Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Killer Smile
Poetic Licence said:
That should be written in a manual somewhere so children can be shown what life is really like at the moment, creative and great write
March 26th, 2025 11:25
Poetic Licence said:
That should be written in a manual somewhere so children can be shown what life is really like at the moment, creative and great write
March 26th, 2025 11:25
Killer Smile
Cheeky Missy said:
Spot on. Methinks you\'ve in a trice proved why carnivals and clowns exist, fun houses and all of such ilk. Frightening reality, isn\'t it. Gorgeously rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and a ghastly poignancy haunting long after.
March 26th, 2025 11:11
Cheeky Missy said:
Spot on. Methinks you\'ve in a trice proved why carnivals and clowns exist, fun houses and all of such ilk. Frightening reality, isn\'t it. Gorgeously rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and a ghastly poignancy haunting long after.
March 26th, 2025 11:11
Killer Smile
sorenbarrett said:
So clear a metaphor this of how society treats us. Told where to go and what to do and if that is not enough told that we like it. Striped and stitched we proceed through life a commodity that when used up is discarded. A too true write that sends shivers down the spine in a macabre carnival of society\'s definition of happiness and delight. A splendid illusion.
March 26th, 2025 08:32
sorenbarrett said:
So clear a metaphor this of how society treats us. Told where to go and what to do and if that is not enough told that we like it. Striped and stitched we proceed through life a commodity that when used up is discarded. A too true write that sends shivers down the spine in a macabre carnival of society\'s definition of happiness and delight. A splendid illusion.
March 26th, 2025 08:32
Killer Smile
arqios said:
Combo punches here, the imploding of civilisation 🙏🏻🕊
March 26th, 2025 08:17
arqios said:
Combo punches here, the imploding of civilisation 🙏🏻🕊
March 26th, 2025 08:17
Supplanted Stuffing
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of stuffing are emotions and feelings away in a memory cupboard, thou out of sight never out of mind as occasionally we dare to revisit them and give them an airing, great write and read
March 25th, 2025 09:42
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of stuffing are emotions and feelings away in a memory cupboard, thou out of sight never out of mind as occasionally we dare to revisit them and give them an airing, great write and read
March 25th, 2025 09:42
Supplanted Stuffing
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy for me is a metaphor of my childhood that is put away and given away but never really lost. Every once in a while I\'ll visit it again. A most lovely write that brings such good feelings it has to be a fave
March 25th, 2025 08:36
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy for me is a metaphor of my childhood that is put away and given away but never really lost. Every once in a while I\'ll visit it again. A most lovely write that brings such good feelings it has to be a fave
March 25th, 2025 08:36
Wasted
sorenbarrett said:
As the reader I won\'t take that personal lol. A write of the lengths we go to to calm ourselves and the uselessness in leu of the stress we face, be it work, society, traffic, or the one we live with. Wishing you a good night\'s rest my friend. A heart felt write.
March 24th, 2025 15:26
sorenbarrett said:
As the reader I won\'t take that personal lol. A write of the lengths we go to to calm ourselves and the uselessness in leu of the stress we face, be it work, society, traffic, or the one we live with. Wishing you a good night\'s rest my friend. A heart felt write.
March 24th, 2025 15:26
Wasted
Poetic Licence said:
Engrained fears and anxieties bleed into every aspect of our daily life, feel some pain, torment and anger in this write, nicely expressed and written
March 24th, 2025 12:29
Poetic Licence said:
Engrained fears and anxieties bleed into every aspect of our daily life, feel some pain, torment and anger in this write, nicely expressed and written
March 24th, 2025 12:29
Wasted
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. I\'ve been sober over 2 years now, I wuldn\'t trade it for anything.
March 24th, 2025 09:19
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. I\'ve been sober over 2 years now, I wuldn\'t trade it for anything.
