Comments received on poems by SauravRHS
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Briana said:
This is such a great poem. I enjoyed it a lot.
January 19th, 2017 09:01
Briana said:
This is such a great poem. I enjoyed it a lot.
January 19th, 2017 09:01
Who took my heart?
Anna said:
Sorry it took me so long to check out your own "who took my heart".
Oh but wow, it's so nicely written! Very cute! I especially adore how you took a literal sense to stealing someone's heart :)
November 2nd, 2012 16:05
Anna said:
Sorry it took me so long to check out your own "who took my heart".
Oh but wow, it's so nicely written! Very cute! I especially adore how you took a literal sense to stealing someone's heart :)
November 2nd, 2012 16:05
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Cheeky Missy said:
Very interesting and enjoyable piece. An apt tribute to the joys of modern society and txt msging, eh?
January 22nd, 2012 22:06
Cheeky Missy said:
Very interesting and enjoyable piece. An apt tribute to the joys of modern society and txt msging, eh?
January 22nd, 2012 22:06
15 Amendments to the Constitution of our minds
SauravRHS said:
I think that our minds get adjusted to what we see... I didn't mean the above changes to be sudden... I meant that if things were like that from the beginning then would it change anything? The answer is no, because our minds would get adjusted to what we see... For example, in the Harry Potter series the boy is suddenly whisked into a world of magic and the boy's mind gets adjusted. He starts believing that magic is real... So I say our minds are ignorant. They see what they are shown... They should look beyond everything and find out the real truth...
August 1st, 2011 21:54
SauravRHS said:
I think that our minds get adjusted to what we see... I didn't mean the above changes to be sudden... I meant that if things were like that from the beginning then would it change anything? The answer is no, because our minds would get adjusted to what we see... For example, in the Harry Potter series the boy is suddenly whisked into a world of magic and the boy's mind gets adjusted. He starts believing that magic is real... So I say our minds are ignorant. They see what they are shown... They should look beyond everything and find out the real truth...
August 1st, 2011 21:54
15 Amendments to the Constitution of our minds
Cheeky Missy said:
Very interesting contemplation, amusing and thought-provoking! I enjoyed it. It would change if 'twas all disordered like that, seems to little me. If we alter or disrupt the present order it changes the world around us, doesn't it? Yet your conclusion seems to indicate that it is only our perception that makes everything worth its present value. Hmmm. I dunno. Just my two bits at the moment.
July 31st, 2011 20:32
Cheeky Missy said:
Very interesting contemplation, amusing and thought-provoking! I enjoyed it. It would change if 'twas all disordered like that, seems to little me. If we alter or disrupt the present order it changes the world around us, doesn't it? Yet your conclusion seems to indicate that it is only our perception that makes everything worth its present value. Hmmm. I dunno. Just my two bits at the moment.
July 31st, 2011 20:32
Lord of the land
Anna said:
Lol, seriously random XD
Made me laugh; thanks for posting!
July 29th, 2011 20:09
Anna said:
Lol, seriously random XD
Made me laugh; thanks for posting!
July 29th, 2011 20:09
Who took my heart?
Cheeky Missy said:
Indeed! I like it VERY well,....excepting for taking the Lord's name in vain in the first words of the last line of the first stanza. Delightfully depicted, so wonderfully sweetly concluding, I quite enjoyed it!
March 15th, 2011 23:36
Cheeky Missy said:
Indeed! I like it VERY well,....excepting for taking the Lord's name in vain in the first words of the last line of the first stanza. Delightfully depicted, so wonderfully sweetly concluding, I quite enjoyed it!
March 15th, 2011 23:36
It 'edited'
Cheeky Missy said:
Again, very nicely expressed.....only now you remind me of the Lord's warning in Proverbs about the adulterous woman and her prey......he knows not that the dead are there, and that her guests are in the depths of hell....her house the way to death, going down to the chambers of hell....none that go unto her return again, neither take they hold of the paths of life....Anyway. just some thoughts provoked by this latest version of "It"....creepy as ever!
February 26th, 2011 11:16
Cheeky Missy said:
Again, very nicely expressed.....only now you remind me of the Lord's warning in Proverbs about the adulterous woman and her prey......he knows not that the dead are there, and that her guests are in the depths of hell....her house the way to death, going down to the chambers of hell....none that go unto her return again, neither take they hold of the paths of life....Anyway. just some thoughts provoked by this latest version of "It"....creepy as ever!
February 26th, 2011 11:16
Tushar Jain goes to Spain
Cheeky Missy said:
Ya, and dearly loving rhyming myself, I quite enjoyed it with a smile as well...it's a wonderful first footstep into the world of poetry....excellent! You might classify it under "humor" for it is amusing...and silly...and delightfully rhyming!
