Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
HER LAST RESTING PLACE
Morwenna said:
Lovely images - hoar frost to dew in the context of old age to death (a kind of renewal??). And lovely unforced rhymes.
June 9th, 2022 15:58
Morwenna said:
Lovely images - hoar frost to dew in the context of old age to death (a kind of renewal??). And lovely unforced rhymes.
June 9th, 2022 15:58
HER LAST RESTING PLACE
dusk arising said:
Upon a churchyard green
My surname was seen
upon a weathered old stone
with its R.I.P. tome
A forebear unmet
from a 19th century set
a farmer dad said
finally sown in deathsbed
where\'ere i roam
whatever i bring to lifes fest
I\'ll arrive here in peace
at last finding rest
Your writing always inspires me M.E. You have a unique quality with word as well as those brushes.
June 8th, 2022 05:05
dusk arising said:
Upon a churchyard green
My surname was seen
upon a weathered old stone
with its R.I.P. tome
A forebear unmet
from a 19th century set
a farmer dad said
finally sown in deathsbed
where\'ere i roam
whatever i bring to lifes fest
I\'ll arrive here in peace
at last finding rest
Your writing always inspires me M.E. You have a unique quality with word as well as those brushes.
June 8th, 2022 05:05
HER LAST RESTING PLACE
Fay Slimm. said:
A few perfectly set lines of quiet scene to touch readers\' hearts Mike and the wonderful watercolour adds even more poignancy.
June 8th, 2022 02:39
Fay Slimm. said:
A few perfectly set lines of quiet scene to touch readers\' hearts Mike and the wonderful watercolour adds even more poignancy.
June 8th, 2022 02:39
HER LAST RESTING PLACE
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M.
Miss Berles got a mattock?
June 8th, 2022 02:07
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M.
Miss Berles got a mattock?
June 8th, 2022 02:07
HER LAST RESTING PLACE
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Michael (had to look up the word mattock, never heard this before).
Wonderful artwork.
June 8th, 2022 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Michael (had to look up the word mattock, never heard this before).
Wonderful artwork.
June 8th, 2022 00:54
IF YOU CAN’T TELL
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words Michael, do we really know anything at all?
Andy
June 5th, 2022 00:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words Michael, do we really know anything at all?
Andy
June 5th, 2022 00:32
IF YOU CAN’T TELL
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. Using 20 words when 5 will do - lavishly, generously, with abandon? Does Miss Berles count the syllables of these linguistics? Is there a Sale on of them?!
June 4th, 2022 07:39
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. Using 20 words when 5 will do - lavishly, generously, with abandon? Does Miss Berles count the syllables of these linguistics? Is there a Sale on of them?!
June 4th, 2022 07:39
IF YOU CAN’T TELL
Fay Slimm. said:
An intriguing look at the sphere\'s of linguistic double-speak - a super write Mike and oh what a picture - methinks I could spot an eye looking at me in that big white cloud.
June 4th, 2022 05:10
Fay Slimm. said:
An intriguing look at the sphere\'s of linguistic double-speak - a super write Mike and oh what a picture - methinks I could spot an eye looking at me in that big white cloud.
June 4th, 2022 05:10
IF YOU CAN’T TELL
Neville said:
my inability to read these words without smiling is a measure of just how good they are ... n truly ..
June 4th, 2022 03:34
Neville said:
my inability to read these words without smiling is a measure of just how good they are ... n truly ..
June 4th, 2022 03:34
IF YOU CAN’T TELL
dusk arising said:
He was here last week tomorrow wearing garish brilliant shades of grey as he soaked me in arid silent verbosity. Monochrome rainbows brightly disappeared as the news was unmade and we all rejoiced at the possibilty of history.
June 4th, 2022 02:36
dusk arising said:
He was here last week tomorrow wearing garish brilliant shades of grey as he soaked me in arid silent verbosity. Monochrome rainbows brightly disappeared as the news was unmade and we all rejoiced at the possibilty of history.
June 4th, 2022 02:36
LIMERICK 120
SureshG said:
Look on the brighter side, she fulfills all but maybe your physical desires.
June 3rd, 2022 10:13
SureshG said:
Look on the brighter side, she fulfills all but maybe your physical desires.
June 3rd, 2022 10:13
LIMERICK 119
Neville said:
Ha .. I remember only too well .. ta for that oh\' so very subtle reminder Michael :)
June 1st, 2022 01:52
Neville said:
Ha .. I remember only too well .. ta for that oh\' so very subtle reminder Michael :)
June 1st, 2022 01:52
LIMERICK 120
Goldfinch60 said:
I do hope that Alexa cuddles you as well Michael.
Andy
June 1st, 2022 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
I do hope that Alexa cuddles you as well Michael.
Andy
June 1st, 2022 00:34
LIMERICK 120
L. B. Mek said:
what why, is your wonderful wife away?
(luv the stark, sharp white tones
of those mountain peaks
such, deft touches
amongst a sea of wondrous colour)
thank you Michael, lovely
(I sense the presence
of baron hollowness
in your artwork\'s idyllic scenery
as mirror to your Poetry\'s words)
May 31st, 2022 05:53
L. B. Mek said:
what why, is your wonderful wife away?