March 24th, 2025 09:19
Wasted
arqios said:
Deep seated anxieties are not the easiest things to deal with, they spill over into every area of our day and night🙏🏻🕊
March 24th, 2025 08:11
arqios said:
Deep seated anxieties are not the easiest things to deal with, they spill over into every area of our day and night🙏🏻🕊
March 24th, 2025 08:11
Leave Little Room
Cheeky Missy said:
And my close friend, liking to sound enlightened, ever and anon inserting \"dopamine\" in our conversations, forgive me, but your finale seemed to swear it said that instead, or? There is a time for silence, while apathy was born of oppression, was it not? Charmingly rendered in feigned lightness belying the more weighty reality expressed, with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
March 23rd, 2025 10:43
Cheeky Missy said:
And my close friend, liking to sound enlightened, ever and anon inserting \"dopamine\" in our conversations, forgive me, but your finale seemed to swear it said that instead, or? There is a time for silence, while apathy was born of oppression, was it not? Charmingly rendered in feigned lightness belying the more weighty reality expressed, with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
March 23rd, 2025 10:43
Leave Little Room
orchidee said:
I was holding a rope but I fell off a ccllliifffff. Do ya hear me falling off it? Good acting by me, innit? lol.
March 21st, 2025 15:07
orchidee said:
I was holding a rope but I fell off a ccllliifffff. Do ya hear me falling off it? Good acting by me, innit? lol.
March 21st, 2025 15:07
Leave Little Room
Poetic Licence said:
There are probably beings sitting on a planet somewhere out there looking down at us now, doing the same thing, enjoyed the read
March 21st, 2025 08:53
Poetic Licence said:
There are probably beings sitting on a planet somewhere out there looking down at us now, doing the same thing, enjoyed the read
March 21st, 2025 08:53
Leave Little Room
sorenbarrett said:
We look at others with no vision and shake our heads in disbelief and I wonder how many others are doing the same to us. A great read Tristian that applies so well to present day politics, religion, ethics and values. A great read
March 21st, 2025 07:43
sorenbarrett said:
We look at others with no vision and shake our heads in disbelief and I wonder how many others are doing the same to us. A great read Tristian that applies so well to present day politics, religion, ethics and values. A great read
March 21st, 2025 07:43
In the Box
orchidee said:
Well, jump out of the box then - if ya can! What ya doin\' in a box anyway? lol.
March 20th, 2025 13:43
orchidee said:
Well, jump out of the box then - if ya can! What ya doin\' in a box anyway? lol.
March 20th, 2025 13:43
In the Box
Poetic Licence said:
Echo\'s of thoughts and feelings i am well aware of, bit close to home, very well expressed and written.
March 20th, 2025 09:42
Poetic Licence said:
Echo\'s of thoughts and feelings i am well aware of, bit close to home, very well expressed and written.
March 20th, 2025 09:42
Catalyst
Tom Dylan said:
A cracking write. Love the tone and the way it was written. Nicely done.
March 20th, 2025 08:40
Tom Dylan said:
A cracking write. Love the tone and the way it was written. Nicely done.
March 20th, 2025 08:40
In the Box
sorenbarrett said:
Such a thought that many have shared but now put to words and questioned with great reflection and timing of final words that turn meaning back to oneself. Very nicely done Tristan
March 20th, 2025 08:17
sorenbarrett said:
Such a thought that many have shared but now put to words and questioned with great reflection and timing of final words that turn meaning back to oneself. Very nicely done Tristan
March 20th, 2025 08:17
In the Box
arqios said:
Interpersonal relations…that’s gotta be real tough 🙏🏻🕊️
March 20th, 2025 08:14
arqios said:
Interpersonal relations…that’s gotta be real tough 🙏🏻🕊️
March 20th, 2025 08:14
Catalyst
Demar Desu said:
Where there is darkness the chance for light can shine… good poem
March 19th, 2025 19:39
Demar Desu said:
Where there is darkness the chance for light can shine… good poem
March 19th, 2025 19:39
light & shadow
whats write for me said:
Such a haunting visage, hearts peek out, but maybe the darkness is in you and I.
March 19th, 2025 16:58
whats write for me said:
Such a haunting visage, hearts peek out, but maybe the darkness is in you and I.
March 19th, 2025 16:58
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