Comments received on poems by Andrew Charles Forrest
I am here, I am the storm
SLR said:
I\'ll always loved that motto. Fear the storm? I AM THE STORM!! So many great lines in this one. Plus I\'ve always loved storms. Great post! I\'m sorry I\'m just discovering your work. But on the other hand, yay, I\'ve discovered your work!
June 19th, 2018 19:29
SLR said:
I\'ll always loved that motto. Fear the storm? I AM THE STORM!! So many great lines in this one. Plus I\'ve always loved storms. Great post! I\'m sorry I\'m just discovering your work. But on the other hand, yay, I\'ve discovered your work!
June 19th, 2018 19:29
My perfect little Daffodil...
SLR said:
I\'ve just seen your work. I really like your style. Love this! So many people don\'t take the time to really appreciate the simplistic/complex beauty of nature. A single flower. A leaf. A tree. But now I have to read ALL your posts AND find Ms Fay\'s post about spring. :-) :-)
June 19th, 2018 19:16
SLR said:
I\'ve just seen your work. I really like your style. Love this! So many people don\'t take the time to really appreciate the simplistic/complex beauty of nature. A single flower. A leaf. A tree. But now I have to read ALL your posts AND find Ms Fay\'s post about spring. :-) :-)
June 19th, 2018 19:16
The Disciples
SLR said:
Great spiritual piece, without being preachy like so many do. Great post.
June 19th, 2018 19:11
SLR said:
Great spiritual piece, without being preachy like so many do. Great post.
June 19th, 2018 19:11
Unfinished Business #1
SLR said:
I really like this. It reminds me of times when I was growing up. Exactly like you described. Black skies, fierce winds but after a while it just passed. Didn\'t do any damage really. I would just stand out in it. It was like God was blowing the dust off the earth. A great memory for me. I had nearly forgotten. Thank you so much for reminding me! Great rhythm and word usage! Great write. Thank you so much for sharing.
June 19th, 2018 19:07
SLR said:
I really like this. It reminds me of times when I was growing up. Exactly like you described. Black skies, fierce winds but after a while it just passed. Didn\'t do any damage really. I would just stand out in it. It was like God was blowing the dust off the earth. A great memory for me. I had nearly forgotten. Thank you so much for reminding me! Great rhythm and word usage! Great write. Thank you so much for sharing.
June 19th, 2018 19:07
Unfinished Business #1
Gabriella said:
Wow that was very good I really enjoyed that
June 18th, 2018 14:41
Gabriella said:
Wow that was very good I really enjoyed that
June 18th, 2018 14:41
Unfinished Business #1
orchidee said:
A fine write Andrew. But it is only Monday! lol. Ahh, I see, you mean 30 something years ago!
June 18th, 2018 12:08
orchidee said:
A fine write Andrew. But it is only Monday! lol. Ahh, I see, you mean 30 something years ago!
June 18th, 2018 12:08
Unfinished Business #1
Michael Edwards said:
My turn to comment on your work after your words - and this is truly a superb piece - It just flows so well and, unlike many rhyming pieces, it doesn\'t strain to maintain the rhyme - a mark of a good write.
June 18th, 2018 10:43
Michael Edwards said:
My turn to comment on your work after your words - and this is truly a superb piece - It just flows so well and, unlike many rhyming pieces, it doesn\'t strain to maintain the rhyme - a mark of a good write.
June 18th, 2018 10:43
Unfinished Business #1
Gabriella said:
Wow that was very good I really enjoyed that
June 18th, 2018 09:54
Gabriella said:
Wow that was very good I really enjoyed that
June 18th, 2018 09:54
The illusion of angels (In memory of Paul) Elegy #1
Michael Edwards said:
This is such a lovely sensitive write - I have a close friend who has been quite ill recently but has thankfully pulled through it - but it make me realise how much I would miss him - thanks for the posting.
January 30th, 2018 12:39
Michael Edwards said:
This is such a lovely sensitive write - I have a close friend who has been quite ill recently but has thankfully pulled through it - but it make me realise how much I would miss him - thanks for the posting.
January 30th, 2018 12:39
The illusion of angels (In memory of Paul) Elegy #1
orchidee said:
A fine write Andrew. I can\'t see how mourning is selfish though. Unless we mope in self-pity for ages.
January 30th, 2018 10:49
orchidee said:
A fine write Andrew. I can\'t see how mourning is selfish though. Unless we mope in self-pity for ages.
