the ice with a Waitrose bag?
January 6th, 2019 02:46
AUTUMN BREEZE
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD AFTERNOON UNCLE MIKE ! Love the Poem despite its unseasonality ~ but in essence AUTUMN is my fave Season and I am a VIRGO. Autumn starts in Summer and ends in Winter so it is of all Seasons so DYNAMIC ~ Just like an Autumns Child ! Having been born on the WESTCOAST and now living on the EASTCOAST I love all things Maritime and am now Olde Enough (35 +) to go on Cruises (not SAGA not yet GAGA !). Please check SPIRITUAL DIMENSION ~
Thanks BRIAN the Maritime Man !
January 5th, 2019 09:36
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD AFTERNOON UNCLE MIKE ! Love the Poem despite its unseasonality ~ but in essence AUTUMN is my fave Season and I am a VIRGO. Autumn starts in Summer and ends in Winter so it is of all Seasons so DYNAMIC ~ Just like an Autumns Child ! Having been born on the WESTCOAST and now living on the EASTCOAST I love all things Maritime and am now Olde Enough (35 +) to go on Cruises (not SAGA not yet GAGA !). Please check SPIRITUAL DIMENSION ~
Thanks BRIAN the Maritime Man !
January 5th, 2019 09:36
AUTUMN BREEZE
dusk arising said:
The sparrow shudders,
feathers ruffled
For in Pussy\'s mouth
his cries are muffled.
Lovely piece today.
January 5th, 2019 03:50
dusk arising said:
The sparrow shudders,
feathers ruffled
For in Pussy\'s mouth
his cries are muffled.
Lovely piece today.
January 5th, 2019 03:50
AUTUMN BREEZE
orchidee said:
A lovely write and pic Michael. That a breeze blowing, or a lot of hot air? Depends who is blowing!
January 5th, 2019 03:07
orchidee said:
A lovely write and pic Michael. That a breeze blowing, or a lot of hot air? Depends who is blowing!
January 5th, 2019 03:07
LOVE\'S FIRST BITE
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS UNCLE MIKE : We love the \"openness\" of the vista in your watercolour ! I once gave a EULOGY at an UNCLES FUNERAL. He was from Edinburgh. His wife (who had passed over the previous year) was a confectioner and made Divine Shortbread. I could not resist saying at the Funeral : When Uncle Bill tasted Ruth\'s Shortbread it was \"LOVE @ FIRST BITE\". Fortunately it was in Liverpool and a bit of humour is allowed at Funerals & Bill & Ruth were both 70+ ! Peace & Joy for 2019 : Angela & Brian 🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 4th, 2019 12:46
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS UNCLE MIKE : We love the \"openness\" of the vista in your watercolour ! I once gave a EULOGY at an UNCLES FUNERAL. He was from Edinburgh. His wife (who had passed over the previous year) was a confectioner and made Divine Shortbread. I could not resist saying at the Funeral : When Uncle Bill tasted Ruth\'s Shortbread it was \"LOVE @ FIRST BITE\". Fortunately it was in Liverpool and a bit of humour is allowed at Funerals & Bill & Ruth were both 70+ ! Peace & Joy for 2019 : Angela & Brian 🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 4th, 2019 12:46
LOVE\'S FIRST BITE
Goldfinch60 said:
Love\'s first bite can be so wonderfully painful.
Love the artwork Michael.
January 4th, 2019 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Love\'s first bite can be so wonderfully painful.
Love the artwork Michael.
January 4th, 2019 02:48
LOVE\'S FIRST BITE
orchidee said:
Miss Berles had that bite yet?! A fine write and pic M.
January 4th, 2019 02:37
orchidee said:
Miss Berles had that bite yet?! A fine write and pic M.
January 4th, 2019 02:37
WHERE AM I ?
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE : Love the trio of FISH. Loved the ODE : It rang a (distant) BELL : None of us are ever omnipresent : ALL THERE !
Peace & Love : ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 3rd, 2019 17:56
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE : Love the trio of FISH. Loved the ODE : It rang a (distant) BELL : None of us are ever omnipresent : ALL THERE !
Peace & Love : ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 3rd, 2019 17:56
WHERE AM I ?
orchidee said:
Cooeee, me evening\'s gone now. How was yours? Off to bed.... \'Who wants to be a Millionaire\' on telly sends me to sleep, with all the dithering, adverts, and procrasti-wotsit - procrastination in it!
January 3rd, 2019 16:49
orchidee said:
Cooeee, me evening\'s gone now. How was yours? Off to bed.... \'Who wants to be a Millionaire\' on telly sends me to sleep, with all the dithering, adverts, and procrasti-wotsit - procrastination in it!
January 3rd, 2019 16:49
WHERE AM I ?
orchidee said:
Oh lol good write and pic M.
You got any gold, frankincense, or myrrh? I shall need some soon. Depends if I\'m a wise man! (or a King of Orient).
January 3rd, 2019 02:46
orchidee said:
Oh lol good write and pic M.
You got any gold, frankincense, or myrrh? I shall need some soon. Depends if I\'m a wise man! (or a King of Orient).
January 3rd, 2019 02:46
WHERE AM I ?
Goldfinch60 said:
Within ourselves some parts are too involved with other images to be present.
January 3rd, 2019 02:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Within ourselves some parts are too involved with other images to be present.
January 3rd, 2019 02:02
WHERE AM I ?
Neville said:
excellent.. this is more zen than many might imagine.. N
January 3rd, 2019 01:30
Neville said:
excellent.. this is more zen than many might imagine.. N
January 3rd, 2019 01:30
PARADOX
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Edward, this is a beautiful metaphorical poem that is presented equally by the talented artist\'s rendition of the winter chill.
January 2nd, 2019 13:06
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Edward, this is a beautiful metaphorical poem that is presented equally by the talented artist\'s rendition of the winter chill.
January 2nd, 2019 13:06
PARADOX
Neville said:
yes indeed.. truth captured in water colours and words.... N
January 2nd, 2019 11:20
Neville said:
yes indeed.. truth captured in water colours and words.... N
January 2nd, 2019 11:20
PARADOX
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR SHARING : Uncle Mike its past 10 pm here ~ almost time for bed. Loved the Poem : my experience : of trying to rejuvinate Geriatrics (with exercise & massage !) is that people do die from their feet up ! Love the fluidity of your \"damp canvas\" water colour : very dynmic ! Take care of your feet : Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 2nd, 2019 04:22
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR SHARING : Uncle Mike its past 10 pm here ~ almost time for bed. Loved the Poem : my experience : of trying to rejuvinate Geriatrics (with exercise & massage !) is that people do die from their feet up ! Love the fluidity of your \"damp canvas\" water colour : very dynmic ! Take care of your feet : Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 2nd, 2019 04:22
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