Comments received on poems by gencruz
love lost
LaRose said:
Thank you for the words. It is good to know feelings are the universal foundation of being a human.
August 22nd, 2019 10:34
LaRose said:
Thank you for the words. It is good to know feelings are the universal foundation of being a human.
August 22nd, 2019 10:34
I fear something I love
Clarita said:
Beautiful piece. I completely feel your words. Poetry is something I sometimes don\'t want to focus on but crave for. My mind would take me to unimaginable experiences. Ones that I am grateful for but wish to leave behind and heal. But isn\'t that what poetry is all about, a faster route to paradise?
April 1st, 2018 23:40
Clarita said:
Beautiful piece. I completely feel your words. Poetry is something I sometimes don\'t want to focus on but crave for. My mind would take me to unimaginable experiences. Ones that I am grateful for but wish to leave behind and heal. But isn\'t that what poetry is all about, a faster route to paradise?
April 1st, 2018 23:40
One Day
Caring dove said:
I promise that you will feel a regret so deep that your soul will cry out, leaving unanswered cries echoing throughout the empty hallways, and your heart will be heavy with the knowledge that you will never
never
be able to unbreak my heart.\'\'
wow, these are some strongly worded lines!
this is a very strong piece of writing and you speak some very true words, regret does and will creep up on us eventually and when it does it will probably feel like too much !
this really expressed something so deep ... its sad when we cut ties, and its quite often not the right thing to do
March 26th, 2018 03:41
Caring dove said:
I promise that you will feel a regret so deep that your soul will cry out, leaving unanswered cries echoing throughout the empty hallways, and your heart will be heavy with the knowledge that you will never
never
be able to unbreak my heart.\'\'
wow, these are some strongly worded lines!
this is a very strong piece of writing and you speak some very true words, regret does and will creep up on us eventually and when it does it will probably feel like too much !
this really expressed something so deep ... its sad when we cut ties, and its quite often not the right thing to do
March 26th, 2018 03:41
Unwanted Love
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great, haunting write. “They don’t call me Loneliness for nothing.” Indeed! Simply amazing!!!
October 16th, 2017 21:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great, haunting write. “They don’t call me Loneliness for nothing.” Indeed! Simply amazing!!!
October 16th, 2017 21:51
Failing Words
Azura Nightsong said:
I have felt this in the past. While it may seem bleak now, eventually you get through. Trust me.
July 21st, 2017 21:25
Azura Nightsong said:
I have felt this in the past. While it may seem bleak now, eventually you get through. Trust me.
July 21st, 2017 21:25
Intimate
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI SWEETHEART ~ Pleased you found some inspiration ~ this is a sensuous and sincere poem. When I make love to a Lady ~ her age and the \"state\" of her body is much less important than her RESPONSE ! To my touch ~ to my kisses and licks ~ to my appreciation of her secret places ~ to her body language as she opens her love portals to me ~ and her satisfaction in every aspect of \"loving\" and afterglow. If you are satisfied then I always am. Your poem expresses the infinite joy of intimate love ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN XOX
May 26th, 2017 16:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI SWEETHEART ~ Pleased you found some inspiration ~ this is a sensuous and sincere poem. When I make love to a Lady ~ her age and the \"state\" of her body is much less important than her RESPONSE ! To my touch ~ to my kisses and licks ~ to my appreciation of her secret places ~ to her body language as she opens her love portals to me ~ and her satisfaction in every aspect of \"loving\" and afterglow. If you are satisfied then I always am. Your poem expresses the infinite joy of intimate love ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN XOX
May 26th, 2017 16:53
Intimate
Augustus said:
My wife is aging. We are in our late 70\'s. She has similar thoughts. All I see is beauty. Nicely done
May 26th, 2017 16:04
Augustus said:
My wife is aging. We are in our late 70\'s. She has similar thoughts. All I see is beauty. Nicely done
May 26th, 2017 16:04
Intimate
Augustus said:
My wife is aging. We are in our late 70\'s. She has similar thoughts. All I see is beauty. Nicely done
May 26th, 2017 16:04
Augustus said:
My wife is aging. We are in our late 70\'s. She has similar thoughts. All I see is beauty. Nicely done
May 26th, 2017 16:04
Intimate
Louis Gibbs said:
Beautiful poem, g.c! Well written declaration of how under appreciated our sacred earth vehicles are.
