Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Pottersville
Thad Wilk said:
WOW! Powerful penning,
really captures the
readers attention I\'d say!!
That form really rocks in
versatility, you\'re right, either way!!
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards Peace Thad
December 30th, 2024 21:01
Thad Wilk said:
WOW! Powerful penning,
really captures the
readers attention I\'d say!!
That form really rocks in
versatility, you\'re right, either way!!
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards Peace Thad
December 30th, 2024 21:01
Pottersville
Teddy.15 said:
One of my favourite themes are dreams, you make it look so easy, I see music so much music within this dear Tristan, these two lines stand out to me
Where the good get their wish to not be born
Wow a wonderful piece my friend. 🌹
December 30th, 2024 10:30
Teddy.15 said:
One of my favourite themes are dreams, you make it look so easy, I see music so much music within this dear Tristan, these two lines stand out to me
Where the good get their wish to not be born
Wow a wonderful piece my friend. 🌹
December 30th, 2024 10:30
Pottersville
sorenbarrett said:
Some would like us to believe that we live in a black and white world where there is only wrong and right, good and bad, sane and insane but no we are trapped in a world of color, shades and hues. A nightmare in black and white becomes a dream of serenity in color but also one of confusion with half rights and wrongs. A thought provoking write and I have to admit my knowledge of poetic form is quite limited to sonnets, limericks different rhyme schemes and free verse.
December 30th, 2024 10:15
sorenbarrett said:
Some would like us to believe that we live in a black and white world where there is only wrong and right, good and bad, sane and insane but no we are trapped in a world of color, shades and hues. A nightmare in black and white becomes a dream of serenity in color but also one of confusion with half rights and wrongs. A thought provoking write and I have to admit my knowledge of poetic form is quite limited to sonnets, limericks different rhyme schemes and free verse.
December 30th, 2024 10:15
Pottersville
Poetic Licence said:
It sounds like a very accurate description of the world we already live in, i really enjoyed the read, thank you
December 30th, 2024 10:06
Poetic Licence said:
It sounds like a very accurate description of the world we already live in, i really enjoyed the read, thank you
December 30th, 2024 10:06
Depth of Height
Neville said:
Wow .. its as long as its wide and as deep as its broad .. a proper little cracker .. 👍
December 30th, 2024 03:20
Neville said:
Wow .. its as long as its wide and as deep as its broad .. a proper little cracker .. 👍
December 30th, 2024 03:20
Depth of Height
Thad Wilk said:
Clapping!! 👏👏
What a captivating
senryu!! 👍
So eloquently
penned my friend!! 🥇
Much enjoyed this form!! 😃
Wonderfully woven!! 😍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 29th, 2024 21:35
Thad Wilk said:
Clapping!! 👏👏
What a captivating
senryu!! 👍
So eloquently
penned my friend!! 🥇
Much enjoyed this form!! 😃
Wonderfully woven!! 😍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 29th, 2024 21:35
Depth of Height
Cassie58 said:
There is much depth here and a long way to climb. Much contrast, but the point is to keep trying. Beautiful Tristen.
December 29th, 2024 13:14
Cassie58 said:
There is much depth here and a long way to climb. Much contrast, but the point is to keep trying. Beautiful Tristen.
December 29th, 2024 13:14
Depth of Height
orchidee said:
Good write T. I descended to the depths of my brain for some deep thinking - nothing there, as I had already passed my 3 brain cells at surface level. lol.
December 29th, 2024 09:11
orchidee said:
Good write T. I descended to the depths of my brain for some deep thinking - nothing there, as I had already passed my 3 brain cells at surface level. lol.
December 29th, 2024 09:11
Depth of Height
arqios said:
Nice Tristan; loving the contrasts of heights and depths, pulling as it would in different directions and yet still ‘under.’ 👍🏻
December 29th, 2024 09:03
arqios said:
Nice Tristan; loving the contrasts of heights and depths, pulling as it would in different directions and yet still ‘under.’ 👍🏻
December 29th, 2024 09:03
Depth of Height
Poetic Licence said:
A clever piece and the picture backs up the emotion, Really enjoyed
December 29th, 2024 08:51
Poetic Licence said:
A clever piece and the picture backs up the emotion, Really enjoyed
December 29th, 2024 08:51
Depth of Height
Teddy.15 said:
Senryu it\'s all about the emotion and you have it all. Beautifully done dear Tristan. 🌹
December 29th, 2024 08:16
Teddy.15 said:
Senryu it\'s all about the emotion and you have it all. Beautifully done dear Tristan. 🌹
December 29th, 2024 08:16
Depth of Height
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful Haiku for the New Year. Very nicely constructed
December 29th, 2024 08:09
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful Haiku for the New Year. Very nicely constructed
December 29th, 2024 08:09
The Write Fright
Dan Williams said:
Ah yes, the logjam. Sometimes I just have to let it alone for a while, no one is really pressuring me for output except me. Nice.
