Comments received on poems by Andrew Charles Forrest
Curtain call
Neville said:
what a beaut you have penned here sir.... and I have no doubt they shall do you credit..... N
June 24th, 2019 11:31
Neville said:
what a beaut you have penned here sir.... and I have no doubt they shall do you credit..... N
June 24th, 2019 11:31
Curtain call
Goldfinch60 said:
That strength is certainly within you Andrew and may it continue so to be.
June 24th, 2019 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
That strength is certainly within you Andrew and may it continue so to be.
June 24th, 2019 00:50
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Neville said:
how upon how I share the underpinning thought that inspired this very memorable write....
June 23rd, 2019 17:09
Neville said:
how upon how I share the underpinning thought that inspired this very memorable write....
June 23rd, 2019 17:09
Curtain call
Michael Edwards said:
This is something special - great work Andrew.
June 23rd, 2019 14:30
Michael Edwards said:
This is something special - great work Andrew.
June 23rd, 2019 14:30
Curtain call
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING ANDREW ~ Thanks for sharing a very elegant ODE replete with Rhyme & Rhythm ! Everything in this life must have an ending ~ But for those who have FAITH ~ Life goes ON & ON & ON & ON in the next GENERATION ! Some of the Happiest Poeple I know are GRANDPARENTS ~ AMEN
Blessings & Peace & Love ~ ANGELA & BRIAN XOX
Please check our POEM on HELIUM ~ Thanks
June 23rd, 2019 13:55
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING ANDREW ~ Thanks for sharing a very elegant ODE replete with Rhyme & Rhythm ! Everything in this life must have an ending ~ But for those who have FAITH ~ Life goes ON & ON & ON & ON in the next GENERATION ! Some of the Happiest Poeple I know are GRANDPARENTS ~ AMEN
Blessings & Peace & Love ~ ANGELA & BRIAN XOX
Please check our POEM on HELIUM ~ Thanks
June 23rd, 2019 13:55
Curtain call
FineB said:
Hello Andrew,
That was a beautiful poem.
Everything must end at some time or other.
There is a season for everything.
Keep writing FineB
June 23rd, 2019 13:32
FineB said:
Hello Andrew,
That was a beautiful poem.
Everything must end at some time or other.
There is a season for everything.
Keep writing FineB
June 23rd, 2019 13:32
Curtain call
kevin browne said:
That\'s just brilliant. Loved the flow and the rhythm feeling to the this beautiful poem. Great job.
June 23rd, 2019 12:11
kevin browne said:
That\'s just brilliant. Loved the flow and the rhythm feeling to the this beautiful poem. Great job.
June 23rd, 2019 12:11
Curtain call
orchidee said:
You had one too many, with that title of this fine poem?! I\'m shure you willsh be shober soon. Good acting innit? lol.
June 23rd, 2019 07:49
orchidee said:
You had one too many, with that title of this fine poem?! I\'m shure you willsh be shober soon. Good acting innit? lol.
June 23rd, 2019 07:49
Human soup
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Andrew, all we can do is the best we can for our offspring and send them into the world knowing that what ever happens we will still be there for them.
June 23rd, 2019 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Andrew, all we can do is the best we can for our offspring and send them into the world knowing that what ever happens we will still be there for them.
June 23rd, 2019 00:35
Human soup
FineB said:
Hello Andrew,
Excellent write.
Life is a constant journey in which we can perfect ourselves.
Keep writing FineB
June 22nd, 2019 16:23
FineB said:
Hello Andrew,
Excellent write.
Life is a constant journey in which we can perfect ourselves.
Keep writing FineB
June 22nd, 2019 16:23
Human soup
orchidee said:
A fine write Andrew. My soup\'s not like all the rest. It\'s oxtail and strawberry. Bleeurrghh I should think. lol.
June 22nd, 2019 10:55
orchidee said:
A fine write Andrew. My soup\'s not like all the rest. It\'s oxtail and strawberry. Bleeurrghh I should think. lol.
June 22nd, 2019 10:55
Human soup
Michael Edwards said:
Sadly there\'s a lot in that last line - super write Andrew.
June 22nd, 2019 08:12
Michael Edwards said:
Sadly there\'s a lot in that last line - super write Andrew.
June 22nd, 2019 08:12
Look... I\'m in your heart
Suresh said:
The words that are this song
For whom that you have strung
These words are really strong
Both when read and when sung
June 15th, 2019 15:20
Suresh said:
The words that are this song
For whom that you have strung
These words are really strong
Both when read and when sung
June 15th, 2019 15:20
Look... I\'m in your heart
Neville said:
not only are your words both great and truly memorable.. you chose a delightful track to accompany them sir.....
and just out of curiosity, did you pen these for your daughter Scarlet by any chance....... Neville
June 14th, 2019 12:59
Neville said:
not only are your words both great and truly memorable.. you chose a delightful track to accompany them sir.....
and just out of curiosity, did you pen these for your daughter Scarlet by any chance....... Neville
June 14th, 2019 12:59
Look... I\'m in your heart
Poetic Dan said:
Listening now but your words are spectacular my friend! To live by
June 10th, 2019 11:10
Poetic Dan said:
Listening now but your words are spectacular my friend! To live by
June 10th, 2019 11:10
Look... I\'m in your heart
kevin browne said:
Simply beautiful and perfect. I love your choice of song, also.
