Comments received on poems by Andrew Charles Forrest
Less a Peach... more Apricot
Goldfinch60 said:
For a museless day Andrew your words fell onto the page quite easily by the look of it.
June 1st, 2019 00:32
Goldfinch60 said:
For a museless day Andrew your words fell onto the page quite easily by the look of it.
June 1st, 2019 00:32
Less a Peach... more Apricot
Fay Slimm. said:
Andrew - no need at all to be sorry for this well-written lament on the absence of Muse - -- applause for a write that rhymes so eloquently despite the so -called writers block. Looking forward to your poem on rain........
May 31st, 2019 14:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Andrew - no need at all to be sorry for this well-written lament on the absence of Muse - -- applause for a write that rhymes so eloquently despite the so -called writers block. Looking forward to your poem on rain........
May 31st, 2019 14:01
Less a Peach... more Apricot
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Surprisingly ANDREW your muselessness has resuited in a POEM of fine STRUCTURE ~ Five balanced Quatrains with a consistent Rhyme Pattern aaaa bbbb etc ! BUT alas the SUBJECT is lacking ! A lament on the missing muse as one would lament a Lost Love ! HOWEVER what it lacks in SUBSTANCE is more than compensated by STRUCTRE ~ so all in all an interesting and amusing POME ! However as a culinary expert (Lecturer in Food Science) I must take umbrage at the denigration of my Friend APRICOT ! If one plucks them from the TREE for instant consumtion Al fresco ~ The Peach might just have a slight edge ! BUT I (BRIAN) have had occassion in this last week to cook two *One Pot Casseroles* the first based on LAMB and the second CHICKEN. In addition to (different) appropriate vegetables etc I included DRIED APRICOTS in both Dishes to be served with boiled & buttered whole baby new potatoes (think about it). My guests (Foodies) on both occasions said how beautifully the APRICOT had ameliorated the organoleptic quality of the dish. Had I used PEACH it would have disintergrated and dissapeared witout trace ~ I rest my case !
Blessing & Peace & Muse Restoration
Yours as always ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 31st, 2019 12:13
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Surprisingly ANDREW your muselessness has resuited in a POEM of fine STRUCTURE ~ Five balanced Quatrains with a consistent Rhyme Pattern aaaa bbbb etc ! BUT alas the SUBJECT is lacking ! A lament on the missing muse as one would lament a Lost Love ! HOWEVER what it lacks in SUBSTANCE is more than compensated by STRUCTRE ~ so all in all an interesting and amusing POME ! However as a culinary expert (Lecturer in Food Science) I must take umbrage at the denigration of my Friend APRICOT ! If one plucks them from the TREE for instant consumtion Al fresco ~ The Peach might just have a slight edge ! BUT I (BRIAN) have had occassion in this last week to cook two *One Pot Casseroles* the first based on LAMB and the second CHICKEN. In addition to (different) appropriate vegetables etc I included DRIED APRICOTS in both Dishes to be served with boiled & buttered whole baby new potatoes (think about it). My guests (Foodies) on both occasions said how beautifully the APRICOT had ameliorated the organoleptic quality of the dish. Had I used PEACH it would have disintergrated and dissapeared witout trace ~ I rest my case !
Blessing & Peace & Muse Restoration
Yours as always ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 31st, 2019 12:13
Less a Peach... more Apricot
Suresh said:
Writers block, me think she visited me, for I can\'t put two fruits together either today. No peaches, apricots, no parsnips, cherries, or turnips either, and neither wetter or better.
Now what was I going to say - AHHH WELLL!!!!!!!!!!!
May 31st, 2019 10:30
Suresh said:
Writers block, me think she visited me, for I can\'t put two fruits together either today. No peaches, apricots, no parsnips, cherries, or turnips either, and neither wetter or better.
Now what was I going to say - AHHH WELLL!!!!!!!!!!!
May 31st, 2019 10:30
Less a Peach... more Apricot
SerenWise said:
A perfect expression of that feeling we all get from time to time, sometimes a lack of inspiration can be the inspiration itself!
May 31st, 2019 09:00
SerenWise said:
A perfect expression of that feeling we all get from time to time, sometimes a lack of inspiration can be the inspiration itself!
May 31st, 2019 09:00
Less a Peach... more Apricot
Neville said:
I have a lot of days like this.. more a pair of parsnips than a bowl of cherries..... there\'s a lot of it about.... Neville
May 31st, 2019 08:00
Neville said:
I have a lot of days like this.. more a pair of parsnips than a bowl of cherries..... there\'s a lot of it about.... Neville
May 31st, 2019 08:00
Less a Peach... more Apricot
FineB said:
Hello Andrew,
A wonderful write and perspective on Writer\'s Block.
Hope your thoughts will flow again resembling ripe full peaches.
Keep writing
FineB
May 31st, 2019 08:00
FineB said:
Hello Andrew,
A wonderful write and perspective on Writer\'s Block.
Hope your thoughts will flow again resembling ripe full peaches.
Keep writing
FineB
May 31st, 2019 08:00
Less a Peach... more Apricot
orchidee said:
And so another fine poem! Erm, are you \'getting out more\' as they say?! heehee.
May 31st, 2019 06:17
orchidee said:
And so another fine poem! Erm, are you \'getting out more\' as they say?! heehee.
May 31st, 2019 06:17
Of Inevitability
Goldfinch60 said:
May that pantomime last for a long time. I will meet you on the other side of the curtain one day though.
May 31st, 2019 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
May that pantomime last for a long time. I will meet you on the other side of the curtain one day though.
