Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
LIMERICK 136
Poetic Licence said:
Great start to the day, a good chuckle, enjoyed the read
January 8th, 2025 02:12
Poetic Licence said:
Great start to the day, a good chuckle, enjoyed the read
January 8th, 2025 02:12
No2 FROM \'ANOTHER COLLECTION\'
Teddy.15 said:
Now recieving a wooden leg my friend, well that\'s just rude especially if it was in fact too be for the stocking lol (fabulous) hilarious and wonderfully written. 🌹
January 4th, 2025 10:47
Teddy.15 said:
Now recieving a wooden leg my friend, well that\'s just rude especially if it was in fact too be for the stocking lol (fabulous) hilarious and wonderfully written. 🌹
January 4th, 2025 10:47
No2 FROM \'ANOTHER COLLECTION\'
sorenbarrett said:
You made me laugh with this little gem of rhyme. That qualifies for a Fave
January 4th, 2025 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
You made me laugh with this little gem of rhyme. That qualifies for a Fave
January 4th, 2025 04:28
No2 FROM \'ANOTHER COLLECTION\'
orchidee said:
Good write M. lol. Miss Berles got any, erm, false parts?!
January 4th, 2025 03:46
orchidee said:
Good write M. lol. Miss Berles got any, erm, false parts?!
January 4th, 2025 03:46
No2 FROM \'ANOTHER COLLECTION\'
Poetic Licence said:
Brilliant, very enjoyable read
January 4th, 2025 03:25
Poetic Licence said:
Brilliant, very enjoyable read
January 4th, 2025 03:25
No2 FROM \'ANOTHER COLLECTION\'
Goldfinch60 said:
Happy Christmas Michael, Santa can be such a joker. \\LOL
Andy
January 4th, 2025 02:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Happy Christmas Michael, Santa can be such a joker. \\LOL
Andy
January 4th, 2025 02:28
LOST WALLET
Tom Dylan said:
A lovely little ditty, really enjoyed. Happy New Year!
January 2nd, 2025 06:02
Tom Dylan said:
A lovely little ditty, really enjoyed. Happy New Year!
January 2nd, 2025 06:02
LOST WALLET
Kevin Hulme said:
Nice One . I hate it when people say: ‘ It could be anywhere’.
Anywhere such a big place. I mean Worldwide.
January 1st, 2025 20:05
Kevin Hulme said:
Nice One . I hate it when people say: ‘ It could be anywhere’.
Anywhere such a big place. I mean Worldwide.
January 1st, 2025 20:05
LOST WALLET
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hahaha! This sounds like me searching around for my…well…wallet! And keys! 😂 well done Michael! A great laugh for the new year! Happy 2025 my friend!
January 1st, 2025 08:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hahaha! This sounds like me searching around for my…well…wallet! And keys! 😂 well done Michael! A great laugh for the new year! Happy 2025 my friend!
January 1st, 2025 08:24
LOST WALLET
Poetic Licence said:
A very positive message written in an entertaining way, enjoyed the read. Happy New Year To You and All
January 1st, 2025 04:38
Poetic Licence said:
A very positive message written in an entertaining way, enjoyed the read. Happy New Year To You and All
January 1st, 2025 04:38
LOST WALLET
orchidee said:
Good write M. lol. And - If we don\'t know what we\'re looking for, how will we know when we\'ve found it?!
Will we get out of those \'Keep closed at all times\' Fire Doors this year?
January 1st, 2025 03:26
orchidee said:
Good write M. lol. And - If we don\'t know what we\'re looking for, how will we know when we\'ve found it?!
Will we get out of those \'Keep closed at all times\' Fire Doors this year?
January 1st, 2025 03:26
LOST WALLET
arqios said:
Gah! I would be the one lost, the wallet always knowing where it is! Fun stuff, good to be reading you since last year 🙏🏻👍🏻✌🏻
January 1st, 2025 03:25
arqios said:
Gah! I would be the one lost, the wallet always knowing where it is! Fun stuff, good to be reading you since last year 🙏🏻👍🏻✌🏻
January 1st, 2025 03:25
UNKNOWN TO MAN
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Michael, so many thoughts come to mind and as with abstract art, which I also love, it can take you to so many places of which each inidivual becomes aware, I can see myself walking through a graveyard talking to all who are within their graves.
