Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
DREAMS LOST
Neville said:
extraordinarily well stated .. nice painting too..... N
January 31st, 2019 13:07
Neville said:
extraordinarily well stated .. nice painting too..... N
January 31st, 2019 13:07
DREAMS LOST
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing TIO MIKE : Lauras St Rocco sounds like the Patron St of Rock & Roll ! Love Water Colours always a Dreamy Quality !
\"Do you know any lawful impediment why this man may not be joined to this Woman ? Speak now or forever hold your piece\" I hate this bit of the Marriage Ceremony : In case a skeleton pops out of the cupboard ! Keeping my fingers crossed for my Wedding to Brian : AMEN ! Thanks for sharing :
Love in the MUSE : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check my POEM & FUSION : Thanks !
January 31st, 2019 04:33
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing TIO MIKE : Lauras St Rocco sounds like the Patron St of Rock & Roll ! Love Water Colours always a Dreamy Quality !
\"Do you know any lawful impediment why this man may not be joined to this Woman ? Speak now or forever hold your piece\" I hate this bit of the Marriage Ceremony : In case a skeleton pops out of the cupboard ! Keeping my fingers crossed for my Wedding to Brian : AMEN ! Thanks for sharing :
Love in the MUSE : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check my POEM & FUSION : Thanks !
January 31st, 2019 04:33
DREAMS LOST
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Great painting and write!
Regarding the painting,
if I cover the structure on the left and the one on the right with just the center one remaining , it reminds me of the main piazza in my Italian hometown! The center structure being the main church...St. Rocco’s Church...the patron saint of the town!
~Laura~
January 31st, 2019 04:10
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Great painting and write!
Regarding the painting,
if I cover the structure on the left and the one on the right with just the center one remaining , it reminds me of the main piazza in my Italian hometown! The center structure being the main church...St. Rocco’s Church...the patron saint of the town!
~Laura~
January 31st, 2019 04:10
DREAMS LOST
dusk arising said:
Where do those dreams go to? They were so splendid, they can\'t just disappear. I can\'t even remember them. All i recall is the euphoria.
January 31st, 2019 02:47
dusk arising said:
Where do those dreams go to? They were so splendid, they can\'t just disappear. I can\'t even remember them. All i recall is the euphoria.
January 31st, 2019 02:47
DREAMS LOST
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Was the impediment anything swoony?! Will Fido bark at it?
January 31st, 2019 02:45
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Was the impediment anything swoony?! Will Fido bark at it?
January 31st, 2019 02:45
DREAMS LOST
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes the realisation of our lives lead to sad consequences.
Love the artwork.
January 31st, 2019 02:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes the realisation of our lives lead to sad consequences.
Love the artwork.
January 31st, 2019 02:08
NO GOLD TO GLISTEN
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
A woeful tale poignant and respectfully told Michael, Beautiful write
January 30th, 2019 14:10
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
A woeful tale poignant and respectfully told Michael, Beautiful write
January 30th, 2019 14:10
NO GOLD TO GLISTEN
orchidee said:
Burlington Bertie got any gold? I\'m sure there\'s some in Burlington Shopping Arcade in London. Very posh. you can even have your shoes cleaned by a valet sort of person - for a price!
January 30th, 2019 12:55
orchidee said:
Burlington Bertie got any gold? I\'m sure there\'s some in Burlington Shopping Arcade in London. Very posh. you can even have your shoes cleaned by a valet sort of person - for a price!
January 30th, 2019 12:55
NO GOLD TO GLISTEN
dusk arising said:
Love the way you took my imagination and wove a mystery of lost imaginings, half touched victories and sorrow as i read on.
Got a headache now, ... dunno what it was all about really but it was a damned good read.
January 30th, 2019 12:15
dusk arising said:
Love the way you took my imagination and wove a mystery of lost imaginings, half touched victories and sorrow as i read on.
Got a headache now, ... dunno what it was all about really but it was a damned good read.
January 30th, 2019 12:15
NO GOLD TO GLISTEN
Neville said:
thoroughly enjoyed , a cracking poem without a shadow of a doubt... N
January 30th, 2019 10:55
Neville said:
thoroughly enjoyed , a cracking poem without a shadow of a doubt... N
January 30th, 2019 10:55
NO GOLD TO GLISTEN
Fay Slimm. said:
Wonderful metaphors used in this intriguing write Michael - loved every line. - -and wow - that watercolour is so expertly brushed in too.
January 30th, 2019 08:05
Fay Slimm. said:
Wonderful metaphors used in this intriguing write Michael - loved every line. - -and wow - that watercolour is so expertly brushed in too.
January 30th, 2019 08:05
NO GOLD TO GLISTEN
kevin browne said:
What a wonderful tale to write, and I hope you wipe away the blood from those wet atones.
January 30th, 2019 07:00
kevin browne said:
What a wonderful tale to write, and I hope you wipe away the blood from those wet atones.
January 30th, 2019 07:00
NO GOLD TO GLISTEN
sylviasearcher said:
So many layers to this.
I was drawn to the title as I was writing about a spix macaw and the golden branches it would perch upon.
January 30th, 2019 04:11
sylviasearcher said:
So many layers to this.
