Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Meltdown
aDarkerMind said:
a most impressive write Tristan.
thoroughly enjoyed the read.
August 25th, 2024 08:21
aDarkerMind said:
a most impressive write Tristan.
thoroughly enjoyed the read.
August 25th, 2024 08:21
Meltdown
orchidee said:
A fine write T. Erm, I\'m not exactly writing a major epic, but shall carry on poet-ing!
August 24th, 2024 01:35
orchidee said:
A fine write T. Erm, I\'m not exactly writing a major epic, but shall carry on poet-ing!
August 24th, 2024 01:35
Meltdown
Doggerel Dave said:
Slightly more than a dissociative spell then?
I must say your write plus picture left me feeling slightly…Vague memories of similar many moons ago.
August 23rd, 2024 17:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Slightly more than a dissociative spell then?
I must say your write plus picture left me feeling slightly…Vague memories of similar many moons ago.
August 23rd, 2024 17:07
Meltdown
sorenbarrett said:
It does reflect the issue of melt down well. Very nice
August 23rd, 2024 17:01
sorenbarrett said:
It does reflect the issue of melt down well. Very nice
August 23rd, 2024 17:01
An Ode to Heartache
sorenbarrett said:
Infatuation with the unobtainable is gasoline on fire and then the fire extinguisher. Very nice
August 15th, 2024 19:53
sorenbarrett said:
Infatuation with the unobtainable is gasoline on fire and then the fire extinguisher. Very nice
August 15th, 2024 19:53
An Ode to Heartache
Doggerel Dave said:
Her emotions are so overwhelming that tight control is the only way she manages to keep her passion under control.
Look deeper; I\'m sure that................
August 15th, 2024 18:26
Doggerel Dave said:
Her emotions are so overwhelming that tight control is the only way she manages to keep her passion under control.
Look deeper; I\'m sure that................
August 15th, 2024 18:26
The Planet
Doggerel Dave said:
Message received. Can you get home? Clearly we won\'t be returning.
August 14th, 2024 16:49
Doggerel Dave said:
Message received. Can you get home? Clearly we won\'t be returning.
August 14th, 2024 16:49
The Planet
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully stated that nature has no sense of fairness or justice it has its own rules. Brilliant!!
August 14th, 2024 13:07
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully stated that nature has no sense of fairness or justice it has its own rules. Brilliant!!
August 14th, 2024 13:07
Tomb of Obscurity
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful word nicely said in a sort verse
August 11th, 2024 12:44
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful word nicely said in a sort verse
August 11th, 2024 12:44
Inclusive
jarcher54 said:
At some point universal love is the only thing that can achieve inclusivity. I recall having sympathy for the likes of bin Laden or former governor of Alabama the segregationist George Wallace. Sympathy that they were so twisted and had been lead astray. I am not religious but find that the teachings of wise folks like Jesus (whether real or a character) or the Dali Lama are the source (or inspiration?) of my own version of inclusiveness. But alas it is a one-way street. I suspect there are many who would not accept me!
August 8th, 2024 03:43
jarcher54 said:
At some point universal love is the only thing that can achieve inclusivity. I recall having sympathy for the likes of bin Laden or former governor of Alabama the segregationist George Wallace. Sympathy that they were so twisted and had been lead astray. I am not religious but find that the teachings of wise folks like Jesus (whether real or a character) or the Dali Lama are the source (or inspiration?) of my own version of inclusiveness. But alas it is a one-way street. I suspect there are many who would not accept me!
August 8th, 2024 03:43
Inclusive
sorenbarrett said:
On the surface it seems so clear cut, prejudice is wrong but it is not so simple we all hold prejudices maybe not racial, gender or about religion but what of against murderers, rapists, liars, the ugly, obnoxious, those that hold different opinions than us. A wonderful write one that needs addressing.
August 7th, 2024 18:20
sorenbarrett said:
On the surface it seems so clear cut, prejudice is wrong but it is not so simple we all hold prejudices maybe not racial, gender or about religion but what of against murderers, rapists, liars, the ugly, obnoxious, those that hold different opinions than us. A wonderful write one that needs addressing.
