Comments received on poems by Quemis
Out of Sync
JustABird said:
Wow. I\'m so in awe of your way with words. It seems so effortless. And you always have something interesting and intelligent to say. Well done.
February 13th, 2017 08:45
JustABird said:
Wow. I\'m so in awe of your way with words. It seems so effortless. And you always have something interesting and intelligent to say. Well done.
February 13th, 2017 08:45
Out of Sync
Christina8 said:
This poem is excellent in every way. Rhyme and rhythm and flow. Your words instill great imagery in my mind and it was a pleasure to read!-Christina
January 26th, 2017 15:18
Christina8 said:
This poem is excellent in every way. Rhyme and rhythm and flow. Your words instill great imagery in my mind and it was a pleasure to read!-Christina
January 26th, 2017 15:18
Out of Sync
Tony36 said:
Very powerful both in word and in vision. Great write
January 26th, 2017 09:41
Tony36 said:
Very powerful both in word and in vision. Great write
January 26th, 2017 09:41
Out of Sync
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the strong flow of this piece - good imagery too. Well done.
January 26th, 2017 07:02
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the strong flow of this piece - good imagery too. Well done.
January 26th, 2017 07:02
Immolation
Augustus said:
Come fly with me. Wow. \"Glass house under ground.\" Enjoyed a lot.
January 25th, 2017 19:31
Augustus said:
Come fly with me. Wow. \"Glass house under ground.\" Enjoyed a lot.
January 25th, 2017 19:31
Immolation
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Another BRILLIANT MASTERPIECE...MAN you got it...Fo sho!!..
January 25th, 2017 05:05
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Another BRILLIANT MASTERPIECE...MAN you got it...Fo sho!!..
January 25th, 2017 05:05
Massive
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Amazing!!Absolutely stunning, brilliant work here!!Wow...
January 23rd, 2017 05:38
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Amazing!!Absolutely stunning, brilliant work here!!Wow...
January 23rd, 2017 05:38
Togetherness
Augustus said:
I\'m not a big fan of the collective but you expressed it well.
January 18th, 2017 13:26
Augustus said:
I\'m not a big fan of the collective but you expressed it well.
January 18th, 2017 13:26
A Double Edged Sword
WriteBeLight said:
Excellent imagery. One can have a photographic memory as well 😊 Very nice.
January 17th, 2017 19:56
WriteBeLight said:
Excellent imagery. One can have a photographic memory as well 😊 Very nice.
January 17th, 2017 19:56
A Double Edged Sword
Augustus said:
The double edged sword of memory. Nicely done.
January 17th, 2017 16:19
Augustus said:
The double edged sword of memory. Nicely done.
January 17th, 2017 16:19
An Ode to the Unfamiliar
WriteBeLight said:
You are so great. I love the first 4 lines, and the next and the next, and so on, and have read that over and over. Excellent as always Psentinel.
January 10th, 2017 19:27
WriteBeLight said:
You are so great. I love the first 4 lines, and the next and the next, and so on, and have read that over and over. Excellent as always Psentinel.
January 10th, 2017 19:27
An Ode to the Unfamiliar
mrandrewtheguy said:
this is so good, I myself enjoy \\writing about human condition, and I have been telling people this for a long time, you put it to words very well.
January 10th, 2017 15:42
mrandrewtheguy said:
this is so good, I myself enjoy \\writing about human condition, and I have been telling people this for a long time, you put it to words very well.
January 10th, 2017 15:42
An Ode to the Unfamiliar
Phoenix8523 said:
I enjoyed reading this very much! -- phoenix
January 10th, 2017 15:39
Phoenix8523 said:
I enjoyed reading this very much! -- phoenix
January 10th, 2017 15:39
Anxiety.
elchupacabra said:
there is so much truth behind the words. that is why we write.
January 5th, 2017 23:13
elchupacabra said:
there is so much truth behind the words. that is why we write.
January 5th, 2017 23:13
Anxiety.
WriteBeLight said:
No, do not sleep forever...wake up and write some more! I can relate to how the person in this poem feels, when there is something you just cannot put to sleep..no pun intended..and it keeps at you. I usually get up and write something and then go back and try to fall asleep. Also, I try not to drink any coffee, etc. that would keep me from falling off to sleep...:)
January 5th, 2017 18:53
WriteBeLight said:
No, do not sleep forever...wake up and write some more! I can relate to how the person in this poem feels, when there is something you just cannot put to sleep..no pun intended..and it keeps at you. I usually get up and write something and then go back and try to fall asleep. Also, I try not to drink any coffee, etc. that would keep me from falling off to sleep...:)
January 5th, 2017 18:53
Anxiety.
Christina8 said:
Well written poem, I really like the first two stanzas. I have anxiety too. Hang in there!
January 5th, 2017 14:38
Christina8 said:
Well written poem, I really like the first two stanzas. I have anxiety too. Hang in there!
January 5th, 2017 14:38
Anxiety.
catdeu said:
This was great. \"Some poisoned food for thought\" I liked it. Felt a lot of emotion.
January 5th, 2017 12:08
catdeu said:
This was great. \"Some poisoned food for thought\" I liked it. Felt a lot of emotion.
January 5th, 2017 12:08
Fever Steams
jccaramelbarbie said:
Great poem.I dislike the fake also..you are very talente, keep the good writing up
January 2nd, 2017 21:26
jccaramelbarbie said:
Great poem.I dislike the fake also..you are very talente, keep the good writing up
January 2nd, 2017 21:26
The Ankh of Memory
WriteBeLight said:
Excellent, yet horrid narrative and descriptions of the battlefield. The bloated corpses punched me in the nose with the thought of the stench! You have a gift, that is for sure! Happy New Year to you!
December 31st, 2016 15:00
WriteBeLight said:
Excellent, yet horrid narrative and descriptions of the battlefield. The bloated corpses punched me in the nose with the thought of the stench! You have a gift, that is for sure! Happy New Year to you!
December 31st, 2016 15:00
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