Andy
December 31st, 2024 02:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Michael, so many thoughts come to mind and as with abstract art, which I also love, it can take you to so many places of which each inidivual becomes aware, I can see myself walking through a graveyard talking to all who are within their graves.
Andy
December 31st, 2024 02:53
UNKNOWN TO MAN
arqios said:
I think we be agreed! From melting clocks to mind bending polygonal shapes we communicate rather creatively. And that is probably a better thing than not.
December 30th, 2024 21:28
arqios said:
I think we be agreed! From melting clocks to mind bending polygonal shapes we communicate rather creatively. And that is probably a better thing than not.
December 30th, 2024 21:28
UNKNOWN TO MAN
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Michael. This is, indeed, art. This poem speaks worlds to me for a number of reasons I won’t get into here, but let’s just say that I am deeply moved by this poem and this tale. For me, as a person of faith, I see something deeply unsettling (like a dimly lit mirror) and yet, profoundly liberating and healing if one heeds the warning.
Slight background. My faith journey has weaved both within and outside of the church/Christianity. I have seen the beauty of the church and all the good it can do; I have also witnessed and (truthfully) have experienced the ugliness that can come out of it. In fact, for some, the church has down right been an institution of horror.
This, for me, paints a scene of what I imagine to be a witch execution. It doesn’t have to be a witch execution, but that is the scene I envision when reading this. I need not get into the history of how the church spread a holocaust of horror against women, dissidents, Jews, Muslims, and anyone that basically stood in the way. We’d like to think that was just a few corrupt church leaders but, as Robert Eggers’ film The Witch artistically shows, the truth is far more convoluted than that.
The fact is people bought into those ideas of witchcraft, sorcery, devilry and scapegoating others, in spite of what Jesus Christ himself taught and said on violence and judgment. As an American, I need look no further than the Salem Witch Trials to see how common, “good” people can become murderous devils.
Truthfully, religion, itself is not the culprit; rather, it becomes the tool through which both human good and human evil can be perpetrated. Take religion out of it and the potential still exists and comes to fruition. People scapegoating other people for their own gain (financial, real estate, faux security or otherwise).
So, truthfully, my interpretation goes far beyond just religion and even the legal justice system. Those are the vehicles through which the moral is weaved. I believe, \"her fate discussed in taverns deep\", speaks to a deeper truth where there is a horrific interplay between those in power and those who keep them there. For me, this tale cautions us against our very human nature to let fear and/or power pervert us from angels into demons. All, the same, Michael. This is a work of art and I humbly bow to you, dear poet and artist! 🌹👏
December 30th, 2024 08:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Michael. This is, indeed, art. This poem speaks worlds to me for a number of reasons I won’t get into here, but let’s just say that I am deeply moved by this poem and this tale. For me, as a person of faith, I see something deeply unsettling (like a dimly lit mirror) and yet, profoundly liberating and healing if one heeds the warning.
Slight background. My faith journey has weaved both within and outside of the church/Christianity. I have seen the beauty of the church and all the good it can do; I have also witnessed and (truthfully) have experienced the ugliness that can come out of it. In fact, for some, the church has down right been an institution of horror.
This, for me, paints a scene of what I imagine to be a witch execution. It doesn’t have to be a witch execution, but that is the scene I envision when reading this. I need not get into the history of how the church spread a holocaust of horror against women, dissidents, Jews, Muslims, and anyone that basically stood in the way. We’d like to think that was just a few corrupt church leaders but, as Robert Eggers’ film The Witch artistically shows, the truth is far more convoluted than that.
The fact is people bought into those ideas of witchcraft, sorcery, devilry and scapegoating others, in spite of what Jesus Christ himself taught and said on violence and judgment. As an American, I need look no further than the Salem Witch Trials to see how common, “good” people can become murderous devils.
Truthfully, religion, itself is not the culprit; rather, it becomes the tool through which both human good and human evil can be perpetrated. Take religion out of it and the potential still exists and comes to fruition. People scapegoating other people for their own gain (financial, real estate, faux security or otherwise).