May 31st, 2019 01:24
Of Inevitability
Suresh said:
Carpe Diem
We all should, but either don\'t or can\'t
May 30th, 2019 11:42
Suresh said:
Carpe Diem
We all should, but either don\'t or can\'t
May 30th, 2019 11:42
Of Inevitability
dusk arising said:
So very true and you impart such wisdom here. Makes me smile.
Just re-read and this really is a fine piece. Into my favourites, thank you.
May 30th, 2019 09:28
dusk arising said:
So very true and you impart such wisdom here. Makes me smile.
Just re-read and this really is a fine piece. Into my favourites, thank you.
May 30th, 2019 09:28
Of Inevitability
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Thanks Neville
I expanded it a little
sometimes more is just more I guess
May 30th, 2019 05:24
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Thanks Neville
I expanded it a little
sometimes more is just more I guess
May 30th, 2019 05:24
Of Inevitability
Neville said:
an excellent, universal truism with only very few exceptions.. a pearl of wisdom for sure...... n
May 30th, 2019 04:24
Neville said:
an excellent, universal truism with only very few exceptions.. a pearl of wisdom for sure...... n
May 30th, 2019 04:24
Of Inevitability
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Thanks Orchi
I guess it\'s inevitable
May 30th, 2019 03:00
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Thanks Orchi
I guess it\'s inevitable
May 30th, 2019 03:00
Of Inevitability
orchidee said:
A fine write Andrew.
I got to cope with a 7-syllable word this time of the morning - inevita-wotsit. It will use up 99% of me brain cells for the day. lol.
May 30th, 2019 01:42
orchidee said:
A fine write Andrew.
I got to cope with a 7-syllable word this time of the morning - inevita-wotsit. It will use up 99% of me brain cells for the day. lol.
May 30th, 2019 01:42
...Last Dance
Jo March said:
It is such a beautiful poem. Thank you so much for posting it. I really enjoyed it. My favorite lines are: A waiting hand when I\'m left behind / My morning when I dream the night. So beautiful, so moving... The images are unforgettable... Thank you.
May 26th, 2019 15:49
Jo March said:
It is such a beautiful poem. Thank you so much for posting it. I really enjoyed it. My favorite lines are: A waiting hand when I\'m left behind / My morning when I dream the night. So beautiful, so moving... The images are unforgettable... Thank you.
May 26th, 2019 15:49
We should meet more people not like us
Neville said:
enjoyed and muchly so Andrew sir...
Neville
May 25th, 2019 04:25
Neville said:
enjoyed and muchly so Andrew sir...
Neville
May 25th, 2019 04:25
...Last Dance
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is always with us with that one person who is so special to us.
Fine loving write Andrew, (great name).
May 24th, 2019 23:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is always with us with that one person who is so special to us.
Fine loving write Andrew, (great name).
May 24th, 2019 23:56
...Last Dance
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh simply beautiful these romantic and appreciative words Andrew.
May 24th, 2019 16:16
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh simply beautiful these romantic and appreciative words Andrew.
May 24th, 2019 16:16
...Last Dance
kevin browne said:
If your\'re going to be dancing on the Moon can I join in by any chance? Lovely poem and I\'m sure you\'ll get the sense of it failry soon.
May 24th, 2019 13:30
kevin browne said:
If your\'re going to be dancing on the Moon can I join in by any chance? Lovely poem and I\'m sure you\'ll get the sense of it failry soon.
May 24th, 2019 13:30
...Last Dance
Suresh said:
To find someone that preps you up
and a true partner is a rarity in present times, so to read your piece is a true delight.
May 24th, 2019 10:12
Suresh said:
To find someone that preps you up
and a true partner is a rarity in present times, so to read your piece is a true delight.
May 24th, 2019 10:12
...Last Dance
Neville said:
You really are a true romantic Andrew.. how lovely are these words... I presume they are for her indoors..... Neville
May 24th, 2019 08:20
Neville said:
You really are a true romantic Andrew.. how lovely are these words... I presume they are for her indoors..... Neville
May 24th, 2019 08:20
...Last Dance
dusk arising said:
Theres so much we learn about love with our years. Love itself teaches us.
Very touching piece from you today poet and I\'m sure it will be treasured by the recipient.
May 24th, 2019 07:46
dusk arising said:
Theres so much we learn about love with our years. Love itself teaches us.
Very touching piece from you today poet and I\'m sure it will be treasured by the recipient.
May 24th, 2019 07:46
The painter of the war
Suresh said:
Your words painted the pain of past
Stories when heard one feels aghast
The cause then, still exists even now
Try as we must, we don\'t know how
May 18th, 2019 12:44
Suresh said:
Your words painted the pain of past
Stories when heard one feels aghast
The cause then, still exists even now
Try as we must, we don\'t know how
May 18th, 2019 12:44
The painter of the war
Fay Slimm. said:
A read that reaches the heart and brings tears for the fallen - you verse the futility so well Andrew;
May 18th, 2019 08:37
Fay Slimm. said:
A read that reaches the heart and brings tears for the fallen - you verse the futility so well Andrew;
May 18th, 2019 08:37
The painter of the war
Neville said:
what a wanton wasteful loss and worse.. the futility of it all captured here so well and for all eternity........ Neville
May 18th, 2019 07:15
Neville said:
what a wanton wasteful loss and worse.. the futility of it all captured here so well and for all eternity........ Neville
May 18th, 2019 07:15
The painter of the war
Michael Edwards said:
A strong searching write about the insanity of it all. Super work Andrew.
May 18th, 2019 01:17
Michael Edwards said:
A strong searching write about the insanity of it all. Super work Andrew.
May 18th, 2019 01:17
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