Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
A Little Mad
Doggerel Dave said:
As per (most of) the conversation above, madness is a relative concept. And you have nailed it nicely Tristan.
However let\'s not forget the deeply psychotic for whom madness is a disabling curse. (Not you - otherwise you would be incapable of your lines here.)
May 3rd, 2025 21:17
Doggerel Dave said:
As per (most of) the conversation above, madness is a relative concept. And you have nailed it nicely Tristan.
However let\'s not forget the deeply psychotic for whom madness is a disabling curse. (Not you - otherwise you would be incapable of your lines here.)
May 3rd, 2025 21:17
A Little Mad
Cheeky Missy said:
Not me. I\'m just a little crazy all the time, and that\'s just me, my personality. It is indeed a cruel world, and bullies will target you in lieu of their victims if you stand in their way, but, that\'s just the way it goes. Gorgeously rendered with exquisite imagery and a very haunting poignancy indeed! Thank you for sharing.
May 3rd, 2025 11:46
Cheeky Missy said:
Not me. I\'m just a little crazy all the time, and that\'s just me, my personality. It is indeed a cruel world, and bullies will target you in lieu of their victims if you stand in their way, but, that\'s just the way it goes. Gorgeously rendered with exquisite imagery and a very haunting poignancy indeed! Thank you for sharing.
May 3rd, 2025 11:46
A Little Mad
Salvia.S said:
This is deeply honest and moving—captures the quiet pain of daily survival with sharp clarity.
May 3rd, 2025 09:46
Salvia.S said:
This is deeply honest and moving—captures the quiet pain of daily survival with sharp clarity.
May 3rd, 2025 09:46
A Little Mad
orchidee said:
Did Norman write this. Good write, Obi, erm, Tristan. 😁🤣
May 3rd, 2025 08:32
orchidee said:
Did Norman write this. Good write, Obi, erm, Tristan. 😁🤣
May 3rd, 2025 08:32
A Little Mad
lewisgale mental hospital said:
like Jesus, we must sometimes: show the way (even to ourselves, and not follow any of the ways or mindsets of others around us). but I doubt your poem, though i hear and understand too. perhaps it is a state of mind?
May 3rd, 2025 08:19
lewisgale mental hospital said:
like Jesus, we must sometimes: show the way (even to ourselves, and not follow any of the ways or mindsets of others around us). but I doubt your poem, though i hear and understand too. perhaps it is a state of mind?
May 3rd, 2025 08:19
A Little Mad
sorenbarrett said:
Madness a matter of degree, yes we all are a little mad most all of the time. Freud said that we are either psychotic or neurotic take your pick. After all what is madness anyway just being too much different from the others. And what of when the majority is unloving, uncaring, selfish, depressed does that mean that to be giving, loving, happy is madness? A lovely write Tristan.
May 3rd, 2025 07:44
sorenbarrett said:
Madness a matter of degree, yes we all are a little mad most all of the time. Freud said that we are either psychotic or neurotic take your pick. After all what is madness anyway just being too much different from the others. And what of when the majority is unloving, uncaring, selfish, depressed does that mean that to be giving, loving, happy is madness? A lovely write Tristan.
May 3rd, 2025 07:44
A Little Mad
arqios said:
Sometimes the madness in me is what others find interesting and adorable, so I pack it away neat and tidy until it’s called for 🕊🙏🏻
May 3rd, 2025 07:41
arqios said:
Sometimes the madness in me is what others find interesting and adorable, so I pack it away neat and tidy until it’s called for 🕊🙏🏻
May 3rd, 2025 07:41
The Skull Tumbler Below
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Loved it! It\'s easy to write when an idea floats in on the wings of an angel. But it\'s a big challenge to wrestle back ideas from the devil. You accomplished that with aplomb. Well done 👍
May 2nd, 2025 12:19
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Loved it! It\'s easy to write when an idea floats in on the wings of an angel. But it\'s a big challenge to wrestle back ideas from the devil. You accomplished that with aplomb. Well done 👍
May 2nd, 2025 12:19
The Skull Tumbler Below
sorenbarrett said:
Well Tristan you found something to write about and any season can be one of fright. A fun read my friend
May 2nd, 2025 09:46
sorenbarrett said:
Well Tristan you found something to write about and any season can be one of fright. A fun read my friend
May 2nd, 2025 09:46
The Skull Tumbler Below
Cheeky Missy said:
Miss you dreadfully cuz you\'re never absent, and what do you do?! Dredge lines from the refuse of damnation, polish it off like a happy child [like me in grade school when we moved to the Colorado prairies and I first discovered an actual junk yard....oh the junk I brought home like from a ghastly treasure chest, and which my loving mother accepted!], pleased as punch with your prize. Well, well, well. Where I\'ll actually refuse to write until after sunrise, you\'ll eagerly howl at the moon at the witching hour. La dee. Gorgeously rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and a ghastly, macabre poignancy. Thank you for sharing, I\'ve missed you, Tristan.
