Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
SHORTIE TWO
Netashi said:
Neat, a fine write to read in the morning, keep up the great work.
-Theta
December 11th, 2018 11:45
Netashi said:
Neat, a fine write to read in the morning, keep up the great work.
-Theta
December 11th, 2018 11:45
SHORTIE TWO
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
CONFESSION UNCLE MICHAEL
i good for the Soul !
The GOOD BOOK says ~
If we confess our Sins ~ God is
Faithful & will forgive our sins
And cleanse us from All UNRIGHTEOUSNESS !
Love the PAINTING ~ that Church must haunt you
Love the POEM it is very TRUE !
Yours as always ~ BRIAN the Forgiven One !
Please check \"I LOVE YOU BECAUSE ......... !
Please check OUR (CON)FUSION ~ Thanks A & B 🧡 🧡
December 11th, 2018 10:19
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
CONFESSION UNCLE MICHAEL
i good for the Soul !
The GOOD BOOK says ~
If we confess our Sins ~ God is
Faithful & will forgive our sins
And cleanse us from All UNRIGHTEOUSNESS !
Love the PAINTING ~ that Church must haunt you
Love the POEM it is very TRUE !
Yours as always ~ BRIAN the Forgiven One !
Please check \"I LOVE YOU BECAUSE ......... !
Please check OUR (CON)FUSION ~ Thanks A & B 🧡 🧡
December 11th, 2018 10:19
SHORTIE TWO
Lorna said:
I\'m not Catholic but I had many friends who were (not so much now as they have all given up).... but I used to think \"how therapeutic to be able to talk to someone you trust with your problems - and it\'s not as if you are paying them to listen\"........ but now imagine confessing all your innermost secrets to a pedophile in the next box......... ooops.... cast not the first stone but hope he catches this one in the head. And another thing (and please forgive this as I am in a giddy mood and that is most dangerous) but both today and yesterday when I saw \"Shortie\" the first imagine in my mind was a pair of boxer shorts........ why? Who knows but that somewhat set the tone for my replies...... you set me off!
December 11th, 2018 07:34
Lorna said:
I\'m not Catholic but I had many friends who were (not so much now as they have all given up).... but I used to think \"how therapeutic to be able to talk to someone you trust with your problems - and it\'s not as if you are paying them to listen\"........ but now imagine confessing all your innermost secrets to a pedophile in the next box......... ooops.... cast not the first stone but hope he catches this one in the head. And another thing (and please forgive this as I am in a giddy mood and that is most dangerous) but both today and yesterday when I saw \"Shortie\" the first imagine in my mind was a pair of boxer shorts........ why? Who knows but that somewhat set the tone for my replies...... you set me off!
December 11th, 2018 07:34
SHORTIE TWO
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes seal it is Michael - perceptive write and gorgeous water-colour.
December 11th, 2018 04:35
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes seal it is Michael - perceptive write and gorgeous water-colour.
December 11th, 2018 04:35
SHORTIE TWO
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
A heavy burden to bear!
It may never be unloaded...
...lest be defrocked!
I enjoyed the shortie along with your beautiful painting! Is that the same church you’ve depicted in other paintings you’ve posted?
~Laura~
December 11th, 2018 04:14
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
A heavy burden to bear!
It may never be unloaded...
...lest be defrocked!
I enjoyed the shortie along with your beautiful painting! Is that the same church you’ve depicted in other paintings you’ve posted?
~Laura~
December 11th, 2018 04:14
SHORTIE TWO
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Some may gossip about others sins. Oohh. They want juicy details. It\'s naughty!
Miss Berles told me...…...swoon, I can\'t say!
December 11th, 2018 03:22
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Some may gossip about others sins. Oohh. They want juicy details. It\'s naughty!
Miss Berles told me...…...swoon, I can\'t say!
December 11th, 2018 03:22
SHORTIE TWO
Goldfinch60 said:
The Seal of the confessional can hide so many crimes.
December 11th, 2018 02:31
Goldfinch60 said:
The Seal of the confessional can hide so many crimes.
December 11th, 2018 02:31
SHORTIE ONE
orchidee said:
Cooeeee M. Evening OK? Miss Berles visiting you?
December 10th, 2018 15:07
orchidee said:
Cooeeee M. Evening OK? Miss Berles visiting you?
December 10th, 2018 15:07
SHORTIE ONE
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS UNCLE MICHAEL : BRIAN & I always have to fight our own corner to keep UPWARDLY MOBILE ! Alas we pass many Dead Fish on the WAY ! Love the water colour ! Please check our latest fusion \"WHAT DO YOU WANT FOR CHRISTMAS\" BRIAN wants a FORD MU*TANG !
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
December 10th, 2018 14:56
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS UNCLE MICHAEL : BRIAN & I always have to fight our own corner to keep UPWARDLY MOBILE ! Alas we pass many Dead Fish on the WAY ! Love the water colour ! Please check our latest fusion \"WHAT DO YOU WANT FOR CHRISTMAS\" BRIAN wants a FORD MU*TANG !
