Comments received on poems by ANGELA & BRIAN



MUSIC ~ MUSIC ~ MUSIC 🧡 ANGELA 🤍 BRIAN 💙 ESSENTIAL FOOD OF LIFE !
L. B. Mek said:

indeed, where would we be without a rhythmic tune or two, to sway along - with the marching drumbeat of time,
in those cacophony scenes: of life\'s tempestuous Sea\'s

August 24th, 2020 05:29

TWENTY - TWENTY LAMENT ~ AN OBITURY
The Uneducated O.A.P said:

Just about sums it up. About time we heard you singing though.
Next poem?


August 23rd, 2020 12:45

TWENTY - TWENTY LAMENT ~ AN OBITURY
orchidee said:

I thought it was you two strumming and singing in the clip. A fine write there. Did Gato join in meowing?!

August 23rd, 2020 06:33

TWENTY - TWENTY LAMENT ~ AN OBITURY
niallprideaux said:

Perfectly and expertly captures the year we’ve had so far.. hope you are safe and well! ❤️

August 23rd, 2020 04:32

BRIDGES GET US TO THE OTHER SIDE ! ~ A PANTOUM
Michael Edwards said:

Yes they\'re not the easiets of constructs - pantoums that is - congrats on another interesting posting.

August 21st, 2020 12:58

BRIDGES GET US TO THE OTHER SIDE ! ~ A PANTOUM
Fay Slimm. said:

Well after reading your pantoum tribute to bridges I intend now to looker closer when crossing one - a most interesting read .

August 21st, 2020 06:41

BRIDGES GET US TO THE OTHER SIDE ! ~ A PANTOUM
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic/song A&B.
Oh, I don\'t like high bridges. I sense I will fall in the water, or go over the edge on to the road below.

August 21st, 2020 01:47

BRIDGES GET US TO THE OTHER SIDE ! ~ A PANTOUM
ForeverJesus6 said:

I enjoyed this piece. As Mr. Neville said, I always admired bridges. I like small wooden bridges like the one in your picture above, but I particularly enjoy old suspension bridges, especially the ones in Pittsburgh, Pa. Suspension bridges are so detailed, and are an architectural wonder in my opinion. I think just about every bridge has enough history in it to have it\'s own movie. Again, I enjoyed this piece.
We must bridge gaps.
Persistence is key

August 21st, 2020 01:45

BRIDGES GET US TO THE OTHER SIDE ! ~ A PANTOUM
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Good Morning Neville - thanks for your appreciative comment. Classical Poetic forms do take some composing but so so elegant in the end. Its not just the Form & Repetition that is important in a Pantoum but of course it must *make sense* as well and - in the end - come back to the beginning ! Rhyme - Rhthym - Reason are the three hallmarks of a Good Poem !

Love - Joy & Peace ~ Angela - Brian - Smokey !!!

August 21st, 2020 01:15

BRIDGES GET US TO THE OTHER SIDE ! ~ A PANTOUM
Neville said:


I never realised just how precise one had to be to craft one of these ... I dont think I would have the patience but have long admired the efforts of those that do ..

I must confess, I have a thing about bridges, doors and windows

.. Neville

August 21st, 2020 01:00

AUTUMN LEAVES OK ~ AN ACROSTIC 6 6 2 SONNET
blue orchid said:

a perfect description of my 2nd favorite season,my first being spring because the newly budding flowers remind me that all can be reborn in the blood of the lamb.

August 19th, 2020 14:14

AUTUMN LEAVES OK ~ AN ACROSTIC 6 6 2 SONNET
Michael Edwards said:

Autumn leaves
and winter comes
thankfully we are not there yet but a great write nevertheless.

August 19th, 2020 11:26

AUTUMN LEAVES OK ~ AN ACROSTIC 6 6 2 SONNET
Fay Slimm. said:

That voice brings such tender memories and your autumn acrostic is another reminder of changes we cannot alter........... a moving read dear duo.............

August 19th, 2020 10:59

AUTUMN LEAVES OK ~ AN ACROSTIC 6 6 2 SONNET
Neville said:

a very timely post indeed .. I was only recently posting about autumn myself and it hardly seems a whole year has passed since the last time I was doing just that ...

I enjoy acrostics but hardly ever pen them as I find it hard to be so numerically constrained or tied ..

All Good Things,

Neville

August 19th, 2020 09:03

AUTUMN LEAVES OK ~ AN ACROSTIC 6 6 2 SONNET
orchidee said:

A fine write B&A and Gato!

August 19th, 2020 04:51

DAYS OF THE WEEK ~ IN SEVEN 5 7 5 SENRYU
Fay Slimm. said:

Love this collab. on days of the week - and in haiku well what could be better.