May 2nd, 2025 08:43
Cheeky Missy said:
Miss you dreadfully cuz you\'re never absent, and what do you do?! Dredge lines from the refuse of damnation, polish it off like a happy child [like me in grade school when we moved to the Colorado prairies and I first discovered an actual junk yard....oh the junk I brought home like from a ghastly treasure chest, and which my loving mother accepted!], pleased as punch with your prize. Well, well, well. Where I\'ll actually refuse to write until after sunrise, you\'ll eagerly howl at the moon at the witching hour. La dee. Gorgeously rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and a ghastly, macabre poignancy. Thank you for sharing, I\'ve missed you, Tristan.
May 2nd, 2025 08:43
The Skull Tumbler Below
arqios said:
Not a block nor an impediment but a setback momentary or otherwise…. Which in and of itself is also a subject matter that may be written about in various ways. Love it🕊🙏🏻
May 2nd, 2025 08:40
arqios said:
Not a block nor an impediment but a setback momentary or otherwise…. Which in and of itself is also a subject matter that may be written about in various ways. Love it🕊🙏🏻
May 2nd, 2025 08:40
The Skull Tumbler Below
Salvia.S said:
Really cool poem! I like the spooky feel and how it shows that even scary moments can spark creativity.
May 2nd, 2025 08:36
Salvia.S said:
Really cool poem! I like the spooky feel and how it shows that even scary moments can spark creativity.
May 2nd, 2025 08:36
murder
Tony Grannell said:
This is so well written, I was engrossed from start to finish. This is nature as it truly is; fierce, ugly and unapologetic as a murder of crows go about their daily business. Well done Tristan. Excellent and then some.
All the best,
Tony.
May 1st, 2025 12:04
Tony Grannell said:
This is so well written, I was engrossed from start to finish. This is nature as it truly is; fierce, ugly and unapologetic as a murder of crows go about their daily business. Well done Tristan. Excellent and then some.
All the best,
Tony.
May 1st, 2025 12:04
Tail Between My Dreams
Cheeky Missy said:
Aww, these days where it\'s trendy to divorce, what a winner this heartbreaking number is in the field of castoffs. Beautifully rendered with exquisite imagery and a wrenching poignancy, thank you so very much for sharing.
April 30th, 2025 15:54
Cheeky Missy said:
Aww, these days where it\'s trendy to divorce, what a winner this heartbreaking number is in the field of castoffs. Beautifully rendered with exquisite imagery and a wrenching poignancy, thank you so very much for sharing.
April 30th, 2025 15:54
murder
Muse of Calliope said:
Vivid Edgar Allen Poe- esque description; quite chilling! ☠️ 🥀 🔥
April 30th, 2025 11:08
Muse of Calliope said:
Vivid Edgar Allen Poe- esque description; quite chilling! ☠️ 🥀 🔥
April 30th, 2025 11:08
murder
orchidee said:
That person has been waiting too long at the bus stop. Someone should have told him/her they changed the route 500 years ago! lol.
April 30th, 2025 09:36
orchidee said:
That person has been waiting too long at the bus stop. Someone should have told him/her they changed the route 500 years ago! lol.
April 30th, 2025 09:36
murder
Salvia.S said:
Haunting and beautifully descriptive—the imagery is rich, and the twist from eerie mystery to brutal reality is chillingly effective. Well done 🌹
April 30th, 2025 09:15
Salvia.S said:
Haunting and beautifully descriptive—the imagery is rich, and the twist from eerie mystery to brutal reality is chillingly effective. Well done 🌹
April 30th, 2025 09:15
murder
arqios said:
Brought back to mind thousands of knee-high raptors of Jurassic Park, “pecking” and tearing away at hapless larger victims. Excellent atmosphere in this poem! 🕊🙏🏻
April 30th, 2025 09:13
arqios said:
Brought back to mind thousands of knee-high raptors of Jurassic Park, “pecking” and tearing away at hapless larger victims. Excellent atmosphere in this poem! 🕊🙏🏻
April 30th, 2025 09:13
murder
sorenbarrett said:
A grizzly picture , black the sight and dark the thought. Life that was now passed. Animals we knew going away. We have changed all. A vivid poem with a strong message. Very nicely crafted
April 30th, 2025 08:54
sorenbarrett said:
A grizzly picture , black the sight and dark the thought. Life that was now passed. Animals we knew going away. We have changed all. A vivid poem with a strong message. Very nicely crafted
April 30th, 2025 08:54
Cross-Examination
Victor Bolshov said:
And thanks for inspiration: I just came up with a new song / poem - because of these beautiful lines
April 30th, 2025 03:00
Victor Bolshov said:
And thanks for inspiration: I just came up with a new song / poem - because of these beautiful lines
April 30th, 2025 03:00
Cross-Examination
Teddy.15 said:
lol none of us perfect, although I confess I\'ve never been to confession 🤣
April 30th, 2025 01:02
Teddy.15 said:
lol none of us perfect, although I confess I\'ve never been to confession 🤣
April 30th, 2025 01:02
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