Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



ABROGATIONS OF INTELLECT
Doggerel Dave said:

Didn\'t see the target as the religions - other secular orthodoxies, adhered to by many; rabid belief in markets, capitalism, political parties and so on.....

September 6th, 2024 20:22

ABROGATIONS OF INTELLECT
Goldfinch60 said:

We must have our own faith in life Michael, not that that others try to force on us.

Andy

September 5th, 2024 01:25

ABROGATIONS OF INTELLECT
Dan Williams said:

I\'m guessing not a Christian, wanting better explanations?

September 5th, 2024 00:12

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Rocky Lagou said:

As a person of faith, I actually love this poem, lol. \"Arbitrary faiths created with feathers\" is such an intriguing line, very descriptive. Thx for the poem and may you always see the good in life

September 4th, 2024 22:32

ABROGATIONS OF INTELLECT
Doggerel Dave said:

In the late sixties and early seventies tin badges were all the go – remember? (no? well neva mind..) One I remember very clearly stated β€œ99% is shit”
No change in the situation and your poem brings it literally up to date in a very literary way, Michael.


September 4th, 2024 17:13

ABROGATIONS OF INTELLECT
sorenbarrett said:

From this writing, it seems as though change is difficult and tradition is favored. Very nicely expressed.

September 4th, 2024 12:58

ABROGATIONS OF INTELLECT
MendedFences27 said:

Amen. Too many Gods and too little time to sort out who to believe in. Best to choose what suits you. A short poem with a lot of power. Loved it. - Phil A.

September 4th, 2024 11:17

ABROGATIONS OF INTELLECT
Michael Edwards said:

That\'s the truth of it.


September 4th, 2024 09:03

ABROGATIONS OF INTELLECT
Teddy.15 said:

It\'s all fake as it is true, I guess what we ourselves want to believe. 🌹

September 4th, 2024 08:27

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Goldfinch60 said:

I bet she was not best pleased Michael.

Andy

August 29th, 2024 00:59

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Thomas W Case said:

Funny work. Excellent.

August 28th, 2024 12:36

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sorenbarrett said:

Short but cautionary and fun to read.

August 28th, 2024 06:43

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Teddy.15 said:

There was an old lady called Shirley
She went to bed very early
When she awoke
The bed springs were broke
and her hair was really rather curly

ah I got there in the end 🀣

August 28th, 2024 03:24

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Doggerel Dave said:

I want me money back - i seed that picture before.
Advice to Ruth, Pete and anyone else who might listen: Motorcycles are inherently unstable vehicles. (I know - I\'ve ridden \'em.)

August 28th, 2024 02:28

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orchidee said:

A fine write M, lol.

August 28th, 2024 01:31

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Teddy.15 said:

When she did wake up
Much to her suprise
Pete was sitting eating
McDonald cheesy fries lol brilliant Michael as ever you nailed this wonderful Limerick πŸ’™

August 28th, 2024 01:23

DARK LIGHT OF NIGHT
Tristan Robert Lange said:

I absolutely love this! It is a piece that is left open to interpretation. I can absolutely relate with it, being a nocturnal creature. An awesome play on words, which I am a huge fan of. Well done! Excellent write and an easy favorite! Oh...and hello Stanley!

August 22nd, 2024 15:31

DARK LIGHT OF NIGHT
neckymonky said:

that\'s nice, i love its hidden meaning

August 22nd, 2024 03:47

DARK LIGHT OF NIGHT
Goldfinch60 said:

the sun and the moon both bring differing light to our lives Michael.

Andy

August 22nd, 2024 01:08

DARK LIGHT OF NIGHT
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 21st, 2024 09:26

DARK LIGHT OF NIGHT
Teddy.15 said:

You will find your light again dearest Michael, it will come back when you least expect it, oh your photo of that gorgeous dog makes my heart warm. 🌹

August 21st, 2024 07:41

DARK LIGHT OF NIGHT
orchidee said:

A fine write M. Who could not like Stanley - ahh!
Yes, is the sun wasted, only coming out when it\'s light already?! lol.
You seen Colonel Berle-Ington (Burlington)? Any relation to Miss Berles?

August 21st, 2024 05:18

DARK LIGHT OF NIGHT
sorenbarrett said:

A great poem whether taken literally or metaphorically nicely done

August 21st, 2024 05:06

CLOSE OF DAY
Neville said:



Both absolutely brilliant Michael

August 19th, 2024 16:18

CLOSE OF DAY
Goldfinch60 said:

A meaningful tale of loneliness and sadness Michael very well written.

Andy

August 19th, 2024 01:15

CLOSE OF DAY
Dan Williams said:

Sounds to me like you might just be in love. Nice work.

August 19th, 2024 00:22

CLOSE OF DAY
MendedFences27 said:

One can feel the sadness in this scene you have painted in words. The loneliness came through to me with.
\"Feeble memories of fading rainbows\" and \"Solace found in dull routine.\" A most enjoyable read. _ Phil A.

August 18th, 2024 20:30

CLOSE OF DAY
jarcher54 said:

For a moment I thought you\'d been spying on me! Deeply pictorial, you can see and hear the chipped china rattling the saucer. A real treat today!

August 18th, 2024 18:48

CLOSE OF DAY
Doggerel Dave said:

Great to see the pastoral theme back again Michael, but I do like the other stuff too.
Sad but enjoyable write.

August 18th, 2024 08:02

CLOSE OF DAY
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M.
Is this about Miss Berles?

August 18th, 2024 07:37

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