Comments received on poems by Quemis
Satyriasis
sylviasearcher said:
Thank you for sharing this.
I love the line lie yourself to sleep
Today I am waking up
July 11th, 2018 01:56
sylviasearcher said:
Thank you for sharing this.
I love the line lie yourself to sleep
Today I am waking up
July 11th, 2018 01:56
Mirror Mirror
HangingbyaHalo said:
Your words captivate me. Leaving me on the edge of my seat for the next line. This is wonderful!
May 26th, 2018 08:18
HangingbyaHalo said:
Your words captivate me. Leaving me on the edge of my seat for the next line. This is wonderful!
May 26th, 2018 08:18
Pigpen
Velvetlascivious said:
Yes definitely a compliment and a bit of speechlessness.. I haven\'t been on here in awhile but every time I happen back, I re read this one, this little light we cradle is a dance I love to burn.. I adore this line. And I can feel the way you love her. You have a beautiful way with words that always leaves me in awe and wanting more.
April 16th, 2018 11:54
Velvetlascivious said:
Yes definitely a compliment and a bit of speechlessness.. I haven\'t been on here in awhile but every time I happen back, I re read this one, this little light we cradle is a dance I love to burn.. I adore this line. And I can feel the way you love her. You have a beautiful way with words that always leaves me in awe and wanting more.
April 16th, 2018 11:54
Intersectus
sylviasearcher said:
This is very well written. I am I\'m awe at proper word artists
April 4th, 2018 02:37
sylviasearcher said:
This is very well written. I am I\'m awe at proper word artists
April 4th, 2018 02:37
A Hymn for the deathless
Alex Arnot said:
Spectacular! The language, the message, all fantastic!
August 25th, 2017 12:15
Alex Arnot said:
Spectacular! The language, the message, all fantastic!
August 25th, 2017 12:15
A Hymn for the deathless
WriteBeLight said:
True about the resignation to a culture of fear. You have grasped human nature so well Psentinel. You are very wise.
August 25th, 2017 11:48
WriteBeLight said:
True about the resignation to a culture of fear. You have grasped human nature so well Psentinel. You are very wise.
August 25th, 2017 11:48
I can\'t wait to be an old man
Accidental Poet said:
Now is the time to make the memories you\'ll smile of later on. Another great write.
August 3rd, 2017 17:56
Accidental Poet said:
Now is the time to make the memories you\'ll smile of later on. Another great write.
August 3rd, 2017 17:56
Sharp Stone Syllables
Accidental Poet said:
In one of your reply notes you said that you do care. Caring about people is where it all begins. Eventually the rest will fall into place over time. You do have a talent for writing.
August 3rd, 2017 17:52
Accidental Poet said:
In one of your reply notes you said that you do care. Caring about people is where it all begins. Eventually the rest will fall into place over time. You do have a talent for writing.
August 3rd, 2017 17:52
I can\'t wait to be an old man
orchidee said:
A couple of lines in your poem seem to maybe hint at the difficulties of old age:
Write it in large font - not seeing too well?
Rigid mind - not thinking so clearly?
A jig I cannot hear - not hearing too well?
Of course, not all these things happen to EVERY old person. Some may not even experience any of these things, nor similar things.
August 1st, 2017 12:50
orchidee said:
A couple of lines in your poem seem to maybe hint at the difficulties of old age:
Write it in large font - not seeing too well?
Rigid mind - not thinking so clearly?
A jig I cannot hear - not hearing too well?
Of course, not all these things happen to EVERY old person. Some may not even experience any of these things, nor similar things.
August 1st, 2017 12:50
I can\'t wait to be an old man
orchidee said:
A fine write - should be ticked as 18+, I think. Even though the frustration etc, may make the F-words permissible here.
Yet that\'s life, for all of us. None get any younger.
August 1st, 2017 08:39
orchidee said:
A fine write - should be ticked as 18+, I think. Even though the frustration etc, may make the F-words permissible here.
Yet that\'s life, for all of us. None get any younger.
August 1st, 2017 08:39
I can\'t wait to be an old man
WriteBeLight said:
Pretty deep Psentinel, but enjoy the ride in the meantime :)
August 1st, 2017 08:08
WriteBeLight said:
Pretty deep Psentinel, but enjoy the ride in the meantime :)
August 1st, 2017 08:08
Impending Bloom
kevin browne said:
a good strong message with \'more behind the scenes\' than we think. I love this verse, its compelling, it holds its own and you know nobody will ever knock this one over. good write.
June 21st, 2017 14:23
kevin browne said:
a good strong message with \'more behind the scenes\' than we think. I love this verse, its compelling, it holds its own and you know nobody will ever knock this one over. good write.
June 21st, 2017 14:23
Changeling
Augustus said:
About authenticity, often challenging to find in another. Enjoyed.
May 25th, 2017 12:00
Augustus said:
About authenticity, often challenging to find in another. Enjoyed.
May 25th, 2017 12:00
Changeling
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Very Very Well Written..Your work always amazes me brutha....another brilliant masterpiece...
May 25th, 2017 04:21
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Very Very Well Written..Your work always amazes me brutha....another brilliant masterpiece...
May 25th, 2017 04:21
Lore Lights
Alex Arnot said:
It\'s pretty rare to see a poem with so much alliteration. This is great!
April 9th, 2017 19:38
Alex Arnot said:
It\'s pretty rare to see a poem with so much alliteration. This is great!
April 9th, 2017 19:38
Lore Lights
WriteBeLight said:
Great job with the words. Just seem to roll and flow so well!
April 9th, 2017 07:10
WriteBeLight said:
Great job with the words. Just seem to roll and flow so well!
April 9th, 2017 07:10
Lore Lights
orchidee said:
Can I alliterate a lot in aspiring to appreciate this aration (oration)? Doh! Nope, I can\'t match your poem. Only if I have too many sherries, then every word ends in \'ish\'! heehee.
April 8th, 2017 14:47
orchidee said:
Can I alliterate a lot in aspiring to appreciate this aration (oration)? Doh! Nope, I can\'t match your poem. Only if I have too many sherries, then every word ends in \'ish\'! heehee.
April 8th, 2017 14:47
Formless
Aa Harvey said:
This is a really good poem. I like the \'drowning in the cloak of self\' line. I have been watching Harry Potter films recently and it reminds me of his invisibility cloak.
March 23rd, 2017 17:59
Aa Harvey said:
This is a really good poem. I like the \'drowning in the cloak of self\' line. I have been watching Harry Potter films recently and it reminds me of his invisibility cloak.
March 23rd, 2017 17:59
Drought
MendedFences27 said:
One minute it\'s soft and beautiful, and then it\'s gut wrenching- raw. Like a painted fresco at which someone threw a can of black paint. But, the beauty is worth the trudge through the darkness. Your metaphors work wonders and your phrases are imaginative. Great write. - Phil A.
March 2nd, 2017 14:11
MendedFences27 said:
One minute it\'s soft and beautiful, and then it\'s gut wrenching- raw. Like a painted fresco at which someone threw a can of black paint. But, the beauty is worth the trudge through the darkness. Your metaphors work wonders and your phrases are imaginative. Great write. - Phil A.
March 2nd, 2017 14:11
Drought
WriteBeLight said:
Love in particular the second to last stanza. Excellent poetry Psentinel!
March 2nd, 2017 12:12
WriteBeLight said:
Love in particular the second to last stanza. Excellent poetry Psentinel!
March 2nd, 2017 12:12
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