So, truthfully, my interpretation goes far beyond just religion and even the legal justice system. Those are the vehicles through which the moral is weaved. I believe, \"her fate discussed in taverns deep\", speaks to a deeper truth where there is a horrific interplay between those in power and those who keep them there. For me, this tale cautions us against our very human nature to let fear and/or power pervert us from angels into demons. All, the same, Michael. This is a work of art and I humbly bow to you, dear poet and artist! 🌹👏
December 30th, 2024 08:48
UNKNOWN TO MAN
sorenbarrett said:
Masterfully worded in a classic form it beats with the rhythm of a heart beat and flows in a thick rolling viscosity like honey toward the edge of the bread. It ends in mystery that feels dark yet enticing. I deem this a true masterpiece and work of art.
December 30th, 2024 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
Masterfully worded in a classic form it beats with the rhythm of a heart beat and flows in a thick rolling viscosity like honey toward the edge of the bread. It ends in mystery that feels dark yet enticing. I deem this a true masterpiece and work of art.
December 30th, 2024 04:50
UNKNOWN TO MAN
Poetic Licence said:
I see the death of a witch and the relief of the men, that they avoided her curse, very enjoyable read.
December 30th, 2024 04:17
Poetic Licence said:
I see the death of a witch and the relief of the men, that they avoided her curse, very enjoyable read.
December 30th, 2024 04:17
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orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. This partly (or entirely maybe) speaks to me of the church. I am currently reading of The Salvation Army and its formation. One thing was they didn\'t agree with the \'rich\' in churches, including pew rents. Though the Army does not have Holy Communion / Eucharist which I disagree with. Jesus even says to remember Him in taking bread and wine in Communion, which can be informally at a shared Christian meal too, as it was originally so. They became fanatical over alcohol abuse, and so the Communion wine. Yet some places changed the wine for coloured water, I read. A super organisation doing much good, I say - but not perfect - but who is perfect? End of discourse!
December 30th, 2024 03:52
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. This partly (or entirely maybe) speaks to me of the church. I am currently reading of The Salvation Army and its formation. One thing was they didn\'t agree with the \'rich\' in churches, including pew rents. Though the Army does not have Holy Communion / Eucharist which I disagree with. Jesus even says to remember Him in taking bread and wine in Communion, which can be informally at a shared Christian meal too, as it was originally so. They became fanatical over alcohol abuse, and so the Communion wine. Yet some places changed the wine for coloured water, I read. A super organisation doing much good, I say - but not perfect - but who is perfect? End of discourse!
December 30th, 2024 03:52
UNKNOWN TO MAN
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful snow art too. Very pretty and serene ❤️
December 30th, 2024 03:40
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful snow art too. Very pretty and serene ❤️
December 30th, 2024 03:40
UNKNOWN TO MAN
Teddy.15 said:
I see the many side of what a church can mean to each individual, after all they don\'t just represent death they represent life. I\'m not religious in anyway, so that\'s what I see, so very beautifully done. 🌹
December 30th, 2024 03:39
Teddy.15 said:
I see the many side of what a church can mean to each individual, after all they don\'t just represent death they represent life. I\'m not religious in anyway, so that\'s what I see, so very beautifully done. 🌹
December 30th, 2024 03:39
LIMERICKS 134 & 135
Cheeky Missy said:
If only we all weren\'t so stilted
Our humour would not be so wilted
But as good folks do say
When the wrong ones have sway
Tis better if all were well kilted.
These are humorous. I\'m sorry you\'ve a cold to keep you down. Limericks are far too much fun to keep out of, whence thank you so much for now sharing.
December 29th, 2024 19:47
Cheeky Missy said:
If only we all weren\'t so stilted
Our humour would not be so wilted
But as good folks do say
When the wrong ones have sway
Tis better if all were well kilted.
These are humorous. I\'m sorry you\'ve a cold to keep you down. Limericks are far too much fun to keep out of, whence thank you so much for now sharing.
December 29th, 2024 19:47
LIMERICKS 134 & 135
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Can\'t wait to see what you have been working on! In the mean time, what funny, lovely limericks Michael! 🌹👏
December 29th, 2024 16:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Can\'t wait to see what you have been working on! In the mean time, what funny, lovely limericks Michael! 🌹👏
December 29th, 2024 16:03
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