Comments received on poems by Quemis
Drought
MendedFences27 said:
One minute it\'s soft and beautiful, and then it\'s gut wrenching- raw. Like a painted fresco at which someone threw a can of black paint. But, the beauty is worth the trudge through the darkness. Your metaphors work wonders and your phrases are imaginative. Great write. - Phil A.
March 2nd, 2017 14:11
MendedFences27 said:
One minute it\'s soft and beautiful, and then it\'s gut wrenching- raw. Like a painted fresco at which someone threw a can of black paint. But, the beauty is worth the trudge through the darkness. Your metaphors work wonders and your phrases are imaginative. Great write. - Phil A.
March 2nd, 2017 14:11
Drought
WriteBeLight said:
Love in particular the second to last stanza. Excellent poetry Psentinel!
March 2nd, 2017 12:12
WriteBeLight said:
Love in particular the second to last stanza. Excellent poetry Psentinel!
March 2nd, 2017 12:12
Drought
Augustus said:
\"Spices far from whispered waters\" wow. Great imagery.
March 2nd, 2017 11:37
Augustus said:
\"Spices far from whispered waters\" wow. Great imagery.
March 2nd, 2017 11:37
Drought
willyweed said:
great rhyme and great Ode to the poet that is you, me and every one who every tried to be! nice work sir!
March 2nd, 2017 05:20
willyweed said:
great rhyme and great Ode to the poet that is you, me and every one who every tried to be! nice work sir!
March 2nd, 2017 05:20
Remand
Augustus said:
Curse the plans. It\'s all for naught. Love the photo art.
February 22nd, 2017 17:01
Augustus said:
Curse the plans. It\'s all for naught. Love the photo art.
February 22nd, 2017 17:01
Remand
MendedFences27 said:
Fertility and fallow land, ending in dust. We all end in dust, everything even mountains get worn down to dust. We cannot bring a living thing from out of fallow ground, and human fertility is a fickle thing, science tries to conquer both issues, but with limited success. I liked the lines, \"Fertility is just a brand, a contrast born from life\'s demand\" - Phil A.
February 22nd, 2017 15:14
MendedFences27 said:
Fertility and fallow land, ending in dust. We all end in dust, everything even mountains get worn down to dust. We cannot bring a living thing from out of fallow ground, and human fertility is a fickle thing, science tries to conquer both issues, but with limited success. I liked the lines, \"Fertility is just a brand, a contrast born from life\'s demand\" - Phil A.
February 22nd, 2017 15:14
Sharp Stone Syllables
Augustus said:
A tortured soul laments. It pains me that you are hurting so. Sending you positive thoughts. The poem was beautifully written.
February 18th, 2017 01:28
Augustus said:
A tortured soul laments. It pains me that you are hurting so. Sending you positive thoughts. The poem was beautifully written.
February 18th, 2017 01:28
Sharp Stone Syllables
MendedFences27 said:
One must love one\'s self before they can love another. Feelings of self doubt, or low self esteem are the barrier to inter-personal relationships. We are all people, no two the same, none above or below the other. You are who you are, accept it, relish in it, and stop worrying what others will think.
You write superbly. You create interesting images. Your words flow. Who else would have said, \"tessellate my soul\" ? - Phil A.
February 17th, 2017 12:40
MendedFences27 said:
One must love one\'s self before they can love another. Feelings of self doubt, or low self esteem are the barrier to inter-personal relationships. We are all people, no two the same, none above or below the other. You are who you are, accept it, relish in it, and stop worrying what others will think.
You write superbly. You create interesting images. Your words flow. Who else would have said, \"tessellate my soul\" ? - Phil A.
February 17th, 2017 12:40
Sharp Stone Syllables
WriteBeLight said:
Great work, and great insight, bringing up the subjects of self deprecating, self doubting, and expressing low self esteem, and so on. I can relate to the lines and I am sure many others can as well.
February 16th, 2017 06:45
WriteBeLight said:
Great work, and great insight, bringing up the subjects of self deprecating, self doubting, and expressing low self esteem, and so on. I can relate to the lines and I am sure many others can as well.
February 16th, 2017 06:45
Out of Sync
JustABird said:
Wow. I\'m so in awe of your way with words. It seems so effortless. And you always have something interesting and intelligent to say. Well done.
February 13th, 2017 08:45
JustABird said:
Wow. I\'m so in awe of your way with words. It seems so effortless. And you always have something interesting and intelligent to say. Well done.
February 13th, 2017 08:45
Out of Sync
Christina8 said:
This poem is excellent in every way. Rhyme and rhythm and flow. Your words instill great imagery in my mind and it was a pleasure to read!-Christina
January 26th, 2017 15:18
Christina8 said:
This poem is excellent in every way. Rhyme and rhythm and flow. Your words instill great imagery in my mind and it was a pleasure to read!-Christina
January 26th, 2017 15:18
Out of Sync
Tony36 said:
Very powerful both in word and in vision. Great write
January 26th, 2017 09:41
Tony36 said:
Very powerful both in word and in vision. Great write
January 26th, 2017 09:41
Out of Sync
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the strong flow of this piece - good imagery too. Well done.
January 26th, 2017 07:02
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the strong flow of this piece - good imagery too. Well done.
January 26th, 2017 07:02
Immolation
Augustus said:
Come fly with me. Wow. \"Glass house under ground.\" Enjoyed a lot.
January 25th, 2017 19:31
Augustus said:
Come fly with me. Wow. \"Glass house under ground.\" Enjoyed a lot.
January 25th, 2017 19:31
Immolation
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Another BRILLIANT MASTERPIECE...MAN you got it...Fo sho!!..
January 25th, 2017 05:05
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Another BRILLIANT MASTERPIECE...MAN you got it...Fo sho!!..
January 25th, 2017 05:05
Massive
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Amazing!!Absolutely stunning, brilliant work here!!Wow...
January 23rd, 2017 05:38
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Amazing!!Absolutely stunning, brilliant work here!!Wow...
January 23rd, 2017 05:38
Togetherness
Augustus said:
I\'m not a big fan of the collective but you expressed it well.
January 18th, 2017 13:26
Augustus said:
I\'m not a big fan of the collective but you expressed it well.
January 18th, 2017 13:26
A Double Edged Sword
WriteBeLight said:
Excellent imagery. One can have a photographic memory as well 😊 Very nice.
January 17th, 2017 19:56
WriteBeLight said:
Excellent imagery. One can have a photographic memory as well 😊 Very nice.
January 17th, 2017 19:56
A Double Edged Sword
Augustus said:
The double edged sword of memory. Nicely done.
January 17th, 2017 16:19
Augustus said:
The double edged sword of memory. Nicely done.
January 17th, 2017 16:19
An Ode to the Unfamiliar
WriteBeLight said:
You are so great. I love the first 4 lines, and the next and the next, and so on, and have read that over and over. Excellent as always Psentinel.
January 10th, 2017 19:27
WriteBeLight said:
You are so great. I love the first 4 lines, and the next and the next, and so on, and have read that over and over. Excellent as always Psentinel.
January 10th, 2017 19:27
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