Comments received on poems by Quemis



The Ankh of Memory
WriteBeLight said:

Excellent, yet horrid narrative and descriptions of the battlefield. The bloated corpses punched me in the nose with the thought of the stench! You have a gift, that is for sure! Happy New Year to you!

December 31st, 2016 15:00

The Ankh of Memory
Augustus said:

I can imagine the amount of work in this. This is epic. Nicely done.

December 31st, 2016 13:07

The Ankh of Memory
willyweed said:

quite the story teller, with a vivid imagination!
very good fantasy write. ww

December 31st, 2016 11:09

Blink
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

Amazing writing here brutha..I can relate to it very well

December 24th, 2016 08:28

Blink
WriteBeLight said:

I am getting a feeling of such brave warriors. I am going to read it again and again.

December 23rd, 2016 18:46

Exponential
Aals said:

i love the drive for success in this, the constant wondering.

December 22nd, 2016 23:22

Exponential
Augustus said:

Fascinating world.

December 21st, 2016 15:33

Exponential
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 21st, 2016 12:52

Wake up
Zwitterion said:

a nice poem.

December 20th, 2016 21:14

Wake up
Augustus said:

Soon these soulless robots may take our jobs. Nicely done.

December 20th, 2016 15:11

Wake up
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

December 20th, 2016 09:57

Wake up
WriteBeLight said:

I know people like that....:) Sounds like a very big EGO. That is what I get. I especially like that here is no ghost in the person\'s shell.

December 20th, 2016 05:28

Driven
Augustus said:

I gather from the speaker that the mind and body are racing but it is all for naught as what is created is destroyed. Also that there is fear and anxiety. This all is in marked contrast to the poem which is remarkable in it\'s rhyme, meter and cohesion.

December 19th, 2016 21:41

Driven
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

December 19th, 2016 14:20

Driven
WriteBeLight said:

I feel the inner turmoil and I think, for myself, I can relate to the questions you ask of yourself. You have \"driven\" me through an intelligent piece of work.

December 19th, 2016 06:26

Vicissitude
myinnervoice said:

I enjoy how you wrote this, and the language feels very carefully chosen. I wish for the life of me i could understand it though...But that\'s my shortcoming not yours. Well written

December 17th, 2016 02:17

The Ghost and the Dissolute Engineer
Augustus said:

I remember when systems were to enter the year 2000 computers all over the world would crash and bring down electric grids, trains, banks, etc. was to be the end of the world. Nicely done.

December 16th, 2016 15:09

The Ghost and the Dissolute Engineer
Tony36 said:

WOW amazingly Awesome

December 16th, 2016 08:30

The Ghost and the Dissolute Engineer
WriteBeLight said:

I especially love the first part about the city\'s pyre. Very inventive message! Thanks for this one very much.

December 16th, 2016 06:43

Explorers
Augustus said:

Help I got lost in the labyrinth.
Nicely done.

December 14th, 2016 18:12

Explorers
Daniel said:

I love your use of words and the pictures they paint. This is what poetry is all about, I absolutely loved it!

December 14th, 2016 14:04

Fever Steams
Augustus said:

They do spoil everything. You may be better about spotting them than I am.storied facade, spectacle , falsehoods, fool\'s gold, how they frame a snapshot---all very descriptive.

December 14th, 2016 00:06

Fever Steams
WriteBeLight said:

You certainly have a way with the words you used to illustrate the personalites. Quite a vocabulary!...:)

December 13th, 2016 16:41

Fever Steams
JustABird said:

Now that\'s what I call poetry.

December 13th, 2016 14:19

Fever Steams
AlanLikesToWrite said:

Bars

December 13th, 2016 13:24

Vicissitude
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

December 10th, 2016 18:36

Vicissitude
WriteBeLight said:

This is an excellent piece. Makes me think of the Peter Principal in a way, how people can rise up, say in their job, until they reach the highest point of their incompetence. Great job!

December 10th, 2016 07:24

Goldschlager
WriteBeLight said:

That is really wonderful. I really like it very much. Very creative and great timing.

December 9th, 2016 10:58

Goldschlager
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 9th, 2016 09:22

Goldschlager
Daniel said:

Couldn\'t agree more! A fantastic poem with some wonderful imagery, brilliant!

December 9th, 2016 02:10

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