Comments received on poems by Andrew Charles Forrest



Even This August... Elegy #1 for Teresa R
orchidee said:

A fine tribute Andrew.
Oops, you have put \'nut\' in the last line! Unless she was very humorous too?!

August 14th, 2019 02:55

Perhaps, there\'s a reason
Goldfinch60 said:

Oh yes I was there when it all started a few years ago.

August 13th, 2019 15:13

Perhaps, there\'s a reason
Michael Edwards said:

Love the humour and what makes it stand out is the great rhythm and meter. Super work.

August 13th, 2019 10:51

Perhaps, there\'s a reason
Suresh said:

Yes, no wonder I live in a house made from trees!

August 13th, 2019 10:46

Perhaps, there\'s a reason
dusk arising said:

Most definitely i have ancients in me. You can tell from how i drag my knuckles when i walk.

August 13th, 2019 04:51

Perhaps, there\'s a reason
orchidee said:

Yes - none of this evolution nonsense for me! Would you Adam and Eve it? Oh yes! Though apes and monkeys are God\'s creatures too.
They are guinea-pigs in my pic, not mutant giant hamsters. lol.

August 13th, 2019 04:11

GOOD vs. EVIL
Goldfinch60 said:

Good is there around us but many do not or do not want to see it.

August 11th, 2019 15:21

GOOD vs. EVIL
Christina8 said:

I think this was a fine write for a sunday! :-)

August 11th, 2019 11:33

GOOD vs. EVIL
orchidee said:

A fine write Andrew.

August 11th, 2019 10:24

GOOD vs. EVIL
dusk arising said:

And christian tries to possess the word christ. But it is a corrupt religion - not the fault of those conned as children into belief as I was.

Love is the root of good.

August 11th, 2019 08:54

Try...
Neville said:


Precisely... mine refused to even stick her nose out the door.. Mind we are experiencing a near hurricane here....

N :)

August 10th, 2019 04:43

Try...
dusk arising said:

Ha ha ha, dogs.. i love them.... but i\'d be happy if they would learn to shut doors behind them.

August 10th, 2019 04:15

Try...
Fay Slimm. said:

Ha ha - I can relate to these well-rhymed lines Andrew - - dog lovers like us have bag in hand every day whatever the weather. A smile of a read and thank you.

August 10th, 2019 02:30

Try...
orchidee said:

Oh lol, good write Andrew.
They\'ll go nutty if they hear too much William Blake though - somewhat eccentric. Can you understand the words of \'Jerusalem?\' Who can?!

August 10th, 2019 01:45

Try...
Christina8 said:

This gave me a smile so thanks for that!! Well done....Christina

August 10th, 2019 01:19

Try...
Michael Edwards said:

You paint a great picture - and have given me a big smile - thankfully us humans have learnt to use the loo - now there\'s another idea for a poem.

August 10th, 2019 01:05

Try...
Goldfinch60 said:

Yet another smile in tow poms, it must be a fun day.

August 10th, 2019 00:59

The Girl Who Stole The Moon
Christina8 said:

A wonderful read and picture! Thanks for sharing

August 9th, 2019 17:36

The Girl Who Stole The Moon
Michael Edwards said:

A delight of a read

August 9th, 2019 15:19

The Girl Who Stole The Moon
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful loving write Andrew.

August 9th, 2019 15:09

The Girl Who Stole The Moon
Neville said:

this, or rather these words are something a little bit extra special....

maybe a little bit more than that even...

Nice one my friend........ Neville

Maybe just need to stick a t on he and make it the at the end of first line...

August 9th, 2019 11:16

The Girl Who Stole The Moon
orchidee said:

A fine write Andrew.

August 9th, 2019 11:02

Just one night... forever
Neville said:

A great title.. and a delightful little poem to behold and be proud of ....

Neville

August 9th, 2019 03:41

The catapult clause
Neville said:

I\'m sure it does mate.. if it dont there\'s going to be hell to pay.... a great little poetic gem...............

July 25th, 2019 10:28

Of Loneliness
Neville said:

Terrific in a very sad kind of way.. this is certainly a great write my friend....and bloomin true... Neville

July 22nd, 2019 14:22

Of Loneliness
Michael Edwards said:

I can \'feel\' the loneliness in this.

July 21st, 2019 01:04

Of Loneliness
Goldfinch60 said:

Nothing prepares you for the sound of an empty house.

July 21st, 2019 00:42

Of Loneliness
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

THANKS ANDREW ~ We all suffer from lonliness from time to time ~ especially when we are separated form the one we LOVE ! As you know ANGELA (NZ) and I (GB) have been separated (physically) by 11,500 miles for over a Year (but our hearts still beat as ONE) between UK & NZ. I have plenty of Friends (and so does Angela in NZ) but at times we long to touch and not just talk ~ on phone or skype ! In OCTOBER I am travelling to NZ to bring ANGELA home again to Essex. We are getting married next year and we will never be lonely again ~ AMEN

We sit alone & try to Guess
How such an empty ROOM*s
So full of lonliness !

Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love in the SPIRIT A & B 🧡🧡🧡🧡

July 20th, 2019 10:35

Of Loneliness
dusk arising said:

The torment of a lonely soul\'s ache with time. A haunting write.

July 20th, 2019 04:26

Of Loneliness
sylviasearcher said:

A beautiful write of the ache of loneliness

July 20th, 2019 03:37

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