Comments received on poems by Andrew Charles Forrest



Observations #53
Neville said:


this is so true and applies to each of us .... brevity at its bloomin best mate ...

August 26th, 2020 01:25

Observations #53
dusk arising said:

Truly great piece today from you. Heartfelt by us older poets.

This is truly a gem and i cannot think of ever reading a better piece on MPS so my friend, this is a MUST for my favourites and i shall print a copy to hang on my wall somewhere.

August 23rd, 2020 11:01

Observations #53
orchidee said:

Good write Andrew. You enjoying yourself then? It\'s said \'Time goes quickly when we\'re enjoying ourselves!\'

August 23rd, 2020 01:42

Observations #53
Goldfinch60 said:

Time seems to speed up as we get older Andrew.

Andy

August 23rd, 2020 00:12

Friday night (when the light is right) AKA Mothballs
Fay Slimm. said:

Yes youth has to try out wings after occasions like these Andrew - let us hope now the easing of lock-down will stay.

August 1st, 2020 13:35

Friday night (when the light is right) AKA Mothballs
orchidee said:

A fine write Andrew.

August 1st, 2020 03:40

Friday night (when the light is right) AKA Mothballs
Goldfinch60 said:

May the light fill there lives with wonder.

Andy

August 1st, 2020 02:53

Our Little Wing...
orchidee said:

A fine write Andrew.

July 8th, 2020 01:58

Our Little Wing...
Goldfinch60 said:

We must and have done our best for our children and when looking at them in my dotage they have become so wonderful.

Andy

July 8th, 2020 01:02

Our Little Wing...
dusk arising said:

These are words to inherit and gaze upon as ones own children grow into worldliness.

If ever words can be given as a gift then these are well chosen for that purpose.

July 7th, 2020 17:48

Our Little Wing...
Fay Slimm. said:

Someone important in your life will treasure this love wrapped up in lines of caring dear Andrew and thank you for sharing it.

July 7th, 2020 15:00

Our Little Wing...
Neville said:


beautiful words these...

July 7th, 2020 12:17

...and then it rained
Neville said:


Now dont say I never told ya so... you old so and so you... started off here bright as a button.. then guess wot... yep.. you got it... Nice one sir :)

June 28th, 2020 05:23

...and then it rained
orchidee said:

Yep, to be all gloomy: \'When one door shuts, another one slams in yer face?\' Erm, I not quite got that saying correct. lol.
Or: \'Don\'t worry - today\'s bad, but it\'ll be worse tomorrow!\' Doh!
Fat lot of help I am. lol.

June 28th, 2020 05:14

...and then it rained
dusk arising said:

Rain.The bringer of hope \"I hope this bloody rainfall stops soon\".... Things always lokk better when the rain stops.

(Unless you live at the bottom of a hill by a brook or in a flood plain).

June 28th, 2020 04:13

...and then it rained
Goldfinch60 said:

...and then it rained and we were grateful for it as new life started to grow.

Andy


June 28th, 2020 04:06

...and then it rained
Fay Slimm. said:

Ouch on reading that final line - \"and then it rained\" how many times have we had that happen after everything else seemed against us - you versed the challenge so well here my friend.

June 28th, 2020 03:39

In Answer To Your Question #9
Goldfinch60 said:

I totally agree Andrew that spirit is there and can show us each our own way.

Andy

June 28th, 2020 01:00

In Answer To Your Question #9
Bragee said:

Straight forward is the best way to answer such questions as you have done here.
Enjoyable read.
Respect!

June 27th, 2020 14:19

In Answer To Your Question #9
Neville said:


I think you have penned a little belter here sir..

a good honest, no nonsense and wholly agreeable nod in the direction of GOOD..

Neville

June 27th, 2020 09:18

In Answer To Your Question #9
Accidental Poet said:

I believe this poem is far better than good. Thoughtful write Andrew.

June 27th, 2020 08:44

In Answer To Your Question #9
orchidee said:

A fine write Andrew.

June 27th, 2020 05:59

In Answer To Your Question #9
dusk arising said:

I am with you all the way in this. I really like you choice of plainspeak to put this across.

Has to go among my favourite poems posted on MPS.A big thank you.

June 27th, 2020 04:58

May contain nuts!
Suresh said:

The American version


IMAGE OF THE WHITE HOUSE

\"BEWARE! CONTAIN NUTS\"

June 10th, 2020 16:57

May contain nuts!
The Uneducated O.A.P said:

Well, they are not raisin any decent work.

June 6th, 2020 07:12

May contain nuts!
orchidee said:

Oops lol!

June 6th, 2020 02:06

May contain nuts!
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you for my first laugh of the day - so very true Andrew.

Andy

June 6th, 2020 01:21

May contain nuts!
MaddieJ said:

This is hilarious! Thank you for posting.

June 5th, 2020 16:14

May contain nuts!
Michael Edwards said:

Great - and it gives me an idea for another shorty - watch out tomorrow.

June 5th, 2020 14:24

May contain nuts!
Fay Slimm. said:

Laughed my socks off as I nodded my head....... what a truth Andrew.

June 5th, 2020 12:49

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