February 23rd, 2011 22:48
Cheeky Missy said:
Ya, and dearly loving rhyming myself, I quite enjoyed it with a smile as well...it's a wonderful first footstep into the world of poetry....excellent! You might classify it under "humor" for it is amusing...and silly...and delightfully rhyming!
February 23rd, 2011 22:48
It
Cheeky Missy said:
Almost reminiscent that.....every man is tempted when he is drawn away of his own lust and enticed; then when lust has conceived it brings forth sin, and sin, when it is finished, brings forth death....like man runs unwittingly to his own destruction. Creepy.
February 22nd, 2011 23:55
Cheeky Missy said:
Almost reminiscent that.....every man is tempted when he is drawn away of his own lust and enticed; then when lust has conceived it brings forth sin, and sin, when it is finished, brings forth death....like man runs unwittingly to his own destruction. Creepy.
February 22nd, 2011 23:55
Elysium
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Thank you for your helpful author's comment...it made the poem more understandable. The image with it is excellent. However, I beg to differ....heaven is no imaginary place to make stories of...it is all too real, where God dwells. As He says, Heaven is My throne and earth is My footstool.... God's Word the Bible tells us all we can know about it, so far as I know.
February 22nd, 2011 00:09
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Thank you for your helpful author's comment...it made the poem more understandable. The image with it is excellent. However, I beg to differ....heaven is no imaginary place to make stories of...it is all too real, where God dwells. As He says, Heaven is My throne and earth is My footstool.... God's Word the Bible tells us all we can know about it, so far as I know.
February 22nd, 2011 00:09
It
Alexandre Landsley said:
The picture just capture my attention and the poem just do the rest........good one
February 21st, 2011 13:07
Alexandre Landsley said:
The picture just capture my attention and the poem just do the rest........good one
February 21st, 2011 13:07
The treasures of life
SauravRHS said:
yeah, sadly it is true... But things have solved by now. And our friendship is cemented again! Thanks for reading!
February 21st, 2011 07:00
SauravRHS said:
yeah, sadly it is true... But things have solved by now. And our friendship is cemented again! Thanks for reading!
February 21st, 2011 07:00
The treasures of life
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw, wow....thanks for sharing....it is very sorrowful. Sorry even more so that it is really true? Lovely.
February 21st, 2011 00:19
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw, wow....thanks for sharing....it is very sorrowful. Sorry even more so that it is really true? Lovely.
February 21st, 2011 00:19
Friend-ship
Cheeky Missy said:
Ya, I love how you took the term and made such use of it...clever and delightful too. I love the adorable pair pictured at the top, and enjoyed the symbolism and characterization of friendship as a sailing vessel, with all its equipage and etc.
February 19th, 2011 23:27
Cheeky Missy said:
Ya, I love how you took the term and made such use of it...clever and delightful too. I love the adorable pair pictured at the top, and enjoyed the symbolism and characterization of friendship as a sailing vessel, with all its equipage and etc.
February 19th, 2011 23:27
Friend-ship
StormyDay said:
That is so clever! "Friend-Ship", I like it very much.
February 18th, 2011 12:54
StormyDay said:
That is so clever! "Friend-Ship", I like it very much.
February 18th, 2011 12:54
It is time to write a poem!
nair36 said:
"When you meet a long lost mate and find that his love has turned into hate" I like this line the most. Keep up the good writing.
February 16th, 2011 17:44
nair36 said:
"When you meet a long lost mate and find that his love has turned into hate" I like this line the most. Keep up the good writing.
February 16th, 2011 17:44
A sweet test, a sweet game
Dolphine29 said:
C'est trés vrai. It is very true. I guess that in loving, most of us expect to feel the same intensity back to us or as close to the feeling towards our object or desire. But I it is my own idea, that we should not wait to come back to us as it can come naturally, but just enjoy to give what we want with love.
Best
Dolphine
February 16th, 2011 14:19
Dolphine29 said:
C'est trés vrai. It is very true. I guess that in loving, most of us expect to feel the same intensity back to us or as close to the feeling towards our object or desire. But I it is my own idea, that we should not wait to come back to us as it can come naturally, but just enjoy to give what we want with love.
Best
Dolphine
February 16th, 2011 14:19
It is time to write a poem!
Anna said:
Omygod. This poem is beyond amazing!!!
February 16th, 2011 10:11
Anna said:
Omygod. This poem is beyond amazing!!!
February 16th, 2011 10:11
It is time to write a poem!
Belinda AMeharry said:
How very wise this poem is.
February 16th, 2011 05:42
Belinda AMeharry said:
How very wise this poem is.
February 16th, 2011 05:42
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