Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



TICKLING STICK
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

Nice write!😂
Did my homework and learned a bit about Sir Kenneth Arthur Dodd!
I love your painting!
As I’ve mentioned before, it reminds me of my hometown in Italy!

Take care of yourself!

~Laura~



November 18th, 2018 21:04

TICKLING STICK
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Michael. Fido barked to warn me it could be swoony! lol.

November 18th, 2018 03:00

TICKLING STICK
Fay Slimm. said:

A smile to begin my day with a tickle of the vocal chords Michael - Ken D. would be proud of this effort to bring pleasure with words and Ooooh that watercolour is simply perfection.

November 18th, 2018 02:51

TICKLING STICK
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HOW TICKLED \'HI HAM ! MORNING Uncle Mike ~ beat us to Pole Position again ~ You seem very wit & fell this Morning ~ There will only ever be ONE KEN DODD ~ The Angels haven\'t stopped laffing since he went Home to Glory ~ AMEN Blessings and a Happy Tickleday ~
LOVE BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check Angelas COLUMNETTE ~ Meses del Ano ~ GRACIAS

November 18th, 2018 02:19

TICKLING STICK
Goldfinch60 said:

Doddy is alive and has moved from Knotty Ash to the midlands.

November 18th, 2018 01:36

Seasonals
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Nice seasonal imagery and your drawing is excellent.

Best,

November 17th, 2018 18:30

KNOCK KNOCK
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Nicely written Michael. Hope you are feeling much better.

Thanks for posting. :-)

November 17th, 2018 18:28

THE DEWS OF DAWN
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Again, quite an impressive poem Michael and I love your painting/drawing.

You are extremely talented and a joy to read. :-)


November 17th, 2018 18:26

THE DEWS OF DAWN
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

Another awesome write with a fantastic painting! You’re incredible!

Take care of yourself! Don’t overdo it!

Enjoy your weekend!

~Laura~

November 17th, 2018 15:19

THE DEWS OF DAWN
dusk arising said:

This lovely gal and her life\'s experience qualify her for free entry upon my \'must meet\' list. Has she a dawg?

Lovely use of vocabulary. Were u educated at Bash Street Junior School?

November 17th, 2018 10:10

THE DEWS OF DAWN
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Good Morning Uncle Michael : Its 10:30 pm here ! Warm sunny day (21C) and Ive been sailing again ! Love the FARM PAINTING : Id love to live in the Country but : because of work we will probably have to live in Town when I return to Essex in 2019 - 20. Love the Poem : I have called it \'Murmurings of Love\' because as you say (in your answer to OP) it is an open ended love Poem leaving the interpretation to the reader. I love WORDS and DISHABILLE is a classic. You have the same gift as FAY : to graft lovely words into your Poems : I guess it comes with time. BRIAN has posted today on Colour & Rainbows : please check. Love in the Muse : ANGEL🧡🧡🧡🧡

November 17th, 2018 05:01

KNOCK KNOCK
onepauly said:

lucky!

November 17th, 2018 02:24

THE DEWS OF DAWN
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Michael. Was she French - dishabille?!
I\'m off to see some artist\'s works now, at some Open Studios. Ooh!

November 17th, 2018 02:22

THE DEWS OF DAWN
onepauly said:

a love story?
if its not
I love the morning dew

in the summertime.

November 17th, 2018 02:08

KNOCK KNOCK
orchidee said:

How\'s that evening going M?

November 16th, 2018 10:15

KNOCK KNOCK
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

KNOCK KNOCK
Who\'s there ?
Cash
Cash who ?
No thanks ~ I\'ll have a PEANUT !

HI UNCLE MKE ~ Pleased your are recovering. Love your BALON ROUGE Painting a Classic. I\'ll commission one when Angela & I start a Family ! Angela has posted ~ A Seasonal Octet of Doublets ~ Seasons of My Mind ~ please check ~ THANKS ~ Yours BRIAN

November 16th, 2018 09:37

KNOCK KNOCK
dusk arising said:

Aww for a moment there i thought it was going to be your pet dawg come home and overjoyed at seeing you.

It will all end in tears.

November 16th, 2018 09:29

KNOCK KNOCK
orchidee said:

Are these two fine stanzas linked? Was it (1)Miss Berles knocking at the door, and then (2) you let her in?!
Another daft thing people say: \'I wonder who that is at the door?\' But how will they know unless they open the door? It does help to do that!
Best wishes M.

November 16th, 2018 02:32

KNOCK KNOCK
Goldfinch60 said:

Two good ones Michael.

I hope all is well.

November 16th, 2018 01:49

Seasonals
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

So glad you’re on a roll again!😉
Great doublets! Fun to read!
Thank you for sharing!
All the best!

~Laura~



November 15th, 2018 11:50

Seasonals
orchidee said:

Oohh, *staggers back in amazement* now you and your witticisms have returned! Is there a Mr De Witt E. Sizum? And why I am talking rubbish?! heehee.

November 15th, 2018 07:17

Seasonals
Fay Slimm. said:

A fine array of the follow-ups as season gives way to season in these enthralling lines Michael. So so pleased to read you are up and about again after your recent ordeal --hope things go on now according to expectations keep taking care my friend.

November 15th, 2018 06:26

Seasonals
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WOW UNCLE MIKE : You and Brian are always teaching me new poetic FORMS ! Its 11 pm (Thursday) so Im catching up in MPS before I hit the SACK ! I love this form because : like me : its Trim & Slim ! It is OBVIOUS but also SUBTLE ! Spring : Summer (x 2) Summer : Autumn (x 2) Autumn : Winter (x 2) and Winter : Spring (x 2) An OCTET of four DOUBLETS ! The Season is followed by a single word descriptor. Also the First Line & the Last Line must be IDENTICAL : I have a very analytical mind ! I have written mine to post tomorrow : please judge it on its structure ! I love all facets of MPS : it keeps me POETICAL ! Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡


November 15th, 2018 05:22

Seasonals
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic again Michael.
Where is Spring rolling to? Down a hill? Good wishes too.

November 15th, 2018 02:43

Seasonals
Michael Edwards said:

Sorry I\'ve been off the radar for 48 hours - all those who read the comments under my last posting will understand why. Anyway I\'m back and as for this posting it\'s yet another form I have devised and and is a good filler-in when you have just a few moments to spare. The \'rules\' are so obvious it\'s not even worth explaining them. Let me know what you think.

November 15th, 2018 02:08

Seasonals
onepauly said:

nicely put.

November 15th, 2018 02:07

FORGOTTEN
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

As I was reading this masterfully penned poem, it made me think of “The Man In The Iron Mask”! An outstanding write!

~Laura~

November 14th, 2018 16:15

FORGOTTEN
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Michael, this poem is excellent. To date, I don\'t believe you\'ve written one better.

Yet, who is this man? Did he live in ancient Rome? One can only guess.

Perhaps this mystery man is Socrates - Mamertine Prison, ancient Rome? Yet, I do not know if he was denied reading material.

Great write, Edward. :-)









November 13th, 2018 16:23

FORGOTTEN
Fay Slimm. said:

A fine summary of attention paid to the words those whom the world deemed best forgotten . A chill runs through every line Michael as we put ourselves into the places of vaults and chains.

November 13th, 2018 10:39

FORGOTTEN
kingOfOne said:

wise man. lovely charcoal drawing, did you draw it?

November 13th, 2018 04:59



« Return to the profile of Michael Edwards