June 10th, 2019 10:31
kevin browne said:
Simply beautiful and perfect. I love your choice of song, also.
June 10th, 2019 10:31
Look... I\'m in your heart
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Andrew, that love will never fail.
June 10th, 2019 00:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Andrew, that love will never fail.
June 10th, 2019 00:05
Look... I\'m in your heart
orchidee said:
A fine write Andrew. Just don\'t hold on to my singing (last line)! It will get no-one no-where! lol.
June 9th, 2019 08:42
orchidee said:
A fine write Andrew. Just don\'t hold on to my singing (last line)! It will get no-one no-where! lol.
June 9th, 2019 08:42
Look... I\'m in your heart
orchidee said:
A fine write Andrew. Just don\'t hold on to my singing (last line)! It will get no-one no-where! lol.
June 9th, 2019 08:42
orchidee said:
A fine write Andrew. Just don\'t hold on to my singing (last line)! It will get no-one no-where! lol.
June 9th, 2019 08:42
Look... I\'m in your heart
Fay Slimm. said:
A worthy tribute indeed Andrew - the words of the song too say so much to this reader. Thank you for sharing the both.
June 9th, 2019 07:36
Fay Slimm. said:
A worthy tribute indeed Andrew - the words of the song too say so much to this reader. Thank you for sharing the both.
June 9th, 2019 07:36
Look... I\'m in your heart
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
This is 100% inspired by Tom Waits song \"Rainbow Sleeves\" sung here by Ms Lee-Jones
You used to dream yourself away each night
To places that you\'ve never been
On wings made of wishes that you whispered to yourself
Back when every night the moon and you would sweep away
To places that you knew you would never get the blues
Now whiskey gives you wings to carry each one of your dreams
And the moon does not belong to you
But I believe that your heart keeps young dreams
Well, I\'ve been told to keep from ever growing old
And a heart that has been broken will be stronger when it mends
Don\'t let the blues stop your singing
Darling, you only got a broken wing
Hey, you just hang on to my rainbow
Hang on to my rainbow
Hang on to my rainbow sleeves
June 9th, 2019 06:56
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
This is 100% inspired by Tom Waits song \"Rainbow Sleeves\" sung here by Ms Lee-Jones
You used to dream yourself away each night
To places that you\'ve never been
On wings made of wishes that you whispered to yourself
Back when every night the moon and you would sweep away
To places that you knew you would never get the blues
Now whiskey gives you wings to carry each one of your dreams
And the moon does not belong to you
But I believe that your heart keeps young dreams
Well, I\'ve been told to keep from ever growing old
And a heart that has been broken will be stronger when it mends
Don\'t let the blues stop your singing
Darling, you only got a broken wing
Hey, you just hang on to my rainbow
Hang on to my rainbow
Hang on to my rainbow sleeves
June 9th, 2019 06:56
Of those we lose
Neville said:
your opening two lines are incredible as is the entire poem, but it is those opening two lines that got to me sir...
thank you for posting my fine literary Friend... cheers Andrew... Neville
June 9th, 2019 05:17
Neville said:
your opening two lines are incredible as is the entire poem, but it is those opening two lines that got to me sir...
thank you for posting my fine literary Friend... cheers Andrew... Neville
June 9th, 2019 05:17
Of those we lose
FineB said:
Hi Charles,
Thanks for your insightful and good write.
This year marks the 10th anniversary of my Mother\'s death.
I have moved on but I know she watches over me I feel at times her loss on days such.as Mother\'s Day.
Keep writing FineB
June 9th, 2019 03:47
FineB said:
Hi Charles,
Thanks for your insightful and good write.
This year marks the 10th anniversary of my Mother\'s death.
I have moved on but I know she watches over me I feel at times her loss on days such.as Mother\'s Day.
Keep writing FineB
June 9th, 2019 03:47
Of those we lose
Fay Slimm. said:
A heart-touching read Andrew with the pain of loss so tellingly written - - - one to keep for me is this gentle lament. Thank you for posting it.
June 9th, 2019 01:32
Fay Slimm. said:
A heart-touching read Andrew with the pain of loss so tellingly written - - - one to keep for me is this gentle lament. Thank you for posting it.
June 9th, 2019 01:32
Of those we lose
Goldfinch60 said:
That pain within us may end but we know that they will not have left as they will always be with us.
June 9th, 2019 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
That pain within us may end but we know that they will not have left as they will always be with us.
June 9th, 2019 00:25
Of those we lose
dusk arising said:
I think we pass on by example that which was passed to us by example. Some of us were given a bad example which they did not wish to pass on and took steps to ensure loved ones did not see.
Its heartwarming to read your words.
June 8th, 2019 10:57
dusk arising said:
I think we pass on by example that which was passed to us by example. Some of us were given a bad example which they did not wish to pass on and took steps to ensure loved ones did not see.
Its heartwarming to read your words.
June 8th, 2019 10:57
Of those we lose
orchidee said:
Good write Andrew. But you want the pain of my singing to end, yes? You won\'t miss it!
June 8th, 2019 10:42
orchidee said:
Good write Andrew. But you want the pain of my singing to end, yes? You won\'t miss it!
June 8th, 2019 10:42
Four year olds should run the world!
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Andrew there innocence and wonder at the world are always delightful to see.
June 3rd, 2019 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Andrew there innocence and wonder at the world are always delightful to see.
June 3rd, 2019 00:33
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