August 7th, 2024 18:20
Love Song
sorenbarrett said:
A couple of beautiful themes in this poem: love, unity, peace, joy, harmony all rolled into one. Very calming.
August 6th, 2024 05:18
sorenbarrett said:
A couple of beautiful themes in this poem: love, unity, peace, joy, harmony all rolled into one. Very calming.
August 6th, 2024 05:18
Anatomy of Agony
NinjaGirl said:
I may not have interpreted this the intended way, but even so I love the meaning.
August 4th, 2024 17:34
NinjaGirl said:
I may not have interpreted this the intended way, but even so I love the meaning.
August 4th, 2024 17:34
Razorblade Symphony
NinjaGirl said:
Thank you for this poem! I struggled with cutting for a while in the past. I appreciate the awareness to this issue and addiction
August 4th, 2024 17:31
NinjaGirl said:
Thank you for this poem! I struggled with cutting for a while in the past. I appreciate the awareness to this issue and addiction
August 4th, 2024 17:31
Unwound
sorenbarrett said:
Disjointed thought link in chains as they pass through our minds. Here many come together in almost a rap as the internal rhyme rolls out. Nicely done.
August 4th, 2024 05:43
sorenbarrett said:
Disjointed thought link in chains as they pass through our minds. Here many come together in almost a rap as the internal rhyme rolls out. Nicely done.
August 4th, 2024 05:43
Unwound
orchidee said:
Oh, it\'s the eye - the tingle.
A bit of scratchy eye conjunctivitis can drive us mad. It\'s like a piece of non-existent grit in the eye.
August 4th, 2024 01:44
orchidee said:
Oh, it\'s the eye - the tingle.
A bit of scratchy eye conjunctivitis can drive us mad. It\'s like a piece of non-existent grit in the eye.
August 4th, 2024 01:44
Unwound
orchidee said:
And now, me being very un-profound - depends what sort of tingle it is, I suppose. Best not tell me where the tingle might be, or I might swoon (saucy me)! lol.
I might fancy a \'tinging tingle\'? heeehee.
August 4th, 2024 01:41
orchidee said:
And now, me being very un-profound - depends what sort of tingle it is, I suppose. Best not tell me where the tingle might be, or I might swoon (saucy me)! lol.
I might fancy a \'tinging tingle\'? heeehee.
August 4th, 2024 01:41
Fractured
sorenbarrett said:
Words are powerful and create images so vivid that they may as well be reality. Nicely written
August 3rd, 2024 05:45
sorenbarrett said:
Words are powerful and create images so vivid that they may as well be reality. Nicely written
August 3rd, 2024 05:45
Fractured
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much \'activity\' involve in writing. Well, I know now! Who is that bad hair guy in your pics?! lol.
August 3rd, 2024 01:41
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much \'activity\' involve in writing. Well, I know now! Who is that bad hair guy in your pics?! lol.
August 3rd, 2024 01:41
The Machine Returns
orchidee said:
Ahh, a bad hair day in that pic! (me being daft) lol.
August 1st, 2024 02:10
orchidee said:
Ahh, a bad hair day in that pic! (me being daft) lol.
August 1st, 2024 02:10
The Machine Returns
sorenbarrett said:
The Machine, the man, big brother yes I feel the angst and dread circling in the winds of change as well as the old guard still keeping watch. Nice write
July 31st, 2024 16:37
sorenbarrett said:
The Machine, the man, big brother yes I feel the angst and dread circling in the winds of change as well as the old guard still keeping watch. Nice write
July 31st, 2024 16:37
Wild and Ready
sorenbarrett said:
A call to action this poem invokes paradoxical lines to emphasize why action is needed. A moving and powerful write.
July 30th, 2024 06:16
sorenbarrett said:
A call to action this poem invokes paradoxical lines to emphasize why action is needed. A moving and powerful write.
July 30th, 2024 06:16
Roll the Tape
sorenbarrett said:
There\'s a roll to this piece. It has rhythm and rhyme nicely done
July 27th, 2024 05:41
sorenbarrett said:
There\'s a roll to this piece. It has rhythm and rhyme nicely done
July 27th, 2024 05:41
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