(luv the stark, sharp white tones
of those mountain peaks
such, deft touches
amongst a sea of wondrous colour)
thank you Michael, lovely
(I sense the presence
of baron hollowness
in your artwork\'s idyllic scenery
as mirror to your Poetry\'s words)
May 31st, 2022 05:53
LIMERICK 120
dusk arising said:
overnight not a single sound was heard
till google woke me with a soothing word
but somehow it just dont make the grade
not a patch on my old Teasmade
i remain an early thirsty bird
kicked out me bed, theres no peace here
made to struggle wi\' caffitiere
coffee grinds
and bacon rinds
it\'s enough to raise an old mans tear
Shes so ungrateful t\'other half
sippin coffee in her morning bath
she\'ll not come down
till i warm her gown
i\'ll tell her she can stick it up her..... more tea vicar?
May 31st, 2022 02:22
dusk arising said:
overnight not a single sound was heard
till google woke me with a soothing word
but somehow it just dont make the grade
not a patch on my old Teasmade
i remain an early thirsty bird
kicked out me bed, theres no peace here
made to struggle wi\' caffitiere
coffee grinds
and bacon rinds
it\'s enough to raise an old mans tear
Shes so ungrateful t\'other half
sippin coffee in her morning bath
she\'ll not come down
till i warm her gown
i\'ll tell her she can stick it up her..... more tea vicar?
May 31st, 2022 02:22
LIMERICK 119
Goldfinch60 said:
Aah, that swinging chain, a thing of the past now but still remembered.
Andy
May 30th, 2022 00:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Aah, that swinging chain, a thing of the past now but still remembered.
Andy
May 30th, 2022 00:09
LIMERICK 119
MendedFences27 said:
My chuckle for the day. Some may not be aware of the chain in question,
but I remember one from Grandma house. You made me laugh. Thank you. - Phil A.
May 29th, 2022 11:56
MendedFences27 said:
My chuckle for the day. Some may not be aware of the chain in question,
but I remember one from Grandma house. You made me laugh. Thank you. - Phil A.
May 29th, 2022 11:56
LIMERICK 119
dusk arising said:
I listed each bog on a map
in case i need a quick crap
once felt theres no stopping
caught short doing shopping
whilst seated I\'ll oft take a nap.
Caught short by a rattling door
i realise I\'d started to snore
defecation completed
bodyweight now depleted
its time to go shopping some more
meandering round Marks and Sparks
I\'m plagued by troublesome farts
shop assistants in coma
from my trouser aroma
seeking more airy space I depart
Your super limericks have once again flushed out the ridiculous in my rhyming. Nice one M.E.
May 29th, 2022 10:48
dusk arising said:
I listed each bog on a map
in case i need a quick crap
once felt theres no stopping
caught short doing shopping
whilst seated I\'ll oft take a nap.
Caught short by a rattling door
i realise I\'d started to snore
defecation completed
bodyweight now depleted
its time to go shopping some more
meandering round Marks and Sparks
I\'m plagued by troublesome farts
shop assistants in coma
from my trouser aroma
seeking more airy space I depart
Your super limericks have once again flushed out the ridiculous in my rhyming. Nice one M.E.
May 29th, 2022 10:48
LIMERICK 119
JudyStella said:
As Teddy said, love this toilet limerick😂waiting for more!
May 29th, 2022 10:34
JudyStella said:
As Teddy said, love this toilet limerick😂waiting for more!
May 29th, 2022 10:34
LIMERICK 119
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write and pic M.
Erm, is the seat warm for Miss Berles\' use?
May 29th, 2022 01:51
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write and pic M.
Erm, is the seat warm for Miss Berles\' use?
May 29th, 2022 01:51
LIMERICK 118
Rozina said:
A chuckle in the morning to start the day. Fantastic watercolour like koi fish in the pond.
May 25th, 2022 21:16
Rozina said:
A chuckle in the morning to start the day. Fantastic watercolour like koi fish in the pond.
May 25th, 2022 21:16
LIMERICK 118
Fay Slimm. said:
Giggling again at your form of wit - - and loving the watercolour with its dashes of coloured surreal. Great post Mike.
May 25th, 2022 07:28
Fay Slimm. said:
Giggling again at your form of wit - - and loving the watercolour with its dashes of coloured surreal. Great post Mike.
May 25th, 2022 07:28
LIMERICK 118
orchidee said:
Good write M.
You know Mr W. Wix? Miss Berles know him?
May 25th, 2022 02:23
orchidee said:
Good write M.
You know Mr W. Wix? Miss Berles know him?
May 25th, 2022 02:23
LIMERICKS 115, 116 and 117
Rocky Lagou said:
Marvelous job Michael! The second one got me good! I adore your limericks!
May 23rd, 2022 08:19
Rocky Lagou said:
Marvelous job Michael! The second one got me good! I adore your limericks!
May 23rd, 2022 08:19
LIMERICKS 115, 116 and 117
Christina8 said:
The second one is hilarious, but they are all great. Limericks are difficult to do! Great job!
May 22nd, 2022 09:32
Christina8 said:
The second one is hilarious, but they are all great. Limericks are difficult to do! Great job!
May 22nd, 2022 09:32
LIMERICKS 115, 116 and 117
MendedFences27 said:
Had to look up \"fly tipper.\" But then what a good chuckle I had to start my Sunday morn. Artwork is amazing, as usual. Liked \'em all. - Phil A.
May 22nd, 2022 09:10
MendedFences27 said:
Had to look up \"fly tipper.\" But then what a good chuckle I had to start my Sunday morn. Artwork is amazing, as usual. Liked \'em all. - Phil A.
May 22nd, 2022 09:10
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