Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
ROUND, SQUARE, TRIANGLES
orchidee said:
Oh lol good write M.
You opened that Fire Door yet?! lol.
August 9th, 2023 08:17
orchidee said:
Oh lol good write M.
You opened that Fire Door yet?! lol.
August 9th, 2023 08:17
ROUND, SQUARE, TRIANGLES
Teddy.15 said:
They are easier to cook if round as they only need a few minutes dear Micheal also easier to cut, and more fun . quite genius if one thinks about it the square box is probably the mass production price. LoL π€£ I\'m being a smarty pants of course π
August 9th, 2023 08:04
Teddy.15 said:
They are easier to cook if round as they only need a few minutes dear Micheal also easier to cut, and more fun . quite genius if one thinks about it the square box is probably the mass production price. LoL π€£ I\'m being a smarty pants of course π
August 9th, 2023 08:04
THYME FOR SOME SHORTIES
Doggerel Dave said:
Jack and box came separately - the packaging filled the recycle bin?
August 5th, 2023 18:48
Doggerel Dave said:
Jack and box came separately - the packaging filled the recycle bin?
August 5th, 2023 18:48
THYME FOR SOME SHORTIES
Teddy.15 said:
Lmao π€£ππ€£ π oh no they would say to me that their wouldn\'t be a scientist in the world who could fathom it.
August 5th, 2023 12:14
Teddy.15 said:
Lmao π€£ππ€£ π oh no they would say to me that their wouldn\'t be a scientist in the world who could fathom it.
August 5th, 2023 12:14
THYME FOR SOME SHORTIES
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good writes Gold.
I read a bit about a supervised corridor for toddlers from indoors to outdoors but it had that dang Fire Door that had to be kept closed at all times. How would they ever get outdoors?! lol. Why don\'t they add \'except if there is a fire\'?
August 5th, 2023 02:08
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good writes Gold.
I read a bit about a supervised corridor for toddlers from indoors to outdoors but it had that dang Fire Door that had to be kept closed at all times. How would they ever get outdoors?! lol. Why don\'t they add \'except if there is a fire\'?
August 5th, 2023 02:08
FOUR 575s
elliechanner said:
Hi Michael,
Powerful poem and amazingly written as always. I\'m not sure if you remember me but I used to post my poems on here a long time ago. I found this site again and just wanted to say your comments on my posts inspired me so much when I was younger. I hope you know how much of a positive impact you had on me and reading your old comments on my poems has made me want to get back into it. So just wanted to say thanks :)
July 12th, 2023 04:03
elliechanner said:
Hi Michael,
Powerful poem and amazingly written as always. I\'m not sure if you remember me but I used to post my poems on here a long time ago. I found this site again and just wanted to say your comments on my posts inspired me so much when I was younger. I hope you know how much of a positive impact you had on me and reading your old comments on my poems has made me want to get back into it. So just wanted to say thanks :)
July 12th, 2023 04:03
FOUR 575s
orchidee said:
This is the devil\'s way though, as explained to us in church.
He gets us to do some wrong, (as if knocking on the front door), then kicks us when we are down and we\'ve had some misfortune, (knocking on the back door).
July 9th, 2023 01:42
orchidee said:
This is the devil\'s way though, as explained to us in church.
He gets us to do some wrong, (as if knocking on the front door), then kicks us when we are down and we\'ve had some misfortune, (knocking on the back door).
July 9th, 2023 01:42
FOUR 575s
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m so happy not to live in the UK right now, nuff said. β€οΈ
July 9th, 2023 01:42
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m so happy not to live in the UK right now, nuff said. β€οΈ
July 9th, 2023 01:42
FOUR 575s
orchidee said:
Bit of French there in the last one?! lol.
Miss Berles is checking them long words. She don\'t know what half of them means! heehee.
July 9th, 2023 01:40
orchidee said:
Bit of French there in the last one?! lol.
Miss Berles is checking them long words. She don\'t know what half of them means! heehee.
July 9th, 2023 01:40
FOUR 575s
2781 said:
The seven horns and seven eyes know exactly what\'s going on.
Interesting art work, not that I am about to try to interpret art...struggle enough with poetry!
Your writing challenges me, thank you.
July 9th, 2023 01:17
2781 said:
The seven horns and seven eyes know exactly what\'s going on.
Interesting art work, not that I am about to try to interpret art...struggle enough with poetry!
Your writing challenges me, thank you.
July 9th, 2023 01:17
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jarcher54 said:
Oh my... isn\'t the rule one poem a day? (-: Was her name by any chance Lucy?
July 6th, 2023 20:41
jarcher54 said:
Oh my... isn\'t the rule one poem a day? (-: Was her name by any chance Lucy?
July 6th, 2023 20:41
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Goldfinch60 said:
Good one Michael.
https://youtu.be/33-fVsL5Kdc
Andy
July 6th, 2023 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one Michael.
https://youtu.be/33-fVsL5Kdc
Andy
July 6th, 2023 01:47
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Teddy.15 said:
LOL have you ever met a 48 year old women in menopause lol π chuckle chuckle
July 6th, 2023 01:38
Teddy.15 said:
LOL have you ever met a 48 year old women in menopause lol π chuckle chuckle
July 6th, 2023 01:38
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orchidee said:
Oh lol, good writes and pic M.
