Comments received on poems by Quemis
An Ode to the Unfamiliar
mrandrewtheguy said:
this is so good, I myself enjoy \\writing about human condition, and I have been telling people this for a long time, you put it to words very well.
January 10th, 2017 15:42
mrandrewtheguy said:
this is so good, I myself enjoy \\writing about human condition, and I have been telling people this for a long time, you put it to words very well.
January 10th, 2017 15:42
An Ode to the Unfamiliar
Phoenix8523 said:
I enjoyed reading this very much! -- phoenix
January 10th, 2017 15:39
Phoenix8523 said:
I enjoyed reading this very much! -- phoenix
January 10th, 2017 15:39
Anxiety.
elchupacabra said:
there is so much truth behind the words. that is why we write.
January 5th, 2017 23:13
elchupacabra said:
there is so much truth behind the words. that is why we write.
January 5th, 2017 23:13
Anxiety.
WriteBeLight said:
No, do not sleep forever...wake up and write some more! I can relate to how the person in this poem feels, when there is something you just cannot put to sleep..no pun intended..and it keeps at you. I usually get up and write something and then go back and try to fall asleep. Also, I try not to drink any coffee, etc. that would keep me from falling off to sleep...:)
January 5th, 2017 18:53
WriteBeLight said:
No, do not sleep forever...wake up and write some more! I can relate to how the person in this poem feels, when there is something you just cannot put to sleep..no pun intended..and it keeps at you. I usually get up and write something and then go back and try to fall asleep. Also, I try not to drink any coffee, etc. that would keep me from falling off to sleep...:)
January 5th, 2017 18:53
Anxiety.
Christina8 said:
Well written poem, I really like the first two stanzas. I have anxiety too. Hang in there!
January 5th, 2017 14:38
Christina8 said:
Well written poem, I really like the first two stanzas. I have anxiety too. Hang in there!
January 5th, 2017 14:38
Anxiety.
catdeu said:
This was great. \"Some poisoned food for thought\" I liked it. Felt a lot of emotion.
January 5th, 2017 12:08
catdeu said:
This was great. \"Some poisoned food for thought\" I liked it. Felt a lot of emotion.
January 5th, 2017 12:08
Fever Steams
jccaramelbarbie said:
Great poem.I dislike the fake also..you are very talente, keep the good writing up
January 2nd, 2017 21:26
jccaramelbarbie said:
Great poem.I dislike the fake also..you are very talente, keep the good writing up
January 2nd, 2017 21:26
The Ankh of Memory
WriteBeLight said:
Excellent, yet horrid narrative and descriptions of the battlefield. The bloated corpses punched me in the nose with the thought of the stench! You have a gift, that is for sure! Happy New Year to you!
December 31st, 2016 15:00
WriteBeLight said:
Excellent, yet horrid narrative and descriptions of the battlefield. The bloated corpses punched me in the nose with the thought of the stench! You have a gift, that is for sure! Happy New Year to you!
December 31st, 2016 15:00
The Ankh of Memory
Augustus said:
I can imagine the amount of work in this. This is epic. Nicely done.
December 31st, 2016 13:07
Augustus said:
I can imagine the amount of work in this. This is epic. Nicely done.
December 31st, 2016 13:07
The Ankh of Memory
willyweed said:
quite the story teller, with a vivid imagination!
very good fantasy write. ww
December 31st, 2016 11:09
willyweed said:
quite the story teller, with a vivid imagination!
very good fantasy write. ww
December 31st, 2016 11:09
Blink
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Amazing writing here brutha..I can relate to it very well
December 24th, 2016 08:28
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Amazing writing here brutha..I can relate to it very well
December 24th, 2016 08:28
Blink
WriteBeLight said:
I am getting a feeling of such brave warriors. I am going to read it again and again.
December 23rd, 2016 18:46
WriteBeLight said:
I am getting a feeling of such brave warriors. I am going to read it again and again.
December 23rd, 2016 18:46
Exponential
Aals said:
i love the drive for success in this, the constant wondering.
December 22nd, 2016 23:22
Aals said:
i love the drive for success in this, the constant wondering.
December 22nd, 2016 23:22
Wake up
Augustus said:
Soon these soulless robots may take our jobs. Nicely done.
December 20th, 2016 15:11
Augustus said:
Soon these soulless robots may take our jobs. Nicely done.
December 20th, 2016 15:11
Wake up
WriteBeLight said:
I know people like that....:) Sounds like a very big EGO. That is what I get. I especially like that here is no ghost in the person\'s shell.
December 20th, 2016 05:28
WriteBeLight said:
I know people like that....:) Sounds like a very big EGO. That is what I get. I especially like that here is no ghost in the person\'s shell.
December 20th, 2016 05:28
Driven
Augustus said:
I gather from the speaker that the mind and body are racing but it is all for naught as what is created is destroyed. Also that there is fear and anxiety. This all is in marked contrast to the poem which is remarkable in it\'s rhyme, meter and cohesion.
December 19th, 2016 21:41
Augustus said:
I gather from the speaker that the mind and body are racing but it is all for naught as what is created is destroyed. Also that there is fear and anxiety. This all is in marked contrast to the poem which is remarkable in it\'s rhyme, meter and cohesion.
December 19th, 2016 21:41
Driven
WriteBeLight said:
I feel the inner turmoil and I think, for myself, I can relate to the questions you ask of yourself. You have \"driven\" me through an intelligent piece of work.
December 19th, 2016 06:26
WriteBeLight said:
I feel the inner turmoil and I think, for myself, I can relate to the questions you ask of yourself. You have \"driven\" me through an intelligent piece of work.
December 19th, 2016 06:26
Vicissitude
myinnervoice said:
I enjoy how you wrote this, and the language feels very carefully chosen. I wish for the life of me i could understand it though...But that\'s my shortcoming not yours. Well written
December 17th, 2016 02:17
myinnervoice said:
I enjoy how you wrote this, and the language feels very carefully chosen. I wish for the life of me i could understand it though...But that\'s my shortcoming not yours. Well written
December 17th, 2016 02:17
The Ghost and the Dissolute Engineer
Augustus said:
I remember when systems were to enter the year 2000 computers all over the world would crash and bring down electric grids, trains, banks, etc. was to be the end of the world. Nicely done.
December 16th, 2016 15:09
Augustus said:
I remember when systems were to enter the year 2000 computers all over the world would crash and bring down electric grids, trains, banks, etc. was to be the end of the world. Nicely done.
December 16th, 2016 15:09
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