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
December 10th, 2018 14:56
SHORTIE ONE
dusk arising said:
OMG you mean i must never go to the seaside again? The way gets much narrower upstream and i see hills ahead.
Did someone say that a lifetime against the flow will lead to a narrowing of ones prospects, or is it just ones outlook?
December 10th, 2018 09:33
dusk arising said:
OMG you mean i must never go to the seaside again? The way gets much narrower upstream and i see hills ahead.
Did someone say that a lifetime against the flow will lead to a narrowing of ones prospects, or is it just ones outlook?
December 10th, 2018 09:33
THE PERFECT CUP OF COFFEE
Lorna said:
Sitting peacefully looking at the beautiful little cottage in the English field with a cup of coffee to elevate endorphins even higher than the picture can take us........ rapture.
December 10th, 2018 06:35
Lorna said:
Sitting peacefully looking at the beautiful little cottage in the English field with a cup of coffee to elevate endorphins even higher than the picture can take us........ rapture.
December 10th, 2018 06:35
ORCHESTRATEY
Lorna said:
I\'m off to find out what the heck you are talking about here.... right to YouTube..... I\'m sure it will be fun. Oh but your pictures break my heart they are so beautiful..... too late for this life but in the next one I WANT TO LIVE IN ENGLAND.
December 10th, 2018 06:22
Lorna said:
I\'m off to find out what the heck you are talking about here.... right to YouTube..... I\'m sure it will be fun. Oh but your pictures break my heart they are so beautiful..... too late for this life but in the next one I WANT TO LIVE IN ENGLAND.
December 10th, 2018 06:22
SHORTIE ONE
Lorna said:
Oh such a beautiful picture Michael and a wise shortie........ please please please paint the stone! I want to see it!
December 10th, 2018 05:50
Lorna said:
Oh such a beautiful picture Michael and a wise shortie........ please please please paint the stone! I want to see it!
December 10th, 2018 05:50
SHORTIE ONE
Debsspot said:
Beautiful painting goes so well with your sage advice.
December 10th, 2018 04:39
Debsspot said:
Beautiful painting goes so well with your sage advice.
December 10th, 2018 04:39
SHORTIE ONE
Fay Slimm. said:
Short line wise advice Michael - - love the mysterious path leading to - where ?
December 10th, 2018 03:29
Fay Slimm. said:
Short line wise advice Michael - - love the mysterious path leading to - where ?
December 10th, 2018 03:29
SHORTIE ONE
orchidee said:
A fine write M.
One day I will be \'short\', but I just keeps singing endlessly. Well, when I compose me poems anyway.
Aww, and why they flog that horse - it\'s dead! No use flogging that sort, as it\'s said!
December 10th, 2018 02:50
orchidee said:
A fine write M.
One day I will be \'short\', but I just keeps singing endlessly. Well, when I compose me poems anyway.
Aww, and why they flog that horse - it\'s dead! No use flogging that sort, as it\'s said!
December 10th, 2018 02:50
SHORTIE ONE
Goldfinch60 said:
Wise poem Michael, going against the flow can be so wondrous.
December 10th, 2018 02:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Wise poem Michael, going against the flow can be so wondrous.
December 10th, 2018 02:35
ORCHESTRATEY
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS MICHAEL ~ When we finally cut our ties (Aprony stringies ?) with Europe we will be Able to let our hair down again ~ conflabby in UNWINESQUE ~ and restore the YINGY TONGY SONGY as our Natly Anthuma once again ~ its a FUNDIMOLD excusy ! Britian will not be GRATE again but we will be MAD again with Chief Clown Boris in No. 10 Clowning Street ~ NEMA ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Love the Village Scene ~ we will revert to Village Life MORRIS PRANCING ~ MAYPOLING & Cloggy Dancin\' ! Have a Kool Yool A & B & C* 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡 (C* denotes future Children !)
December 9th, 2018 07:56
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS MICHAEL ~ When we finally cut our ties (Aprony stringies ?) with Europe we will be Able to let our hair down again ~ conflabby in UNWINESQUE ~ and restore the YINGY TONGY SONGY as our Natly Anthuma once again ~ its a FUNDIMOLD excusy ! Britian will not be GRATE again but we will be MAD again with Chief Clown Boris in No. 10 Clowning Street ~ NEMA ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Love the Village Scene ~ we will revert to Village Life MORRIS PRANCING ~ MAYPOLING & Cloggy Dancin\' ! Have a Kool Yool A & B & C* 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡 (C* denotes future Children !)
December 9th, 2018 07:56
ORCHESTRATEY
Fay Slimm. said:
A fantastic re-assembly of language we now rarely hear yet remember well - - great stuff Michael - - and that lovely picture has a clarity to sigh for.