Does Miss Berles iddle her fo - or shouldn\'t we ask?! lol.
July 6th, 2023 00:54
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good writes and pic M.
Does Miss Berles iddle her fo - or shouldn\'t we ask?! lol.
July 6th, 2023 00:54
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Doggerel Dave said:
Death to Google maps...rip and use pages out of that 1998 street directory - your only chance of finding the Pearly Gates.
Good laugh, Michael.
July 5th, 2023 18:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Death to Google maps...rip and use pages out of that 1998 street directory - your only chance of finding the Pearly Gates.
Good laugh, Michael.
July 5th, 2023 18:06
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Neville said:
Splendiferous Michael .. though shorties in form, they are each a tall order to beat and long on guffaws .. Neville
July 5th, 2023 02:26
Neville said:
Splendiferous Michael .. though shorties in form, they are each a tall order to beat and long on guffaws .. Neville
July 5th, 2023 02:26
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Teddy.15 said:
LOL oh dear, if I used Google maps I would for sure to end up in a lake or a colosseum or something lol I simply follow my nose π love this dear Michael
July 5th, 2023 02:25
Teddy.15 said:
LOL oh dear, if I used Google maps I would for sure to end up in a lake or a colosseum or something lol I simply follow my nose π love this dear Michael
July 5th, 2023 02:25
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orchidee said:
One from me:
In the Lottery is every ball really No.37? It comes up an awful lot!
July 5th, 2023 02:02
orchidee said:
One from me:
In the Lottery is every ball really No.37? It comes up an awful lot!
July 5th, 2023 02:02
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orchidee said:
Oh lol, good writes and pic M.
Yes, and any change with that Fire Door? Must it still be kept closed at all times? We\'ll burn to death!
July 5th, 2023 02:00
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good writes and pic M.
Yes, and any change with that Fire Door? Must it still be kept closed at all times? We\'ll burn to death!
July 5th, 2023 02:00
FIVE 575s
Caring dove said:
I like the mention of ribbons and stars .. nice and interesting writing ))
July 5th, 2023 01:14
Caring dove said:
I like the mention of ribbons and stars .. nice and interesting writing ))
July 5th, 2023 01:14
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Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant my friend Google maps has definitely done that a few times to me!
Have a fantastic day
July 5th, 2023 01:13
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant my friend Google maps has definitely done that a few times to me!
Have a fantastic day
July 5th, 2023 01:13
SHORELINE
Caring dove said:
Good writing .. like the use of personification in this .. nicely expressed , especially like the mention of β flirting with the gentle winds β and β whispering grass β
Nice way with words tho sad
June 28th, 2023 01:00
Caring dove said:
Good writing .. like the use of personification in this .. nicely expressed , especially like the mention of β flirting with the gentle winds β and β whispering grass β
Nice way with words tho sad
June 28th, 2023 01:00
ARCHERY CLASSES
Teddy.15 said:
LOL erm... Try wine tasting it\'s a luxury hobby lol β€οΈ
June 27th, 2023 12:18
Teddy.15 said:
LOL erm... Try wine tasting it\'s a luxury hobby lol β€οΈ
June 27th, 2023 12:18
ARCHERY CLASSES
Lauraπ» said:
Dear Michael,
Thank you for sharing and making me smile. You certainly delivered with your poem and your artwork. Love it.π
Laura π»
June 27th, 2023 09:08
Lauraπ» said:
Dear Michael,
Thank you for sharing and making me smile. You certainly delivered with your poem and your artwork. Love it.π
Laura π»
June 27th, 2023 09:08
ARCHERY CLASSES
Neville said:
an excellently executed bit o fun M .. good to see you posting again sir .. I used to be a keen archer and although it has been a while I still maintain my old English yew & orange wood longbow .. Neville
June 27th, 2023 03:35
Neville said:
an excellently executed bit o fun M .. good to see you posting again sir .. I used to be a keen archer and although it has been a while I still maintain my old English yew & orange wood longbow .. Neville
June 27th, 2023 03:35
ARCHERY CLASSES
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write M.
Will you try Miss Berles\' classes on \'The hunt for missing syllables\' or \'Archaic syllables dating back to 3000BC\'?!
June 27th, 2023 01:48
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write M.
Will you try Miss Berles\' classes on \'The hunt for missing syllables\' or \'Archaic syllables dating back to 3000BC\'?!
June 27th, 2023 01:48
SPILT FOOD
L. B. Mek said:
if only life was as easy
as having our spilt milk of life
licked clean by a keen cat..
plastic on fingertips
as our distance from those
sht stains of life..
(brevity, exemplified
with aplomb wise Poet
thanks Michael
hope you have a lovely weekend)
June 23rd, 2023 02:16
L. B. Mek said:
if only life was as easy
as having our spilt milk of life
licked clean by a keen cat..
plastic on fingertips
as our distance from those
sht stains of life..
(brevity, exemplified
with aplomb wise Poet
thanks Michael
hope you have a lovely weekend)
June 23rd, 2023 02:16
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