May 26th, 2017 14:32
Louis Gibbs said:
Beautiful poem, g.c! Well written declaration of how under appreciated our sacred earth vehicles are.
May 26th, 2017 14:32
Father
ChaoticGood said:
You must love you\'re father so much to be filled so with such words of poetry.
April 28th, 2017 09:43
ChaoticGood said:
You must love you\'re father so much to be filled so with such words of poetry.
April 28th, 2017 09:43
Gone
Lizzy Renee said:
beautiful. absolutely beautiful. Just remember, we are all created in the image of God. He doesn\'t make mistakes, he makes masterpieces.
April 25th, 2017 09:13
Lizzy Renee said:
beautiful. absolutely beautiful. Just remember, we are all created in the image of God. He doesn\'t make mistakes, he makes masterpieces.
April 25th, 2017 09:13
My Heart
Goldfinch60 said:
Your hope us precious and will be fulfilled with your obvious perseverance. Good write.
March 30th, 2017 08:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Your hope us precious and will be fulfilled with your obvious perseverance. Good write.
March 30th, 2017 08:20
6:27 a.m
willyweed said:
you may need to get some help are you going to the doctor, talking with someone it may help?
March 8th, 2017 08:04
willyweed said:
you may need to get some help are you going to the doctor, talking with someone it may help?
March 8th, 2017 08:04
Father
Michael Edwards said:
Powerfully written and so emotional. I am not usually a lover of emotional poems like this but this one is way up there with the best. my heart goes out to you. Will pop it in favourites.
March 6th, 2017 11:20
Michael Edwards said:
Powerfully written and so emotional. I am not usually a lover of emotional poems like this but this one is way up there with the best. my heart goes out to you. Will pop it in favourites.
March 6th, 2017 11:20
Father
willyweed said:
Sorry a dad is something a young girl can really use, its sad he wasn\'t man enough to see that?
March 6th, 2017 09:23
willyweed said:
Sorry a dad is something a young girl can really use, its sad he wasn\'t man enough to see that?
March 6th, 2017 09:23
Family War
poetboy123 said:
This poem has a lot of power, and although I don\'t know you, I believe you can get through this situation. Family situations, despite what some in the family say, affect everyone. Stay strong and head forward. Great poem!
February 27th, 2017 18:58
poetboy123 said:
This poem has a lot of power, and although I don\'t know you, I believe you can get through this situation. Family situations, despite what some in the family say, affect everyone. Stay strong and head forward. Great poem!
February 27th, 2017 18:58
Old Friends
MendedFences27 said:
A great personification of Insomnia and Depression, one male, one female. A terrible thing to live with, to deal with, and not much help from the medical field or therapy. If this is real I hope and wish you to find your way out of it.
The poem presents the debilitation in a stark and real manner. Once accepting the personification the reader becomes engrossed in the flow of the story. And you end it on a high, though unresolved plain. Nicely done. - Phil A.
February 15th, 2017 21:13
MendedFences27 said:
A great personification of Insomnia and Depression, one male, one female. A terrible thing to live with, to deal with, and not much help from the medical field or therapy. If this is real I hope and wish you to find your way out of it.
The poem presents the debilitation in a stark and real manner. Once accepting the personification the reader becomes engrossed in the flow of the story. And you end it on a high, though unresolved plain. Nicely done. - Phil A.
February 15th, 2017 21:13
Daily Routine
janetaylor said:
byron katie once said, \"there are no new thoughts in the world.\" i read your author\'s comment and if you haven\'t read the book \"loving what is\" by byron katie, i would highly recommend it. a wonderful poem that is a direct stream into that constantly chattering mind. it is also highly creative ~ the steam and the mirror ~ GENIUS! thank you for sharing your art and your heart.
January 25th, 2017 11:57
janetaylor said:
byron katie once said, \"there are no new thoughts in the world.\" i read your author\'s comment and if you haven\'t read the book \"loving what is\" by byron katie, i would highly recommend it. a wonderful poem that is a direct stream into that constantly chattering mind. it is also highly creative ~ the steam and the mirror ~ GENIUS! thank you for sharing your art and your heart.
January 25th, 2017 11:57
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