December 28th, 2024 19:58
Dan Williams said:
Ah yes, the logjam. Sometimes I just have to let it alone for a while, no one is really pressuring me for output except me. Nice.
December 28th, 2024 19:58
A Sonnet on Scroogery
arqios said:
Now that’s the way! Old Uncle McScrooge was an enigma but also a standing lesson for some reason now summed up in this engaging sonnet. Liked and Faved!
December 28th, 2024 19:10
arqios said:
Now that’s the way! Old Uncle McScrooge was an enigma but also a standing lesson for some reason now summed up in this engaging sonnet. Liked and Faved!
December 28th, 2024 19:10
A Sonnet on Scroogery
Teddy.15 said:
I have only ever been able to write one Italian sonnet and it took 3 years to write, hats off to you dear Tristan. 🌹 I do bow to thee 🌹
December 28th, 2024 13:50
Teddy.15 said:
I have only ever been able to write one Italian sonnet and it took 3 years to write, hats off to you dear Tristan. 🌹 I do bow to thee 🌹
December 28th, 2024 13:50
A Sonnet on Scroogery
Thad Wilk said:
A very captivating
and evocative
Italian Sonnet I must say!!💯
The end couplet
blew me away! 😱
Wonderfully woven my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 28th, 2024 13:21
Thad Wilk said:
A very captivating
and evocative
Italian Sonnet I must say!!💯
The end couplet
blew me away! 😱
Wonderfully woven my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 28th, 2024 13:21
A Sonnet on Scroogery
sorenbarrett said:
Now I have to say that I have never heard a sonnet about the grinch like scrooge. A most fun read and well written too.
December 28th, 2024 12:31
sorenbarrett said:
Now I have to say that I have never heard a sonnet about the grinch like scrooge. A most fun read and well written too.
December 28th, 2024 12:31
A Sonnet on Scroogery
Poetic Licence said:
Money to be made out of anything, a very entertaining read
December 28th, 2024 12:27
Poetic Licence said:
Money to be made out of anything, a very entertaining read
December 28th, 2024 12:27
A Sonnet on Scroogery
Neville said:
You can beat an egg but you just can\'t beat Cheeky Missy for sonnets now can ya .. 😎👍
December 28th, 2024 10:24
Neville said:
You can beat an egg but you just can\'t beat Cheeky Missy for sonnets now can ya .. 😎👍
December 28th, 2024 10:24
The Write Fright
Neville said:
Word blindness in its purest & most feared form .. now personified you canny so and so .. Neville 😎👍
December 28th, 2024 02:09
Neville said:
Word blindness in its purest & most feared form .. now personified you canny so and so .. Neville 😎👍
December 28th, 2024 02:09
The Write Fright
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful write
on what you can\'t ✍️ write!🌟🤩
Thank you for sharing,
to read a delight!!! 😉
Best regards,
your muse will
return don\'t
give up the fight!! 💪
December 27th, 2024 23:20
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful write
on what you can\'t ✍️ write!🌟🤩
Thank you for sharing,
to read a delight!!! 😉
Best regards,
your muse will
return don\'t
give up the fight!! 💪
December 27th, 2024 23:20
The Write Fright
Cheeky Missy said:
Writer\'s Block is only a monster IF you let it exist. If fantasy plays your harp, she will vaporize. But reality is never not here. The moment that thought begins creeping up on you, just take a look around you and begin to describe what you find. Utilize metaphors and similes and you\'ve extra points.
That aside, how characteristically superb, beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
December 27th, 2024 21:56
Cheeky Missy said:
Writer\'s Block is only a monster IF you let it exist. If fantasy plays your harp, she will vaporize. But reality is never not here. The moment that thought begins creeping up on you, just take a look around you and begin to describe what you find. Utilize metaphors and similes and you\'ve extra points.
That aside, how characteristically superb, beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
December 27th, 2024 21:56
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