I was drawn to the title as I was writing about a spix macaw and the golden branches it would perch upon.
January 30th, 2019 04:11
NO GOLD TO GLISTEN
Goldfinch60 said:
That gold may not glisten on the hand but it certainly glistens within your words Michael.
January 30th, 2019 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
That gold may not glisten on the hand but it certainly glistens within your words Michael.
January 30th, 2019 01:58
I CREATE
dusk arising said:
A great jazz musician said that he lived for his mistakes. When i\'m soloing and make a mistake i have to recover which i can do but.... that mistake made me go places i would never have thought about going. I created music beyond my creative mind.
Does this happen to you with your painting?
January 29th, 2019 18:28
dusk arising said:
A great jazz musician said that he lived for his mistakes. When i\'m soloing and make a mistake i have to recover which i can do but.... that mistake made me go places i would never have thought about going. I created music beyond my creative mind.
Does this happen to you with your painting?
January 29th, 2019 18:28
I CREATE
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Poetry is in your DNA and painting is its shadow.. Excellent!!
January 29th, 2019 16:02
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Poetry is in your DNA and painting is its shadow.. Excellent!!
January 29th, 2019 16:02
I CREATE
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS UNCLE MIKE for a very creative Picture & Poem. My studies tell me that \"A Creative Mind ameliorates you whole Being : Amen\" I am always reading : writing : singing : playing (piano) and learning from nature & Experience & even from Books & the Media : BRIAN is the same : ALWAYS STAY CREATIVE !
Love through the Arts : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
PLEASE ADD A poem to our NEW FUSION : HOLIDAY PLANS 2019 ? Thanks A & B !
January 29th, 2019 04:56
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS UNCLE MIKE for a very creative Picture & Poem. My studies tell me that \"A Creative Mind ameliorates you whole Being : Amen\" I am always reading : writing : singing : playing (piano) and learning from nature & Experience & even from Books & the Media : BRIAN is the same : ALWAYS STAY CREATIVE !
Love through the Arts : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
PLEASE ADD A poem to our NEW FUSION : HOLIDAY PLANS 2019 ? Thanks A & B !
January 29th, 2019 04:56
I CREATE
Goldfinch60 said:
Your creations are as wonderful as ever Michael.
I would be interested to see the completed artwork.
January 29th, 2019 03:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Your creations are as wonderful as ever Michael.
I would be interested to see the completed artwork.
January 29th, 2019 03:24
I CREATE
orchidee said:
A good write Michael. What\'s Miss Berles created lately?
January 29th, 2019 02:54
orchidee said:
A good write Michael. What\'s Miss Berles created lately?
January 29th, 2019 02:54
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Fay Slimm. said:
A cascade of poetic wisdom again from your witty imagination my friend. - - a great play on words.
January 28th, 2019 18:21
Fay Slimm. said:
A cascade of poetic wisdom again from your witty imagination my friend. - - a great play on words.
January 28th, 2019 18:21
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ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE ~ nice to know even famous models like ML have the odd BHD ! Love the meaninglessness in your ODE ~ In our Poetry group we call them EDO\'s ! Yours as always BRIAN
January 28th, 2019 11:26
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE ~ nice to know even famous models like ML have the odd BHD ! Love the meaninglessness in your ODE ~ In our Poetry group we call them EDO\'s ! Yours as always BRIAN
January 28th, 2019 11:26
Be
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Only a poet with your talent and pen can wait and watch the night turn into daybreak. You shoo the night away , whether in metaphor or real, all so superbly in a cool creative way I enjoyed. Kudos.
Nice to read from u again,
Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too . Best wishes,
January 28th, 2019 09:34
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Only a poet with your talent and pen can wait and watch the night turn into daybreak. You shoo the night away , whether in metaphor or real, all so superbly in a cool creative way I enjoyed. Kudos.
Nice to read from u again,
Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too . Best wishes,
January 28th, 2019 09:34
Be
orchidee said:
She\'s in my bedroom! Oohh, a pic of the Mona Lisa, that is. Is she related to Sylla Berles at all?
January 28th, 2019 07:03
orchidee said:
She\'s in my bedroom! Oohh, a pic of the Mona Lisa, that is. Is she related to Sylla Berles at all?
January 28th, 2019 07:03
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sylviasearcher said:
Great poem to cast away the dark. Doesn\'t look like lisa is ready for the light though?
January 28th, 2019 06:43
sylviasearcher said:
Great poem to cast away the dark. Doesn\'t look like lisa is ready for the light though?
January 28th, 2019 06:43
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Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
...and morning it is!
Tousled hair?!...
Hmmm...🤔
What was Leonardo thinking of?
Or was he?
Hmmm...🤔
I love this pic along with your poem!
Monday Lisa...
Relatable!
Just call me...Monday Laura!
~Laura~
January 28th, 2019 06:36
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
...and morning it is!
Tousled hair?!...
Hmmm...🤔
What was Leonardo thinking of?
Or was he?
Hmmm...🤔
I love this pic along with your poem!
Monday Lisa...
Relatable!
Just call me...Monday Laura!
~Laura~
January 28th, 2019 06:36
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