August 18th, 2020 08:02

DAYS OF THE WEEK ~ IN SEVEN 5 7 5 SENRYU
orchidee said:

A fine write B&A. Yes, sung that song - in the Stone Age I learnt it! lol.

August 18th, 2020 01:45

MAKE ME A CHANNEL OF PEACE ~ ANGELA ~ AN ACROSTIC
orchidee said:

How\'s the Gato? I went to adopt a cat, but a big cake was delivered instead. They said \'We thought you said Gateau!\' lol.

August 17th, 2020 02:12

MAKE ME A CHANNEL OF PEACE ~ ANGELA ~ AN ACROSTIC
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GOOD EVENING FRIEND - Thanks for your encouraging comment ! We do experience inner peace and as far as COVID 19 is concrned we leave it in Gods hands ! I work in a Hospital but am not in direct contact with COVID Patients. Brian starts back in College (Head of Aplied Science) in September.

Blessing & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey ! ! !

August 16th, 2020 14:46

MAKE ME A CHANNEL OF PEACE ~ ANGELA ~ AN ACROSTIC
FineB said:

Hi Angela and Brian,

A beautiful write.

Many thanks.

Inner peace within ourselves that\'s the key to life.

Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB

August 16th, 2020 13:58

MAKE ME A CHANNEL OF PEACE ~ ANGELA ~ AN ACROSTIC
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA AQUI - Hola Paloma - Pleased you enjoyed it ! Love your acrostic - very creative !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Con Amor y Abrazos y Besos
El Trio - A y B y El Gato Ehumado !!!

August 16th, 2020 10:45

MAKE ME A CHANNEL OF PEACE ~ ANGELA ~ AN ACROSTIC
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Gracias por esta ~ ANGELA ~ It is a very beaiuiful Desire & Testimony for a warm & sunny August Sunday Morning. When we met & started \'courting\' one of your many attractions - that we shared - was the sincerity of your Christian Faith and \'The Nine Traits of the Holy Spirit\' which defined & motivated Your Character. This ameliorated your Personality and the Nature & Nurture you had inherited form Your Parents. I am blessed to have You for a Wife and Smokey - You as a Carer ! Thank You for Being You !

Todo de Mi Amor y Smokey\'s Tambien !
Abrazos y Besos ~ Tus Amorados Brian y Smokey XOX

August 16th, 2020 06:02

MAKE ME A CHANNEL OF PEACE ~ ANGELA ~ AN ACROSTIC
orchidee said:

Me again! A more spiritual comment. Yes, an anointing, an indwelling, of the Spirit. So we CAN produce His fruit - love, joy, peace, etc.

August 16th, 2020 05:57

MAKE ME A CHANNEL OF PEACE ~ ANGELA ~ AN ACROSTIC
orchidee said:

A lovely write A&B.
I\'m being naughty - I forgot self-control, or temperance in the old versions. Hic!
I did not practise what I preached: \'Always add water to your tipple!\'
Well, I practised it to others, but not to myself. oohh!

August 16th, 2020 05:56

THE WATER CYCLES ~ AN ACROSTIC ~ BLANK VERSE SONNET !
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Hi UNCLE BILL ~ Whiskey has been described as the *Water of Life* but the only water I wouls ever put in a wee dram O Clanleish Single Malt is ICE !

Love ~ Peace & Joy
Brian & Angela & Smokey ! ! !

August 15th, 2020 16:12

THE WATER CYCLES ~ AN ACROSTIC ~ BLANK VERSE SONNET !
Fay Slimm. said:

Loud applause A + B for this tribute to wonderful water and all its benefits to this glorious planet.

August 15th, 2020 16:08

THE WATER CYCLES ~ AN ACROSTIC ~ BLANK VERSE SONNET !
The Uneducated O.A.P said:

Hi both, surely the best place for water is in whiskey!
Keep sober, Bill




August 15th, 2020 15:31

THE WATER CYCLES ~ AN ACROSTIC ~ BLANK VERSE SONNET !
orchidee said:

Me again - won\'t we burn up if we ever do try to colonise Mars? Too near the sun?

August 15th, 2020 10:51

THE WATER CYCLES ~ AN ACROSTIC ~ BLANK VERSE SONNET !
orchidee said:

Good write B&A.
The other night I was not singing in the rain. It was bearable to actually get in bed then, and hide under the sheets from sheet lightning. I had ot dozed off as I had only got in bed 30 minute before. Thankfully it did not last too long. I don\'t like night storms - but a poem was one outcome (should follow soon).

August 15th, 2020 10:50

THE WATER CYCLES ~ AN ACROSTIC ~ BLANK VERSE SONNET !
L. B. Mek said:

experiencing this past week of summer heatwave madness in \'rainy\' UK, has me cherishing water: more than ever...
thanks for sharing a truly valuable message

August 15th, 2020 06:49



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