December 9th, 2018 04:19
Fay Slimm. said:
A fantastic re-assembly of language we now rarely hear yet remember well - - great stuff Michael - - and that lovely picture has a clarity to sigh for.
December 9th, 2018 04:19
ORCHESTRATEY
orchidee said:
A finey writey and piccy there M. My feeble attempt at Unwinesque! Oh well, my attempt\'s better than a …...poke in the eye.
December 9th, 2018 02:40
orchidee said:
A finey writey and piccy there M. My feeble attempt at Unwinesque! Oh well, my attempt\'s better than a …...poke in the eye.
December 9th, 2018 02:40
OILS DIFFUSED
dusk arising said:
\'Unsettled by truth\'... mind blowing line.
Oft i burn essential oils, too oft i burn the midnight oil.
December 8th, 2018 12:45
dusk arising said:
\'Unsettled by truth\'... mind blowing line.
Oft i burn essential oils, too oft i burn the midnight oil.
December 8th, 2018 12:45
OILS DIFFUSED
Neville said:
a very impressive collection of senryu sir and of course could also be a stand alone poem in its own write, if I am not mistaken... cleverly crafted.. I am also fast becoming a fan of your water colours sir, I presume they are of your doing... Neville
December 8th, 2018 12:05
Neville said:
a very impressive collection of senryu sir and of course could also be a stand alone poem in its own write, if I am not mistaken... cleverly crafted.. I am also fast becoming a fan of your water colours sir, I presume they are of your doing... Neville
December 8th, 2018 12:05
OILS DIFFUSED
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BONJOUR MON ONCLE MIKE ~ Brian here (its 4am Sunday in Auckland) ~ Love the watercolour with the diffused sky ! Love the odes SENRYU give unlimited scope to ones MUSE !
The DEAD do not stir
BUT - If they spake - t\'would be
In muted accents of despair !
Truth unsettled - passionate laments
Rigid grief of diffused oils intents !
One my day image - carved in Red Sandstone*
Shall brave the elements - while I rot in My TOMB
Red Sandstone is a local Mineral out of which
Liverpool Cathedral (1904) is built ~ AMEN
Yours as always ~ BRIAN
Please check the A & B collaboration POEM - TA
December 8th, 2018 10:24
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BONJOUR MON ONCLE MIKE ~ Brian here (its 4am Sunday in Auckland) ~ Love the watercolour with the diffused sky ! Love the odes SENRYU give unlimited scope to ones MUSE !
The DEAD do not stir
BUT - If they spake - t\'would be
In muted accents of despair !
Truth unsettled - passionate laments
Rigid grief of diffused oils intents !
One my day image - carved in Red Sandstone*
Shall brave the elements - while I rot in My TOMB
Red Sandstone is a local Mineral out of which
Liverpool Cathedral (1904) is built ~ AMEN
Yours as always ~ BRIAN
Please check the A & B collaboration POEM - TA
December 8th, 2018 10:24
OILS DIFFUSED
orchidee said:
So you met Mr Ainsworth in 1834, being quite old yourself too?! A fine write and pic M.
December 8th, 2018 03:08
orchidee said:
So you met Mr Ainsworth in 1834, being quite old yourself too?! A fine write and pic M.
December 8th, 2018 03:08
CUTLETS errr COUPLETS (2)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI MICHAEL ~ Missed your musings this week ! Love cutlets & rhyming couplets (double winny !) Your septet
of couplets put me in mind of some maxims:
MONEY : Love of is ~ ROOT of all Evil
NOAHS ARK : He forgot to take FISH
Men have been looking for the ever since !
EVOLUTION : Natures greatest myth
SEX : Independent of time
HARD WORK : Worth dying for
CASH : 19th C substitute for plastic
RULES : Made to be broken
more than once !
Yours as always BRIAN !
December 7th, 2018 16:49
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI MICHAEL ~ Missed your musings this week ! Love cutlets & rhyming couplets (double winny !) Your septet
of couplets put me in mind of some maxims:
MONEY : Love of is ~ ROOT of all Evil
NOAHS ARK : He forgot to take FISH
Men have been looking for the ever since !
EVOLUTION : Natures greatest myth
SEX : Independent of time
HARD WORK : Worth dying for
CASH : 19th C substitute for plastic
RULES : Made to be broken
more than once !
Yours as always BRIAN !
December 7th, 2018 16:49
CUTLETS errr COUPLETS (2)
orchidee said:
How much of your money has said \'goodbye\', and especially at this season?!
December 7th, 2018 04:54
orchidee said:
How much of your money has said \'goodbye\', and especially at this season?!
December 7th, 2018 04:54
CUTLETS errr COUPLETS (2)
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Michael.
I like them all but the first one resonates especially if you are the bank of Mum and Dad, or now in our case the bank of Nanny and Grandy.
December 7th, 2018 03:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Michael.
I like them all but the first one resonates especially if you are the bank of Mum and Dad, or now in our case the bank of Nanny and Grandy.
December 7th, 2018 03:29
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