Comments received on poems by Quemis
Sharp Stone Syllables
Augustus said:
A tortured soul laments. It pains me that you are hurting so. Sending you positive thoughts. The poem was beautifully written.
February 18th, 2017 01:28
Augustus said:
A tortured soul laments. It pains me that you are hurting so. Sending you positive thoughts. The poem was beautifully written.
February 18th, 2017 01:28
Sharp Stone Syllables
MendedFences27 said:
One must love one\'s self before they can love another. Feelings of self doubt, or low self esteem are the barrier to inter-personal relationships. We are all people, no two the same, none above or below the other. You are who you are, accept it, relish in it, and stop worrying what others will think.
You write superbly. You create interesting images. Your words flow. Who else would have said, \"tessellate my soul\" ? - Phil A.
February 17th, 2017 12:40
MendedFences27 said:
One must love one\'s self before they can love another. Feelings of self doubt, or low self esteem are the barrier to inter-personal relationships. We are all people, no two the same, none above or below the other. You are who you are, accept it, relish in it, and stop worrying what others will think.
You write superbly. You create interesting images. Your words flow. Who else would have said, \"tessellate my soul\" ? - Phil A.
February 17th, 2017 12:40
Sharp Stone Syllables
WriteBeLight said:
Great work, and great insight, bringing up the subjects of self deprecating, self doubting, and expressing low self esteem, and so on. I can relate to the lines and I am sure many others can as well.
February 16th, 2017 06:45
WriteBeLight said:
Great work, and great insight, bringing up the subjects of self deprecating, self doubting, and expressing low self esteem, and so on. I can relate to the lines and I am sure many others can as well.
February 16th, 2017 06:45
Out of Sync
JustABird said:
Wow. I\'m so in awe of your way with words. It seems so effortless. And you always have something interesting and intelligent to say. Well done.
February 13th, 2017 08:45
JustABird said:
Wow. I\'m so in awe of your way with words. It seems so effortless. And you always have something interesting and intelligent to say. Well done.
February 13th, 2017 08:45
Out of Sync
Christina8 said:
This poem is excellent in every way. Rhyme and rhythm and flow. Your words instill great imagery in my mind and it was a pleasure to read!-Christina
January 26th, 2017 15:18
Christina8 said:
This poem is excellent in every way. Rhyme and rhythm and flow. Your words instill great imagery in my mind and it was a pleasure to read!-Christina
January 26th, 2017 15:18
Out of Sync
Tony36 said:
Very powerful both in word and in vision. Great write
January 26th, 2017 09:41
Tony36 said:
Very powerful both in word and in vision. Great write
January 26th, 2017 09:41
Out of Sync
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the strong flow of this piece - good imagery too. Well done.
January 26th, 2017 07:02
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the strong flow of this piece - good imagery too. Well done.
January 26th, 2017 07:02
Immolation
Augustus said:
Come fly with me. Wow. \"Glass house under ground.\" Enjoyed a lot.
January 25th, 2017 19:31
Augustus said:
Come fly with me. Wow. \"Glass house under ground.\" Enjoyed a lot.
January 25th, 2017 19:31
Immolation
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Another BRILLIANT MASTERPIECE...MAN you got it...Fo sho!!..
January 25th, 2017 05:05
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Another BRILLIANT MASTERPIECE...MAN you got it...Fo sho!!..
January 25th, 2017 05:05
Massive
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Amazing!!Absolutely stunning, brilliant work here!!Wow...
January 23rd, 2017 05:38
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Amazing!!Absolutely stunning, brilliant work here!!Wow...
January 23rd, 2017 05:38
Togetherness
Augustus said:
I\'m not a big fan of the collective but you expressed it well.
January 18th, 2017 13:26
Augustus said:
I\'m not a big fan of the collective but you expressed it well.
January 18th, 2017 13:26
A Double Edged Sword
WriteBeLight said:
Excellent imagery. One can have a photographic memory as well 😊 Very nice.
January 17th, 2017 19:56
WriteBeLight said:
Excellent imagery. One can have a photographic memory as well 😊 Very nice.
January 17th, 2017 19:56
A Double Edged Sword
Augustus said:
The double edged sword of memory. Nicely done.
January 17th, 2017 16:19
Augustus said:
The double edged sword of memory. Nicely done.
January 17th, 2017 16:19
An Ode to the Unfamiliar
WriteBeLight said:
You are so great. I love the first 4 lines, and the next and the next, and so on, and have read that over and over. Excellent as always Psentinel.
January 10th, 2017 19:27
WriteBeLight said:
You are so great. I love the first 4 lines, and the next and the next, and so on, and have read that over and over. Excellent as always Psentinel.
January 10th, 2017 19:27
An Ode to the Unfamiliar
mrandrewtheguy said:
this is so good, I myself enjoy \\writing about human condition, and I have been telling people this for a long time, you put it to words very well.
January 10th, 2017 15:42
mrandrewtheguy said:
this is so good, I myself enjoy \\writing about human condition, and I have been telling people this for a long time, you put it to words very well.
January 10th, 2017 15:42
An Ode to the Unfamiliar
Phoenix8523 said:
I enjoyed reading this very much! -- phoenix
January 10th, 2017 15:39
Phoenix8523 said:
I enjoyed reading this very much! -- phoenix
January 10th, 2017 15:39
Anxiety.
elchupacabra said:
there is so much truth behind the words. that is why we write.
January 5th, 2017 23:13
elchupacabra said:
there is so much truth behind the words. that is why we write.
January 5th, 2017 23:13
Anxiety.
WriteBeLight said:
No, do not sleep forever...wake up and write some more! I can relate to how the person in this poem feels, when there is something you just cannot put to sleep..no pun intended..and it keeps at you. I usually get up and write something and then go back and try to fall asleep. Also, I try not to drink any coffee, etc. that would keep me from falling off to sleep...:)
January 5th, 2017 18:53
WriteBeLight said:
No, do not sleep forever...wake up and write some more! I can relate to how the person in this poem feels, when there is something you just cannot put to sleep..no pun intended..and it keeps at you. I usually get up and write something and then go back and try to fall asleep. Also, I try not to drink any coffee, etc. that would keep me from falling off to sleep...:)
January 5th, 2017 18:53
Anxiety.
Christina8 said:
Well written poem, I really like the first two stanzas. I have anxiety too. Hang in there!
January 5th, 2017 14:38
Christina8 said:
Well written poem, I really like the first two stanzas. I have anxiety too. Hang in there!
January 5th, 2017 14:38
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