January 30th, 2018 10:49
The illusion of angels (In memory of Paul) Elegy #1
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed
January 30th, 2018 09:58
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed
January 30th, 2018 09:58
Just one night... forever
Fay Slimm. said:
A tender remembrance of true love and rhymed with care the feel of that special commitment engages from the first line - - thank you Andrew for sharing that \"one night.\"
August 22nd, 2017 15:55
Fay Slimm. said:
A tender remembrance of true love and rhymed with care the feel of that special commitment engages from the first line - - thank you Andrew for sharing that \"one night.\"
August 22nd, 2017 15:55
Lost and found
Fay Slimm. said:
An intriguing four-liner that ends with a sting of surprise - - look forward to reading more of your work here at MPS Andrew.
August 21st, 2017 16:29
Fay Slimm. said:
An intriguing four-liner that ends with a sting of surprise - - look forward to reading more of your work here at MPS Andrew.
August 21st, 2017 16:29
I am here, I am the storm
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the personification in this clever rhyme - I can relate closely to this one Andrew as I live alongside the Cornish coastline and know the power of a storm. Great read.
August 21st, 2017 16:25
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the personification in this clever rhyme - I can relate closely to this one Andrew as I live alongside the Cornish coastline and know the power of a storm. Great read.
August 21st, 2017 16:25
I am here, I am the storm
Michael Edwards said:
Good one - enjoyed reading this.
April 17th, 2017 08:23
Michael Edwards said:
Good one - enjoyed reading this.
April 17th, 2017 08:23
My perfect little Daffodil...
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write, may your Daffodil always be with you.
April 5th, 2017 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write, may your Daffodil always be with you.
April 5th, 2017 01:38
Elegy I for the death of Leonard Cohen
Augustus said:
Honestly, was not familiar with his work. But checked him out on you tube. He was a poet and put his poems to music. Many have thoughts about world events. Your poem is a lovely tribute.
March 11th, 2017 18:50
Augustus said:
Honestly, was not familiar with his work. But checked him out on you tube. He was a poet and put his poems to music. Many have thoughts about world events. Your poem is a lovely tribute.
March 11th, 2017 18:50
Elegy I for the death of Leonard Cohen
Fay Slimm. said:
This song carries his memory dear poet and those who can remember more will do so owing to you and your tribute - a very inspiring read.
March 11th, 2017 12:46
Fay Slimm. said:
This song carries his memory dear poet and those who can remember more will do so owing to you and your tribute - a very inspiring read.
March 11th, 2017 12:46
Elegy V For the death of Anthony R
Terry dailey said:
Great write. A leap of faith tripped on comedy my mind jumped to his death and fell on the ground laughing at the life. This poem soared....
January 17th, 2017 00:45
Terry dailey said:
Great write. A leap of faith tripped on comedy my mind jumped to his death and fell on the ground laughing at the life. This poem soared....
January 17th, 2017 00:45
Pen Paper and Agoraphobia
Francesco said:
This gave me the goose bumps.
How well written. You couldn\'t have described this condition / moment better.
Well done.
January 16th, 2017 02:06
Francesco said:
This gave me the goose bumps.
How well written. You couldn\'t have described this condition / moment better.
Well done.
January 16th, 2017 02:06
Covered in Dust
Francesco said:
What a beautiful, evocative write. Much enjoyed it!
January 16th, 2017 02:04
Francesco said:
What a beautiful, evocative write. Much enjoyed it!
January 16th, 2017 02:04
Pen Paper and Agoraphobia
Fay Slimm. said:
A question we all at times ask brings to a finalé this short lament. an appealing read and welcome to this friendly poetry site Lady.
January 15th, 2017 03:41
Fay Slimm. said:
A question we all at times ask brings to a finalé this short lament. an appealing read and welcome to this friendly poetry site Lady.
January 15th, 2017 03:41
Pen Paper and Agoraphobia
Phoenix8523 said:
Sad...well written! Everyday I think, \"do something different! \" Then fear keeps me stagnant and I think, \"I\'ll try again tomorrow. \" -- phoenix
January 14th, 2017 17:36
Phoenix8523 said:
Sad...well written! Everyday I think, \"do something different! \" Then fear keeps me stagnant and I think, \"I\'ll try again tomorrow. \" -- phoenix
January 14th, 2017 17:36
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